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* Vellian Crowler, in a successful attempt to foil Viper's last gambit in trying to kill Jaden and Yubel, gives up his life by activating the decontamination process in the secondary power chamber of Duel Academy's Power Station while he's still inside the room, willingly exposing himself to the deadly unrefined energy of the Sacred Beast cards as he battles to fix the damage Viper has done to the system.
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** Continuing on from their innocent romance in their anime, Syrus and Mana are now deeply in love with each other but are consumed by the doubts of what kind of future they can have, with him a human and her a Duel Spirit who can only exist on Earth for a few months at a time. The experience of nearly losing Syrus to Viper however erases those doubts for Mana and she strives to find a way to make a future for her and Syrus possible. She is eventually provided with a means to do so by Dark Magician, one that will turn her into a mortal human, leaving her to decide to continue leading an eternal life as a Duel Monster or to choose a limited lifespan so she can be with the man she loves.
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** Mokuba Kaiba and Rebecca Hawkins, now married with children, appear in a short scene where the former has been informed by Kaiba Corp that the KCII Reliant has self-destructed in Earth's orbit and he rushes off to headquarters to take charge of the situation.
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** Mokuba Kaiba and Rebecca Hawkins, now married with children, appear in a short scene where the former has been informed by Kaiba Corp that the KCII Reliant has self-destructed in Earth's orbit and he rushes off to headquarters to take charge of the situation. They also have a non-speaking appearance in the story's final scene as they attend the memorial service on behalf of Kaiba Corp.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: In the first battle against Viper, Marcel Bonaparte is mortally wounded when the power management station explodes during his successful attempt to restore the Enterprise's shields. Later, when attempts to save him fail, Marcel instead turns to an aggrieved Jaden and Blair and encourages them to carry on with their lives. Knowing from their short conversation that they will, Marcel smiles peacefully as he dies.
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** In the first battle against Viper, Marcel Bonaparte is mortally wounded when the power management station explodes during his successful attempt to restore the Enterprise's shields. Later, when attempts to save him fail, Marcel instead turns to an aggrieved Jaden and Blair and encourages them to carry on with their lives. Knowing from their short conversation that they will, Marcel smiles peacefully as he dies.
--> ---> '''Marcel''': I am happy.happy.
** During The Battle at Duel Academy, Aster Phoenix proves himself as the most formidable duellist in the resistance against Viper, facing off multiple monsters and rescuing many of his friends and allies. Exhausted and worn, he engages in a final duel with Zure where it soon becomes apparent he will lose. Nonetheless he strives on, duelling to the bitter end bravely, which earns him a rare and genuine respect from his opponent.
** In the first battle against Viper, Marcel Bonaparte is mortally wounded when the power management station explodes during his successful attempt to restore the Enterprise's shields. Later, when attempts to save him fail, Marcel instead turns to an aggrieved Jaden and Blair and encourages them to carry on with their lives. Knowing from their short conversation that they will, Marcel smiles peacefully as he dies.
** During The Battle at Duel Academy, Aster Phoenix proves himself as the most formidable duellist in the resistance against Viper, facing off multiple monsters and rescuing many of his friends and allies. Exhausted and worn, he engages in a final duel with Zure where it soon becomes apparent he will lose. Nonetheless he strives on, duelling to the bitter end bravely, which earns him a rare and genuine respect from his opponent.
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* IllKillYou: Zure gets very vindictive towards Professor Sartyr in Chapter 16 when the head of the Ra dorm wounds him badly enough that Zure was unable to prevent Sartyr and Dorothy from collecting Duel Monsters cards to reinforce the Academy.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: After five years of travelling the world without ever seeing or hearing from his friends, Jaden finally returns to Duel Academy in time for a school reunion so he can meet with and confess his realised love for Alexis. Things go downhill from there when Syrus and Chumley go missing before they arrive and Jaden volunteers to head an expedition to rescue, which gets worse when he discovers they were abducted by Viper, who has maniacally set his sights on killing Jaden and will hurt and use Jaden's loved ones to do so. Jaden is then forced to fight off every attempt of Viper's to kill him and get himself and his friends out of the situation alive.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: After five years of travelling the world without ever seeing or hearing from his friends, Jaden finally returns to Duel Academy in time for a school reunion so he can meet with and confess his realised love for Alexis. Things go downhill from there when Syrus and Chumley go missing before they arrive and Jaden volunteers to head an expedition to rescue, rescue them, which gets worse when he discovers they were abducted by Viper, who has maniacally set his sights on killing Jaden and will hurt and use Jaden's loved ones to do so. Jaden is then forced to fight off every attempt of Viper's to kill him and get himself and his friends out of the situation alive.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: In the first battle against Viper, Marcel Bonaparte is mortally wounded when the power management station explodes during his successful attempt to restore the Enterprise's shields. Later, when attempts to save him fail, Marcel instead turns to an aggrieved Jaden and Blair and encourages them to carry on with their lives. Knowing from their short conversation that they will, Marcel smiles peacefully as he dies.
