Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Fanfic / WhatAboutWitchQueen

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* TheGhost: Felix Drachner has never been seen by any POV, only heard once. Baron Madsen outright says that when he was thirty six, he "dropped off the surface of Earth" - and Tamperan Secret Service has been searching for him for about a decade, implying he has been TheGhost for at least this long.

Changed: 116

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** Drachner's goal so far seems to be to cause as much chaos as possible.

to:

** Drachner's goal so far seems to be to cause as much chaos as possible. [[spoiler: He wants to take over Weselton, Arendelle and Corona so that he'd control the entire Inner Sea region.]]

Added: 300

Changed: 162

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* OhCrap: Hakan Madsen has this reaction when he realizes that [[spoiler: the new guard posted by Elsa's door that night is most likely an assassin sent to kill the queen.]]

to:

* OhCrap: Three times in "''Steel and ice''":
**
Hakan Madsen has this reaction when he realizes that [[spoiler: the new guard posted by Elsa's door that night is most likely an assassin sent to kill the queen.]]]]
** The assassin visibly starts to panic when [[spoiler:Elsa refuses to die despite being decapitated and having her brain destroyed.]]

Added: 891

Changed: 10

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Meyer's captain]] sacrifices himself so that the scouts can escape.



* IdiotBall: King (prince?) Charles of Weselton seems to have caught it when Kai and Kristoff arrived. Honestly. He's [[spoiler:at war]] with the queen who can control ice, he knows what happened to Hans, and he knows that Elsa's patience has it's limits. And he still prolongs the negotiations to get better terms and claims that Elsa's ''weak''. His own son calls him out on this.

to:

* IdiotBall: King (prince?) Prince Charles of Weselton seems to have caught it when Kai and Kristoff arrived. Honestly. He's [[spoiler:at war]] with the queen who can control ice, he knows what happened to Hans, and he knows that Elsa's patience has it's limits. And he still prolongs the negotiations to get better terms and claims that Elsa's ''weak''. His own son calls him out on this.


Added DiffLines:

* NighInvulnerability: As it turns out, [[spoiler:Queen Elsa]] can survive strangling, spine-cutting, destroying the brain, decapitation and repetitive stabbing. Madsen and assassin sent to kill this person speculate that only stopping the heart would work.


Added DiffLines:

* RasputinianDeath: Taken to the extreme and [[spoiler:subverted in the last second for Elsa.]] First, the assassin tries to cut the spine. It doesn't work. Then he pushes the knife [[EyeScream through the eye]] and destroys the brain. Somehow, to no effect. He then cuts the head off ''and the target is still alive''. He smashes the skull and brain, which doesn't work either. Finally, he realizes that he has to destroy the heart, [[spoiler: but then Elsa manages to kill him, impaling herself in the process. She survives this, too.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* AwakeningTheSleepingGiant: The Royal Council fears that this is what Drachner will do [[spoiler: - that his takeover of Arendelle, Weselton and Corona will end up pissing off Tampere so much that the giant empire will steamroll them]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* MassOhCrap: The Royal Council when they realize the full extent of Drachner's plans.


Added DiffLines:

* OhCrap: Hakan Madsen has this reaction when he realizes that [[spoiler: the new guard posted by Elsa's door that night is most likely an assassin sent to kill the queen.]]


Added DiffLines:

* OverlyLongName: "Keisarillinen Vartiointipalvelut", the Imperial Secret Service of Tampere. The author notes that those are actual Finnish words.

Added: 338

Changed: 3

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BedroomAdulteryScene: Twice.

to:

* BedroomAdulteryScene: Twice.Thrice.


Added DiffLines:

** [[spoiler:Prince Eric]] finds out about Margaret and Hunter when he overhears it in ''Spying for dummies''.


Added DiffLines:

* FollowTheLeader: in-universe, Kai mentions briefly that young ladies in Arendelle started to dress in the same style Elsa does (which is more than a bit revealing compared to their usual attire), to men's considerable chargin.

