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* When Niel explodes about the state of 'science camp', Max says "Check out the balls on new kid." To which, Nikki checks herself.
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* When Niel Neil explodes about the state of 'science camp', Max says "Check out the balls on new kid." To which, Nikki checks herself.
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-->'''Neil:'''(deadpan) There's a raccoon trying to scavenge Nerris.\\
'''Nerris:''' (throwing charms at it) It's resistant to charms!\\
'''Nerris:''' (throwing charms at it) It's resistant to charms!\\
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'''Nerris:'''
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* Max complaining about cleaning.
-->'''Max:''' This sucks. This is the kind of peasant work my parents left their home country to avoid.
* Discussing nicknames and coolness:
-->'''Nikki:''' Man, Ered ''never'' gets yelled at for not working. She's just too cool. I wish I was her.\\
'''Neil:''' "Arid"? Like a dry desert climate?\\
'''Nikki:''' I think her real name is Meredith, but she's ''so freakin' cool'', she goes by the middle part of her name. Oh...! I wonder if ''I'' should try that. "Ick". Ooh, yeah!\\
'''Max:''' That's fucking stupid. Nicknames don't make you cool.\\
'''Nikki:''' Psh. Spoken like a true first-part nicknamer.\\
'''Max:''' No one's ''too'' cool to talk to. Even cool kids take giant, uncomfortable shits from time to time. Helps remind you that we're all equal.
-->'''Max:''' This sucks. This is the kind of peasant work my parents left their home country to avoid.
* Discussing nicknames and coolness:
-->'''Nikki:''' Man, Ered ''never'' gets yelled at for not working. She's just too cool. I wish I was her.\\
'''Neil:''' "Arid"? Like a dry desert climate?\\
'''Nikki:''' I think her real name is Meredith, but she's ''so freakin' cool'', she goes by the middle part of her name. Oh...! I wonder if ''I'' should try that. "Ick". Ooh, yeah!\\
'''Max:''' That's fucking stupid. Nicknames don't make you cool.\\
'''Nikki:''' Psh. Spoken like a true first-part nicknamer.\\
'''Max:''' No one's ''too'' cool to talk to. Even cool kids take giant, uncomfortable shits from time to time. Helps remind you that we're all equal.
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* While Max and Neil go shirtless for their rebellion, Space Kid draws abs on his spacesuit.
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* While Max and Neil go shirtless for their rebellion, Space Kid draws abs on his spacesuit.spacesuit.
* While Gwen initially objects to being tied to a flagpole, Neil placates her by giving her a tablet with "Teen Prison Mom Wars" playing on it.
-->'''Prison mom:''' My baby gonna shank you, bitch!\\
'''Gwen:''' ''[gasps]'' Oh my gosh! Trash TV...
* When Max and Nikki are facing off:
-->'''David:''' No fighting! Violence never solves anything!\\
'''Gwen:''' ''[still watching Teen Prison Mom Wars]'' Stab her, bitch!
* While Gwen initially objects to being tied to a flagpole, Neil placates her by giving her a tablet with "Teen Prison Mom Wars" playing on it.
-->'''Prison mom:''' My baby gonna shank you, bitch!\\
'''Gwen:''' ''[gasps]'' Oh my gosh! Trash TV...
* When Max and Nikki are facing off:
-->'''David:''' No fighting! Violence never solves anything!\\
'''Gwen:''' ''[still watching Teen Prison Mom Wars]'' Stab her, bitch!
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'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck!]]
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'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck!]]fuck!]]
[[AC: Episode 4: Camp Cool Kidz]]
* While Max and Neil go shirtless for their rebellion, Space Kid draws abs on his spacesuit.
[[AC: Episode 4: Camp Cool Kidz]]
* While Max and Neil go shirtless for their rebellion, Space Kid draws abs on his spacesuit.
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-->'''Tabii:''' And if [boys] pee on you, you get pregnant.\\
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-->'''Tabii:''' And if [boys] pee on in you, you get pregnant.\\
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'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck?!]]
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'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck?!]]fuck!]]
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* Billy "Snake" Nikssilp, being a parody of [[Film/EscapeFromNewYork Snake Plissken]] would be almost out of place in the series, if it weren't for the fact that he is regularly seen sucking on a candy cane.
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* Billy "Snake" Nikssilp, being a parody of [[Film/EscapeFromNewYork Snake Plissken]] would be almost out of place in the series, if it weren't for the fact that he is regularly seen sucking on a candy cane.cane.
* Tabii's lack of basic sex ed knowledge.
-->'''Tabii:''' And if [boys] pee on you, you get pregnant.\\
'''Sasha:''' Whoa. Tabii.\\
'''Tabii:''' My sister told me.
** Later:
-->'''Tabii:''' ''[dreamily]'' He can pee in me anytime.\\
'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck?!]]
* Tabii's lack of basic sex ed knowledge.
-->'''Tabii:''' And if [boys] pee on you, you get pregnant.\\
'''Sasha:''' Whoa. Tabii.\\
'''Tabii:''' My sister told me.
