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** Yoru always merges with Asa if the latter isn't killed.
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** Yoru always merges with Asa if the latter isn't killed.Asa.
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** In the Public Safety Asa loop her cat isn't killed, she grows into an accomplished devil hunter, and she has a romantic relationship with Denji, before Makima kills her.
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** [[spoiler: The final loop ends with Makima not only saving Himeno, Angel, Aki, and Power, but freeing Reze from the Soviets and setting her up to befriend Asa at Fourth East High.]]
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** [[spoiler: The final loop ends with Makima not only saving Himeno, Angel, Aki, and Power, but freeing Reze from the Soviets and setting her up to befriend Asa and Denji at Fourth East High.]]
** All the major loops cause Denji to change in some way.
*** Chapter 4's Denji comes to only derive self-worth over being the host for Chainsaw Man
*** Chapter 5's Denji is more open about his past with Nayuta.
*** Chapter 6's Denji wants to be free from Public Safety.
*** Chapter 7's Denji comes to despise and distrust Public Safety.
*** Chapter 8's Denji develops into a more moral person.
*** Chapter 10's Denji [[spoiler: is left too traumatized from his rape to care for himself or Nayuta.]]
*** Chapter 4's Denji comes to only derive self-worth over being the host for Chainsaw Man
*** Chapter 5's Denji is more open about his past with Nayuta.
*** Chapter 6's Denji wants to be free from Public Safety.
*** Chapter 7's Denji comes to despise and distrust Public Safety.
*** Chapter 8's Denji develops into a more moral person.
*** Chapter 10's Denji [[spoiler: is left too traumatized from his rape to care for himself or Nayuta.]]
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: After her character development Makima's plan to save Himeno is to have the Katana Man shoot her through the spine, which both saves her life and causes Aki's to bond with Denji and Power.]]
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** At the end of chapter 4 shows Denji's depression over being unable to be Chainsaw Man causes him to neglect Nayuta.
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** At the end of chapter 4 shows Denji's depression over being unable to be Chainsaw Man causes him to neglect Nayuta.
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like another chance to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Happens to Makima multiple times.
** Chapter 6 has Reze surviving her first attack and save Denji.
** Chapter 7 has the Gun Fiend and Angel Devil breaking free from her control.
** Chapter 8 has Asa forming a contract with Yoru to save Denji.
** Chapter 6 has Reze surviving her first attack and save Denji.
** Chapter 7 has the Gun Fiend and Angel Devil breaking free from her control.
** Chapter 8 has Asa forming a contract with Yoru to save Denji.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Any loop where Power is replaced as Denji and Aki's partner results in Meowy being eaten by the Bat Devil.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Any loop where As Reze and Asa replace Power is replaced as in chapters 6 and 8, they are killed to drive Denji and Aki's partner results in Meowy being eaten by the Bat Devil.to despair.
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** Another was making Denji into a movie star. According to [[spoiler: Death]] it was funny
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** Another was making Denji into a movie star. According to [[spoiler: Death]] it was funnyfunny.
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* TookALevelInBadass: In the timeline where Makima made Asa the war hybrid she went from socially awkward teenager to a more confident, and dangerous devil hunter.
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* TookALevelInBadass: In the timeline where Makima made Asa the war hybrid she went from a socially awkward teenager to a more confident, self-assured, and dangerous devil hunter.
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* BadassDecay: As Makima's mind control powers are based on her feeling superior to others, she starts to lose these as she feels trapped in the loop while normal people are free.
* DePower: As part of her depressive state Makima loses her mind control due to believing that people aren't in the loop are free while she is imprisioned.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: In chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man Church after her death.]]
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* GoneHorriblyRight: In Makima's scheme in chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying is to have the Gun Fiend executed and break Denji's trust in public safety. [[spoiler:So much so that he allies Public Safety. [[spoiler:Denji decides to ally with the Chainsaw Man Church after her death.as a result.]]
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* LastStand: Various characters fight Makima to save Denji in several different loops.
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* LastStand: Various characters fight Makima to save Denji or otherwise interfere with her shcemes in several different loops.