Added: 252

Changed: 88

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BerserkButton: Please, don't threaten Anna when Kristoff's nearby. Don't even suggest threatening Anna.

to:

* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
**
Please, don't threaten Anna when Kristoff's nearby. Don't even suggest threatening Anna.Anna.
** Both Friedrich and Anna are prone to outbursts of hate whenever they have some news about Hans, although it's more [[UnstoppableRage visible]] with Friedrich.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* BerserkButton: Please, don't threaten Anna when Kristoff's nearby. Don't even suggest threatening Anna.

Added: 201

Changed: 3

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ItIsDehumanizing: Oddly enough, used on a ship - Ferdinand refers to his ''Northern Wind'' as "she" while Hauser calls the ship "it", showing his contempt (or jealousy) for prince's shining command.



* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Hauser and most of the navy on Westerguard is in it because he wants to stick it to the king.

to:

* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Hauser and most of the navy on Westerguard is in it because he wants they want to stick it to the king.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* HandicappedBadass: Ferdinand is still very capable fighter after losing his sword hand.

to:

* HandicappedBadass: Ferdinand is still very capable fighter after losing loses his sword hand.right hand to a cannonball, which doesn't stop him from surviving in icy cold water in the middle of the storm, finding a small cave where he can hide and climbing out of the water - all before he finds something he can stop bleeding with. Later, he deals with two men attacking him with little problem.



* RedOniBlueOni: Generals Potter (red) and Windsor (blue), as well as their opponents, generals Kristiani (red) and Olafsen (blue), although in latter case it's more underplayed.

to:

* RedOniBlueOni: Generals Potter (red) (red, with MoreDakka approach) and Windsor (blue), (blue and sneaky), as well as their opponents, generals Kristiani (red) (red and "let's strike now!") and Olafsen (blue), (blue, "this might be a trap"), although in latter case it's more underplayed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* RedOniBlueOni: Generals Potter (red) and Windsor (blue), as well as their opponents, generals Kristiani (red) and Olafsen (blue), although in latter case it's more underplayed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None



to:

----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* BadGuyBar: ''The Red Boar'', which, apart from being a bar where society's worst meet, also functions as Drachner's HQ in Weselton. Kristoff even outright calls it "a bad-guy bar".


Added DiffLines:

* HandicappedBadass: Ferdinand is still very capable fighter after losing his sword hand.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* YourCheatingHeart: Eric's wife (and Hans' sister) is cheating on him with colonel Hunter.

to:

* YourCheatingHeart: Eric's wife (and Hans' sister) is cheating on him with colonel Hunter. She might also cheat on him with Felix Drachner, although it's not confirmed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* OlderThanTheyLook: Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, is said to look like elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.

to:

* OlderThanTheyLook: Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, Kai is said mentioned to look like elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.much younger than his twenty five years.



* YoungerThanTheyLook: Kai is mentioned to look much younger than his twenty five years.

to:

* YoungerThanTheyLook: Kai Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, is mentioned said to look much younger than his twenty five years.like elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.

Added: 619

Changed: 635

Removed: 150

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.

to:

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.



* AlliterativeName: Andreas Andersen. Bjorn Berg.

to:

* AlliterativeName: Andreas Andersen. Bjorn Berg. George Gardner.



* EvilPrince: Michael, even moreso than Hans.

to:

* EvilPrince: Michael, even moreso than Hans. He wants to take over the Isles and has no qualms about murdering his own brother or sending eleven-year-own girl to almost certain death.
* ExpansionPackWorld: Tampere Empire and Confederacy appear on the world map. Southern Isles are also examined in much closer detail than in the film.



* PretextForWar: For both Weselton and Arendelle armies, the shooting incident between scouts on the border.

to:

* PlayingPossum: Twice.
** In more gory situation, Nexø crawls into pile of dead bodies so that advancing Weselton cavalry won't notice him.
** There's a Weselton cavalier called Gardner who pretends to be dead so that Arendellans catching survivors would stop pursuing him. [[spoiler:In the end, it works.]]
* PretextForWar: For both Weselton and Arendelle armies, the shooting incident between scouts on the border. The entire situations that enabled it was engineered by two separate schemes.



