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** "Comments": I think Simba was completely in his character, as for Zuri and Kiara, you kept the main elements of their personality and developed them from that. It is a bit the purpose of fanfics, that the characters are different from the canon, while trying to stay as faithful as possible.
** Though this fanfiction was published in 2018, the basic outline for the story was conceived during the release of The Lion Guard's first season, prior to the announcement of Scar's return to the franchise, and as such takes place in an alternate canon where the events of "The Rise of Scar", all the way to the series finale "Return to the Pride Lands" are almost non-existent (evident being that Scar is not undead). Several plot-elements reflect this, most notably the absence of Rani, Anga, as well as Vitani's Lion Guard. Several side-stories have been hinted or released that further reflect that. Unlike the source material, this story goes all-out with the dark topics, including a tragic origin story involving the conception of Zira's children, the violent attempted murder of Simba's son, the near-death of essentially almost every main character, etc. Some profanity to also be found. Within all that are some very creative decisions with the writing, and some fortunate levity and humor to balance, along with a lot of heart. Lots of things to admire in a fanfic.
** Though this fanfiction was published in 2018, the basic outline for the story was conceived during the release of The Lion Guard's first season, prior to the announcement of Scar's return to the franchise, and as such takes place in an alternate canon where the events of "The Rise of Scar", all the way to the series finale "Return to the Pride Lands" are almost non-existent (evident being that Scar is not undead). Several plot-elements reflect this, most notably the absence of Rani, Anga, as well as Vitani's Lion Guard. Several side-stories have been hinted or released that further reflect that. Unlike the source material, this story goes all-out with the dark topics, including a tragic origin story involving the conception of Zira's children, the violent attempted murder of Simba's son, the near-death of essentially almost every main character, etc. Some profanity to also be found. Within all that are some very creative decisions with the writing, and some fortunate levity and humor to balance, along with a lot of heart. Lots of things to admire in a fanfic.
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** "Comments": I think Simba was completely in his character, as for Zuri and Kiara, you kept the main elements of their personality and developed them from that. It is a bit the purpose of fanfics, that the characters are different from the canon, while trying to stay as faithful as possible.
**Though this fanfiction was published in 2018, the basic outline for the story was conceived during the release of The Lion Guard's first season, prior to the announcement of Scar's return to the franchise, and as such takes place in an alternate canon where the events of "The Rise of Scar", all the way to the series finale "Return to the Pride Lands" are almost non-existent (evident being that Scar is not undead). Several plot-elements reflect this, most notably the absence of Rani, Anga, as well as Vitani's Lion Guard. Several side-stories have been hinted or released that further reflect that. Unlike the source material, this story goes all-out with the dark topics, including a tragic origin story involving the conception of Zira's children, the violent attempted murder of Simba's son, the near-death of essentially almost every main character, etc. Some profanity to also be found. Within all that are some very creative decisions with the writing, and some fortunate levity and humor to balance, along with a lot of heart. Lots of things to admire in a fanfic.
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** "Comments": Oh my gosh I'm so happy for both Kion and Jasiri and Cheezi and Chungu! I have shipped these two couples since the beginning of the show and nobody will change my mind. And it was super kind of Kion to give Tifu that little friendly kiss for being supportive of his and Jasiri's relationship.
** Unlike The Scarred Pride, this fanfic takes place within the main canon of the animated series as a fanmade fourth season. It takes inspiration off of the popular theory that Rani is using Kion, and delves into a character-driven narrative that explores both parties. You see Kion's breakdown upon realizing that Scar's words of the roar being a curse may ring true and how it affects him psychologically and physically. The first two chapters, the bonus chapter, as well as the story's sequel expand upon Rani's character to make her an understandable antagonist. - Having been traumatized by the murder of her parents and subjects in her youth, and being burdened with the task of ruling an entire kingdom as a teenager, Rani was left physically and emotionally scarred and took it upon herself to protect her kingdom, even if it's through morally questionable acts. It gives her an element of understanding and sympathy, which -- depending on one's point of view -- makes you sad to see how her story ends. Whilst rushed at times, it does does some expansion upon the characters, particularly Kion and Jasiri, and delves into the original show's themes and morals of differences being utilized as a strength among a team, while not shying away to be more heavy with the action and language.
** Unlike The Scarred Pride, this fanfic takes place within the main canon of the animated series as a fanmade fourth season. It takes inspiration off of the popular theory that Rani is using Kion, and delves into a character-driven narrative that explores both parties. You see Kion's breakdown upon realizing that Scar's words of the roar being a curse may ring true and how it affects him psychologically and physically. The first two chapters, the bonus chapter, as well as the story's sequel expand upon Rani's character to make her an understandable antagonist. - Having been traumatized by the murder of her parents and subjects in her youth, and being burdened with the task of ruling an entire kingdom as a teenager, Rani was left physically and emotionally scarred and took it upon herself to protect her kingdom, even if it's through morally questionable acts. It gives her an element of understanding and sympathy, which -- depending on one's point of view -- makes you sad to see how her story ends. Whilst rushed at times, it does does some expansion upon the characters, particularly Kion and Jasiri, and delves into the original show's themes and morals of differences being utilized as a strength among a team, while not shying away to be more heavy with the action and language.