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* DontFearTheReaper: [[spoiler: The Death Devil greets Makima after she ends the loops, and congratulates her for saving the lives of Himeno, Angel, Aki and Power, and setting up for Reze and Asa to meet Denji in the future. She then explains that she does not want to see humanity destroyed and supports devil's who share that viewpoint.]]
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* DontFearTheReaper: [[spoiler: The Death Devil greets Makima after she ends the loops, and congratulates her for saving the lives of Himeno, Angel, Aki and Power, and setting up for Reze and Asa to meet Denji in the future. She then explains that she does not want to see humanity destroyed and supports devil's devils who share that viewpoint.]]
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** In Chapter 8 because Asa is accompanying Denji on his walk Reze decides to act as a friend to the two of them instead of seducing Denji.
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno becoming Denji and Power's guardian and the gun fiend.
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno becoming Denji and Power's guardian and the gun fiend.Gun Fiend.
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* AfterlifeAntechamber: [[spoiler: Before Makima truly passes the Death Devil greets her on a gray beach and explains why she was in the timeloop.]]
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno being Denji and Power's guardian.
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno being becoming Denji and Power's guardian.guardian and the gun fiend.
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* GreekChorus: At the end of each chapter a mysterious voice commentates on Makima's plans. [[spoiler: It's revealed to be the Death Devil.]]
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* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved ones who does not get a sole chapter focused on him.
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* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved ones who does not get a sole chapter focused solely on him.
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** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru make a contract where they merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
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** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru make a contract where they merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man Church and kills Nayuta.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over control Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man Church and kills Nayuta.]]
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** At the end of chapter 4 show Denji dedicates himself to being Chainsaw Man as much as possible and neglects Nayuta as a result.
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** At the end of chapter 4 show Denji dedicates himself to shows Denji's depression over being unable to be Chainsaw Man as much as possible and neglects Nayuta as a result.causes him to neglect Nayuta.
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*DeathByAdaptation: Any loop where Power is replaced as Denji and Aki's partner results in Meowy being eaten by the Bat Devil.
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* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend she died because of a peanut allergy
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* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend Violence Fiend she died because of a peanut allergy
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* VillainProtagonist: [[BigBad Makima]] is the protagonist of this fic and for the majority of it she plans to traumatize Denji so that he will be vulnerable to her reincarnation's control.
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** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru's minds merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
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** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru's minds Yoru make a contract where they merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man Church and kills Nayuta instead.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man Church and kills Nayuta instead.Nayuta.]]
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** Makima does this numerous times to drive Denji to despair all so Nayuta can to control of him after her death.
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** As part of her breakdown in chapter 12 Makima does this numerous times decides to drive Denji use her powers to despair all so Nayuta cause as much meaningless suffering as she can to control of him after her death.in each loop.
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* TookALevelInBadass: In the timeline where Makima made Asa the war hybrid she went from socially awkward teenager to a more self-assured, and dangerous devil hunter.
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* TookALevelInBadass: In the timeline where Makima made Asa the war hybrid she went from socially awkward teenager to a more self-assured, confident, and dangerous devil hunter.
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* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 9 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship she had with him in the original timeline.
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* BadassDecay: As Makima's mind control powers are based on her feeling superior to others, she starts to lose these as she feels trapped in the loop while normal people are free.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 9 has Makimaconvincing recruiting Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship she had with him in the original timeline.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 9 has Makima
* ButtMonkey: The poor jogger whom Makima inflicts whatever sadistic command that comes to her head in chapter 12.
* FusionDance:
** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru's minds merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
** In chapter 8 [[spoiler: Asa and Yoru's minds merge so that they can survive Makima's first attack and save Denji.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man church and kills Nayuta instead.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man church Church and kills Nayuta instead.]]
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* LastStand: Various characters go head-to-toe with Makima to save Denji.
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* LastStand: Various characters go head-to-toe with fight Makima to save Denji.Denji in several different loops.
