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''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
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''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\sunroof lobbing wadded up food wrappers at the three)''\\
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals--Mustache and Dwayne Whitey--originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never now-or-never, payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals--Mustache and Dwayne Whitey--originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''
-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''
-->'''Dwayne:'''horror)''\\
''(a few minutes later...)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
-->'''Dwayne:'''
''(a few minutes later...)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
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-->'''Mustache:''' I am ''not'' going into a cemetery dressed as a pig!\\
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-->'''Mustache:''' Careful, Dwayne.\\
'''Dwayne:''' What?\\
'''Mustache:''' They see our faces and we're finished.\\
'''Dwayne:''' Do you think I am an idiot? Where would we be without our disguises?\\
'''Mustache:''' I am ''not'' going into a cemetery dressed as a pig!\\
'''Dwayne:''' What?\\
'''Mustache:''' They see our faces and we're finished.\\
'''Dwayne:''' Do you think I am an idiot? Where would we be without our disguises?\\
'''Mustache:''' I am ''not'' going into a cemetery dressed as a pig!\\
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''(cue crooks crashing right through the door in their car inside an open, abandoned, warehouse)''
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''(cue crooks crashing right through the a flimsy door in their car inside an a large, open, abandoned, warehouse)''''warehouse'')''
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-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
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-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
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* ChaseScene: The climax involves a lengthy chase around Sydney, with stunts such as taking the BMX bikes down a water slide.
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* ChaseScene: The climax involves a lengthy chase around Sydney, with stunts such as taking the BMX bikes down a water slide. Mustache gets pushed into said slide after them.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford [=LTD=]sedan with sunroof, U.S. Alloy 5-slot wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford [=LTD=]sedan [=LTD=] sedan with sunroof, U.S. Alloy 5-slot wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals originally Criminals--Mustache and Dwayne Whitey--originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of BumblingCriminals originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of BumblingCriminals Bumbling Criminals originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) want nothing more than to build a BMX track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find dozens of walkie-talkies, which they test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the local police band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to avoid the police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of Bumbling Criminals BumblingCriminals originally tasked with retrieving the walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) and a friend of theirs named Judy (Kidman) want nothing more than a BMX bike track to be built. To raise money, the three salvage a carton from the local docks. Inside they find some walkie-talkies, which they hope to sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the frequency of a police station and were stashed on the dock by a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to eavesdrop on the police. So a pair of [[TheFamilyForTheWholeFamily Bumbling Criminals]] are sent to talk to the kiddies and get the walkie-talkies back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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Two BMX bikers, P.J. (Angelo D'Angelo) and Goose (James Lugton) and a friend of theirs named Judy (Kidman) want nothing more than to build a BMX bike track track. While out on a ride, they accidentally crash their bikes into a line of shopping trolleys that are pushed into their path by a bully. They meet Judy (Kidman), who is saving up money to be built. To raise money, buy her own BMX bike. After losing her job due to the accident, the three salvage a carton look for another way to raise money to buy new equipment. While trying to harvest shellfish from the local docks. Inside docks, they come across a submerged water-tight box. Inside, they find some dozens of walkie-talkies, which they hope to test and later sell. Unfortunately, the walkie-talkies are set to the frequency of a local police station and were stashed on band, which attracts police attention. Worse, the dock by docks are a dead drop meant for a gang of [[BankRobbery bank-robbers]] planning to use them to eavesdrop on avoid the police. So police during a high-value, now-or-never payroll job. Two of the gang, a pair of [[TheFamilyForTheWholeFamily Bumbling Criminals]] are sent to talk to Criminals originally tasked with retrieving the kiddies and walkie-talkies, track down the trio to get the walkie-talkies their equipment back. This culminates in a lengthy foot/car/bike chase about UsefulNotes/{{Sydney}}.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford [=LTD=]sedan with sunroof, mag wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford [=LTD=]sedan with sunroof, mag U.S. Alloy 5-slot wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I had a little trouble with the handbrake but, uh, not bad.\\
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I had a little bit of trouble with the handbrake but, uh, not bad.\\
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I like red!
