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* Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Their lives are going to be ruined once news gets out, especially since there's nobody to make sure they're taken care of like Jackson had hoped.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Their lives are going to be ruined once news gets out, especially since there's nobody to make sure they're taken care of like Jackson had hoped.
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* Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he was the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Theirfamily's lives are going to will be ruined once news gets out, especially since there's nobody to make sure they're taken care of like Jackson had hoped.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Their
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* Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.
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* Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.is.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Their lives are going to be ruined once news gets out, especially since there's nobody to make sure they're taken care of like Jackson had hoped.
** Worse, they ''will'' find out. The police found his body in the armored truck and would be able to identify him; at the very least, his fingerprints will be on record. Their lives are going to be ruined once news gets out, especially since there's nobody to make sure they're taken care of like Jackson had hoped.
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* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched ''very'' closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
** The crew probably understood any survivors would have to go underground after a heist this big. When underground, the heisters lay low for a year or two, then trickle the money in to their fallen ally's family, be it through lottery setups, mysterious inheritances from a long-lost uncle, etc.
* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched ''very'' closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
** The crew probably understood any survivors would have to go underground after a heist this big. When underground, the heisters lay low for a year or two, then trickle the money in to their fallen ally's family, be it through lottery setups, mysterious inheritances from a long-lost uncle, etc.
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* [[spoiler: Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.]]
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* [[spoiler: Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.]]
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** The crew probably understood any survivors would have to go underground after a heist this big. When underground, the heisters lay low for a year or two, then trickle the money in to their fallen ally's family, be it through lottery setups, mysterious inheritances from a long-lost uncle, etc.
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* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched 'very' closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
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* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched 'very' ''very'' closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
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* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched _very_ closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
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* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched _very_ 'very' closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
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[[AC:Fridge Logic]]
* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched _very_ closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
* Sarge's crew planned that any team members who fell would have their families taken care of by the survivor[s]. Except any fallen members would be quickly identified, with any known associates and their families all watched _very_ closely for signs of sudden monetary windfalls. Even if the sole survivor were feeling generous, they'd never see a dime.
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* [[spoiler: Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.]]
* [[spoiler: Jackson has a loving family who had no idea he the leader of a dangerous gang of robbers. After dying in a heist, his family had no idea where he is.]]