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** Chazz and Jasmine got together during the five-year period after graduation, where the two worked together to oust Chazz's brothers from the Princeton family company. At the time ''Wrath of Viper'' starts, the two are revealed to have tied the knot when Chazz proudly announces his marriage to his friends and that he and Jasmine are expecting a baby. Later, while Viper holds Duel Academy under siege, Chazz's motivation in fighting back is so he can return to Jasmine in one piece.
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** Chazz and Jasmine got together during the five-year period after graduation, where the two worked together with Kaiba Corp to oust Chazz's brothers from the Princeton family company. At the time ''Wrath of Viper'' starts, the two are revealed to have tied the knot when Chazz proudly announces his marriage to his friends and that he and Jasmine are expecting a baby. Later, while Viper holds Duel Academy under siege, Chazz's motivation in fighting back is so he can return to Jasmine in one piece.
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** Jim Cook, Axel Brodie and Mindy are all mentioned by Jaden when he wonders if they and Jasmine will be turning up to the reunion as well. Crowler answers they wouldn't be, as Jim is opening up a wildlife park, Axel is currently serving in the army, and Mindy has been hired as an actress on a movie production in the tropics.
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** When he comes to know that Viper is the one attacking his friends, Jaden holds himself responsible for the danger they are all in, despite those around him telling him he's not. He also blames himself when any of his loved ones are either injured or killed. It takes a telling-off from Alexis for him to finally break out of it.
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* BitterSweetEnding: Crowler, Marcel, Chumley, Sartyr, Aster and Bonaparte all die and a funeral and memorial service for them is held in Duel Academy. But Yubel is able to get separated from Jaden and start a new life with Zane, Alexis confess her love for Jaden and both of them became a couple, and Syrus decide to get married to Mana.
* BloodKnight: Zure. Throughout Viper's assault on Duel Academy, the Dark World regularly displays an insatiable thirst for combat, delighting in fighting every duellist he comes across to the deadly finish. This comes to the fore for him in The Battle at Duel Academy as it gives him the chance to kill more of his master's enemies.
* BloodKnight: Zure. Throughout Viper's assault on Duel Academy, the Dark World regularly displays an insatiable thirst for combat, delighting in fighting every duellist he comes across to the deadly finish. This comes to the fore for him in The Battle at Duel Academy as it gives him the chance to kill more of his master's enemies.
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* BitterSweetEnding: Crowler, Marcel, Chumley, Sartyr, Aster and Bonaparte all die and a funeral and memorial service for them is held in Duel Academy. But Yubel is able to get separated from Jaden and start a new life with Zane, Alexis confess confesses her love for Jaden and both of them became a couple, and Syrus decide to get married to Mana.
* BloodKnight: Zure.Throughout Viper's assault on Duel Academy, the The newly-resurrected Dark World monster regularly displays an insatiable thirst for combat, combat and murder, delighting in fighting every duellist he comes across to the deadly finish. This comes to the fore for him in The Battle at Duel Academy as it gives him the chance to kill more of his master's enemies.
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* BitterSweetEnding: Crowler, Marcel, Chummley, and Chumley, Sartyr, Aster and Bonaparte all die and a funeral and memorial service for them is held in Duel Academy. But Yubel iss is able to get separated from Jaden and start a new life with Zane, Alexis confess her love for Jaden and both of them became a couple, and Syrus decide to get married to Mana.
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** After learning of Chumley and Syrus' disappearance, Pegasus tries to get in contact with everyone he knows from [[Anime/YuGiOh the original anime]] to assemble a rescue team, only for him to learn for one reason or another Yugi, Kaiba and the others are all unavailable. In the same scene, he dismisses any idea of recruiting the likes of Weevil Underwood, Rex Raptor or Bandit Keith.