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I like red!''like'' '''red!'''
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-->'''Dwayne:''' Can't drive with the window open, mate.\\
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I had a little trouble with the handbrake but, uh, not bad.\\
''(later)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' Can't drive with the window open, mate.\\
''(later)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' Can't drive with the window open, mate.\\
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* VillainousBreakdown: The criminal leader has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids, ruining the payroll job, and lays into Dwayne and Mustache during their escape.
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* VillainousBreakdown: VillainousBreakdown:
** Mustache has one after not only losing the threesome, but realizing the damage that Dwayne has done to his car from his horrible driving and lays into him.
-->'''Mustache:''' You couldn't drive '''MY GRANDMOTHER INTO A GRAVE!!!'''
** Thecriminal leader Boss has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids, ruining the payroll job, and lays into Dwayne and Mustache during their escape.
** Mustache has one after not only losing the threesome, but realizing the damage that Dwayne has done to his car from his horrible driving and lays into him.
-->'''Mustache:''' You couldn't drive '''MY GRANDMOTHER INTO A GRAVE!!!'''
** The
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* WatchThePaintJob: Mustache's [=LTD=] starts out as a black, sinister muscle sedan. By the end of the film, it's been through the wringer thanks to Dwayne.
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* WatchThePaintJob: Mustache's [=LTD=] starts out as a black, sinister muscle sedan.sedan; ignoring the flotsam and jetsam that spills out every time they open a door. By the end of the film, it's been through the wringer thanks to Dwayne.
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* WatchThePaintJob: Mustache's [=LTD=] starts out as a black, sinister muscle sedan. By the end of the film, it's been through the wringer thanks to Dwayne.
-->'''Mustache:''' ''(after Dwayne kicks one of the flat tires)'' Don't treat my car like an animal!
-->'''Mustache:''' ''(after Dwayne kicks one of the flat tires)'' Don't treat my car like an animal!
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-->'''Mustache:''' ''(wearing a pig mask and holding several people at gun point)'' You are staring ''death'' in the ''face''!
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-->'''Mustache:''' ''(wearing a pig mask and holding several people at gun point)'' You are staring ''death'' in the ''face''!''face''!\\
''(while in the cemetery, arguing and still dressed in their masks)''\\
'''Mustache:''' You need a ''brain transplant'', you understand?!\\
'''Dwayne:''' THERE'S NO NEED TO GET UPSET!
''(while in the cemetery, arguing and still dressed in their masks)''\\
'''Mustache:''' You need a ''brain transplant'', you understand?!\\
'''Dwayne:''' THERE'S NO NEED TO GET UPSET!
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Boss, who has orchestrated multiple bank robberies, and has taken a kid as a hostage to ensure their latest job isn't disrupted, is genuinely disturbed by the kind of films that Judy has been describing.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Mustache, when they chase the kids through the cemetery. Fortunately, Dwayne is [[CrazyPrepared prepared for that.]]
-->'''Mustache:''' I am ''not'' going into a cemetery dressed as a pig!\\
'''Dwayne:''' Don't worry about it, mate. ''(produces two grotesque masks perfect for the occasion)'' We're going formal.
** The Boss, who has orchestrated multiple bank robberies, and has taken a kid as a hostage to ensure their latest job isn't disrupted, is genuinely disturbed by the kind of films that Judy has been describing.
** Mustache, when they chase the kids through the cemetery. Fortunately, Dwayne is [[CrazyPrepared prepared for that.]]
-->'''Mustache:''' I am ''not'' going into a cemetery dressed as a pig!\\
'''Dwayne:''' Don't worry about it, mate. ''(produces two grotesque masks perfect for the occasion)'' We're going formal.
