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--> '''Random talking pig''': Tell them to make me squeal!
--> '''Tokiko''': You stupid pig! (Beat) Wait a minute! Who was that?! The last one wasn't a question! Who was it?!
--> '''Tokiko''': You stupid pig! (Beat) Wait a minute! Who was that?! The last one wasn't a question! Who was it?!
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--> '''Tokiko''':
'''Tokiko:''' You stupid pig!
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** Kazuki's friends ''[[PluckyComicRelief in general]]'' are usually good for a laugh.
--> '''Rokumasu (guy with glasses):''' (goes on a really long lecture about swords while Kazuki is sparring against Shusui Hayasaka)
--> '''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you were talking?!]] (paraphrased)
--> '''Rokumasu (guy with glasses):''' (goes on a really long lecture about swords while Kazuki is sparring against Shusui Hayasaka)
--> '''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you were talking?!]] (paraphrased)
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** Kazuki's friends ''[[PluckyComicRelief in general]]'' are usually good for a laugh.
--> '''Rokumasu (guy with glasses):''' (goes -->'''Rokumasu:''' ''(goes on a really long lecture about swords while Kazuki is sparring against Shusui Hayasaka)
-->Hayasaka)''\\
'''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you weretalking?!]] (paraphrased)talking?!]]
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'''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you were
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-->'''Papillion''': For here. (groan)
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-->'''Papillion''': For here. (groan)''(groan)''
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-->'''Kazuki''': [[SayMyName CHOUNOOOOOO!!!!]] [[HighPressureBlood *SPURT*]]
-->'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]] *SPURT*
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-->'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]] *SPURT*
-->'''CRASH!'''
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-->'''Kazuki''': [[SayMyName CHOUNOOOOOO!!!!]] [[HighPressureBlood *SPURT*]]
-->'''Chouno/Papillon''':''[[HighPressureBlood (spurt)]]''\\
'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]]*SPURT*
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'''(crash!)'''
-->'''Chouno/Papillon''':
'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]]
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* "I'll avenge my death!" said Kazuki after his death and revival.
* Kazuki initially mistaking Tokiko as homeless. In particular, his ImagineSpot of her ''living in a cardboard box''.
--> '''Tokiko''': YOU'RE SO RUDE!
* Kazuki's composite sketch of Papillion, in which he looks a lot like [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando]].
* Kazuki carrying Tokiko on his back from the mountain to the dorm after she's injured in battle. Cue LuminescentBlush. Doubles as SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments.
** And made even funnier when Kazuki's sister and friends find the two like this.
--> "LOVEY-DOVEY PLUS TATTERED AND TORN?!"
** Kazuki's explanation: Tokiko threw her back out and he had to carry her all the way from the hill...through crowded roads...in the train...
--> '''Tokiko:''' Just let me die already...
* "Don't touch me!" "I WANNA TOUCH!"
* Kazuki finding out Tokiko knows about his [[LikesOlderWomen "onee-san" fetish]].
* Chapter 19:
** Tokiko transfers to Kazuki's class and during introductions, Kazuki's friends want to know what her relationship is with Kazuki, which is when his little sister comes in wanting to know as well, and it just escalates from there.
*** During the questioning of Tokiko:
--> '''Random talking pig''': Tell them to make me squeal!
--> '''Tokiko''': You stupid pig! (Beat) Wait a minute! Who was that?! The last one wasn't a question! Who was it?!
** Captain Bravo becomes the new dorm supervisor, and it just mortifies poor Tokiko.
* The "Bravo kiss". Then the "Kazuki kiss".
* Kazuki's friend Daihama (the fat one) after his crush on Tokiko is revealed. Funny because it makes it look like he's got a school swimsuit fetish.
** Kazuki's friends ''[[PluckyComicRelief in general]]'' are usually good for a laugh.
--> '''Rokumasu (guy with glasses):''' (goes on a really long lecture about swords while Kazuki is sparring against Shusui Hayasaka)
--> '''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you were talking?!]] (paraphrased)
* Kazuki and Tokiko expected to have a dramatic confrontation with the revived Papillon. Instead he meets them at a fast food restaurant, wearing his {{Stripperific}} jumpsuit, which he takes a real shine too.
** Out of everyone at the restaurant, who were disgusted and freaked out by Papillion's outfit, Kazuki remains unfazed, having already seen the former in his underwear.
-->'''Tokiko''': UNDERWEAR?!
* W-will that be for here or... '''to go?'''
-->'''Papillion''': For here. (groan)
-->'''Captain Bravo''': For here. (''MANAGER!'' You can have it for free, please just go!)
-->'''[[RuleOfThree Tai and Shi]]''': For here. ('''MANAGER!''' You know what they're starting to call us!? FREAK BURGER!)
** Oh, it gets better!
-->'''Captain Bravo''': What wonderful service! [[{{Catchphrase}} BRAVO]]! [[LargeHam I THINK I'LL START COMING HERE]] ''[[LargeHam ALL THE TIME]]!!!''
--> '''Papillion''': Me too. This place is magnificent!
** And then, as we see in the epilogue, the entire restaurant staff just gives up and runs with it!
* The mankini.
* Papillon showing up at the onsen. With a ''bucket'' covering his manhood.
** He also showed up at the beach, wearing a very flashy speedo. Que BrainBleach from Angel Gozen and Ouka.
* The spoof of "I'm right behind you." "No, I'm behind you." In the anime, they keep appearing behind each other - not attacking, ''just [[FlashStep Flash Stepping]] behind each other'' - for a good ten seconds. And it is ''hilarious''. [[OnlySaneMan Tokiko's]] reaction just makes it better.
