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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Crispin Glover's train man, whose soot-covered face and bulging eyes give him a very demonic performance, not to mention speaking in a [[CreepyMonotone bizarrely intoned and inhuman-sounding voice.]] Not to mention that he seems to have some kind of prophetic ability, referring to things that Blake experiences in past tense, but at this point in the film, [[MindScrew haven't happened yet.]] He warns William Blake that he's [[WelcomeToHell "on the train to Hell"]], and given what Blake finds there, it's [[MindScrew hard to say]] that he's definitively wrong.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Crispin Glover's train man, whose soot-covered face and bulging eyes give him a very demonic performance, not to mention speaking in a [[CreepyMonotone bizarrely intoned and inhuman-sounding voice.]] Not to mention that he He also seems to have some kind of prophetic ability, referring to things that Blake experiences in past tense, but at this point in the film, [[MindScrew haven't happened yet.]] He warns William Blake that he's [[WelcomeToHell "on the train to Hell"]], and given what Blake finds there, it's [[MindScrew hard to say]] that he's definitively wrong.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The trainman warns Blake, "I wouldn't trust no words written down on no piece of paper, especially from no [[MeaningfulName Dickinson]] out in the town of [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Machine]]. You're just as likely to find your own grave!" before a shot rings out.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The trainman warns Blake, "I wouldn't trust no words written down on no piece of paper, especially from no [[MeaningfulName Dickinson]] out in the town of [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Machine]]. You're just as likely to find your own grave!" before a shot rings out.
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* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Nobody steals William Blake's glasses: "Perhaps you will see better without them."
* YouTalkTooMuch: Cole Wilson, a man of few words, lets his pistol say this when Conway Twill's incessant yapping finally gets to be too much.
* YouTalkTooMuch: Cole Wilson, a man of few words, lets his pistol say this when Conway Twill's incessant yapping finally gets to be too much.
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* WhatASenselessWasteOfHumanLifeWhatASenselessWasteOfHumanLife: Wilson finds one of the US Marshals lying dead with his head in the middle of an extinguished campfire, twigs spreading out like a crown of thorns.
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* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Nobody steals William Blake's glasses: "Perhaps you will see better without them."
* YouTalkTooMuch: Cole Wilson, a man of few words, lets his pistol say this when Conway Twill's incessant yapping finally gets to be too much.
* YouTalkTooMuch: Cole Wilson, a man of few words, lets his pistol say this when Conway Twill's incessant yapping finally gets to be too much.
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* CreepyCrossdresser: Iggy Pop's character wears a woman's dress in the wilderness, cluing the viewer in that the trio to which he belongs is deranged.
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* CreepyCrossdresser: Iggy Pop's Music/IggyPop's character wears a woman's dress in the wilderness, cluing the viewer in that the trio to which he belongs is deranged.
