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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler:he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler:he attempted to kill two little girls scout Girl Scouts only to be forced to let them out of the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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--> "I'm a butcher."
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* PoliceAreUseless: So much that they [[spoiler: get tricked into executing one of their own for the crimes of the Water Street Butcher]].
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* PoliceAreUseless: So much that they [[spoiler: get [[spoiler:get tricked into executing one of their own for the crimes of the Water Street Butcher]].
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* StockholmSyndrome: Poor, poor Cheryl.
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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It chronicles the (fortunately fictional) spree of killings in Poughkeepsie, New York, that are all videotaped by the killer, who comes to be known as the Water Street Butcher. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity,]] {{Gorn}}, [[GambitIndex gambits]], terror, and [[LargeHam ham]] ensues.
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It chronicles the (fortunately fictional) spree of killings in Poughkeepsie, New York, that are all videotaped by the killer, who comes to be known as the Water Street Butcher. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity,]] {{Gorn}}, [[GambitIndex gambits]], terror, and [[LargeHam ham]] ensues.
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* ChewingTheScenery: "Your name ... IS SLAAAAAVE!"
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* ChewingTheScenery: "Your name ...name... IS SLAAAAAVE!"
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** "[[StockholmSyndromeYou're the master and it pleases me to serve you]]".
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** "[[StockholmSyndromeYou're "[[StockholmSyndrome You're the master and it pleases me to serve you]]".
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** "[[StockholmSyndrome Just take me home, just take me home...]]"
** "You're the master and it pleases me to serve you".
** "You're the master and it pleases me to serve you".
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** "[[StockholmSyndrome " Just take me home, just take me home...]]"
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**"You're "[[StockholmSyndromeYou're the master and it pleases me to serve you".you]]".
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* LargeHam: The Water Street Butcher has a flair for the theatrical and tends to wear a beaked Carnival mask with a ruffed cape. There's also the [[MemeticMutation infamous]] manner in which he kills the English woman--he creeps up on her on all fours (actually using his feet as opposed to his knees for maximum effect) despite nobody being able to see but the camera, then slowly lances her through the neck. Justified because he uses it to dissociate himself from any guilt.
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* LargeHam: The Water Street Butcher has a flair for the theatrical and tends to wear a beaked Carnival mask with a ruffed cape. There's also the [[MemeticMutation [[invoked]][[MemeticMutation infamous]] manner in which he kills the English woman--he creeps up on her on all fours (actually using his feet as opposed to his knees for maximum effect) despite nobody being able to see but the camera, then slowly lances her through the neck. Justified because he uses it to dissociate himself from any guilt.
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* MeaningfulName: The Butcher's real name, Edward Carver, for his love of ''carving'' women up in his TortureCellar with torture implements. His first name Edward may have been taken from notorious RealLife serial killer Ed Gein who was the inspiration for many fictional horror icons; [[Film/TheTexasChainsawMassacre "Leatherface"]] and [[Film/TheSilenceOfTheLambs "Buffalo Bill"]] to name a few.
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* MeaningfulName: The Butcher's real name, Edward Carver, for his love of ''carving'' women up in his TortureCellar with torture implements. His first name Edward may have been taken from notorious RealLife serial killer Ed Gein who was the inspiration for many fictional horror icons; [[Literature/{{Psycho}} Norman Bates]], [[Film/TheTexasChainsawMassacre "Leatherface"]] and [[Film/TheSilenceOfTheLambs "Buffalo Bill"]] to name a few.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's never really made clear what exactly is wrong with the killer. He displays traits of sadism, antisocial personality disorder, and narcissism, but is implied to have the capacity for remorse, and as such, goes out of his way to distance himself from the reality of his murders by employing theatricality in his tapes. He also deliberately invokes this to confuse the public into thinking his killings are unrelated.
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* MeaningfulName: The Butcher's real name, Edward Carver, for his love of ''carving'' women up in his TortureCellar with torture implements.
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* MeaningfulName: The Butcher's real name, Edward Carver, for his love of ''carving'' women up in his TortureCellar with torture implements. His first name Edward may have been taken from notorious RealLife serial killer Ed Gein who was the inspiration for many fictional horror icons; [[Film/TheTexasChainsawMassacre "Leatherface"]] and [[Film/TheSilenceOfTheLambs "Buffalo Bill"]] to name a few.
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* VillainProtagonist: Edward Carver, aka. Water Street Butcher.
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* StockholmSyndrome: UpToEleven. Poor, poor Cheryl.
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* StockholmSyndrome: UpToEleven. Poor, poor Cheryl.
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* AdultFear: After this movie you'll likely never help out strangers on the road or let your kids play on the front lawn or fundraise door-to-door.
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* TooDumbToLive: Foley was urged by his lawyer to take the plea bargain to avoid the death penalty. His response to threaten to fire his lawyer, [[SuicidalOverconfidence and that he'd defend himself if he had to]]. It doesn't end well for him.
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* TooDumbToLive: Foley was urged by his lawyer to take the plea bargain to avoid the death penalty. His response was to threaten to fire his lawyer, [[SuicidalOverconfidence and that he'd defend himself if he had to]]. It doesn't end well for him.
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It chronicles the (fortunately fictional) spree of killings in Poughkeepsie, New York, that are all videotaped by the killer, who comes to be known as the Water Street Butcher. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity,]] {{Gorn}}, [[GambitIndex gambits]], terror and [[LargeHam ham]] ensues.