** Even better, they end up {{Flash Step}}ping ''right out of the room and outside''.
** And Kazuki immediately claims {{I Meant To Do That}}, to Tokiko's skepticism.
* The moment while Kazuki and Tokiko share their second kiss, and Mahiro pops up with a squee on her face.
* This exchange:
-->'''Kazuki''': [[SayMyName CHOUNOOOOOO!!!!]] [[HighPressureBlood *SPURT*]]
-->'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]] *SPURT*
-->'''CRASH!'''
* When infiltrating LXE's headquarters, Kazuki, Tokiko and Bravo strike poses (which are also {{Shout Out}}s to other famous anime poses) at the door when prompted in order to get in. When nothing happens, Bravo muses that, since they're obviously enemies, they probably wouldn't be let even if they knew the password, and an embarrassed Tokiko angrily breaks down the door.
** Right before that, Kazuki discussed the upcoming summer holiday trip with Tokiko, who was understandably annoyed he did this while they were minutes away from their target. Then Bravo chipped in...
--> '''Bravo:''' Warrior Kazuki...I can drive.
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* Kazuki initially mistaking Tokiko as homeless. In particular, his ImagineSpot of her ''living in a cardboard box''.
--> '''Tokiko''': YOU'RE SO RUDE!
* Kazuki's composite sketch of Papillion, in which he looks a lot like [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando]].
* Kazuki carrying Tokiko on his back from the mountain to the dorm after she's injured in battle. Cue LuminescentBlush. Doubles as SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments.
** And made even funnier when Kazuki's sister and friends find the two like this.
--> "LOVEY-DOVEY PLUS TATTERED AND TORN?!"
** Kazuki's explanation: Tokiko threw her back out and he had to carry her all the way from the hill...through crowded roads...in the train...
--> '''Tokiko:''' Just let me die already...
* "Don't touch me!" "I WANNA TOUCH!"
* Kazuki finding out Tokiko knows about his [[LikesOlderWomen "onee-san" fetish]].
* Chapter 19:
** Tokiko transfers to Kazuki's class and during introductions, Kazuki's friends want to know what her relationship is with Kazuki, which is when his little sister comes in wanting to know as well, and it just escalates from there.
*** During the questioning of Tokiko:
--> '''Random talking pig''': Tell them to make me squeal!
--> '''Tokiko''': You stupid pig! (Beat) Wait a minute! Who was that?! The last one wasn't a question! Who was it?!
** Captain Bravo becomes the new dorm supervisor, and it just mortifies poor Tokiko.
* The "Bravo kiss". Then the "Kazuki kiss".
* Kazuki's friend Daihama (the fat one) after his crush on Tokiko is revealed. Funny because it makes it look like he's got a school swimsuit fetish.
** Kazuki's friends ''[[PluckyComicRelief in general]]'' are usually good for a laugh.
--> '''Rokumasu (guy with glasses):''' (goes on a really long lecture about swords while Kazuki is sparring against Shusui Hayasaka)
--> '''Daihama:''' [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall Wait, how much of the fight did we miss while you were talking?!]] (paraphrased)
* Kazuki and Tokiko expected to have a dramatic confrontation with the revived Papillon. Instead he meets them at a fast food restaurant, wearing his {{Stripperific}} jumpsuit, which he takes a real shine too.
** Out of everyone at the restaurant, who were disgusted and freaked out by Papillion's outfit, Kazuki remains unfazed, having already seen the former in his underwear.
-->'''Tokiko''': UNDERWEAR?!
* W-will that be for here or... '''to go?'''
-->'''Papillion''': For here. (groan)
-->'''Captain Bravo''': For here. (''MANAGER!'' You can have it for free, please just go!)
-->'''[[RuleOfThree Tai and Shi]]''': For here. ('''MANAGER!''' You know what they're starting to call us!? FREAK BURGER!)
** Oh, it gets better!
-->'''Captain Bravo''': What wonderful service! [[{{Catchphrase}} BRAVO]]! [[LargeHam I THINK I'LL START COMING HERE]] ''[[LargeHam ALL THE TIME]]!!!''
--> '''Papillion''': Me too. This place is magnificent!
** And then, as we see in the epilogue, the entire restaurant staff just gives up and runs with it!
* The mankini.
* Papillon showing up at the onsen. With a ''bucket'' covering his manhood.
** He also showed up at the beach, wearing a very flashy speedo. Que BrainBleach from Angel Gozen and Ouka.
* The spoof of "I'm right behind you." "No, I'm behind you." In the anime, they keep appearing behind each other - not attacking, ''just [[FlashStep Flash Stepping]] behind each other'' - for a good ten seconds. And it is ''hilarious''. [[OnlySaneMan Tokiko's]] reaction just makes it better.
** Even better, they end up {{Flash Step}}ping ''right out of the room and outside''.
** And Kazuki immediately claims {{I Meant To Do That}}, to Tokiko's skepticism.
* The moment while Kazuki and Tokiko share their second kiss, and Mahiro pops up with a squee on her face.
* This exchange:
-->'''Kazuki''': [[SayMyName CHOUNOOOOOO!!!!]] [[HighPressureBlood *SPURT*]]
-->'''Chouno/Papillon''': [[LargeHam MUTOOOOOO!!!!]] *SPURT*
-->'''CRASH!'''
* When infiltrating LXE's headquarters, Kazuki, Tokiko and Bravo strike poses (which are also {{Shout Out}}s to other famous anime poses) at the door when prompted in order to get in. When nothing happens, Bravo muses that, since they're obviously enemies, they probably wouldn't be let even if they knew the password, and an embarrassed Tokiko angrily breaks down the door.
** Right before that, Kazuki discussed the upcoming summer holiday trip with Tokiko, who was understandably annoyed he did this while they were minutes away from their target. Then Bravo chipped in...
--> '''Bravo:''' Warrior Kazuki...I can drive.
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