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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut]] it.[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, Jean Louisa Kelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut]] it.[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]]com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened shoot a scene]] where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut]] it.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Principal Wolters is right to say that if with a tightened budget, having English and math teachers takes priority over art and music. However, the fact that Wolters won't even try to fight for additional funding (and the fact that other extracurricular activities such as the football team are preserved) makes him look cynical and dishonest.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Principal Wolters is right to say that if with a tightened budget, having English and math teachers takes priority over art and music. However, the fact that Wolters won't even try to fight for additional funding (and the fact that other extracurricular activities such as the football team are preserved) makes him look cynical and dishonest.
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* EasilyForgiven: Cole understandably resents his father for neglecting him in favor of his students, and for not even bothering to become proficient enough in sign language to effectively communicate. While Glenn's sign performance of the Music/JohnLennon's ''Beautiful Boy'' was meant as a sincere apology, it seems unlikely that a single gesture like that would completely make up for years of resentment on his son's part in real-life as it does in the film.
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* EasilyForgiven: Cole understandably resents his father for neglecting him in favor of his students, and for not even bothering to become proficient enough in sign language to effectively communicate. While Glenn's sign performance of the Music/JohnLennon's ''Beautiful Boy'' was meant as a sincere apology, it seems unlikely that a single kind gesture like that would completely make up for years of resentment on his son's part perceived neglect in real-life real life as it does in the film.
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*EasilyForgiven: Cole understandably resents his father for neglecting him in favor of his students, and for not even bothering to become proficient enough in sign language to effectively communicate. While Glenn's sign performance of the Music/JohnLennon's ''Beautiful Boy'' was meant as a sincere apology, it seems unlikely that a single gesture like that would completely make up for years of resentment on his son's part in real-life as it does in the film.
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*JerkassHasAPoint: Principal Wolters is right to say that if with a tightened budget, having English and math teachers takes priority over art and music. However, the fact that Wolters won't even try to fight for additional funding (and the fact that other extracurricular activities such as the football team are preserved) makes him look cynical and dishonest.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Stadler, one of Mr. Holland's students he helps. [[spoiler:He eventually turns around after attending Louis Russ' funeral with Mr. Holland.]]
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** Stadler, one of Mr. Holland'sstudents he helps.students, is very intelligent but has a negative attitude towards just about everything and everyone. [[spoiler:He eventually turns around after attending Louis Russ' funeral with Mr. Holland.Holland and being forced to write an essay about the emotional impact of music.]]
** Stadler, one of Mr. Holland's
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-->'''Glenn:''' This class is called music appreciation. I don't see you appreciating ANYTHING."
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** Glenn gives one to Stadler, an intelligent student with a rotten attitude, i.e. "This class is called music appreciation. As far as I can tell, you don't appreciate ANYTHING."
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-->'''Glenn:''' This class is called music appreciation.As far as I can tell, you don't appreciate see you appreciating ANYTHING."
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improve punctuation + don't have links too close to each other it's an accessibility thing apparently
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. (According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut it]].[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]])
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. (According According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut it]].cut]] it.[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]])com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. (According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but test audiences didn't like it so they cut it.[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]])
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Rowena, Mr. Holland's highly talented student singer, decides to more or less run away to New York to try and make it on Broadway. Though they share a touching farewell at the bus stop, she is never heard from again. (According to actress JeanLouisaKelly, they did shoot a scene where she returns to the leaving party as a Broadway star but [[FocusGroupEnding test audiences didn't like it it]] so [[ExecutiveMeddling they cut it.it]].[[https://kenkousen.substack.com/p/tales-from-the-jar-side-what-happened]])
