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* JustPlaneWrong: If you have the time, a real-life F-14 pilot compiled his own [[https://www.wearethemighty.com/articles/79-cringe-worthy-technical-errors-in-the-movie-top-gun list]]. It's a ''very'' long one.
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* JustPlaneWrong: If you have the time, a retired real-life F-14 pilot RIO (back-seat guy) compiled his own [[https://www.wearethemighty.com/articles/79-cringe-worthy-technical-errors-in-the-movie-top-gun list]]. It's a ''very'' long one.
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* NegativesAsAPositive: Ice Man had, at one point during Top Gun training, called out Maverick for [[MilitaryMaverick living up to his namesake]], telling him he was dangerous. At the end of the film, after Maverick saves Ice from [=MiGs=], Ice calls him out on the flight deck.
--> '''Ice Man:''' YOU! You are still dangerous.({{Beat}}) You can be my wing man any time.
--> '''Ice Man:''' YOU! You are still dangerous.({{Beat}}) You can be my wing man any time.
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* NegativesAsAPositive: Ice Man Iceman had, at one point during Top Gun training, called out Maverick for [[MilitaryMaverick living up to his namesake]], telling him he was dangerous. At the end of the film, after Maverick saves Ice from [=MiGs=], Ice calls him out on the flight deck.
-->'''Ice Man:''' '''Iceman:''' YOU! You are still dangerous.({{Beat}}) You can be my wing man any time.
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* SequelHook: At the end of the film, after the post-battle celebration, Mav mentions that he's returning to TOPGUN to become an instructor there. [[Film/TopGunMaverick Cue sequel about three decades later.]]
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* SequelHook: At the end of the film, after the post-battle celebration, Mav mentions that he's returning to TOPGUN to become an instructor there. [[Film/TopGunMaverick Cue sequel about over three decades later.later; specifically thirty-six years.]]
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** F-14s, which feature so prominently in the film, have all been retired from service with the Navy. While the A-4 as a aggressor has also been retired, the Navy still uses the bad guys' plane, the [=MiG-28=] (in reality the F-5), for aggressor combat.
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** F-14s, which feature so prominently in the film, have all been retired from service with the Navy. While the A-4 as a an aggressor has also been retired, the Navy still uses the bad guys' plane, the [=MiG-28=] (in reality the F-5), for aggressor combat.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In setting up the main plot of the film, Stinger barks at Maverick and Goose: "You two ''characters'' are going to TOPGUN."
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%% * TechnicianVersusPerformer: Iceman and Maverick, respectively. It's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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* TechnicianVersusPerformer: Iceman and Maverick, respectively. It's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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%% * TechnicianVersusPerformer: Iceman and Maverick, respectively. It's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Between Maverick and Charlie.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Between Maverick and Charlie.Charlie is one of Maverick's teachers at TOPGUN. They fall in love with each other during the movie.
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* ShirtlessScene: The infamous beach volleyball scene is so infamous precisely because it's one of these.
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%% * ShirtlessScene: The infamous beach volleyball scene is so infamous precisely because it's one of these.
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** The TechnoBabble is almost all nonsense.
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%% ** The TechnoBabble is almost all nonsense.
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* ImprobablePilotingSkills: Maverick, most of the time.
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* HeroicBSOD
** Maverick is stuck in one after [[spoiler:Goose's death.]]
** Cougar has one in-flight after an enemy fighter gets a missile lock on him.
** Maverick is stuck in one after [[spoiler:Goose's death.]]
** Cougar has one in-flight after an enemy fighter gets a missile lock on him.
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%% * HeroicBSOD
%% ** Maverick is stuck in one after [[spoiler:Goose's death.]]
%% ** Cougar has one in-flight after an enemy fighter gets a missile lock on him.
%% ** Maverick is stuck in one after [[spoiler:Goose's death.]]
%% ** Cougar has one in-flight after an enemy fighter gets a missile lock on him.
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* GlassesPull: Maverick near constantly, and Goose once when it turns out that the woman he helped his buddy hit on the night before is a consultant at Top Gun.
* GodHelpUsAll: Stinger's semi-facetious response when Maverick suggests becoming a TOPGUN instructor.
* GodHelpUsAll: Stinger's semi-facetious response when Maverick suggests becoming a TOPGUN instructor.
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%% * GlassesPull: Maverick near constantly, and Goose once when it turns out that the woman he helped his buddy hit on the night before is a consultant at Top Gun.
%% * GodHelpUsAll: Stinger's semi-facetious response when Maverick suggests becoming a TOPGUN instructor.
%% * GodHelpUsAll: Stinger's semi-facetious response when Maverick suggests becoming a TOPGUN instructor.
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* GentleTouchVsFirmHand: Viper (Gentle Touch), Jester (Firm Hand).
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%% * GentleTouchVsFirmHand: Viper (Gentle Touch), Jester (Firm Hand).
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* FlippingTheBird: Maverick does it to the [=MiG=] pilot while inverted and snapping photos of him. Goose does it to the entire briefing room while telling the story of their aerobatic international relations.
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* FlippingTheBird: FlippingTheBird
** Maverickdoes it gives the middle finger to the [=MiG=] pilot while inverted and snapping photos of him. him.
** Goosedoes it gives the middle finger to the entire briefing room while telling the story of their aerobatic international relations.
** Maverick
** Goose
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* {{Fanservice}}: The volleyball scene and the shower scene(s).
* FatalFamilyPhoto: {{Downplayed}}. Cougar has such a photo, but Maverick prevents him from crashing. Cougar then turns in his wings, meaning he's resigning from being a pilot.
* FatalFamilyPhoto: {{Downplayed}}. Cougar has such a photo, but Maverick prevents him from crashing. Cougar then turns in his wings, meaning he's resigning from being a pilot.
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%% * {{Fanservice}}: The volleyball scene and the shower scene(s).
* FatalFamilyPhoto: {{Downplayed}}. Cougar hassuch a photo, photo of his wife and child, but Maverick prevents him from crashing. Cougar then turns in his wings, meaning he's resigning from being a pilot.
* FatalFamilyPhoto: {{Downplayed}}. Cougar has
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* EjectEjectEject: [[http://www.hark.com/clips/smqwrkjbxn-i-cant-reach-the-ejection-handle Maverick to Goose.]]
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%% * EjectEjectEject: [[http://www.hark.com/clips/smqwrkjbxn-i-cant-reach-the-ejection-handle Maverick to Goose.]]
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Iceman]]: Iceman, by the end of the film.
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%% * [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Iceman]]: Iceman, by the end of the film.
