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* IronicName: Qwark's snagglebeast is named ''Mister Cuddlewumpas.''
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* IronicName: Qwark's snagglebeast Snagglebeast is named ''Mister Cuddlewumpas.''
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* IronicName: The snagglebeast is named ''Mister Cuddlewumpas.''
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* IronicName: The Qwark's snagglebeast is named ''Mister Cuddlewumpas.''
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Dr. Nefarious is not a villain in this story, and in fact is still with the Galactic Rangers. This is likely due to Qwark being more reasonable and less of a jerkass- as in the 2016 game, it was Qwark's and the other Rangers' mistreatment of Nefarious that caused him to eventually snap and turn to villainy.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Dr. Nefarious is not a villain in this story, and in fact is still with the Galactic Rangers. This is likely due to Qwark being more reasonable and less of a jerkass- as in the 2016 game, it was Qwark's and the other Rangers' mistreatment of Nefarious that caused him to eventually snap and turn to villainy.
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* VulgarHumor: There is a lot of this throughout the story- from Widget having to dress up as a French Maid for one mission (and her partner trying to look up her skirt more than once) to this story's version of the Quick Select having multiple models that are named in a way that results in the abbreviation A.S.S.
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* VulgarHumor: There is a lot of this throughout the story- from Widget having to dress up as losing her shirt during a French Maid for one mission battle (and not even realizing until it was pointed out to her partner trying to look up her skirt more than once) ''after'' she was interviewed on live TV) to this story's version of the Quick Select having multiple models that are named in a way that results in the abbreviation A.S.S.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Inverted. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his offensive sexual comments way too far- and while he was on the air, too.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Inverted. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his makes offensive sexual comments way too far- and about her multiple times while he was on the air, too.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Played with. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his sexual comments way too far- and while he was on the air, too.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Played with. Inverted. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his offensive sexual comments way too far- and while he was on the air, too.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: The Fongoid Grimroth Razz's adopted children are Widget, a Lombax, and Clank, a defect warbot.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: The Fongoid Grimroth Razz's adopted children are Widget, Widget is a Lombax, and Clank, her brother Clank is a defect warbot.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Played with. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his sexual comments way too far- and on the air, too.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Played with. While Clank is the younger sibling, that doesn't stop him from defending Widget's honor when Dallas takes his sexual comments way too far- and while he was on the air, too.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget, and- in Dallas' case- also to Juanita. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget and Juanita don't reciprocate the feelings- if anything, Widget hates all of them (while Juanita just hates Dallas), and with good reason.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget, and- in Dallas' case- also to Juanita. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget and Juanita don't reciprocate the feelings- if anything, Widget hates all of them (while Juanita just hates just Dallas), and with good reason.
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own, filled with many unpredictable twists and turns. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise start of the story is similar, similar to the game, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own, filled with many unpredictable twists and turns. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not reciprocate the feelings- if anything, she hates all of them, and with good reason.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. Widget, and- in Dallas' case- also to Juanita. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not and Juanita don't reciprocate the feelings- if anything, she Widget hates all of them, them (while Juanita just hates Dallas), and with good reason.
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own- what with the plot being twisted in unpredictable ways. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own- what own, filled with the plot being twisted in many unpredictable ways.twists and turns. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own- what with the Novalis arc turning out to be very different from its original/reboot countpart, and Drek back to being the main villain. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own- what with the Novalis arc turning out to be very different from its original/reboot countpart, and Drek back to plot being the main villain.twisted in unpredictable ways. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and- to a lesser degree- Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not reciprocate the feelings. If anything, she hates all of them.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and- to a lesser degree- and Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not reciprocate the feelings. If feelings- if anything, she hates all of them.
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* ActionGirl: Widget gets into plenty of fights throughout the story, and comes out on top. She even charges into battle while still in her pajamas.
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* ActionGirl: Widget gets into plenty of fights throughout the story, and comes out on top. She even charges into battle while still ''still'' in her pajamas.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Possibly due to the story having been started prior to the release of the trailer revealing Rivet's name, the female Lombax's name in this story is instead Widget.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Qwark and Nefarious, instead of being enemies like they are in the games, are actually able to work together- although this was not always the case.
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*AdaptationalHeroism: Dr. Nefarious is not a villain in this story, and in fact is still with the Galactic Rangers. This is likely due to Qwark being more reasonable and less of a jerkass- as in the 2016 game, it was Qwark's and the other Rangers' mistreatment of Nefarious that caused him to eventually snap and turn to villainy.
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* GirlsWithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there, due to them having been pre-designated.
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* GirlsWithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where this, with her arsenal of weapons that is so big that she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there, due to them having been pre-designated.
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* GirlswithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there, due to them having been pre-designated.
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* GirlswithGuns: GirlsWithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there, due to them having been pre-designated.
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* GirlswithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there, due to them being pre-designated slots.
having been pre-designated.
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* GirlswithGuns: Widget is very much this- to the point where she's putting weapons in slots of her A.S.S. that don't belong there.
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* ActionGirl: Widget gets into plenty of fights throughout the story, and comes out on top.
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* ActionGirl: Widget gets into plenty of fights throughout the story, and comes out on top.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Mr. Micron gets Widget's name wrong twice- first calling her "Wingding" and then, not even five minutes later, "Gidget." Widget calmly corrects him the first time, but gets fired up when he does it again, and loudly spells out her name letter by letter- only for him to whack her on the head with his cane for her trouble.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Mr. Micron gets Widget's name wrong twice- first calling her "Wingding" and then, not even five less than two minutes later, "Gidget." Widget calmly corrects him the first time, but gets fired up when he does it again, and loudly spells out her name letter by letter- only for him to whack her on the head with his cane for her trouble.
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*AccidentalMisnaming: Mr. Micron gets Widget's name wrong twice- first calling her "Wingding" and then, not even five minutes later, "Gidget." Widget calmly corrects him the first time, but gets fired up when he does it again, and loudly spells out her name letter by letter- only for him to whack her on the head with his cane for her trouble.
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Playing out as a WhatIf version of the [[VideoGame/RatchetAndClank2016 Ratchet & Clank (2016)]] game, ''Widget & Clank: Lombax Bebop'' is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction written by Tangent. The fic has the then mysterious female Lombax Rivet- who in this story is known as ''Widget-'' taking Ratchet's place as the main protagonist. While the premise is similar, this fic quickly develops a life and story of its own- what with the Novalis arc turning out to be very different from its original/reboot countpart, and Drek back to being the main villain. The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13787622/1/Widget-Clank-Lombax-Bebop here]].
!!Features examples of:
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and- to a lesser degree- Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not reciprocate the feelings. If anything, she hates all of them.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Qwark is portrayed as being somewhat more intelligent than his game counterpart, and more open to listening to others' advice.
* VulgarHumor: There is a lot of this throughout the story- from Widget having to dress up as a French Maid for one mission (and her partner trying to look up her skirt more than once) to this story's version of the Quick Select having multiple models that are named in a way that results in the abbreviation A.S.S.
!!Features examples of:
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Little Tony, Spanner, and- to a lesser degree- Dallas are ''very'' much this to Widget. It's clear through the narrative so far that Widget does not reciprocate the feelings. If anything, she hates all of them.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Qwark is portrayed as being somewhat more intelligent than his game counterpart, and more open to listening to others' advice.
* VulgarHumor: There is a lot of this throughout the story- from Widget having to dress up as a French Maid for one mission (and her partner trying to look up her skirt more than once) to this story's version of the Quick Select having multiple models that are named in a way that results in the abbreviation A.S.S.