** Later:
-->'''Tabii:''' ''[dreamily]'' He can pee in me anytime.\\
'''Sasha:''' Tabii, seriously, [[PrecisionFSTrike what the fuck?!]]
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* Nerris is introduced whacking Harrison with a wooden sword and throwing a bunch of dice at him while yelling "Lightning bolt!"
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* When Niel explodes about the state of 'science camp', Max says "Check out the balls on new kid." To which, Nikki checks herself.
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* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]]]
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* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]]]]]]]
* Once David accepts the wild platypus as the camp's new mascot, Nikki asks is the campers can refer to themselves as the Camp Campbell Platties. David rejects the idea. Neil then suggests an alternative name: [[spoiler: "the Pussies." Before David can shoot down that suggestion, the campers decide they like the name, and walk off chanting it in unison.]]
* The last line of the episode, simply for how curt it is.
-->'''Max''': So what's with the Quartermaster and Jews?
[[AC: Episode 3: Scout's Dishonor]]
* Billy "Snake" Nikssilp, being a parody of [[Film/EscapeFromNewYork Snake Plissken]] would be almost out of place in the series, if it weren't for the fact that he is regularly seen sucking on a candy cane.
* Once David accepts the wild platypus as the camp's new mascot, Nikki asks is the campers can refer to themselves as the Camp Campbell Platties. David rejects the idea. Neil then suggests an alternative name: [[spoiler: "the Pussies." Before David can shoot down that suggestion, the campers decide they like the name, and walk off chanting it in unison.]]
* The last line of the episode, simply for how curt it is.
-->'''Max''': So what's with the Quartermaster and Jews?
[[AC: Episode 3: Scout's Dishonor]]
* Billy "Snake" Nikssilp, being a parody of [[Film/EscapeFromNewYork Snake Plissken]] would be almost out of place in the series, if it weren't for the fact that he is regularly seen sucking on a candy cane.
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* Gwen taking David's guitar before he can pull it out and bashing her co-worker's head with it.
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* The end of the episode. Gwen is exasperated that she now to deal with Nikki and Neil in addition to Max. David is happy then Max has two friends and pull out his guitar for a song. Gwen gets fed up, snatches the guitar and beats David with it.
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* The end of the episode. Gwen is exasperated that she now to deal with Nikki and Neil in addition to Max. David is happy then Max has two friends and pull out his taking David's guitar for a song. Gwen gets fed up, snatches the guitar before he can pull it out and beats David bashing her co-worker's head with it.
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* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]
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* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]]]]]
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** Instead, they find a platypus. Nikki is less than impressed until Neil mentioned that it's poisonous.
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** Instead, they find a platypus. Nikki is less than impressed until Neil mentioned that it's poisonous.poisonous.
* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]
* Max going with the quartermaster to avoid David... oh and uh, to find a new mascot. The Quartermaster brings him to a squirrel king sitting on a wooden throne. ''[[TheCynic Max]]'' is actually mystified for a moment. [[spoiler: [[KlingonPromotion Then the quartermaster stabs looks squirrel through the back with his hook hand, was the squirrel's crown on his hat and announces himself as the animals' new King.]]
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'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!
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'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!dead!\\
'''Nerris:''' I'm out of mana!
'''Nerris:''' I'm out of mana!
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* Max suggesting that Gwen can be the new mascot.
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* Max suggesting that Gwen can be the new mascot.mascot.
* Nikki bringing Neil along to follow a bears' footprints and make it a new mascot. They find a skeleton instead
-->'''Nikki:''' I would fed them porridge. And it would've been just right!
** Instead, they find a platypus. Nikki is less than impressed until Neil mentioned that it's poisonous.
* Nikki bringing Neil along to follow a bears' footprints and make it a new mascot. They find a skeleton instead
-->'''Nikki:''' I would fed them porridge. And it would've been just right!
** Instead, they find a platypus. Nikki is less than impressed until Neil mentioned that it's poisonous.
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail]]!"
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail]]!"
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* The end of the episode. Gwen is exasperated that she now to deal with Nikki and Neil in addition to Max. David is happy then Max has two friends and pull out his guitar for a song. Gwen gets fed up, snatches the guitar and beats David with it.
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'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!
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'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!dead!
* Max suggesting that Gwen can be the new mascot.
* Max suggesting that Gwen can be the new mascot.
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-->'''Nerris:''' (throwing charms at it) It's resistant to charms!\\
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* Nerris getting attacked by a raccoon and trying to use her "spells" on it to no avail.
-->'''Nerris:''' It's resistant to charms!\\
-->'''Nerris:''' It's resistant to charms!\\
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* Nerris getting attacked by David trying to convince Neil that nature can be your friend while searching for a new mascot. Neil has this as a response.