** Happens with Reze in chapter 6.
** Happens with Angel in chapter 7.
** Happens with Asa/Yoru in chapter 8.
** Happens with Reze in chapter 6.
** Happens with Angel in chapter 7.
** Happens with Asa/Yoru in chapter 8.
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** Chapter 11 has Makima arrange for Barem to become a member of Special Division 4.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Makima the all powerful control devil has to deal with being in a time loop where all of her actions will be undone unless she follows specific actions unknown to her.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Makima the all powerful control devil has goes from eagerly using the loop to deal with attempt to fufill her goals to breaking down over being stuck in a time loop where all of her actions will be undone unless she follows specific actions unknown to her.time.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Makima goes from coldly scheming to revive Chainsaw Man, to needlessly cruel due to being stuck in the loop, to wanting death, [[spoiler: to realizing she and Nayuta want to be loved.]]
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* CharacterDevelopment: Makima goes from coldly scheming to revive Chainsaw Man, to needlessly cruel due to being stuck in the loop, to wanting death, [[spoiler: to realizing she and Nayuta want to be loved.loved, and making sure her future incarnation grows up with a larger family.]]
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* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved one's who does not get a sole chapter focused on him.
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* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved one's ones who does not get a sole chapter focused on him.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing Nayuta instead.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing instead sides with Fami and the Chainsaw Man church and kills Nayuta instead.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: In the timeline where Makima made Asa the war hybrid she went from socially awkward teenager to a more self-assured, and dangerous devil hunter.
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* YanDere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.
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* YanDere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because so he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.could take care of them.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Makima goes from coldly scheming to revive Chainsaw Man, to needlessly cruel due to being stuck in the loop, to wanting death, [[spoiler: to realizing she and Nayuta want to be loved.]]
* DeathSeeker: After many failed loops Makima becomes this in chapter 12.
* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved one's who does not get a sole chapter focused on him.
* DeathSeeker: After many failed loops Makima becomes this in chapter 12.
* DemotedToExtra: Aki is the only one of Denji's loved one's who does not get a sole chapter focused on him.
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* HeroicWillpower: [[spoiler: The Angel Devil manages to resist Makima's attempts to control him in chapter 7.]]
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* HeroicWillpower: [[spoiler: HeroicWillpower:
** The Angel Devil manages to resist Makima's attempts to control him in chapter7.]]7.
** It was heavily implied to be happening with the Gun Fiend in the same chapter.
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Makima wants this though she lacks the self-awareness to realize this.
** The Angel Devil manages to resist Makima's attempts to control him in chapter
** It was heavily implied to be happening with the Gun Fiend in the same chapter.
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Makima wants this though she lacks the self-awareness to realize this.
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* MissExposition: The final chapter has [[spoiler: the Death Devil explaining how and why Makima was in the loop.]]
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* MissExposition: The final chapter has [[spoiler: the Death Devil Devil]] explaining how and why Makima was in the loop.]]
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** Another was making Denji into a movie star. According to death [[spoiler: Death]] it was funny
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** Another was making Denji into a movie star. According to death [[spoiler: Death]] it was funny
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** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his grooming and rape to bond or properly care for Nayuta.]]
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** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his grooming and rape to bond with or properly care for Nayuta.]]
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* SexForSolace: Happened between Denji and Asa in chapter 8 after Aki's death.
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* AnimalEyeSpy: Makima uses rats, birds, and insects to monitor Denji and make sure her plots are going according to plan.
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* AnimalEyeSpy: Makima uses rats, birds, and insects to monitor Denji her pawns and make sure her plots are going according to plan.plan.
* AntiHero: [[spoiler: After her character development Makima focuses on saving Denji's loved ones. However her ways to do so tend to leave them with trauma and it is explicitly stated she does not care about anyone who isn't in the group.]]
* AntiHero: [[spoiler: After her character development Makima focuses on saving Denji's loved ones. However her ways to do so tend to leave them with trauma and it is explicitly stated she does not care about anyone who isn't in the group.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: Makima the all powerful control devil has to deal with
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* BreakTheHaughty: Makima the all powerful control devil has to deal with being in a time loop where all of her actions will be undone unless she follows specific actions unknown to her.
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* EvilIsPetty: In chapter 12 as part of her breakdown after many failed loops, Makima starts to use her powers to inflict as much chaos and pain as she can before she gets caught, or killed.
