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At every turn, separately and then as a team, Jack, Kim and Richard try to find out what happened and warn others that something's very wrong. Eventually [[spoiler:Jack realizes that the tremor was caused by faulty welding on the main pump, which will cause the pump to fail if it is pushed to full capacity; This faulty welding was never discovered because, rather than test every weld like they were supposed to do, the company decided to save money by testing one weld and submitting its test results for every other weld. If this were brought to light, it would force the immediate shutdown of the plant and, most likely, legal charges for its builders and owners]].
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At every turn, separately and then as a team, Jack, Kim and Richard try to find out what happened and warn others that something's very wrong. Eventually [[spoiler:Jack realizes that the tremor was caused by faulty welding on the main pump, which will cause the pump to fail if it is pushed to full capacity; capacity. This faulty welding was never discovered because, rather than test every weld like they were supposed to do, the company decided to save money by testing one weld and submitting its test results for every other weld. If this were brought to light, it would force the immediate shutdown of the plant and, most likely, legal charges for its builders and owners]].
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* BeQuietNudge: When Richard, upset when Jacovich decides not to air the footage he shot of the accident, starts to give Jacovich a TheReasonYouSuck speech, he interrupts himself by angrily telling Kimberly, "Do ''not'' kick me under the table!"