* StraightGay: If he hadn't implied that, you wouldn't guess Ferdinand is gay.

to:

* StraightGay: If he hadn't implied that, you wouldn't guess Ferdinand is gay. His surprised reaction to Anna being completely okay with his orientation implies that this might the safer way in this 'verse.



* UncannyValley: In-universe, most people feel distinctly uneasy in presence of snow horses.

to:

* UncannyValley: In-universe, most people feel distinctly uneasy in presence of snow horses. Kristoff outright calls them creepy.



* WarIsHell: The war between Arendelle and Weselton is definitely shown this way, especially in Nexø's POV sequences.

to:

* WarIsHell: The war between Arendelle and Weselton is definitely shown this way, especially in Nexø's POV sequences. Casualties are horrible, people fight not only on swords and crossbows, but also with ''teeth and nails'', TheChainsOfCommanding weight heavily on some characters and there are some gory moments.



* ExpansionPackWorld: Tampere Empire and Confederacy appear on the world map. Southern Isles are also examined in much closer detail than in the film.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* GratuitousGerman: Ferdinand sometimes has outbursts of German (which in-story is Islander language), mostly when it's Anna's POV and he switches to his native tongue. He also rambles in Islander when he's raving and has no idea that the person he speaks to doesn't know the language.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** Ferdinand is a borderline example, what with his first attempt to apologize to Anna:
-->''Princess, I… Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is… ''Verdammt''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* FromBadToWorse: Ferdinand suffers from this to the point where it starts to look like TraumaKongaLine. First, he's saddled with responsibility over Anna, who clearly isn't very fond of him. Then [[spoiler:his ship is shot into splinters, with entire crew apparently dead]] and he loses his sword hand. Then he's [[spoiler: taken prisoner by Hans]] and the only person he sees is admiral Hauser, who hates him. And then it turns out that the stump of his hand [[spoiler:is infected]] and Hauser refuses to call a doctor.

to:

* FromBadToWorse: Ferdinand suffers from this to the point where it starts to look like TraumaKongaLine.TraumaCongaLine. First, he's saddled with responsibility over Anna, who clearly isn't very fond of him. Then [[spoiler:his ship is shot into splinters, with entire crew apparently dead]] and he loses his sword hand. Then he's [[spoiler: taken prisoner by Hans]] and the only person he sees is admiral Hauser, who hates him. And then it turns out that the stump of his hand [[spoiler:is infected]] and Hauser refuses to call a doctor.

Added: 368

Changed: 248

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ContinuityNod: When escaping from Koenigsberg castle, Hans muses that he used to climb around it as a child and that the skill came in handy when he met Anna. You know, when they sang ''[[http://disney.wikia.com/wiki/Love_is_an_Open_Door Love is an Open Door]]''.

to:

* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
**
When escaping from Koenigsberg castle, Hans muses that he used to climb around it as a child and that the skill came in handy when he met Anna. You know, when they sang ''[[http://disney.wikia.com/wiki/Love_is_an_Open_Door Love is an Open Door]]''.


Added DiffLines:

** When [[spoiler:Hans and Anna meet again]], Hans admits that the past events might affect Anna's opinion about him.

Added: 960

Changed: 10

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", in opposite to "Westerguard" as it was in the film. Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
** In a bit of FridgeBrilliance, with how power hungry Hans is, it would seem fit to him to introduce himself to Anna as a ruler of Westerguard rather than one of many princes of the Isles.

to:

* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", in opposite as opposed to "Westerguard" as it was in the film. Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
** In a bit of FridgeBrilliance, with how power hungry Hans is, it would seem fit to for him to introduce himself to Anna as a ruler of Westerguard rather than one of many princes of the Isles.


Added DiffLines:

** Kai and king Charles both mention Elsa organizing weekly ice rinks in castle courtyard, like the one she made in the end of the film.