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* EvilIsPetty: In chapter 12 as part of her breakdown after many failed loops, Makima starts to use her powers to inflict as much chaos and pain as she can before she gets caught, caught or killed.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: after realizing that Nayuta wants to be loved Makima starts to come up with plots to save Denji's loved ones.]]
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Makima tries to make the perfect scenario where she can revive Chainsaw Man.
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Makima tries to make the perfect scenario where she or Nayuta can revive Chainsaw Man.Man.
* MissExposition: The final chapter has [[spoiler: the Death Devil explaining how and why Makima was in the loop.]]
* MissExposition: The final chapter has [[spoiler: the Death Devil explaining how and why Makima was in the loop.]]
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** Another is making Denji into a tv star.
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** Another is was making Denji into a tv movie star. According to death [[spoiler: Death]] it was funny
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* ThePeepingTom: Makima uses her animal spies to watch Denji have sex with Reze and Asa in the timelines where she forced them to join Public Safety.
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* ThePeepingTom: Makima uses Through her animal spies to watch Makima watches Denji have sex with Reze and Asa in the timelines where she forced them to join Public Safety.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that the loop was caused by Nayuta making deals with multiple devils to prevent a bad future where her possessive nature played a part in Denji dying and the fufillment of Nostradomus' prophecy.]]
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that the loop was caused by Nayuta making deals with multiple devils to prevent a bad future where her possessive nature played a part in Denji dying and the fufillment of Nostradomus' Nostrodamus' prophecy.]]
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* TimeLoopFatigue: Chapter 12 and 13 have this with Makima executing increasingly nonsensical schemes, making critical errors, deciding to cause as much suffering as she can in each loop, and becoming suicidal in that order.
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* SuperFic: One of Makima's schemes in chapter 12 was turning Denji into a superhero. This led to the entire setting having a more superhero like tone.
* TimeLoopFatigue: Chapter 12and 13 have this with has Makima executing increasingly nonsensical schemes, making critical errors, deciding to cause as much suffering as she can in each loop, and becoming suicidal suicidal, in that order.
* TimeLoopFatigue: Chapter 12
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like another chance to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of..
This fic has unmarked spoilers for both Chainsaw Man Part 1 and Chainsaw Man Part 2
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like another chance to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of..
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** [[spoiler: After her character development Makima starts to come up with loops to prevent the deaths of Denji's loved ones.]]
** [[spoiler: The final loop ends with Makima not only saving Himeno, Angel, Aki, and Power, but freeing Reze from the Soviets and setting her up to befriend Asa at Fourth East High.]]
** [[spoiler: The final loop ends with Makima not only saving Himeno, Angel, Aki, and Power, but freeing Reze from the Soviets and setting her up to befriend Asa at Fourth East High.]]
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** Besides killing Aki and Power Makima managed to destroy Denji's self-worth in chapter 4.
** The loop in chapter 10 where Makima not only kills Denji's loved ones but [[spoiler: rapes him.]]
** The loop in chapter 10 where Makima not only kills Denji's loved ones but [[spoiler: rapes him.]]
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** Besides killing Aki and Power his canonical suffering Makima managed to destroy destroy's Denji's self-worth in chapter 4.
** The loop in chapter 10 where Makimanot only kills makes Denji's loved ones but suffering even worse by grooming and [[spoiler: rapes raping]] him.]]
** The loop in chapter 10 where Makima
* BreakTheHaughty: Makima the all powerful control devil has to deal with
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: For most of the fic}]] Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless even when it can't benefit them.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: For most of the fic}]] fic]] Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless even when it can't benefit them.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa, Denji still has a weapon that slows down Makima's regenerative abilities.
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* InSpiteOfANail: InSpiteOfANail:
** Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa, Denji still has a weapon that slows down Makima's regenerativeabilities.abilities.
** Yoru always merges with Asa if the latter isn't killed.
** Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa, Denji still has a weapon that slows down Makima's regenerative
** Yoru always merges with Asa if the latter isn't killed.
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** Makima does this numerous times to drive Denji to despair all so Nayuta can manipulate him after her death.
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** Makima does this numerous times to drive Denji to despair all so Nayuta can manipulate to control of him after her death.
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* PeepingTom: Makima watches Denji have sex with Reze and Asa in the timelines where she forced them to join Public Safety.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon Asa in chapter 3.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon Asa in chapter 3.