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** "Comments": Oh my gosh I'm so happy for both Kion and Jasiri and Cheezi and Chungu! I have shipped these two couples since the beginning of the show and nobody will change my mind. And it was super kind of Kion to give Tifu that little friendly kiss for being supportive of his and Jasiri's relationship.
**Unlike The Scarred Pride, this fanfic takes place within the main canon of the animated series as a fanmade fourth season. It takes inspiration off of the popular theory that Rani is using Kion, and delves into a character-driven narrative that explores both parties. You see Kion's breakdown upon realizing that Scar's words of the roar being a curse may ring true and how it affects him psychologically and physically. The first two chapters, the bonus chapter, as well as the story's sequel expand upon Rani's character to make her an understandable antagonist. - Having been traumatized by the murder of her parents and subjects in her youth, and being burdened with the task of ruling an entire kingdom as a teenager, Rani was left physically and emotionally scarred and took it upon herself to protect her kingdom, even if it's through morally questionable acts. It gives her an element of understanding and sympathy, which -- depending on one's point of view -- makes you sad to see everything she's worked for fall apart, her fractured relationship with her family, and how her story ultimately ends. Whilst rushed at times, it does does some expansion upon the characters, particularly Kion and Jasiri, and delves into the original show's themes and morals of differences being utilized as a strength among a team, while not shying away to be more heavy with the action and language.
language.
***The sequel, "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13897079/1/Return-of-the-King-of-the-Tree-of-Life Return of the King of the Tree of Life]]", focuses on Kion hearing the news of being invited to the Tree of Life in light of a tragedy that has befallen the kingdom during his absence. As Kion's family and friends explore and learn more about the Tree of Life and its creatures, Kion reunites with some of his former subjects, whilst also coming to grips with his previous marriage and making a shocking discovery in regards to Rani's fate. The story ends with the gang, lead by Kion's successor, returning to the Pride Lands to set things right, serving as a cliffhanger for future stories.
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***The sequel, "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13897079/1/Return-of-the-King-of-the-Tree-of-Life Return of the King of the Tree of Life]]", focuses on Kion hearing the news of being invited to the Tree of Life in light of a tragedy that has befallen the kingdom during his absence. As Kion's family and friends explore and learn more about the Tree of Life and its creatures, Kion reunites with some of his former subjects, whilst also coming to grips with his previous marriage and making a shocking discovery in regards to Rani's fate. The story ends with the gang, lead by Kion's successor, returning to the Pride Lands to set things right, serving as a cliffhanger for future stories.
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** "'Synopsis'": On the eve of Kion's birthday, he discovers that his betrothed, Rani, feigned a relationship with him to exploit him for his Roar. In the wake of this discovery, the two bitterly break-up, resulting in Kion's eventual return to the Pride Lands, but as a different lion than when he first left, having distanced himself from his friends and family and re-awakening his emnity with Janja. Within the following years, he must escape the scars that Rani has cast upon him from within in order to move on and regain his purpose in the Circle of Life. At the same time, he must protect what he holds dearly from Janja's vengeful clutches.
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** "'Synopsis'": On the eve of Kion's birthday, he discovers that his betrothed, Rani, feigned a relationship with him to exploit use him for his Roar. In the wake of this discovery, the two bitterly break-up, resulting in Kion's eventual return to the Pride Lands, but as a different lion than when he first left, having distanced himself from his friends and family and re-awakening his emnity with Janja. Janja, who relapses into villainy as a result. Within the following years, he Kion must escape the scars emotional scars and shadows that Rani has cast upon him from within in order to move on and regain his purpose in the Circle of Life. At the same time, he must protect what he holds dearly from Janja's vengeful clutches.
clutches, as well as well as edify Kiara and Kovu's second-born to follow in his paw-prints and lead the Pride Lands' next Lion Guard.
** "Comments": Oh my gosh I'm so happy for both Kion and Jasiri and Cheezi and Chungu! I have shipped these two couples since the beginning of the show and nobody will change my mind. And it was super kind of Kion to give Tifu that little friendly kiss for being supportive of his and Jasiri's relationship.
