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* The protagonist gives off the impression of a [[GuileHero clever]], [[PluckyGirl persistent]] and [[MacGyvering resourceful]] woman, and yet is completely useless when it comes to solving the puzzle box. [[spoiler:The proprietor of [[TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday The Cauldron]]]], however, solves it immediately upon seeing it. One may wonder whether the protagonist's inability to make even the slightest progress with the puzzle is a case of IdiotBall... but remember that [[spoiler:this is the very shop that disappears as soon as things start getting dangerous, and is replaced by a different geography that goes around in a loop]], which implies that [[spoiler:the proprietor can somehow manipulate AlienGeometries to make his shop inaccessible when the environment is hostile]]. Many things and places related to the cult use Alien Geometries, so it makes sense that the puzzle box does so as well, which explains why the protagonist was utterly incapable of solving it, but [[spoiler:the proprietor]] opened it like it was nothing.
* The protagonist gives off the impression of a [[GuileHero clever]], [[PluckyGirl persistent]] and [[MacGyvering resourceful]] woman, and yet is completely useless when it comes to solving the puzzle box. [[spoiler:The proprietor of [[TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday The Cauldron]]]], however, solves it immediately upon seeing it. One may wonder whether the protagonist's inability to make even the slightest progress with the puzzle is a case of IdiotBall... but remember that [[spoiler:this is the very shop that disappears as soon as things start getting dangerous, and is replaced by a different geography that goes around in a loop]], which implies that [[spoiler:the proprietor can somehow manipulate AlienGeometries to make his shop inaccessible when the environment is hostile]]. Many things and places related to the cult use Alien Geometries, so it makes sense that the puzzle box does so as well, which explains why the protagonist was utterly incapable of solving it, but [[spoiler:the proprietor]] opened it like it was nothing.
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* The confession of [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] is written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style that feels rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, he has had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on his mind.]]
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* The journal entries confession of Michael and [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] are is written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style that feels rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, they have he has had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on their minds.his mind.]]
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* The journal entries of Michael and [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] are written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style that feels rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, they have had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on their minds.]]]]
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* The journal entries of Michael and [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] are written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style, style that feels rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, they have had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on their minds.]]
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* The journal entries of Michael and [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] are written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style, rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, they have had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on their minds.]]
* The journal entries of Michael and [[spoiler:Edward Verlac]] are written in a meticulous, somewhat old-fashioned style, rather out of place in a story set in the 1990s. [[spoiler:Of course, they have had the centuries-old spirit of Croseus Verlac working on their minds.]]