-->'''Neil:'''(deadpan) There's a raccoonand trying to use her "spells" on it to no avail.
scavenge Nerris.\\
-->'''Nerris:''' (throwing charms at it) It's resistant to charms!\\
-->'''Neil:'''(deadpan) There's a raccoon
-->'''Nerris:''' (throwing charms at it) It's resistant to charms!\\
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* Ner
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* NerNerris getting attacked by a raccoon and trying to use her "spells" on it to no avail.
-->'''Nerris:''' It's resistant to charms!\\
'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!
-->'''Nerris:''' It's resistant to charms!\\
'''David:''' Nerris! Play dead!
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[[AC: In General]]
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--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock that reads "FUCK THE POLICE" at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
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-->''(Pan out to reveal three knit dummies where Max, Nikki, and Neil were standing)''
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-->''(Pan out to reveal three knit dummies where Max, Nikki, and Neil were standing)''standing)''
[[AC: Episode 2: Mascot]]
* Max attempting to murder David with a rock catapult. He accidentally knocks to their mascot, a hamster, out of David's hand instead, launching it to a nearby island.
--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock that reads "FUCK THE POLICE" at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
* Ner
[[AC: Episode 2: Mascot]]
* Max attempting to murder David with a rock catapult. He accidentally knocks to their mascot, a hamster, out of David's hand instead, launching it to a nearby island.
--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock that reads "FUCK THE POLICE" at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
* Ner
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--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
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--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock that reads "FUCK THE POLICE" at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
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* Gwen taking David's guitar before he can pull it out and bashing her co-worker's head with it.
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* Gwen taking David's guitar before he can pull it out and bashing her co-worker's head with it.it.
* Nikki distracts David by asking him to sing the Camp Campbell song
-->'''Gwen''': Oh, ''Jesus Christ'', no.
-->'''David''': -''burst into song''-
-->'''Gwen''': The kids are gone.
-->''(Pan out to reveal three knit dummies where Max, Nikki, and Neil were standing)''
* Nikki distracts David by asking him to sing the Camp Campbell song
-->'''Gwen''': Oh, ''Jesus Christ'', no.
-->'''David''': -''burst into song''-
-->'''Gwen''': The kids are gone.
-->''(Pan out to reveal three knit dummies where Max, Nikki, and Neil were standing)''
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail]]!"
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail]]!"jail]]!"
* Gwen taking David's guitar before he can pull it out and bashing her co-worker's head with it.
* Gwen taking David's guitar before he can pull it out and bashing her co-worker's head with it.
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail]]!
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism Go to bitch, jail}}]]!
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[{{Spoonerism "[[{{Spoonerism}} Go to bitch, jail}}]]!jail]]!
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[Spoonerism Go to bitch, jail]]!
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* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[Spoonerism "[[{{Spoonerism Go to bitch, jail]]!jail}}]]!
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* The Official Camp Campbell Salute. It's the Shocker.
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* The Official Camp Campbell Salute. It's the Shocker.Shocker.
* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[Spoonerism Go to bitch, jail]]!
* The show's April Fool's Day trailer actually uses a blooper as its background track, as it ends with Jeremy Dooley rapping "[[Spoonerism Go to bitch, jail]]!
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* Most of Max's OnlySaneMan attitude makes him an amazing StraightMan to David and the rest of the campers. Toss in some ComedicSociopathy and being a SirSwearsALot and you get one ball to furious hilarity.
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* Most of Max's OnlySaneMan attitude makes him an amazing StraightMan to David and the rest of the campers. Toss in some ComedicSociopathy and being a SirSwearsALot and you get one ball to of furious hilarity.
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* Cameron Campbell shows himself to be a perfect example of a [[Series/ParksAndRecreation Ron Swanson]] style manly-man, who blames "video games, the Internet, and the Affordable Care Act" on why kids don't like going to summer camp any more.
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* Cameron Campbell shows himself to be a perfect example of a [[Series/ParksAndRecreation Ron Swanson]] style manly-man, who blames "video games, the Internet, and the Affordable Care Act" on why kids don't like going to summer camp any more.more.
* The Official Camp Campbell Salute. It's the Shocker.
* The Official Camp Campbell Salute. It's the Shocker.
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--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
* Nikki's EstablishingCharacterMoment comes by ''biting David's hand'' with all the ferocity of a bulldog, before claiming that it was to "assert dominance."
* Cameron Campbell shows himself to be a perfect example of a [[Series/ParksAndRecreation Ron Swanson]] style manly-man, who blames "video games, the Internet, and the Affordable Care Act" on why kids don't like going to summer camp any more.
--> '''Max:''' ''(to David after launching a large rock at Larry the Hamster)'' "Aw man... That was supposed to kill you."
* Nikki's EstablishingCharacterMoment comes by ''biting David's hand'' with all the ferocity of a bulldog, before claiming that it was to "assert dominance."
* Cameron Campbell shows himself to be a perfect example of a [[Series/ParksAndRecreation Ron Swanson]] style manly-man, who blames "video games, the Internet, and the Affordable Care Act" on why kids don't like going to summer camp any more.