** Unlike The Scarred Pride, this fanfic takes place within the main canon of the animated series as a fanmade fourth season. It takes inspiration off of the popular theory that Rani is using Kion, and delves into a character-driven narrative that explores both parties. You see Kion's breakdown upon realizing that Scar's words of the roar being a curse may ring true and how it affects him psychologically and physically. The first two chapters, the bonus chapter, as well as the story's sequel expand upon Rani's character to make her an understandable antagonist. - Having been traumatized by the murder of her parents and subjects in her youth, and being burdened with the task of ruling an entire kingdom as a teenager, Rani was left physically and emotionally scarred and took it upon herself to protect her kingdom, even if it's through morally questionable acts. It gives her an element of understanding and sympathy, which -- depending on one's point of view -- makes you sad to see how her story ends. Whilst rushed at times, it does does some expansion upon the characters, particularly Kion and Jasiri, and delves into the original show's themes and morals of differences being utilized as a strength among a team, while not shying away to be more heavy with the action and language.
** "Comments": Oh my gosh I'm so happy for both Kion and Jasiri and Cheezi and Chungu! I have shipped these two couples since the beginning of the show and nobody will change my mind. And it was super kind of Kion to give Tifu that little friendly kiss for being supportive of his and Jasiri's relationship.
** Unlike The Scarred Pride, this fanfic takes place within the main canon of the animated series as a fanmade fourth season. It takes inspiration off of the popular theory that Rani is using Kion, and delves into a character-driven narrative that explores both parties. You see Kion's breakdown upon realizing that Scar's words of the roar being a curse may ring true and how it affects him psychologically and physically. The first two chapters, the bonus chapter, as well as the story's sequel expand upon Rani's character to make her an understandable antagonist. - Having been traumatized by the murder of her parents and subjects in her youth, and being burdened with the task of ruling an entire kingdom as a teenager, Rani was left physically and emotionally scarred and took it upon herself to protect her kingdom, even if it's through morally questionable acts. It gives her an element of understanding and sympathy, which -- depending on one's point of view -- makes you sad to see how her story ends. Whilst rushed at times, it does does some expansion upon the characters, particularly Kion and Jasiri, and delves into the original show's themes and morals of differences being utilized as a strength among a team, while not shying away to be more heavy with the action and language.
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**"Status": Complete (First Published April 28th, 2020, Finished August 18th, 2020, uploaded to Deviantart from April 29th, to October 14th of the same year)
** "'Synopsis'": On the eve of Kion's birthday, he discovers that his betrothed, Rani, feigned a relationship with him to exploit him for his Roar. In the wake of this discovery, the two bitterly break-up, resulting in Kion's eventual return to the Pride Lands, but as a different lion than when he first left, having distanced himself from his friends and family and re-awakening his emnity with Janja. Within the following years, he must escape the scars that Rani has cast upon him from within in order to move on and regain his purpose in the Circle of Life. At the same time, he must protect what he holds dearly from Janja's vengeful clutches.
*Recommended by disneykrattfan2006
**"Status": Complete (First Published April 28th, 2020, Finished August 18th, 2020, uploaded to Deviantart from April 29th, to October 14th of the same year)
** "'Synopsis'": On the eve of Kion's birthday, he discovers that his betrothed, Rani, feigned a relationship with him to exploit him for his Roar. In the wake of this discovery, the two bitterly break-up, resulting in Kion's eventual return to the Pride Lands, but as a different lion than when he first left, having distanced himself from his friends and family and re-awakening his emnity with Janja. Within the following years, he must escape the scars that Rani has cast upon him from within in order to move on and regain his purpose in the Circle of Life. At the same time, he must protect what he holds dearly from Janja's vengeful clutches.
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** Though this fanfiction was published in 2018, the basic outline for the story was conceived during the release of The Lion Guard's first season, prior to the announcement of Scar's return to the franchise, and as such takes place in an alternate canon where the events of "The Rise of Scar", all the way to the series finale "Return to the Pride Lands" are almost non-existent (evident being that Scar is not undead). Several plot-elements reflect this, most notably the absence of Rani, Anga, as well as Vitani's Lion Guard. Several side-stories have been hinted or released that further reflect that.
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** Though this fanfiction was published in 2018, the basic outline for the story was conceived during the release of The Lion Guard's first season, prior to the announcement of Scar's return to the franchise, and as such takes place in an alternate canon where the events of "The Rise of Scar", all the way to the series finale "Return to the Pride Lands" are almost non-existent (evident being that Scar is not undead). Several plot-elements reflect this, most notably the absence of Rani, Anga, as well as Vitani's Lion Guard. Several side-stories have been hinted or released that further reflect that.
that. Unlike the source material, this story goes all-out with the dark topics, including a tragic origin story involving the conception of Zira's children, the violent attempted murder of Simba's son, the near-death of essentially almost every main character, etc. Some profanity to also be found. Within all that are some very creative decisions with the writing, and some fortunate levity and humor to balance, along with a lot of heart. Lots of things to admire in a fanfic.
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"[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12830975/1/The-Lion-King-The-Scarred-Pride 'The Lion King: The Scarred Pride']]" by https://www."[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10288812/The-Reference-Man The Reference Man.]]
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