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** Does the collar keep working even as a chicken is being ground up for nuggets, or are the victim's last moments a sudden shock of agony as they wake up from the brainwashing to the nightmare of being ripped apart?
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** Does the collar keep working even as a chicken is being ground up for nuggets, or are the victim's last moments a sudden shock of agony as they wake up from the brainwashing to the nightmare of being ripped apart?apart? Given that it's likely that the collars are removed right before they're ground up, it's probably the latter.
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* It was very lucky that Reginald's "proposal" to Mrs. Tweedy was just showing her the dipping sauce. If he had asked her to marry him (and Melisha's reaction indicates she expected a proposal), it wouldn't have ended up well for him; he just would have become HenpeckedHusband #3.
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* It was very lucky that Reginald's "proposal" to Mrs. Tweedy was just showing her the dipping sauce. If he had asked her to marry him (and Melisha's reaction indicates she expected a proposal), it wouldn't have ended up well for him; he just would have become HenpeckedHusband #3. Melisha Tweedy HasAType...but that "type" is more "loyal, useful minion" than anything conducive to a loving relationship.
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** Considering Mrs. Tweedy’s behaviour towards Reginald seemed to indicate she might have been prepared to accept more than just a business partnership, it could even be possible that she was willing to use her appearance specifically to make herself appear more desirable.
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** Considering Mrs. Tweedy’s behaviour towards Reginald seemed to indicate she might have been prepared to accept more than just a business partnership, it could even be possible that she was willing to use her appearance specifically deliberately trying to make herself appear more desirable.
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* Chicken #314 (and any other chickens who ended up being victims of the nugget processing machine) may have had friends in the groups they went to Fun-Land Farms with, but then the collars made them forget about each other/their friendships. Once the collars were disabled and removed, it’s possible that some of the chickens noticed their friend was missing - and did they ever find out how horrific her end was?
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* Chicken #314 (and any other chickens who ended up being victims of the nugget processing machine) may have had friends in the groups they went in to Fun-Land Farms with, but then the collars made them forget about each other/their friendships. Once the collars were disabled and removed, it’s possible that some of the chickens noticed their friend was missing - and did they ever find out how horrific her end was?
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* Chicken #314 (and any other chickens who ended up being victims of the nugget processing machine) may have had friends in the groups they went to Fun-Land Farms with, but then the collars made them forget about each other/their friendships. Once the collars were disabled and removed, it’s possible that some of the chickens noticed their friend was missing - and did they ever find out how horrific her end was?
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* Chicken #314 (and any other chickens who ended up being victims of the nugget processing machine) may have had friends in the groups they went to Fun-Land Farms with, but then the collars made them forget about each other/their friendships. Once the collars were disabled and removed, it’s possible that some of the chickens noticed their friend was missing - and did they ever find out how horrific her end was?was?
* There was a notable amount of security and other workers in Fun-Land Farms; it’s possible that they may not have been able to escape in time when the farm was destroyed.
* There was a notable amount of security and other workers in Fun-Land Farms; it’s possible that they may not have been able to escape in time when the farm was destroyed.
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** Considering Mrs. Tweedy’s behaviour towards Reginald seemed to indicate she might have been prepared to accept more than just a business partnership, it could even be possible that she was willing to use her appearance specifically to make herself appear more desirable.
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** Also, the other reason why is because the impact of the door at the end of the first film may have broken her face. At some point between the first and second film, Mrs Tweedy's had plastic surgery which not only repaired her face but also made her younger when you compared her face from the last film to her in this film.
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** Also, the other reason why is because the impact of the door at the end of the first film may have broken her face. At some point between the first and second film, Mrs Tweedy's Tweedy had plastic surgery which not only repaired her face but also made her younger when you compared her face from the last film to her in this film.
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** Also, the other reason why is because the impact of the door at the end of the first film may have broken her face. At some point between the first and second film, Mrs Tweedy's had plastic surgery which not only repaired her face but also made her younger compare her face from the last film to her in this film.
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** Also, the other reason why is because the impact of the door at the end of the first film may have broken her face. At some point between the first and second film, Mrs Tweedy's had plastic surgery which not only repaired her face but also made her younger compare when you compared her face from the last film to her in this film.
