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* LockerMail: During the fire drill, a guy slips an envelope through the vents in Sid's locker. It's not a love letter; it's an environmental extremist's diatribe against Sid's mother for being a zookeeper.
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* PeekABangs: Krile has this hairstyle.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: Sid brings a sugar glider to class for Show and Tell, and Grit is introduced hiding in a Komodo dragon's habitat.
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** Everyone is worried when they see Grit hiding in Keyon the Komodo dragon's habitat. Considering that Komodo dragons are one of the most dangerous animals on Earth, and that Grit only escapes severe injury (or worse) because Keyon is both well-trained and merely confused by his presence, it's hard to blame them.
** Later in the story, Adelaide is kidnapped by the person who's been leaving threatening notes for Sid. In the note they leave at the scene of the crime, they threaten to kidnap Sid next if she doesn't comply with their demands.
** Pat recounts how she received a similar note to the one Sid received, and decided to obey it and free the zoo animals. While she chickened out and tried to leave, she was forced to hide in an animal enclosure when she spotted a zoo security guard - unfortunately, said enclosure contained a very vicious wolf that attacked her and nearly gouged out her eye. If Colin hadn't intervened, Pat would have most likely ended up dead.
** Everyone is worried when they see Grit hiding in Keyon the Komodo dragon's habitat. Considering that Komodo dragons are one of the most dangerous animals on Earth, and that Grit only escapes severe injury (or worse) because Keyon is both well-trained and merely confused by his presence, it's hard to blame them.
** Later in the story, Adelaide is kidnapped by the person who's been leaving threatening notes for Sid. In the note they leave at the scene of the crime, they threaten to kidnap Sid next if she doesn't comply with their demands.
** Pat recounts how she received a similar note to the one Sid received, and decided to obey it and free the zoo animals. While she chickened out and tried to leave, she was forced to hide in an animal enclosure when she spotted a zoo security guard - unfortunately, said enclosure contained a very vicious wolf that attacked her and nearly gouged out her eye. If Colin hadn't intervened, Pat would have most likely ended up dead.
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* BoundAndGagged: Ronnie Anne and Sid find Adelaide and Froggy 2 in a cage tied up with tape over their mouths.
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* SayingTooMuch: When Sid and Ronnie Anne tell Jim Sparkletooth that ARF agreed to pull out of the investigation, he panickily states that they had a deal...''after'' previously denying that he had no idea who they were.
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** Pat recounts how she received a similar note to the one Sid received, and decided to obey it and free the zoo animals. While she chickened out and tried to leave, she was forced to hide in an animal enclosure when she spotted a zoo security guard - unfortunately, said enclosure contained a very vicious wolf that attacked her and nearly gouged out her eye. If Colin hadn't intervened, Pat would have most likely ended up dead.
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* MamaBear: Pat accidentally angered a female wolf who had a tendency to get vicious whenever she thought someone was threatening her cubs.
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* PapaWolf: Colin took on a vicious wolf in order to save Pat, who had accidentally climbed into the wolf's pen and angered it.
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* HomeschooledKids: Pat and Nat, due to their family constantly being on the road.
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** Later in the story, Adelaide is kidnapped.kidnapped by the person who's been leaving threatening notes for Sid. In the note they leave at the scene of the crime, they threaten to kidnap Sid next if she doesn't comply with their demands.
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** Everyone is worried when they see Grit hiding in Keyon the Komodo dragon's habitat. Considering that Komodo dragons are one of the most dangerous animals on Earth, and that Grit only escapes severe injury (or worse) because Keyon is both well-trained and merely confused by his presence, it's hard to blamethem.them.
** Later in the story, Adelaide is kidnapped.
** Everyone is worried when they see Grit hiding in Keyon the Komodo dragon's habitat. Considering that Komodo dragons are one of the most dangerous animals on Earth, and that Grit only escapes severe injury (or worse) because Keyon is both well-trained and merely confused by his presence, it's hard to blame
** Later in the story, Adelaide is kidnapped.
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* MissingMom: Pat and Nat's mother, Sonia, passed away prior to the start of the story.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Carl accuses ARF of stealing Froggy 2, Ronnie Anne gets him to reconsider by asking if an organization that would remove someone from their position of head volunteer (Krile) because they didn't uphold the organization's ideals would steal someone's pet.