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It chronicles the (fortunately fictional) spree of killings in Poughkeepsie, New York, that are all videotaped by the killer, who comes to be known as the Water Street Butcher. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity,]] {{Gorn}}, [[GambitIndex gambits]], terror terror, and [[LargeHam ham]] ensues.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: While perhaps not a hero, since he was a rather sleazy cop, [[spoiler:James Foley was innocent of the murders he was framed for, which the general public doesn't realize even after his innocence was proven.]]
** To a lesser extent, "I don't know. I don't know what you want me to say."
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* RayOfHopeEnding: [[spoiler:Though Carver remains uncaught by the end, one of the FBI agents suggests that if the movie makes it to theaters, he would likely be unable to help himself from going to as many screenings as possible, and is bound to get caught by authorities laying in wait if he inevitably feeds into his ego.]]
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* RayOfHopeEnding: RayOfHopeEnding:
** [[spoiler:Though Carver remains uncaught by the end, one of the FBI agents suggests that if the movie makes it to theaters, he would likely be unable to help himself from going to as many screenings as possible, and is bound to get caught by authorities laying in wait if he inevitably feeds into his ego.]]
** [[spoiler:For James Foley's son, Hank. His father was never properly vindicated for the Water Street Butcher murders because the article vindicating him was published on 9/11, which in turn caused Hank to be a sort of pariah due to his relationship to the supposed killer. With the movie's release, there's a chance that more people might finally know the truth.]]
** [[spoiler:Though Carver remains uncaught by the end, one of the FBI agents suggests that if the movie makes it to theaters, he would likely be unable to help himself from going to as many screenings as possible, and is bound to get caught by authorities laying in wait if he inevitably feeds into his ego.]]
** [[spoiler:For James Foley's son, Hank. His father was never properly vindicated for the Water Street Butcher murders because the article vindicating him was published on 9/11, which in turn caused Hank to be a sort of pariah due to his relationship to the supposed killer. With the movie's release, there's a chance that more people might finally know the truth.]]
* TooDumbToLive: Foley was urged by his lawyer to take the plea bargain to avoid the death penalty. His response to threaten to fire his lawyer, [[SuicidalOverconfidence and that he'd defend himself if he had to]]. It doesn't end well for him.
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]
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* DesperatePleaForHome: After being rescued, all Cheryl is able to say is "Just take me home." It's not until later we find out she isn't talking about her mother's house, but The Butcher's basement.
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* DisposableSexWorker: The killer starts targeting prostitutes to confuse the public.
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* DisposableSexWorker: The killer starts targeting prostitutes to confuse the public.public into thinking the murderer who only targeted suburban people has stopped. It works, and some of the pressure from investigators hunting him is alleviated long enough for him to claim plenty of prostitutes on top of his 'preferred' victims.
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* {{Gorn}}: Not as much as some horror movies, but definitely noticeable. There are a few crime scene photos of the Butcher's victims, and needless to say, they're not pretty.
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* {{Gorn}}: Not as much as some horror movies, but definitely noticeable. There are a few crime scene photos of the Butcher's victims, and needless to say, they're not pretty. While lacking in gore, two victims of the killer are visibly and painfully killed on camera and end up spewing blood out their mouths as he digs deeper with the wounds.
* MeaningfulName: The Butcher's real name, Edward Carver, for his love of ''carving'' women up in his TortureCellar with torture implements.
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* OvershadowedByControversy: InUniverse example with the headline that James Foley getting posthumously cleared from being the Water Street Butcher getting bumped down to page 6 of their newspaper after [[UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror 9/11]] happened.
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* OvershadowedByControversy: InUniverse example with the headline that James Foley getting posthumously cleared from being the Water Street Butcher getting bumped down to page 6 of their newspaper after [[UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror 9/11]] happened. As a result, most people are aware of the much more sensational trial and execution and not the fact that ''they got the wrong guy''.
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* RayOfHopeEnding: [[spoiler:Though Carver remains uncaught by the end, one of the FBI agents suggests that if the movie makes it to theaters, he would likely be unable to help himself from going to as many screenings as possible.]]
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* RayOfHopeEnding: [[spoiler:Though Carver remains uncaught by the end, one of the FBI agents suggests that if the movie makes it to theaters, he would likely be unable to help himself from going to as many screenings as possible.]]possible, and is bound to get caught by authorities laying in wait if he inevitably feeds into his ego.]]
* RedBaron: In the middle of his spree killings, the killer is given the moniker of the Water Street Butcher by the media. While he probably was never going to stop murdering, the nickname is flattering enough for the killer to start calling himself a Butcher to make a soon-to-be-victim panic.
* RedBaron: In the middle of his spree killings, the killer is given the moniker of the Water Street Butcher by the media. While he probably was never going to stop murdering, the nickname is flattering enough for the killer to start calling himself a Butcher to make a soon-to-be-victim panic.
* TheStinger: After the credits, one last tape suddenly plays of yet another woman bound and trapped in Carver's cellar, whether a new victim or an unaccounted one from his previous rampage, screaming and gasping until right in front of the camera until the film ends.
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* TortureCellar: A basement serves as the killer's lair, but it's noticeably corpse-free.
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* TortureCellar: A basement serves as the killer's lair, but it's noticeably corpse-free.corpse-free since he goes to painful lengths to hide the bodies of victims elsewhere.
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be stopped by Cheryl's screams.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: In a tape the killer shows he started his "career" by killing an 8 year old girl. In another [[spoiler: he attempted to kill two little girls scout only to be stopped forced to let them out the house by Cheryl's screams.]]