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* CloudCuckoolander: Iki is a very, very strange man
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* ClandestineChemist: Elmo has a cchemistry degree, but no chance of legal employment in the field because of a criminal record from being pulled over with marijuana while still in his graduation gown.
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* ClandestineChemist: Elmo has a cchemistry chemistry degree, but no chance of legal employment in the field because of a criminal record from being pulled over with marijuana while still in his graduation gown.
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* ClandestineChemist: Elmo has a cchemistry degree, but no chance of legal employment in the field because of a criminal record from being pulled over with marijuana while still in his graduation gown.
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* StockBritishPhrases: Elmo and Felix have a [[SeinfeldianConversation Seinfeldian]] CasualDangerDialog on [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WwJw5lH7pI this;]]
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* StockBritishPhrases: Elmo and Felix have a [[SeinfeldianConversation Seinfeldian]] CasualDangerDialog CasualDangerDialogue on [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WwJw5lH7pI this;]]
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-->'''[=McElroy=]''': The fuck they do to this fish, batter it to death?
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-->'''[=McElroy=]''': The What the fuck did they do to this fish, batter it to death?
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* ThePeepingTom: Dawn attempts to see under Elmo's kilt on the plane as his legs splay when he sleeps. A stewardess then comes by and lays a blanket over him and gives Dawn a very reproachful look.
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* JustAFleshWound: [=McElroy=] dismisses [=DeSouza=] being ShotInTheAss as such. [=DeSouza=] is not amused.
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* ShotInTheAss: Dawn does this to his ex-boyfriend [=DeSouza=] as he crawls out of the hotel room. He's still pissed off about it later, but mentions to [=McElroy=] that she meant it to be an AmusingInjury:
--> '''[=DeSouza=]:''' If she really wanted to hurt me, I'd be shiting through a tube the rest of me life.
--> '''[=DeSouza=]:''' If she really wanted to hurt me, I'd be shiting through a tube the rest of me life.
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* IfIWantedYouDead: [=DeSouza=] points this out to [=McElroy=] when he asks who hired Dawn to assassinate him:
--> '''[=DeSouza=]:''' You're asking the wrong question, mate. She's your guardian angel. If she wanted you dead, you'd be dead. She never misses.
--> '''[=DeSouza=]:''' You're asking the wrong question, mate. She's your guardian angel. If she wanted you dead, you'd be dead. She never misses.
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-->'''[[Creator/SamuelLJackson Elmo McElroy]]''': ''No, Shit does '''not''' just Happen. Shit takes time. Shit takes effort. Twenty million dollars worth of effort.''
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-->'''[[Creator/SamuelLJackson Elmo McElroy]]''': ''No, Shit does '''not''' '''don't''' just Happen. Shit takes time. Shit takes effort. Twenty million dollars worth of effort.''
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* ForeignQueasine: [=McElroy's=] take on a British takeaway:
-->'''[=McElroy=]''': The fuck they do to this fish, batter it to death?
-->'''Felix''': Fish and chips. National dish, mate.
-->'''[=McElroy=]''': More like a national disaster.
-->'''[=McElroy=]''': The fuck they do to this fish, batter it to death?
-->'''Felix''': Fish and chips. National dish, mate.
-->'''[=McElroy=]''': More like a national disaster.
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* GroinAttack: After [=McElroy=] downs a skinhead with a single punch, [=DeSouza=] takes the opportunity to kick said skinhead in the balls, instantly regretting it due to his own injury (a bullet in his buttock).
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When the deal goes wrong and everyone involved ends up dead, he realises that his ex-boss, a drug kingpin known as "The Lizard" (Music/MeatLoaf), whom he thought he'd already killed to prevent him seizing the drug for himself, is very much alive and would like revenge. Assisting the Lizard is ProfessionalKiller Dakota (Creator/EmilyMortimer), the expat ex-girlfriend of his British contact, Felix [=DeSouza=] (Robert Carlyle). Assisting neither party and trying to help himself is the highly CorruptCop Virgil Kane (Creator/SeanPertwee).
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When the deal goes wrong and everyone involved ends up dead, he realises that his ex-boss, a drug kingpin known as "The Lizard" (Music/MeatLoaf), whom he thought he'd already killed to prevent him seizing the drug for himself, is very much alive and would like revenge. Assisting the Lizard is ProfessionalKiller Dakota (Creator/EmilyMortimer), the expat ex-girlfriend of his British contact, Felix [=DeSouza=] (Robert Carlyle).(Creator/RobertCarlyle). Assisting neither party and trying to help himself is the highly CorruptCop Virgil Kane (Creator/SeanPertwee).
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* DramaticGunCock: "Take a puff on this
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* DramaticGunCock: "Take a puff on thisthis!"
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When the deal goes wrong and everyone involved ends up dead, he realises that his ex-boss, a drug kingpin known as "The Lizard" (Music/MeatLoaf), whom he thought he'd already killed to prevent him seizing the drug for himself, is very much alive and would like revenge. Assisting the Lizard is ProfessionalKiller Dakota (Creator/EmilyMortimer), the expat ex-girlfriend of his British contact, Felix [=DeSouza=] (Robert Carlyle). Assisting neither party and trying to help himself is the highly CorruptCop Virgil Kane (Sean Pertwee).
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When the deal goes wrong and everyone involved ends up dead, he realises that his ex-boss, a drug kingpin known as "The Lizard" (Music/MeatLoaf), whom he thought he'd already killed to prevent him seizing the drug for himself, is very much alive and would like revenge. Assisting the Lizard is ProfessionalKiller Dakota (Creator/EmilyMortimer), the expat ex-girlfriend of his British contact, Felix [=DeSouza=] (Robert Carlyle). Assisting neither party and trying to help himself is the highly CorruptCop Virgil Kane (Sean Pertwee).
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