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* IHaveYourWife: Both Froggy 2 and Adelaide are kidnapped in order to force Sid to free all the zoo animals.
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* AnimalWrongsGroup: The Animal Rights Foundation.Foundation turn out to be a subversion.
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* PeekABangs: Krile has this hairstyle.
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* LastSecondWordSwap: Misha constantly replaces the swear words she's about to utter with more child-friendly words because she doesn't want to swear in front of Ronnie Anne and her friends.
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* MotorMouth: Nat tends to let both her thoughts and her mouth run away with her.
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* AdultFear: Everyone is worried when they see Grit hiding in Keyon the Komodo dragon's habitat. Considering that Komodo dragons are one of the most dangerous animals on Earth, and that Grit only escapes severe injury (or worse) because Keyon is both well-trained and merely confused by his presence, it's hard to blame them.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: Sid brings a sugar glider to class for Show and Tell.
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* FullNameUltimatum: Rosa uses Ronnie Anne's full name of Ronalda when Ronnie Anne takes too long to get out of bed.
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* ChekovsGun: A fire drill occurs in the second chapter. [[spoiler: It turns out to have been a distraction for Mr. Zolvish to sneak into the school and plant a note in Sid's locker.]]
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: A fire drill occurs in the second chapter. [[spoiler: It turns out to have been a distraction for Mr. Zolvish to sneak into the school and plant a note in Sid's locker.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13746844/1/Zoo-Coup-Riot Zoo Coup Riot]]'' is a fanfic based on ''WesternAnimation/TheCasagrandes'' by Metool Bard, the author of ''Fanfic/MissingLinc'' and ''Fanfic/TheFoolWhoCriedFoul''.
Environmental extremists appear to be targeting the Great Lakes City Zoo through Sid, but is that really what's going on? Ronnie Anne intends to find out.
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!!Zoo Coup Riot contains examples of:
* AnimalWrongsGroup: The Animal Rights Foundation.
* CharacterTics: Nat plays with her fidget spinner.
* ChekovsGun: A fire drill occurs in the second chapter. [[spoiler: It turns out to have been a distraction for Mr. Zolvish to sneak into the school and plant a note in Sid's locker.]]
* CountingToThree: Ronnie Anne does this to get Carl off of her back.
* DamselInDistress: Adelaide is kidnapped.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Pat and Nat (biologically, at least).
* IncrediblyLamePun: Colin Zolvish jokes about how people would say that the zoo animals were at his and Becca Chang's "beck and call".
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Unaware that Pat is transgender, Carl accidentally upsets her by questioning her father calling her a girl.
* SayingTooMuch: When Sid and Ronnie Anne tell Jim Sparkletooth that ARF agreed to pull out of the investigation, he panickily states that they had a deal...''after'' previously denying that he had no idea who they were.
* {{Transgender}}: Ronnie Anne is initially surprised that Pat's full name is Patricia, then realises that she must be transgender.
Environmental extremists appear to be targeting the Great Lakes City Zoo through Sid, but is that really what's going on? Ronnie Anne intends to find out.
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!!Zoo Coup Riot contains examples of:
* AnimalWrongsGroup: The Animal Rights Foundation.
* CharacterTics: Nat plays with her fidget spinner.
* ChekovsGun: A fire drill occurs in the second chapter. [[spoiler: It turns out to have been a distraction for Mr. Zolvish to sneak into the school and plant a note in Sid's locker.]]
* CountingToThree: Ronnie Anne does this to get Carl off of her back.
* DamselInDistress: Adelaide is kidnapped.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Pat and Nat (biologically, at least).
* IncrediblyLamePun: Colin Zolvish jokes about how people would say that the zoo animals were at his and Becca Chang's "beck and call".
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Unaware that Pat is transgender, Carl accidentally upsets her by questioning her father calling her a girl.
* SayingTooMuch: When Sid and Ronnie Anne tell Jim Sparkletooth that ARF agreed to pull out of the investigation, he panickily states that they had a deal...''after'' previously denying that he had no idea who they were.
* {{Transgender}}: Ronnie Anne is initially surprised that Pat's full name is Patricia, then realises that she must be transgender.