** The Boss, who has orchestrated multiple bank robberies, and has taken a kid as a hostage to ensure their latest job isn't disrupted, is genuinely disturbed by the kind of films that Judy has been describing.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford Galaxy sedan with sunroof, mag wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford Galaxy sedan [=LTD=]sedan with sunroof, mag wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well-planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target[[note]]It's worth a quarter of a million Australian dollars for each robber. Assuming 15% each robber and 25% for The Boss, that's over $1.5 million Australian dollars. With inflation, that's over $5.6 million Australian or $3.5 million US in 2022. Each robber would get $900k Australian while The Boss would get over $1.1 million. Or over 500k US for each robber and close to 750k for The Boss.[[/note]] The payroll job itself is also well-planned and requires that they monitor the police chatter to escape. Hence why they need the walkie-talkies. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well-planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target[[note]]It's target.[[note]]It's worth a quarter of a million Australian dollars for each robber. Assuming 15% each robber and 25% for The Boss, that's over $1.5 million Australian dollars. With inflation, that's over $5.6 million Australian or $3.5 million US in 2022. Each robber would get $900k Australian while The Boss would get over $1.1 million. Or over 500k US for each robber and close to 750k for The Boss.[[/note]] The payroll job itself is also well-planned and requires that they monitor the police chatter to escape. Hence why they need the walkie-talkies. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
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* UnabashedBMovieFan: Goose is a fan of slasher movies with titles like ''Kiss the Blood Off My Carburetor'', and keeps regaling his friends with their plots. Judy later regales the crooks with one to distract them.
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* UnabashedBMovieFan: Goose is a fan of slasher movies with titles like ''Kiss the Blood Off My Carburetor'', and keeps regaling his friends with their plots. Judy later regales the crooks with a made-up one to distract them.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well-planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target. The payroll job itself is well-planned and requires that they monitor the police chatter to escape. Hence why they need the walkie-talkies. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well-planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target. target[[note]]It's worth a quarter of a million Australian dollars for each robber. Assuming 15% each robber and 25% for The Boss, that's over $1.5 million Australian dollars. With inflation, that's over $5.6 million Australian or $3.5 million US in 2022. Each robber would get $900k Australian while The Boss would get over $1.1 million. Or over 500k US for each robber and close to 750k for The Boss.[[/note]] The payroll job itself is also well-planned and requires that they monitor the police chatter to escape. Hence why they need the walkie-talkies. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
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* LargeHam: David Argue (Dwayne) and John Wey (Mustache) steal the show as the bad guys.
-->'''Mustache:''' ''(wearing a pig mask and holding several people at gun point)'' You are staring ''death'' in the ''face''!
-->'''Mustache:''' ''(wearing a pig mask and holding several people at gun point)'' You are staring ''death'' in the ''face''!
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* VillainousBreakdown: The criminal leader has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids, ruining the payroll job, and calls out his Dwayne and Mustache during their escape.
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* VillainousBreakdown: The criminal leader has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids, ruining the payroll job, and calls out his lays into Dwayne and Mustache during their escape.
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'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Hey, that's fair!\\
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'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Hey, that's not fair!\\
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well planned.well-planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target. The payroll job itself is well-planned and requires that they monitor the police chatter to escape. Hence why they need the walkie-talkies. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.job.
* SpannerInTheWorks: The three protagonists unwittingly stealing their shipment of walkie talkies at the bad guys' dead-drop is what propels the entire plot. Otherwise, the payroll job would've gone off without a hitch.
* SpannerInTheWorks: The three protagonists unwittingly stealing their shipment of walkie talkies at the bad guys' dead-drop is what propels the entire plot. Otherwise, the payroll job would've gone off without a hitch.
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* UnabashedBMovieFan: Goose is a fan of slasher movies with titles like ''Kiss the Blood Off My Tyre Iron'', and keeps regaling his friends with their plots. Judy later regales the crooks with one to buy more time.
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* UnabashedBMovieFan: Goose is a fan of slasher movies with titles like ''Kiss the Blood Off My Tyre Iron'', Carburetor'', and keeps regaling his friends with their plots. Judy later regales the crooks with one to buy more time.distract them.