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* PeepingTom: ThePeepingTom: Makima watches uses her animal spies to watch Denji have sex with Reze and Asa in the timelines where she forced them to join Public Safety.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon poor Asa in chapter 3.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon poor Asa in chapter 3.
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* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend she died to a peanut allergy
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* TimeLoopFatigue: Chapter 12 and 13 have this with Makima executing increasingly nonsensical schemes, making critical errors, deciding to cause as much suffering as she can in each loop, and becoming suicidal in that order.
* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend she diedto because of a peanut allergy
* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend she died
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** In chapter 6 Reze manages to enjoy a loving relationship with Denji and has some happiness before Makima kills her.
** In the Public Safety Asa loop she doesn't have to deal with Crambon's death, she grows into an accomplished devil hunter, and she has a loving relationship with Denji, before her death.
** In the Public Safety Asa loop she doesn't have to deal with Crambon's death, she grows into an accomplished devil hunter, and she has a loving relationship with Denji, before her death.
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** The loop in chapter 10 where Makima not only kills Denji's loved ones but [[spoiler: rapes him.]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless even when it can't benefit them.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: For most of the fic}]] Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless even when it can't benefit them.
* NoodleIncident:
**One of Makima's more nonsensical plots was giving Denji a harem. All we know is that it did not end well.
** Another is making Denji into a tv star.
**One of Makima's more nonsensical plots was giving Denji a harem. All we know is that it did not end well.
** Another is making Denji into a tv star.
* PeepingTom: Makima watches Denji have sex with Reze and Asa in the timelines where she forced them to join Public Safety.
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno being Denji and Power's guardian.
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* RoleSwapAU: RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno being Denji and Power's guardian.
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* UndignifiedDeath: In the timeline where Kobeni became the violence fiend she died to a peanut allergy
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*AdaptationalAngstDowngrade:
** In chapter 6 Reze manages to enjoy a loving relationship with Denji and has some happiness before Makima kills her.
** In the Public Safety Asa loop she doesn't have to deal with Crambon's death, she grows into an accomplished devil hunter, and she has a loving relationship with Denji, before her death.
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
*
** In chapter 6 Reze manages to enjoy a loving relationship with Denji and has some happiness before Makima kills her.
** In the Public Safety Asa loop she doesn't have to deal with Crambon's death, she grows into an accomplished devil hunter, and she has a loving relationship with Denji, before her death.
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
*
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** Chapter 5 where the loop has Aki die against the Katana Fiend and Himeno becomes Denji and Power's guardian and older sibling figure.
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** Chapter 5 where the loop has Aki die against the Katana Fiend Man and Himeno becomes Denji and Power's guardian and older sibling figure.
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* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship she had with him in the original timeline.
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* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 9 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship she had with him in the original timeline.
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* Bookends: The first word of each chapter and loop is Makima opened her eyes. [[spoiler: The last line from her viewpoint is Makima closed her eyes and the fic's last line is Nayuta opened her eyes.]]
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* Bookends: BookEnds: The first word of each chapter and loop is Makima opened her eyes. [[spoiler: The last line from her viewpoint is Makima closed her eyes and the fic's last line is Nayuta opened her eyes.]]
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
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* DontFearTheReaper: [[spoiler: The Death Devil greets Makima after she ends the loops, and congratulates her for saving the lives of Himeno, Angel, Aki and Power, and setting up for Reze and Asa to meet Denji in the future. She then explains that she does not want to see humanity destroyed and supports devil's who share that viewpoint.]]
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. [[spoiler: Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.]]
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. [[spoiler: Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.]]
* HeroicWillpower: [[spoiler: The Angel Devil manages to resist Makima's attempts to control him in chapter 7.]]
* RelationshipUpgrade:
** Happens between Denji and Reze in chapter 6.
** Happens between Denji and Asa in chapter 8.
** Happens between Denji and Reze in chapter 6.
** Happens between Denji and Asa in chapter 8.
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* Yandere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.
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* Yandere: YanDere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Makima is freed from the loops after she prevents the deaths of Himeno, the Angel Devil, Aki, and Power and let's Denji kill her. Nayuta will be raised in a loving extended family. The end of the world may come but Denji and his friends will be in a better emotional state to try and prevent it.]]
