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* When considering Chapter seven one will notice that it bares a stunning resemblance to a typical DarkMagicalGirl Plot line; heroine meets evil version of herself, defeats this foil, finds out the foil is a lonely girl stricken with guilt about her misdeeds and decides to befriend her and in doing so, turn her onto the path of superheroism. What makes this Fridge Brilliance? Alexis is a ''manga'' fan; she knows about these kinds of plots and that's why she could play one so well, right up to the [[LesYay "girl on girl action"]]. What's more, Heather refuses to read manga ("Manga sucks"), and so, for all her DCU comic book GenreSavvy, she didn't see it coming.
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* When considering Chapter seven 7, one will notice that it bares a stunning resemblance to a typical DarkMagicalGirl Plot line; heroine meets evil version of herself, defeats this foil, finds out the foil is a lonely girl stricken with guilt about her misdeeds and decides to befriend her and in doing so, turn her onto the path of superheroism. What makes this Fridge Brilliance? Alexis is a ''manga'' fan; she knows about these kinds of plots and that's why she could play one so well, right up to the [[LesYay "girl on girl action"]]. What's more, Heather refuses to read manga ("Manga sucks"), and so, for all her DCU comic book GenreSavvy, she didn't see it coming.
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* When Evil Spinnerette returns in Issue 33, she complains about all the impracticalities being a drider has brought to both her villain career and life in general. Fans familiar with D&D lore will know that being turned into a drider is considered a ''punishment'' from Lolth, not a blessing.
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* The composite soul being shown killing [[spoiler: people and absorbing their souls]] is horrific enough, but what's even worse is [[spoiler: that to neutralize it, the heroes have to cast a spell to send it back to Hell, along with the souls of the innocents who were just killed and eaten]].
** Hell has a management, if training security is any indication. They'll sort it out.
** Hell has a management, if training security is any indication. They'll sort it out.
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* If Super MILF's breasts generate enough radioactive heat to almost instantly melt ice cream into a puddle, chances are she'd be giving off enough to effectively kill everyone she stands next to for long enough.
** It's likely her kids have superpowers and/or are mutated: if she breastfed them herself they spend the first few months of life in close proximity to a high source of radiation. Alternatively, she ''couldn't'' breastfeed her children because that would be exposing them to dangerous levels of radiation at a young age.
** It's likely her kids have superpowers and/or are mutated: if she breastfed them herself they spend the first few months of life in close proximity to a high source of radiation. Alternatively, she ''couldn't'' breastfeed her children because that would be exposing them to dangerous levels of radiation at a young age.
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** It's likely her kids have superpowers and/or are mutated: if she breastfed them herself they spend the first few months of life in close proximity to a high source of radiation. Alternatively, she ''couldn't'' breastfeed her children because that would be exposing them to dangerous levels of radiation at a young age.
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* Why does Maus flirt with Greta? Well it's not just that she's German, she's also blond-haired blue-eyed and is a super on top of that!
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* Why does Maus flirt with Greta? Well it's It's not just that she's German, she's also blond-haired blue-eyed and is a super on top of that!that!
*When considering Chapter seven one will notice that it bares a stunning resemblance to a typical DarkMagicalGirl Plot line; heroine meets evil version of herself, defeats this foil, finds out the foil is a lonely girl stricken with guilt about her misdeeds and decides to befriend her and in doing so, turn her onto the path of superheroism. What makes this Fridge Brilliance? Alexis is a ''manga'' fan; she knows about these kinds of plots and that's why she could play one so well, right up to the [[LesYay "girl on girl action"]]. What's more, Heather refuses to read manga ("Manga sucks"), and so, for all her DCU comic book GenreSavvy, she didn't see it coming.
*When considering Chapter seven one will notice that it bares a stunning resemblance to a typical DarkMagicalGirl Plot line; heroine meets evil version of herself, defeats this foil, finds out the foil is a lonely girl stricken with guilt about her misdeeds and decides to befriend her and in doing so, turn her onto the path of superheroism. What makes this Fridge Brilliance? Alexis is a ''manga'' fan; she knows about these kinds of plots and that's why she could play one so well, right up to the [[LesYay "girl on girl action"]]. What's more, Heather refuses to read manga ("Manga sucks"), and so, for all her DCU comic book GenreSavvy, she didn't see it coming.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Why does Maus flirt with Greta? Well it's not just that she's German, she's also blond-haired blue-eyed and is a super on top of that!
* FridgeHorror: The composite soul being shown killing [[spoiler: people and absorbing their souls]] is horrific enough, but what's even worse is [[spoiler: that to neutralize it, the heroes have to cast a spell to send it back to Hell, along with the souls of the innocents who were just killed and eaten]].
* FridgeHorror: The composite soul being shown killing [[spoiler: people and absorbing their souls]] is horrific enough, but what's even worse is [[spoiler: that to neutralize it, the heroes have to cast a spell to send it back to Hell, along with the souls of the innocents who were just killed and eaten]].
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*Why does Maus flirt with Greta? Well it's not just that she's German, she's also blond-haired blue-eyed and is a super on top of that!
*The composite soul being shown killing [[spoiler: people and absorbing their souls]] is horrific enough, but what's even worse is [[spoiler: that to neutralize it, the heroes have to cast a spell to send it back to Hell, along with the souls of the innocents who were just killed and eaten]].
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*FridgeBrilliance: Why does Maus flirt with Greta? Well it's not just that she's German, she's also blond-haired blue-eyed and is a super on top of that!
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* The surgical removal of Spinnerette's arms in Issue 12 may have been necessary, but it was likely a ''very'' invasive process, as all the extra muscle and bone had to be taken out as well. [[GoodThingYouCanHeal It's a good thing she could heal]], because [[BodyHorror her torso would not have been a pretty sight]] after it was done.
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** Hell has a management, if training security is any indication. They'll sort it out.
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* FridgeHorror: The composite soul being shown killing [[spoiler: people and absorbing their souls]] is horrific enough, but what's even worse is [[spoiler: that to neutralize it, the heroes have to cast a spell to send it back to Hell, along with the souls of the innocents who were just killed and eaten]].
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