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* VillainousBreakdown: The criminal leader has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids and calls out his two lackies during their escape.
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* VillainousBreakdown: The criminal leader has one when they're mobbed by a bunch of kids kids, ruining the payroll job, and calls out his two lackies Dwayne and Mustache during their escape.
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* TemptingFate:
-->'''Goose''' Who ''are'' those freaks?
-->'''Judy:''' Well, I can tell you one thing, they're definitely not cops.
-->'''P.J.''' Well, don't worry, they can't get at us in here.
-->''(cue crooks crashing right through the door in their car)''
-->'''Goose''' Who ''are'' those freaks?
-->'''Judy:''' Well, I can tell you one thing, they're definitely not cops.
-->'''P.J.''' Well, don't worry, they can't get at us in here.
-->''(cue crooks crashing right through the door in their car)''
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* TemptingFate:
PragmaticVillainy: The Boss. His robberies are all well planned. His decision to take a job only a few days after the last one is due to the high value of their target. His decision to kidnap Judy is to ensure that her friends don't call the police on them and interfere with their latest job.
* TemptingFate:
-->'''Goose''' Who ''are'' thosefreaks?
-->'''Judy:'''freaks?\\
'''Judy:''' Well, I can tell you one thing, they're definitely notcops.
-->'''P.cops.\\
'''P.J.''' Well, don't worry, they can't get at us inhere.
-->''(cuehere.\\
''(cue crooks crashing right through the door in theircar)''car inside an open, abandoned, warehouse)''
* TemptingFate:
-->'''Goose''' Who ''are'' those
-->'''Judy:'''
'''Judy:''' Well, I can tell you one thing, they're definitely not
-->'''P.
'''P.J.''' Well, don't worry, they can't get at us in
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''(cue crooks crashing right through the door in their
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I ''love'' '''red'''!
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-->'''Dwayne:''' I ''love'' '''red'''!like red!
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* AffiablyEvil: Dwayne. He at least as the decency to thank the people he's robbing for their cooperation and even compliments one of the bank teller's outfits on the way out.
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* AffiablyEvil: AffablyEvil: Dwayne. He at least as has the decency to thank the people he's robbing for their cooperation and even compliments one of the bank teller's outfits on the way out.
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* AffiablyEvil: Dwayne. He at least as the decency to thank the people he's robbing for their cooperation and even compliments one of the bank teller's outfits on the way out.
-->'''Dwayne:''' I ''love'' '''red'''!
-->'''Dwayne:''' I ''love'' '''red'''!
* LaughablyEvil: Mustache and Dwayne. They're bank robbers, and good at it, but they're both bumbling fools when they chase down the three protagonists to get their walkie talkies.
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* LaughablyEvil: Mustache and Dwayne. They're bank robbers, and good at it, but they're both bumbling fools when they chase down the three protagonists to get their walkie talkies.
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* LaughablyEvil: Mustache and Dwayne. They're bank robbers, and good at it, but they're both bumbling fools when they chase down the three protagonists to get their walkie talkies.
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** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush the ones with the clubs so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
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** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns.guns "to put the frighteners on them". Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush the ones with the clubs so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
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* TheFamilyForTheWholeFamily: Kids pursued by StupidCrooks, and outrunning them on bikes even when the bad guys are in cars. It's even LampShaded by one Dwayne at one point.
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* TheFamilyForTheWholeFamily: Kids pursued by StupidCrooks, and outrunning them on bikes even when the bad guys are in cars. It's even LampShaded by one Dwayne at one point.