Added DiffLines:

* GambitPileup: Oh, boy. It seems everybody has their plans, and then all those schemes start crashing into each other.
** Olafsen, Krisitani and Berg scheme to remove the threat they believe Weselton to be by starting war with Weselton before Islands could be dragged in it as well.
** Hunter (and probably Margaret as well) schemes to start war with Arendelle for his own reasons.
** Michael schemes to take over the Isles and remove his brother from power.
** Lisa and Braun scheme to remove Michael's threat.
** Hans' overall goal seems to be collecting as much power as he can, and he schemes to [[spoiler:make Arendelle and the Isles go to war.]]
** Elsa, Eric and Kai with Kristoff, separately, scheme to end the war before Elsa has to use her power.
** Drachner's goal so far seems to be to cause as much chaos as possible.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* ArrangedMarriage: Played for laughs. Kai's father wants to arrange marrying Kai with Elsa. Kai is... less than thrilled. Rather terrified.


Added DiffLines:

** Author outright stated that [[CoolShip pendulum ship]] that tried to escape the sequester is ChekhovsGun waiting to be fired.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* PretextForWar: For both Weselton and Arendelle armies, the shooting incident between scouts on the border.
** Hans [[spoiler:wants to engineer war between the Isles and Arendelle by killing Anna and make it look like it's Friedrich's fault.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* LotsAndLotsOfCharacters: The story has at least thirty five named [=OCs=].

Added: 391

Changed: 39

Removed: 105

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* {{Adorkable}}: Kai has his moments, especially his antics on the horse (he can't ride at all). Surprisingly, Anna isn't.



* AwesomMcCoolname: Bjorn Berg. His name means literally ''Bear Mountain''.

to:

* AwesomMcCoolname: AwesomeMcCoolname: Bjorn Berg. His name means literally ''Bear Mountain''.



* CharacterEstablishingMoment: For Ferdinand, the moment he apologizes to Anna for his brother's actions.



* EstablishingCharacterMoment: For Ferdinand, the moment he apologizes to Anna for his brother's actions sets him up as honorable man who's ready to take responsibility.



* OutOfCharacter: Anna gets hit with it hard, with most of her {{Adorkable}} qualities disappearing.



* UncannyValley: Most people feel distinctly uneasy in presence of snow horses.

to:

* UncannyValley: Most In-universe, most people feel distinctly uneasy in presence of snow horses.



* WorldExpansionPack: Tampere Empire and Confederacy appear on the world map. Southern Isles are also examined in much closer detail than before.

to:

* WorldExpansionPack: ExpansionPackWorld: Tampere Empire and Confederacy appear on the world map. Southern Isles are also examined in much closer detail than before.in the film.

Added: 4659

Changed: 1085

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is Disney/{{Frozen}} ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.

to:

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is Disney/{{Frozen}} ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.



* AlliterativeName: Andreas Andersen. Bjorn Berg.
* AutomatonHorses: Snow horses. Justified in that they aren't real horses, but {{Snowlem}}s made by Elsa.
* AwesomMcCoolname: Bjorn Berg. His name means literally ''Bear Mountain''.



* CharacterEstablishingMoment: For Ferdinand, the moment he apologizes to Anna for his brother's actions.
* ChekhovsGun:
** The stick that Ferdinand gives to Anna for self-defense may prove useful [[spoiler:seeing how she managed to smuggle it to Westerguard keep]].
** Tampani Trail, used by Berg to sneak up on "Weasels", [[spoiler:is used by Weseltonians to sneak up on Arendellans]].



* {{Cliffhanger}}: Few chapters end like this, notably ''Best laid plans...'' and ''Fugitives''.



* ConvenientEscapeBoat: ''Lucky Zephyr''. It leaves Koenigsberg just before Friedrich orders to close the port, taking Hans with it.

to:

* ConvenientEscapeBoat: ''Twice''.
**
''Lucky Zephyr''. It Zephyr'' leaves Koenigsberg just before Friedrich orders to close the port, taking Hans with it.it.
** The smugglers' boat which Anna and Ferdinand use to escape the cave.