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%%* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
%%* {{Expy}}: It is a [[Franchise/YuGiOh yugioh version]] of Star Trek II after all.
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%%** Jesse and Blair are blissfully engaged.
%%* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
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* AnyoneCanDie
* BackFromTheDead: Brron and Zure
* BetaCouple:
** Jesse and Blair are the main beta pairing
** Syrus and Mana
** Zane and Yubel
* BigBad: Thelonious Viper
* BigBadassBattleSequence: The Battle at Duel Academy, of course.
* BitterSweetEnding: Crowler, Marcel, Chummley, and Aster died and a funeral and memorial service for them was held in Duel Academy. But Yubel was able to get separated from Jaden and start a new life with Zane, Alexis confess her love for Jaden and both of them became a couple, and Syrus decide to get married to Mana.
* BloodKnight: Zure
* TheCameo: A voice-only example. Seto Kaiba.
* CurbStompBattle: Two involving the monsters from Dark World battling to take over something
** Storming the KCII Reliant
** Taking control of the Duel Academy Power Station
* DuelToTheDeath: Thanks to Viper inventing the phaser in this continuity, all card duels become this.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
* {{Expy}}: It is a [[Franchise/YuGiOh yugioh version]] of Star Trek II after all.
* HappilyMarried: Chazz and Jasmine are implied to be this.
** Jesse and Blair are blissfully engaged
* HeroicBSOD: Jaden constantly experiences the ItsAllMyFault version of this. He seems to be going through another one [[spoiler: after the final battle]], but that one turns out to be a subversion.
* HeroicSacrifice:
** Marcel Bonaparte
** Chumley Huffington
* I Vellian Crowler
* HospitalHottie: Zane is this, he quit Pro and choose to become a doctor.
* KilledOffForReal: Quite a number of characters from the anime perish during the course of this story.
* OnlySaneMan: For the monsters, Brron.
* PairingTheSpares:
** Averted with Jesse and Blair as there have been other fan works depicting the two as a couple before.
** Played straight with a very strange one: [[spoiler: Zane and Yubel]]
* BackFromTheDead: Brron and Zure
* BetaCouple:
** Jesse and Blair are the main beta pairing
** Syrus and Mana
** Zane and Yubel
* BigBad: Thelonious Viper
* BigBadassBattleSequence: The Battle at Duel Academy, of course.
* BitterSweetEnding: Crowler, Marcel, Chummley, and Aster died and a funeral and memorial service for them was held in Duel Academy. But Yubel was able to get separated from Jaden and start a new life with Zane, Alexis confess her love for Jaden and both of them became a couple, and Syrus decide to get married to Mana.
* BloodKnight: Zure
* TheCameo: A voice-only example. Seto Kaiba.
* CurbStompBattle: Two involving the monsters from Dark World battling to take over something
** Storming the KCII Reliant
** Taking control of the Duel Academy Power Station
* DuelToTheDeath: Thanks to Viper inventing the phaser in this continuity, all card duels become this.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
* {{Expy}}: It is a [[Franchise/YuGiOh yugioh version]] of Star Trek II after all.
* HappilyMarried: Chazz and Jasmine are implied to be this.
** Jesse and Blair are blissfully engaged
* HeroicBSOD: Jaden constantly experiences the ItsAllMyFault version of this. He seems to be going through another one [[spoiler: after the final battle]], but that one turns out to be a subversion.
* HeroicSacrifice:
** Marcel Bonaparte
** Chumley Huffington
* I Vellian Crowler
* HospitalHottie: Zane is this, he quit Pro and choose to become a doctor.
* KilledOffForReal: Quite a number of characters from the anime perish during the course of this story.
* OnlySaneMan: For the monsters, Brron.
* PairingTheSpares:
** Averted with Jesse and Blair as there have been other fan works depicting the two as a couple before.
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The fic can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10209688/1/YU-GI-OH-GX-The-Wrath-of-Viper here]].
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Enter a despondent Jaden who has grown tired of his adventures and had no such advances in his life. He has finally, partly through Yubel, [HeelRealization come to know that he's developed feelings for Alexis] and regrets how blind he has been. But he is unable to confess at the reunion as Alexis is currently not present. She, and Jesse, are working on the Project, a collaboration between Industrial Illusions and KaibaCorp to explore the Duelling Dimensions. The Project is now at a very delicate stage; the next expedition is staged to land on Dark World. When the expedition team goes missing, two of them being Chumley Huffington and Syrus Truesdale, Alexis and Jesse contact Maximillion Pegasus for help.
