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* Feeling violated over the above incident, Alice comically reacts to Imomushi threatening Hanakamakiri with rape with confusion that ''he's'' on the receiving end of the threat.
* Megumi goes crazy upon spotting Alice on the cameras and flops on the floor like a dead cockroach, arms and legs raised to the ceiling. With how lovey-dovey she acts about Alice, it almost makes one forget she's a RapeByProxy bitch who deserves a ton of spanking...
* Megumi goes crazy upon spotting Alice on the cameras and flops on the floor like a dead cockroach, arms and legs raised to the ceiling. With how lovey-dovey she acts about Alice, it almost makes one forget she's a RapeByProxy bitch who deserves a ton of spanking...
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* Kabutomushi was chronologically last seen determined to save Alice from the Organization. Then she just disappeared while Gokiburi went back to working for the Organization as a prison-shelter director. Whatever happened to Ran Kabuto? ...Chapter 17 reveals she ''was "working" at WcDonalds the whole time''.
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* Kabutomushi was chronologically last seen determined to save Alice from the Organization. Then she just disappeared while Gokiburi went back to working for the Organization as a prison-shelter director. Whatever happened to Ran Kabuto? ...Chapter 17 reveals she ''was "working" at WcDonalds the whole time''. Also, the zombies wandering near the restaurant are actually after Happy Meals and fries instead of rape, with Kabutomushi slamming them with her polearm and saying that's just for kids.
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* Chiyuri mistakes Hibiki for a closeted ''Sailor Moon'' fan [[InTheNameOfTheMoon due to his loud boasting and the poses he makes]], ruining the mood he was trying to set for their confrontation. He starts shouting that he's actually a ''Kamen Rider'' fan but Chiyuri ignores him and just keeps boasting back while Setsuna drools over her on the side.
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* Alice gets a crush on Hanakamakiri while thinking he's female and is [[UnsettlingGenderReveal inevitably shocked]] when she finds him peeing on the toilet. The [[CringeComedy hilarity]] in the scene comes from the reveal of just how much Alice, previously a ShrinkingViolet with NoSocialSkills, had been acting intimate with Hanakamakiri for several days. Realizing she was walking half-naked around a boy, getting back massages from a boy while topless, talking about girl stuff and playing the [[SpaghettiKiss ~Pocky]] [[SeriousBusiness Game~]] with a boy, she starts foaming at the mouth and ''faints'' while Hanakamakiri reaches out for her in a panic.
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* Alice gets a crush on Hanakamakiri while thinking he's female and is [[UnsettlingGenderReveal inevitably shocked]] when she finds him the boy peeing on the toilet.toilet while trying to warn him about a zombie. The [[CringeComedy hilarity]] in the scene comes from the reveal of just how much Alice, previously a ShrinkingViolet with NoSocialSkills, had been acting intimate with Hanakamakiri for several days. Realizing she was walking half-naked around a boy, getting back massages from a boy while topless, talking about girl stuff and playing the [[SpaghettiKiss ~Pocky]] [[SeriousBusiness Game~]] with a boy, she starts foaming at the mouth and ''faints'' while Hanakamakiri reaches out for her in a panic.
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* Setsuna starts begging Chiyuri for sex again after Juzuhigemushi is defeated, and tries to smooch her with a silly chibi face. Chiyuri outright ''[[ComedicSociopathy blasts her unconscious]]'' with a Wave Cannon, shouting they can't have sex just like that.
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* Setsuna starts begging Chiyuri for sex again in front of several people after Juzuhigemushi is defeated, and tries to smooch her with a silly chibi face. Chiyuri outright ''[[ComedicSociopathy blasts her unconscious]]'' with a Wave Cannon, shouting they can't have sex just like that.
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** There's something amusing about Alice rejecting Hanakamakiri's promise of unlimited pudding in exchange for becoming the Boss just to be swayed by Karina's offer of [[KnifeNut [[BladeEnthusiast unlimited knives]].
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* Kabutomushi was chronologically last seen determined to save Alice from the Organization. Then she just disappeared while Gokiburi went back to working for the Organization as a prison-shelter director. Whatever happened to Ran Kabuto? ...Chapter 17 reveals she ''was working "working" at WcDonalds the whole time''.
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* Alice's victory over Hanakamakiri in chapter 18. She drops a heavy blast door on the boy, with a double splash page dedicated just for the time of impact. He is left face-planted with the gate pressing him in half, a wince-inducing thin gap between it and the floor... but [[MadeOfIron there's no sign that he's been injured at all]] and the focus is on his [[ThisCannotBe complete disbelief]] that Alice pulled a fast one on him, making the scene seem like slapstick comedy right out of ''WesternAnimation/TomAndJerry''.
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* Chiyuri scolds the half-zombified Setsuna for trying to force herself on her while she's asleep, and calls her a lewd exhibitionist in general. Setsuna's protests come off like LampshadeHanging of how this portrayal is unfitting for her.
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* Chiyuri scolds the half-zombified Setsuna for trying to force herself on her while she's asleep, and calls her a lewd exhibitionist in general. Setsuna's protests come off like LampshadeHanging of how this portrayal is unfitting out of character for her.