* CrypticBackgroundReference: The Tampere Empire is apparently some neighbor to Arendelle and Corona and the biggest country in the region, but we never see a person from there.
* EvilMentor: Berg turns out to be this for Kai.

to:

* CrypticBackgroundReference: The Tampere Empire is apparently some neighbor to Arendelle and Corona and the biggest country in the region, but we never see a person from there.
there. The same goes for Southernmost Lands, although they're somewhat further away.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Fanfic is quite darker and more serious than the film. Most notably, comic relief Olaf is nowhere to be seen.
** Conversely, ''Fighting the waves'' is DarkerAndEdgier than rest of the fic.
* DemotedToExtra: Elsa and Sven suffer from this, barely appearing in-story, and Olaf isn't even mentioned.
** Subverted with Anna, who starts as DemotedToExtra, but turns into POV and one of main characters when [[spoiler:she's kidnapped]].
* EvilMentor: Berg turns out to be this for Kai. Played with in that he's honestly sorry for it.



* FromBadToWorse: Ferdinand suffers from this to the point where it starts to look like TraumaKongaLine. First, he's saddled with responsibility over Anna, who clearly isn't very fond of him. Then [[spoiler:his ship is shot into splinters, with entire crew apparently dead]] and he loses his sword hand. Then he's [[spoiler: taken prisoner by Hans]] and the only person he sees is admiral Hauser, who hates him. And then it turns out that the stump of his hand [[spoiler:is infected]] and Hauser refuses to call a doctor.
** Entire Arendelle-Weselton situation. From bunch of soldiers planning to start a war to actual war nobody wanted.



* HappilyMarried: Friedrich and Lisa, despite his issues.



* TheHighQueen: Both Lisa of Southern Isles and Elsa of Arendelle. Lisa appears to be the OnlySaneWoman in Isles' court, and Elsa tries to save her kingdom without freezing all of her neighbors.



* InSeriesNickname: Arendellans call Weseltonians "Weasels" and Weseltonians call Arendellans "merchies".
* LanguageBarrier: Author actually takes time to take care of it. There's Confederate language, which is ''lingua franca'' of the local world, Islander, which appears to be dialect of Confederate, Arendellan, which is different from those two but apparently the same as Weseltonian, and Weste tongue, which very few people other than Weste understand, causing some problems.



* TheMole: A heroic example - Jeremiah Lee is Madsen's spy in Weselton court.

to:

* TheMole: A Two heroic example examples - Jeremiah Lee is Madsen's spy in Weselton court.court and Kristoff is Elsa's spy in Berg's army, at least until ''Dead man walking''.
* MoodWhiplash: The shift between very dark ''Fighting the waves'' and adventurous, snarky ''Tourists in hiding'' is odd, to say the least.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Stormbringing Ocean, or Stormbringer for short. It's said the climate there matches the name and normal ships steer clear of it.



* RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.

to:

* RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: PiratesWhoDontDoAnything: For a soldier, Kai does very little soldiering. Probably justified, as he's Berg's aide and functionally his secretary.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Elsa for Arendelle, Lisa for the Southern Isles, Meyer's captain for Weselton army.
* ReassignedToAntarctica: Weselton duty in the eyes of Islander Navy. Not only the place is a week's swim from the capital, it's full of Weste, most of whom don't know Islander language.
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified:
Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.



* {{Snowlem}}: Snow horses, made by Elsa. They look kind of like horses, but freeze the ground under them, need no rest, and are frighteningly fast.



* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Ferdinand and Hans appearance wise, and Michael and Hans character wise.

to:

* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: ...as the end of ''Kill it with fire'' proves. They were supposed to stop the Weselton attack. [[spoiler:They blew up huge part of the trail and probably stopped Weselton ''advance''.]]
* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: At first, Southern Isles plot and Weselton plot. Now Southern Isles became one of main plots.
* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Ferdinand and Hans appearance wise, appearance-wise, and Michael and Hans character wise.character-wise.


Added DiffLines:

* UncannyValley: Most people feel distinctly uneasy in presence of snow horses.


Added DiffLines:

* WarIsHell: The war between Arendelle and Weselton is definitely shown this way, especially in Nexø's POV sequences.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Generals Potter and Windsor explain why you shouldn't have two generals commanding one army. Meyers and his captain lampshade the fact that with Arendelle army so close, the two commanders should probably focus more on fighting the enemy than each other.


