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* ArcWords: "Do you believe in the Web of Death"? Along with variations.
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* ArcWords: "Do you believe in the Web of Death"? Death?" Along with variations.
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* ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters' classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its tragic significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters' classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its tragic significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko (somewhat), as opposed to Akiko's {{Addled Addict|}}.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko (somewhat), may be this, as opposed to Akiko's {{Addled Addict|}}.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's {{Addled Addict|}}.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, Yoko (somewhat), as opposed to Akiko's {{Addled Addict|}}.
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* NiceGirl: Ai. Akiko was also this, before being bullied by Chiharu and becoming addicted.
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* NiceGirl: Ai. Akiko was also this, before being bullied by Chiharu and becoming addicted. Compared to Chiharu, Yoko can be counted too.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's [[Addled Addict]].
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's [[Addled Addict]].{{Addled Addict|}}.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's [[AddledAddict]].
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's [[AddledAddict]].[[Addled Addict]].
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's []AddledAddict]].
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's []AddledAddict]].[[AddledAddict]].
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* TheDogBitesBack: At one point, after being routinely abused by Onko, Ai decides she has had enough and kills him by sending his name to the Web. She contemplates and/or threatens to do this to Chiharu and Yoko as well, confronting and saying them this in their face, though they don't take her seriously and she eventually decides against it.
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* TheDogBitesBack: At one point, after being routinely abused by Onko, Ai decides she has had enough and kills him by sending his name to the Web. She contemplates and/or threatens to do this to Chiharu and Yoko as well, confronting and saying them this in their face, though they don't take her seriously and she eventually decides against it.
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* FunctionalAddict: Yoko, as opposed to Akiko's []AddledAddict]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters characters' classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its tragic significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The Web is implied to be supernatural in origin, however, all of the deaths supposedly caused by it can be entirely written off as coincidences and accidents, as unlikely as some of them may be. None of them happen explicitly via supernatural means, Fuyumi may have simply jumped from the roof herself, after being very moody and vaguely suicidal, to commit suicide to escape whatever may have been plaguing her, Onko's death may be a simple accident, though unlikely coincidence, Keiji's death might have been a freak accident too, Yoko was directly killed by frantic Akiko herself, without the Web seemingly being involved much at all, despite Akiko earlier trying to send Yoko's name there. Akiko is likely to have died of overdose, Chiharu may have driven to suicide by guilt and Ai may have been an unlikely accident too. However, the spiritual sounds that can be heard each time the Web is involved and death happens and Ai and Chiharu seeing Fuyumi's ghost imply there to be something supernatural at play still there. Though the latter too can be attributed to the extreme guilt caused visions, even if unlikely.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The Web is implied to be supernatural in origin, however, all of the deaths supposedly caused by it can be entirely written off as coincidences and accidents, as unlikely as some of them may be. None of them happen explicitly via supernatural means, Fuyumi may have simply jumped from the roof herself, after being very moody and vaguely suicidal, to commit suicide to escape whatever may have been plaguing her, Onko's death may be a simple accident, though unlikely coincidence, Keiji's death might have been a freak accident too, Yoko was directly killed by frantic Akiko herself, without the Web seemingly being involved much at all, despite Akiko earlier trying to send Yoko's name there. Akiko is likely to have died of overdose, Chiharu may have driven to suicide by guilt and Ai may have been an unlikely accident too. However, the spiritual sounds that can be heard each time the Web is involved and death happens and Ai and Chiharu seeing Fuyumi's ghost imply there to be something supernatural at play still there. Though the latter too can be attributed to the extreme guilt caused visions, even if unlikely.
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* ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its tragic significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* Chekhov'sGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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* Chekhov'sGun: ChekhovsGun: The darts board hanging in the main characters classroom, which Yoko and the others play in the beginning. Its significance doesn't become apparent until the very end where it ends up as the thing to kill Ai.
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