* Bookends: The first word of each chapter and loop is Makima opened her eyes. [[spoiler: The last line from her viewpoint is Makima closed her eyes and the fic's last line is Nayuta opened her eyes.]]
* Bookends: The first word of each chapter and loop is Makima opened her eyes. [[spoiler: The last line from her viewpoint is Makima closed her eyes and the fic's last line is Nayuta opened her eyes.]]
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* EvilIsPetty: As part of her breakdown after many failed loops, Makima starts to use her powers to inflict as much chaos and pain as she can before she gets caught.
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* EvilIsPetty: As In chapter 12 as part of her breakdown after many failed loops, Makima starts to use her powers to inflict as much chaos and pain as she can before she gets caught.caught, or killed.
* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Makima tries to make the perfect scenario where she can revive Chainsaw Man.
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** [[spoiler: The final loop has Makima prevent the deaths of Himeno, the Angel Devil, Aki, Power and Crambon.]]
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** [[spoiler: The final loop has Makima prevent the deaths of Himeno, the Angel Devil, Aki, Power and Crambon.]]]]
* Yandere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.
* Yandere: Besides her canonical obsession with Chainsaw Man Makima also shows signs of this in chapter 10 where she enjoys killing Aki and Power because Denji refused to go with Enoshima with her because he was too busy caring for them after their time in Hell.
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* LastStand: Various characters go head-to-toe with Makima to save Denji.
* ManipulativeBastard: Makima manipulates Denji, Public Safety, and various Federal governments effortlessly to bring her schemes to fruition.
* ManipulativeBastard: Makima manipulates Denji, Public Safety, and various Federal governments effortlessly to bring her schemes to fruition.
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Makima uses
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: LastStand: Various characters go head-to-toe with Makima uses to save Denji.
* ManipulativeBastard: Makima manipulates Denji, Public Safety, and various Federal governments effortlessly to bring her schemes to fruition.
* ManipulativeBastard: Makima manipulates Denji, Public Safety, and various Federal governments effortlessly to bring her schemes to fruition.
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like another chance to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of him.
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like another chance to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of him.
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* AnotherMansTerror: In Chapter 11 [[spoiler: Makima wakes up feeling the sensation of Barem burning Nayuta alive.]]
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* GoneHorriblyRight: In Chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church after her death.]]
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in Chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing Nayuta instead.]]
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in Chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing Nayuta instead.]]
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* FightingFromTheInside:
** Happens with Gun Fiend Aki in chapter 7.
** Happens in chapter 8 with Asa trying to prevent Yoru from killing Denji.
* GoneHorriblyRight: InChapter chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So [[spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church Church after her death.]]
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan inChapter chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing Nayuta instead.]]
** Happens with Gun Fiend Aki in chapter 7.
** Happens in chapter 8 with Asa trying to prevent Yoru from killing Denji.
* GoneHorriblyRight: In
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In chapter 7 Kishibe kills Gun Fiend Aki just when Denji possibly got through to him. This ends up breaking the latter's trust in public safety.
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Makima uses
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In chapter 7 Kishibe kills Gun Fiend Aki just when Denji possibly got through to him. This ends up breaking the latter's trust inpublic safety.Public Safety.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In chapter 7 Kishibe kills Gun Fiend Aki just when Denji possibly got through to him. This ends up breaking the latter's trust in
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** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond or properly care for Nayuta.]]
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** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima grooming and rape to bond or properly care for Nayuta.]]
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* RoleSwapAU: Chapter 5 has Aki being the one killed in the gun attack on Division 4 and Himeno being Denji and Power's guardian.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: The final chapter reveals that the loop was caused by Nayuta making deals with multiple devils to prevent a bad future where her possessive nature played a part in Denji dying and the fufillment of Nostradomus' prophecy.]]
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" Where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like a great chance to
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" Where where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. What seems like a great another chance to
to revive Chainsaw Man ends when it turns out she cannot kill Denji without the loop restarting. She then decides that the next best plan is to leave Denji in the most vulnerable mental state that her reincarnation Nayuta can take control of him.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless.selfless even when it can't benefit them.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In chapter 7 Kishibe kills Gun Fiend Aki just when Denji possibly got through to him. This ends up breaking the latter's trust in public safety.