Back at Duel Academy, Crowler gathers the others to volunteer for the rescue mission. Despite his misgivings, Jaden volunteers and is later made captain of the new exploration vessel, the KCII Enterprise. Crowler joins him as First Officer, Bastion as chief engineer, Marcel as assistant engineer Hassleberry and Blair as pilots, Zane as ship's doctor and Fonda Fontaine as communications officer. As they embark on the rescue mission, Jaden and Yubel are unaware
Back at Duel Academy, Crowler gathers the others to volunteer for the rescue mission. Despite his misgivings, Jaden volunteers and is later made captain of the new exploration vessel, the KCII Enterprise. Crowler joins him as First Officer, Bastion as chief engineer, Marcel as assistant engineer Hassleberry and Blair as pilots, Zane as ship's doctor and Fonda Fontaine as communications officer. As they embark on the rescue mission, Jaden and Yubel are unaware
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Enter a despondent Jaden who has grown tired of his adventures and had no such advances in his life. He has finally, partly through Yubel, [HeelRealization [[HeelRealization come to know that he's developed feelings for Alexis] Alexis]] and regrets how blind he has been. But he is unable to confess at the reunion as Alexis is currently not present. She, and Jesse, are working on the Project, a collaboration between Industrial Illusions and KaibaCorp Kaiba Corp to explore the Duelling Dimensions. The Project is now at a very delicate stage; the next expedition is staged to land on Dark World. When the expedition team goes missing, two of them being Chumley Huffington and Syrus Truesdale, Alexis and Jesse contact Maximillion Pegasus for help.
Back at Duel Academy, Crowler gathers the others to volunteer for the rescue mission. Despite his misgivings, Jaden volunteers and is later made captain of the new exploration vessel, the KCII Enterprise. Crowler joins him as First Officer, Bastion as chief engineer, Marcel as assistant engineer Hassleberry and Blair as pilots, Zane as ship's doctor and Fonda Fontaine as communications officer. As they embark on the rescue mission, Jaden and Yubel areunaware
unaware that the reason for the team's disappearance is an old adversary for one and a former ally for the other.
And he REALLY wants them dead...
Back at Duel Academy, Crowler gathers the others to volunteer for the rescue mission. Despite his misgivings, Jaden volunteers and is later made captain of the new exploration vessel, the KCII Enterprise. Crowler joins him as First Officer, Bastion as chief engineer, Marcel as assistant engineer Hassleberry and Blair as pilots, Zane as ship's doctor and Fonda Fontaine as communications officer. As they embark on the rescue mission, Jaden and Yubel are
And he REALLY wants them dead...
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* SanitySlippage: Viper gradually succumbs to this, taking the final plunge at the end of ''Escape''.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Viper attempts really hard to avert this by making his traps for the heroes totally inescapable. [[spoiler: His last try very nearly worked.]]
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Enter a despondent Jaden who has grown tired of his adventures and had no such advances in his life. He has finally, partly through Yubel, [HeelRealization come to know that he's developed feelings for Alexis] and regrets how blind he has been. But he is unable to confess at the reunion as Alexis is currently not present. She, and Jesse, are working on the Project, a collaboration between Industrial Illusions and KaibaCorp to explore the Duelling Dimensions. The Project is now at a very delicate stage; the next expedition is staged to land on Dark World. When the expedition team goes missing, two of them being Chumley Huffington and Syrus Truesdale, Alexis and Jesse contact Maximillion Pegasus for help.
Back at Duel Academy, Crowler gathers the others to volunteer for the rescue mission. Despite his misgivings, Jaden volunteers and is later made captain of the new exploration vessel, the KCII Enterprise. Crowler joins him as First Officer, Bastion as chief engineer, Marcel as assistant engineer Hassleberry and Blair as pilots, Zane as ship's doctor and Fonda Fontaine as communications officer. As they embark on the rescue mission, Jaden and Yubel are unaware
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As the author puts it in his summary, this is basically ''Anime/YuGiOhGX'' meets ''Film/StarTrekIITheWrathOfKhan''.
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!!Tropes
* AdaptationExpansion: Rather than ending the story with the space battle in the Mutara Nebula, the author lengthened the conclusion by moving the action to Duel Academy, staging a multi-chapter long battle, a duel between Viper and Bonaparte, before having the final battle.
