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* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we get to know later and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
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* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we get to know later and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets upon getting the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
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* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we knowlater and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
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* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we knowlater get to know later and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
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* Over the course of the story, it's mentioned several times that Corbin's back has a tendency for unsavoury cracking noises, and he's obviously in pain ever again. Makes a lot of sence once we know that [[spoiler: Corbin was a child labourer as soon as he could walk; no one in Victorian England took the physical health of underage factory workers seriously.]]
* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we knowlater and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
* Over the course of the story, it's mentioned several times that Corbin's back has a tendency for unsavoury cracking noises, and he's obviously in pain ever again. Makes a lot of sence once we know that [[spoiler: Corbin was a child labourer as soon as he could walk; no one in Victorian England took the physical health of underage factory workers seriously.]]
* Corbin's cribbage set is held together by a ribbon that reminds Lauchlan of a hair tie. Considering what we knowlater and Corbin's emotional reaction once he gets the cribbage set back, it's likely that [[spoiler: it's a hair ribbon of his deceased sister Eloise.]]
