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* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man under arrest for "being a creep" (or possession of endangered species if that won't fly).
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* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until merchandises. He doesn't seem to mind much ... until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man under arrest for "being a creep" (or possession of endangered species species, if that won't fly).
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* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man in arrest for 'possessing a most dangerous species in life.'
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* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man in under arrest for 'possessing "being a most dangerous creep" (or possession of endangered species in life.'if that won't fly).
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* When the heroes are brainstorming a way to kill Ramon: "We could introduce him to my mother. She could talk him to death."
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* When the heroes are brainstorming a way to kill Ramon: "We could introduce him to my mother. She could talk him to death.""
* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man in arrest for 'possessing a most dangerous species in life.'
* David was walking in a theme park, witnessing people using Ramon's myth as an excuse of selling alligator-based merchandises... Until he came across a man ''selling a baby gator for pet''. David then put the man in arrest for 'possessing a most dangerous species in life.'
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* There's the [[EatenAlive death of the nincompoop reporter]] who goes down into the sewers looking for Ramon. [[TemptingFate He finds him]] and dies snapping photos of the monster that is ''tearing him limb from limb'' rather then being intelligent and [[TooDumbToLive running for his life]].
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* There's the [[EatenAlive death of the nincompoop reporter]] who goes down into the sewers looking for Ramon. [[TemptingFate He finds him]] and dies snapping photos of the monster that is ''tearing him limb from limb'' rather then being intelligent and [[TooDumbToLive running for his life]].life]].
* When the heroes are brainstorming a way to kill Ramon: "We could introduce him to my mother. She could talk him to death."
* When the heroes are brainstorming a way to kill Ramon: "We could introduce him to my mother. She could talk him to death."
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* There's the [[EatenAlive death of the nincompoop reporter]] who goes down into the sewers looking for Ramon. [[TemptingFate He finds him]] and dies snapping photos of the monster that is ''tearing him limb from limb'' rather then being intelligent and [[TooDumbToLive running for his life]].