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** There's something amusing about Alice rejecting Hanakamakiri's promise of unlimited pudding in exchange for becoming the Boss just to be swayed by Karina's offer of [[KnifeNut unlimited knives]].
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* Chiyuri scolds the half-zombified Setsuna for trying to force herself on her in her sleep, and calls her a lewd exhibitionist in general. Setsuna's protests come off like LampshadeHanging of how this portrayal is unfitting for her.
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* Chiyuri scolds the half-zombified Setsuna for trying to force herself on her in her sleep, while she's asleep, and calls her a lewd exhibitionist in general. Setsuna's protests come off like LampshadeHanging of how this portrayal is unfitting for her.
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* The [[BrickJoke payoff]] to Alice being said [[TrademarkFavoriteFood to like pudding]] early in ''Arachnid'' is Hanakamakiri cooking her one and Alice being [[MundaneMadeAwesome absolutely mesmerized]], putting aside her numerous troubles to ask, with a very serious expression, which brand it was and then being in disbelief that it could be made by Hanakamakiri's humble human hands.
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-->'''Setsuna''': AHHHHHHH!!
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-->'''Setsuna''': AHHHHHHH!!BAAAWWW!!
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-->'''Setsuna''': N-- NO!! I'm not lewd!! That was a one time thing!
-->'''Chiyuri''': Really?
-->'''Setsuna''': N-- NO!! I'm not lewd!! That was a one time thing!
-->'''Chiyuri''': Really?
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-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! I only found this many "Lucky", so that's it for now.
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-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! I only found this many much "Lucky", so that's it for now.
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-->'''Setsuna''': ''I want it... Hurry up... Hey...''
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! This is "Lucky" that ''I'' found. I can't give you that much.
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! This is "Lucky" that ''I'' found. I can't give you that much.
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-->'''Setsuna''': ''I want it... Hurry up...''Just a little bit... Come on, give me more... Hey...''
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no!This is "Lucky" that ''I'' found. I can't give you that much.only found this many "Lucky", so that's it for now.
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no!
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-->'''Chiyuri''': Don't you "[[GratuitousForeignLanguage mị̀mī thāng]]" me! You can only have three a day!
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-->'''Chiyuri''': Don't you "[[GratuitousForeignLanguage mị̀mī thāng]]" me! You can only have We decided to eat three pieces a day!day, right?
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-->'''Chiyuri''': Being homeless... is the best~!!
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take a shower! ''I can't even watch anime!''
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take a shower! ''I can't even watch anime!''
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-->'''Chiyuri''': Being homeless... Having no home... is the best~!!
best after all~!!
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take ashower! bath, ''I can't even watch anime!''
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take a
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* This remark from Dinopo about Chiyuri on chapter 2:
-->"She's got both speed and power. It's nothing like the attacks from before. ''Good job, Japan.''"
* When Dinoponera notices Chiyuri's MegatonPunch taking form in BulletTime, she just squeaks out an [[ThisIsGonnaSuck "Oh."]]
* Chapter 8 opens with an apparently re-zombified Setsuna crawling towards Chiyuri to try to rape her... but she's just hungry for chocolate.
-->'''Setsuna''': ''I want it... Hurry up... Hey...''
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! This is "Lucky" that ''I'' found. I can't give you that much.
-->'''Setsuna''': Why?! <No waaaay>!!
-->'''Chiyuri''': Don't you "[[GratuitousForeignLanguage mị̀mī thāng]]" me! You can only have three a day!
-->'''Setsuna''': AHHHHHHH!!
* After Setsuna remarks they're running out of food, Chiyuri immediately starts leaving to explore a new area. She tells her friend that homeless people must keep light, so they can look for new clothes and stuff on their way.
-->'''Chiyuri''': Being homeless... is the best~!!
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take a shower! ''I can't even watch anime!''
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* This remark from Dinopo about Chiyuri on chapter 2:
-->"She's got both speed and power. It's nothing like the attacks from before. ''Good job, Japan.''"
* When Dinoponera notices Chiyuri's MegatonPunch taking form in BulletTime, she just squeaks out an [[ThisIsGonnaSuck "Oh."]]
* Chapter 8 opens with an apparently re-zombified Setsuna crawling towards Chiyuri to try to rape her... but she's just hungry for chocolate.
-->'''Setsuna''': ''I want it... Hurry up... Hey...''
-->'''Chiyuri''': No, no, no! This is "Lucky" that ''I'' found. I can't give you that much.
-->'''Setsuna''': Why?! <No waaaay>!!
-->'''Chiyuri''': Don't you "[[GratuitousForeignLanguage mị̀mī thāng]]" me! You can only have three a day!
-->'''Setsuna''': AHHHHHHH!!
* After Setsuna remarks they're running out of food, Chiyuri immediately starts leaving to explore a new area. She tells her friend that homeless people must keep light, so they can look for new clothes and stuff on their way.
-->'''Chiyuri''': Being homeless... is the best~!!
-->'''Setsuna''': It's the WORST! I can't eat sweets, I can't take a shower! ''I can't even watch anime!''
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