Added DiffLines:

* WorldExpansionPack: Tampere Empire and Confederacy appear on the world map. Southern Isles are also examined in much closer detail than before.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is {{Disney}}/{{Frozen}} ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.

to:

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is {{Disney}}/{{Frozen}} Disney/{{Frozen}} ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.



* ChainsOfCommanding: Nexø feels deaths of his subordinates hard - perhaps too hard for his mental health. He certainly seems to be getting more and more depressed as the story goes on.

to:

* ChainsOfCommanding: TheChainsOfCommanding: Nexø feels deaths of his subordinates hard - perhaps too hard for his mental health. He certainly seems to be getting more and more depressed as the story goes on.



* RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized/RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.

to:

* RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized/RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


'''The page contains unmarked spoilers for ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''.'''

to:

'''The page contains unmarked spoilers for ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''.''Disney/{{Frozen}}''.'''



The story picks up two months after the end of ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, king Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans' and Friedrich's siblings decide to use resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?

to:

The story picks up two months after the end of ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''.''Disney/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, king Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans' and Friedrich's siblings decide to use resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

'''The page contains unmarked spoilers for ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''.'''

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is {{Disney}}/{{Frozen}} ContinuationFic with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.

The story picks up two months after the end of ''{{Disney}}/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, king Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans' and Friedrich's siblings decide to use resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?