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** At the end of chapter 4 Denji neglects Nayuta all so he can be Chainsaw Man.
** At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond with Nayuta.
** At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond with Nayuta.
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** At the end of chapter 4 show Denji dedicates himself to being Chainsaw Man as much as possible and neglects Nayuta all so he can be Chainsaw Man.
as a result.
** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bondwith or properly care for Nayuta.]]
* PastLifeMemories: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] Makima gains the memories of each timeline's Nayuta when the loop resets.
** [[spoiler: At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond
* PastLifeMemories: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] Makima gains the memories of each timeline's Nayuta when the loop resets.
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* Spared by the adaptation. Since Asa is turned into the War Hybrid in chapter 8 she ends up taking Crambon with her to Public Safety before he can be killed.
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* Spared by the adaptation. Since SparedByTheAdaptation.
**Since Asa is turned into the War Hybrid in chapter 8 she ends up takingCrambon [[CuteKitten Crambon]] with her to Public Safety before he can be killed.killed.
** [[spoiler: The final loop has Makima prevent the deaths of Himeno, the Angel Devil, Aki, Power and Crambon.]]
**Since Asa is turned into the War Hybrid in chapter 8 she ends up taking
** [[spoiler: The final loop has Makima prevent the deaths of Himeno, the Angel Devil, Aki, Power and Crambon.]]
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" Where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji. \n What seems like a great chance to
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** Chapter 6 has Makima capture Reze and have her take Power's place in Special Division 4 and the Hayakawa household.
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** Chapter 6 has Makima capture Reze and have force her to take Power's place in Special Division 4 and the Hayakawa household.
* AnimalEyeSpy: Makima uses rats, birds, and insects to monitor Denji and make sure her plots are going according to plan.
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* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship with him in the original timeline.
* DoubleStandardFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart.
* DoubleStandardFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart.
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* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship she had with him in the original timeline.
*DoubleStandardFemaleOnMale: BreakThemByTalking: Makima's plan in chapter 4 is to destroy Denji's self-esteem by convincing him his only worth is as Chainsaw Man's host.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless.
*
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart. She also is unable to understand why various individuals are willing to act selfless.
* LastStand: Various characters go head-to-toe with Makima to save Denji.
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* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Makima gains the memories but not the feelings of Nayuta after each loop.
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* ParentalNeglect:
** At the end of chapter 4 Denji neglects Nayuta all so he can be Chainsaw Man.
** At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond with Nayuta.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon Asa in chapter 3.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Makima gains the memories but not the feelings of Nayuta after eachloop.loop.
* Spared by the adaptation. Since Asa is turned into the War Hybrid in chapter 8 she ends up taking Crambon with her to Public Safety before he can be killed.
** At the end of chapter 4 Denji neglects Nayuta all so he can be Chainsaw Man.
** At the end of chapter 10 Denji is too traumatized from his abuse from Makima to bond with Nayuta.
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: It's all but stated that Makima inflicted this upon Asa in chapter 3.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Makima gains the memories but not the feelings of Nayuta after each
* Spared by the adaptation. Since Asa is turned into the War Hybrid in chapter 8 she ends up taking Crambon with her to Public Safety before he can be killed.
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* ArcWords: Makima opened her eyes.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji.
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* ArcWords: ArcWords:
-> Makima opened her eyes.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship with him in the original timeline.
* DoubleStandardFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart.
-> Makima opened her eyes.
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji. She ends up developing the same friendship with him in the original timeline.
* DoubleStandardFemaleOnMale: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Makima's grooming and rape of Denji in chapter 10 are portrayed as horrifying.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Makima is unable to understand that Nayuta wants Denji to love her and not to take Pochita's heart.
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* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop. She also has memories of her life as Nayuta after each loop.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Makima's plan in Chapter 11 is to have Barem be Denji's only surviving colleague from Special Division 4 so he can convince Nayuta to take over Denji. [[spoiler: He ends up killing Nayuta instead.]]
* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop. She alsohas gains the memories of her life as Nayuta after each loop.
* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop. She also
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* ManipulativeBastard: Makima manipulates Denji, Public Safety, and various Federal governments effortlessly to bring her schemes to fruition.
* KickTheDog:
** Makima does this numerous times to drive Denji to despair all so Nayuta can manipulate him after her death.
** In chapter 11 Barem [[spoiler: kills Nayuta in front of Denji just for fun.]]
* KickTheDog:
** Makima does this numerous times to drive Denji to despair all so Nayuta can manipulate him after her death.
** In chapter 11 Barem [[spoiler: kills Nayuta in front of Denji just for fun.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearence: AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:
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** Chapter 6 has Makima capture Reze and have her take Power's place in Special Division 4 and the Hayakawa household.
** Chapter 8 has Makima implant Yoru in Asa and coerces the girl into becoming a Public Safety agent. She ends up replacing Power in the Hayakawa household.
** Chapter 6 has Makima capture Reze and have her take Power's place in Special Division 4 and the Hayakawa household.
** Chapter 8 has Makima implant Yoru in Asa and coerces the girl into becoming a Public Safety agent. She ends up replacing Power in the Hayakawa household.
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--> Chapter 5 where the loop has Aki die against the Katana Fiend and Himeno becomes Denji and Power's guardian and older sibling figure.
--> In Chapter 8 because Asa is accompanying Denji on his walk Reze decides to act as a friend to the two of them instead of seducing Denji
* ArcWords: Makima opened her eyes
* GoneHorriblyRight: In Chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church after her death]]
* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop.
* InSpiteOfANail: Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa Denji still has a weapon that damages down Makima's regenerative abilities.
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** In Chapter 8 because Asa is accompanying Denji on his walk Reze decides to act as a friend to the two of them instead of seducing Denji
* ArcWords: Makima opened her
* BecomingTheMask: Chapter 10 has Makima convincing Power to act as her double agent to betray Denji.
* EvilIsPetty: As part of her breakdown after many failed loops, Makima starts to use her powers to inflict as much chaos and pain as she can before she gets caught.
* GoneHorriblyRight: In Chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church after her
* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop. She also has memories of her life as Nayuta after each loop.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: The end of chapter 6 shows Denji making futile efforts to get himself and Nayuta out from under Public Safety's surveillance so they can live a peaceful life.
* InSpiteOfANail: Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Makima gains the memories but not the feelings of Nayuta after each loop.
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* GroundhogDayLoop: Makima is trapped in one that starts the day before she meets Denji. Committing suicide or Denji permanently dying resets the loop.
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"[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50425567/chapters/127407097 Wishful Thinking]]" is a {{Manga/Chainsaw Man}} Fanfic written by "[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Toggle1/pseuds/Toggle1 Toggle1]]" Where Makima finds herself stuck in a time loop that starts the day before she meets Denji.
This fic has unmarked spoilers for both Chainsaw Man Part 1 and Chainsaw Man Part 2
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!! This fanfiction provides examples of:
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
--> Chapter 5 where the loop has Aki die against the Katana Fiend and Himeno becomes Denji and Power's guardian and older sibling figure.
--> In Chapter 8 because Asa is accompanying Denji on his walk Reze decides to act as a friend to the two of them instead of seducing Denji
* ArcWords: Makima opened her eyes
* GoneHorriblyRight: In Chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church after her death]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa Denji still has a weapon that damages down Makima's regenerative abilities.
This fic has unmarked spoilers for both Chainsaw Man Part 1 and Chainsaw Man Part 2
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!! This fanfiction provides examples of:
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
--> Chapter 5 where the loop has Aki die against the Katana Fiend and Himeno becomes Denji and Power's guardian and older sibling figure.
--> In Chapter 8 because Asa is accompanying Denji on his walk Reze decides to act as a friend to the two of them instead of seducing Denji
* ArcWords: Makima opened her eyes
* GoneHorriblyRight: In Chapter 7 Makima succeeds in destroying Denji's trust in public safety. [[Spoiler:So much so that he allies with the Chainsaw Man church after her death]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Even in the timelines where Power has been replaced by Reze or Asa Denji still has a weapon that damages down Makima's regenerative abilities.