* AnyoneCanDie
* BackFromTheDead: Brron and Zure
* BetaCouple:
** Jesse and Blair are the main beta pairing
** Syrus and Mana
** Zane and Yubel
* BigBad: Thelonious Viper
* BigBadassBattleSequence: The Battle at Duel Academy, of course.
* BloodKnight: Zure
* TheCameo: A voice-only example. Seto Kaiba.
* CurbStompBattle: Two involving the monsters from Dark World battling to take over something
** Storming the KCII Reliant
** Taking control of the Duel Academy Power Station
* DuelToTheDeath: Thanks to Viper inventing the phaser in this continuity, all card duels become this.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
* {{Expy}}: It is a [[Franchise/YuGiOh yugioh version]] of Star Trek II after all.
* HappilyMarried: Chazz and Jasmine are implied to be this.
** Jesse and Blair are blissfully engaged
* HeroicBSOD: Jaden constantly experiences the ItsAllMyFault version of this. He seems to be going through another one [[spoiler: after the final battle]], but that one turns out to be a subversion.
* HeroicSacrifice:
** Marcel Bonaparte
** Chumley Huffington
** Vellian Crowler
* KilledOffForReal: Quite a number of characters from the anime perish during the course of this story.
* OnlySaneMan: For the monsters, Brron.
* PairingTheSpares:
** Averted with Jesse and Blair as there have been other fan works depicting the two as a couple before.
** Played straight with a very strange one: [[spoiler: Zane and Yubel]]
* {{Revenge}}: Viper wants to kill Jaden and Yubel for leaving him for dead on Dark World. Zure also wants to kill Jaden in a duel for trouncing him so easily back on Dark World.
** Mostly averted by Brron, until ''The Final Game''.
* ShoutOut: Being a GX version of Wrath of Khan, this is obvious. There is however one to [[Film/StarTrekIIITheSearchForSpock Search for Spock]] when Viper orders the Reliant to self-destruct.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Like many a GX fanfic featuring Jaden and Alexis as love interests, it's not really a question of if they will but if they get a chance to.
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!!Tropes
* AdaptationExpansion: Rather than ending the story with the space battle in the Mutara Nebula, the author lengthened the conclusion by moving the action to Duel Academy, staging a multi-chapter long battle, a duel between Viper and Bonaparte, before having the final battle.
* AnyoneCanDie
* BackFromTheDead: Brron and Zure
* BetaCouple:
** Jesse and Blair are the main beta pairing
** Syrus and Mana
** Zane and Yubel
* BigBad: Thelonious Viper
* BigBadassBattleSequence: The Battle at Duel Academy, of course.
* BloodKnight: Zure
* TheCameo: A voice-only example. Seto Kaiba.
* CurbStompBattle: Two involving the monsters from Dark World battling to take over something
** Storming the KCII Reliant
** Taking control of the Duel Academy Power Station
* DuelToTheDeath: Thanks to Viper inventing the phaser in this continuity, all card duels become this.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Victory or peace does not come easily to the heroes in this.
* {{Expy}}: It is a [[Franchise/YuGiOh yugioh version]] of Star Trek II after all.
* HappilyMarried: Chazz and Jasmine are implied to be this.
** Jesse and Blair are blissfully engaged
* HeroicBSOD: Jaden constantly experiences the ItsAllMyFault version of this. He seems to be going through another one [[spoiler: after the final battle]], but that one turns out to be a subversion.
* HeroicSacrifice:
** Marcel Bonaparte
** Chumley Huffington
** Vellian Crowler
* KilledOffForReal: Quite a number of characters from the anime perish during the course of this story.
* OnlySaneMan: For the monsters, Brron.
* PairingTheSpares:
** Averted with Jesse and Blair as there have been other fan works depicting the two as a couple before.
** Played straight with a very strange one: [[spoiler: Zane and Yubel]]
* {{Revenge}}: Viper wants to kill Jaden and Yubel for leaving him for dead on Dark World. Zure also wants to kill Jaden in a duel for trouncing him so easily back on Dark World.
** Mostly averted by Brron, until ''The Final Game''.
* ShoutOut: Being a GX version of Wrath of Khan, this is obvious. There is however one to [[Film/StarTrekIIITheSearchForSpock Search for Spock]] when Viper orders the Reliant to self-destruct.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Like many a GX fanfic featuring Jaden and Alexis as love interests, it's not really a question of if they will but if they get a chance to.
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