!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", in opposite to "Westerguard" as it was in the film. Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
** In a bit of FridgeBrilliance, with how power hungry Hans is, it would seem fit to him to introduce himself to Anna as a ruler of Westerguard rather than one of many princes of the Isles.
* AdultFear: Friedrich constantly worries that he'll strike his wife or daughter in one of his UnstoppableRage phases. [[spoiler:His fears prove true. It's possible that Michael engineered it.]]
* BadassGay: Prince Ferdinand. Even with one hand, he still manages to survive a giant storm and defeat two huge, armed guardsmen with no weapons.
* BalconyEscape: With window rather than balcony, but that's how Hans' escape starts.
* BedroomAdulteryScene: Twice.
** In ''Diplomatic Espionage'', we find out that Margaret and Hunter have an affair when Kristoff peeks into their room by accident when roaming around the castle.
** Implied in ''The sides of conflict'' when half-asleep Eric (Margaret's husband) hears somebody walking around the room. He presumes it's a servant, but it's probably Hunter leaving.
* ChainsOfCommanding: Nexø feels deaths of his subordinates hard - perhaps too hard for his mental health. He certainly seems to be getting more and more depressed as the story goes on.
* ChekhovsGunman: A few.
** Prince Ferdinand is mentioned in passing in chapter two as being missing due to navy dragging him off for pirate hunt. Come ''Fit of rage'', fourteen chapters later, and he [[spoiler:saves Anna from smugglers who kidnapped her]], and even becomes a POV.
** Patrick Schneider appears briefly in chapter six, and reappears in chapter ''twenty'' six with important information.
** Valdemar Schwalzmaar, the man who ferries Hans to Westerguard, appears some chapters later and tells Michael of Hans' whereabouts.
** Felix Drachner is mentioned so many times it looks like he's everywhere. His gun hasn't fired yet.
* ContinuationFic: As is clear in description.
* ContinuityNod: When escaping from Koenigsberg castle, Hans muses that he used to climb around it as a child and that the skill came in handy when he met Anna. You know, when they sang ''[[http://disney.wikia.com/wiki/Love_is_an_Open_Door Love is an Open Door]]''.
* ConvenientEscapeBoat: ''Lucky Zephyr''. It leaves Koenigsberg just before Friedrich orders to close the port, taking Hans with it.
* CoolShip: ''Northern Wind'', Ferdinand's ship. It's freshly new, built specifically to deal with storm conditions, and kept in nigh-perfect state by Ferdinand's orders.
* CrypticBackgroundReference: The Tampere Empire is apparently some neighbor to Arendelle and Corona and the biggest country in the region, but we never see a person from there.
* EvilMentor: Berg turns out to be this for Kai.
* EvilPrince: Michael, even moreso than Hans.
* HairTriggerTemper: King Friedrich has... anger issues. Honestly, he bursts into UnstoppableRage with barely any provocation.
* HeroicBastard: WordOfGod is that Friedrich isn't late king Klaus' son, but product of his mother's affair. He's easily the most likable (perhaps apart from Ferdinand) of von Schwalbes.
* IdiotBall: King (prince?) Charles of Weselton seems to have caught it when Kai and Kristoff arrived. Honestly. He's [[spoiler:at war]] with the queen who can control ice, he knows what happened to Hans, and he knows that Elsa's patience has it's limits. And he still prolongs the negotiations to get better terms and claims that Elsa's ''weak''. His own son calls him out on this.
* MassivelyNumberedSiblings: It was present in the movie as well, but ''WAWQ'' amps it up a bit, adding two sisters to Hans' thirteen brothers.
* TheMole: A heroic example - Jeremiah Lee is Madsen's spy in Weselton court.
* NoNameGiven: Weseton's scout captain and Meyer's superior is never named.
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Hauser and most of the navy on Westerguard is in it because he wants to stick it to the king.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, is said to look like elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Friedrich's daughter's name is Anna (although everybody calls her Annie), and Hans' late father shares the name with very much alive admiral Klaus Hauser.
* OriginalCharacter: The story is full of those.
** In Arendelle, there are majors Madsen, Andersen and Lund, generals Madsen, Kristiani, Rasmus and Berg, colonel Dahl, captain Nexø and his team.
** In Weselton, prince Eric, his parents, generals Windsor, Potter and Carter, colonel Hunter, mister Lee, corporal Meyers and his unnamed captain.
** In Southern Islands, there are the princes, Friedrich's wife and daughter, captain Braun, sergeant Schneider, Valdemar Schwalzmaar and his wife, Gunther, admiral Hauser and everybody on the island of Westerguard.
* RevolutionWillNotBeCivilized/RevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.
* SeductionProofMarriage: Not marriage yet, but Anna is not even remotely interested in any man other than Kristoff.
* ShipSinking: If anybody suspected that Mapograph plans to ship Anna and Ferdinand, the revelation that latter is gay certainly killed that.
* TheSpymaster: colonel Hunter for Weselton and general-baron Madsen for Arendelle. The latter is much more likable, and seems better (or more loyal) at his job.
* StraightGay: If he hadn't implied that, you wouldn't guess Ferdinand is gay.
* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Ferdinand and Hans appearance wise, and Michael and Hans character wise.
** Explicitely averted with Kai Madsen and his father. The former is mentioned to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook Younger Than He Looks]], while baron Madsen quite the opposite.
* UnstoppableRage: King Friedrich's HairTriggerTemper manifests itself like that. It's so unstoppable, he has to lock himself in the room until it passes.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Generals Kristiani, Berg and Olafsen. Despite what their plan looks like, they honestly believe that what they do is for the good of Arendelle.
* WhamEpisode: Twice.
** ''Dead man walking'': We learn what the Berg's true plans are and [[spoiler:Kai and Kristoff are just about to tell someone about it... and then the avalanche strikes.]]
** ''Fighting the waves'': ''Northern Wind'' is fighting a huge storm when [[spoiler:Westerguard keep opens fire at it. Anna and Ferdinand appear to be the only survivors and are now stranded in the foreign land, with little hopes of survival.]]
* XanatosSpeedChess: Hans outright admits that he doesn't have any plan and just works with what he has.
-->'''Hans''': ''Planned''? [[spoiler:Dear Anna]], I thought you'd know me better! There's no ''plan''. I make it all up as I go along!
** Michael appears to do the same. It seems he had an idea to take over the Isles for years, but now he's using all the opportunities he can get.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Kai is mentioned to look much younger than his twenty five years.
* YourCheatingHeart: Eric's wife (and Hans' sister) is cheating on him with colonel Hunter.
----

Top