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* AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
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* AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and [[ClosetPunishment used to lock her in the wine cellar cellar]] when she was younger.
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* DomesticAbuse: Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
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* DomesticAbuse: Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss BelligerentSexualTension-filled relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
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* AbusiveParents:
** Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
** Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
** Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
** Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
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**AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger. \n** Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: It takes a while for Karen to associate Jack with her childhood friend.
* ChildhoodFriends: Ann and Karen have been best friends for years.
* ChildhoodFriends: Ann and Karen have been best friends for years.
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* DomesticAbuse: Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
* ForgottenFirstMeeting: It takes a while for Karen to associate Jack with her childhood friend.
* ForgottenFirstMeeting: It takes a while for Karen to associate Jack with her childhood friend.
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* AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
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* AbusiveParents: AbusiveParents:
** Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
** Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
* TheAlcoholic: Both Karen and her father Gotz. By the end, Karen's sobered up to the point where she no longer drinks to get drunk, but she's still a fan of wine.
** Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
** Ann and Cliff have a SlapSlapKiss relationship that frequently turns abusive. They love each other, but they're always fighting and Cliff often ends up bruised as a result.
* TheAlcoholic: Both Karen and her father Gotz. By the end, Karen's sobered up to the point where she no longer drinks to get drunk, but she's still a fan of wine.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: It takes a while for Karen to associate Jack with her childhood friend.
* ChildhoodFriends: Ann and Karen have been best friends for years.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Between Karen and Jack. They met as kids and then met again as adults.
* ChildhoodFriends: Ann and Karen have been best friends for years.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Between Karen and Jack. They met as kids and then met again as adults.
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* AlcoholParents: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
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* AlcoholParents: AlcoholicParent: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
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''Wine Red no Kokoro'' is a ''VideoGame/HarvestMoon64'' fanfic from the POV of Karen. It can be read [[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1412875/1/Wine-Red-no-Kokoro here]].
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''Wine Red no Kokoro'' is a ''VideoGame/HarvestMoon64'' fanfic from the POV of Karen. It can be read [[[https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1412875/1/Wine-Red-no-Kokoro here]].
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* AlcoholParent: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Eve died.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Eve died.
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* AlcoholParent: AlcoholParents: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Evedied.died.
* ChildhoodMarriagePromise: Jack and Karen met when they were five. They became friends and promised to get married as adults.
* ShoutOut: The title comes from a Japanese song.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Eve
* ChildhoodMarriagePromise: Jack and Karen met when they were five. They became friends and promised to get married as adults.
* ShoutOut: The title comes from a Japanese song.
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Karen is a nineteen year old who lives in the small rural town of Flowerbud Village. Between helping out on her family's dying vineyard and working a part-time job at the local bar, Karen's life is less than pleasant. She often dreams of running off to the city and becoming a dancer. However, her melancholy life changes when a young man around her age arrives in town to take over his grandfather's old farm.
''Wine Red no Kokoro'' is a ''VideoGame/HarvestMoon64'' fanfic from the POV of Karen. It can be read [[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1412875/1/Wine-Red-no-Kokoro here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
* AlcoholParent: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Eve died.
''Wine Red no Kokoro'' is a ''VideoGame/HarvestMoon64'' fanfic from the POV of Karen. It can be read [[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1412875/1/Wine-Red-no-Kokoro here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents: Gotz is verbally abusive towards Karen. He's never hit her, but he's always angry and used to lock her in the wine cellar when she was younger.
* AlcoholParent: Because of his failing vineyard, Gotz has turned to alcohol over the years. He used to be a "happy drunk", but he's since become quick-tempered.
* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Karen was born on the day her grandmother Eve died.