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** Mustache and Dwayne plan to kill Judy by making it look like she drowned by accident once she gives up the location of the walkie-talkies. When Judy stonewalls them, Mustache is aching to just beat it out of her.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush and pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush and pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
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** Mustache and Dwayne plan to kill Judy by making it look like she drowned by accident once she gives up the location of the walkie-talkies. When Judy stonewalls them, Mustache is aching to loses patience and just wants to beat it out of her.
her. Fortunately, she escapes at this point.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rushand pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Dwayne, who doesn't even have a license. Not that Mustache does any better.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: DrivesLikeCrazy:
** Dwayne, who doesn't even have a drivers license.Not that Mustache does any better.
** Dwayne, who doesn't even have a drivers license.
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''\\
''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''\\
''(whilehorror)''
** Not that Mustache does any better.
-->''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
''(while
** Not that Mustache does any better.
-->''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''
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''(he takes both hands off the wheel and looks away to close the sunroof to Mustache's horror)''horror)''\\
''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' What are you doin', mate, are you tryin' to make 'em dizzy?!\\
''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' '''Stop!!!''' I'm gonna be ''sick'' in a minute!!! We've lost the children!!!
''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' What are you doin', mate, are you tryin' to make 'em dizzy?!\\
''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' '''Stop!!!''' I'm gonna be ''sick'' in a minute!!! We've lost the children!!!
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-->''(while trying to get them in a warehouse, which mainly consists of Mustache mostly spinning his car around whenever he misses them)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' What are you doin', mate, are you tryin' to make 'em dizzy?!\\
''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' '''Stop!!!''' I'm gonna be ''sick'' in a minute!!! We've lost the children!!!\\
''(later, just after narrowly hitting them)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' What are you doin', mate, are you tryin' to make 'em dizzy?!\\
''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' '''Stop!!!''' I'm gonna be ''sick'' in a minute!!! We've lost the children!!!\\
''(later, just after narrowly hitting them)''\\
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'''Dwayne:''' What are you doin', mate, are you tryin' to make 'em dizzy?!\\
''(while still spinning the car around with tires screeching and Dawyne standing up through the sunroof)''\\
'''Dwayne:''' '''Stop!!!''' I'm gonna be ''sick'' in a minute!!! We've lost the children!!!\\
''(later,
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* ImpersonatingAnOfficer: Mustache and Dwayne pose as plainclothes undercover officers in order to get Judy to talk. Judy quickly realizes that they're not and plays along long enough for her friends to show up. During a chase at the mall, they're able to con quite a few people who they run into that they really are police officers. This includes Judy's ex-boss in a bit of LaserGuidedKarma.
-->'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Who's going to clear all this whole bloody mess up and pay for it?\\
'''Dwayne:''' That's a tax deduction!\\
'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Hey, that's fair!\\
'''Dwayne:''' [[IronicEcho That's life, pal!]]
-->'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Who's going to clear all this whole bloody mess up and pay for it?\\
'''Dwayne:''' That's a tax deduction!\\
'''Judy's Ex-Boss:''' Hey, that's fair!\\
'''Dwayne:''' [[IronicEcho That's life, pal!]]
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* CoolBoat: Mustache and Dwayne have a sweet speedboat with a souped-up V8.
* CoolCar: Mustache's black 1972 Ford Galaxy sedan with sunroof, mag wheels and custom exhaust. The poor thing turns into TheAllegedCar after Dwayne wrecks it while chasing the protagonists.
-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
-->'''Dwayne:''' ''(while surveying the damage)'' Not bad, considering.
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-->'''Dwayne:''' You can't drive with the window open, mate.\\
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-->'''Dwayne:''' You can't Can't drive with the window open, mate.\\
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* WouldHurtAChild: When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush and pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldHurtAChild:
** Mustache and Dwayne plan to kill Judy by making it look like she drowned by accident once she gives up the location of the walkie-talkies. When Judy stonewalls them, Mustache is aching to just beat it out of her.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush and pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.
** Mustache and Dwayne plan to kill Judy by making it look like she drowned by accident once she gives up the location of the walkie-talkies. When Judy stonewalls them, Mustache is aching to just beat it out of her.
** When The Boss sees TheCavalry show up, who are all kids, his first response is to have his men arm themselves with clubs and guns. Fortunately, Judy manages to shut the trunk the guns are stored in and throw the car keys away before they can grab them. The kids rush and pelt the ones with the clubs with flour so quickly that they can't get a hit in.