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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2180451 Two Idiots]]'' is a ''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' SeriesFic that details the relationship between Boyfriend and Girlfriend.
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However, thanks to an upcoming music convention, their relationship would grow beyond mere platonic feelings.
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However, thanks to an upcoming music convention, their relationship would soon grow beyond mere platonic feelings.
feelings...
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** The dialogue said in the recording of Daddy Dearest's battle with Keith is taken word-for-word from ''WebAnimation/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' cover of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HX8e9hbj2WA Dad Battle]]":
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
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** The dialogue said in the recording of Daddy Dearest's battle with Keith is taken word-for-word from ''WebAnimation/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' cover of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HX8e9hbj2WA Dad Battle]]":
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2180451 Two Idiots]]'' is a ''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' SeriesFic that details the relationship between Boyfriend and Girlfriend. ...Sorry, [[AdaptationNameChange Keith and Cherry]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2180451 Two Idiots]]'' is a ''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' SeriesFic that details the relationship between Boyfriend and Girlfriend. ...Sorry, [[AdaptationNameChange Keith and Cherry]].
Girlfriend.
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->''If Keith knew that talking with that cool girl at the music shop would lead to him squaring off against a literal demon with his fate ambiguous, he'd probably have talked to her sooner.''
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Whilst slaving away at [[EveryodyHatesMath some of his boring homework]], the girl asks him if he could give some feedback on her track.
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Whilst slaving away at [[EveryodyHatesMath [[EverybodyHatesMath some of his boring homework]], the girl asks him if he could give some feedback on her track.
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->''If Keith knew that talking with that cool girl at the music shop would lead to him squaring off against a literal demon with his fate ambiguous, he'd probably have talked to her sooner.''
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A girl was currently occupying his computer, composing a song of her own, and Keith simply had to wait until she was done.
Whilst slaving away at [[EveryodyHatesMath some of his boring homework]], the girl asks him if he could give some feedback on her track.
He loves it, and so, they quickly become friendly with
However, thanks to an upcoming music
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The story serves as a {{novelization}} of the game, with the in-game mechanics being the result of a supernatural spell Keith learns from Cherry.
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** Keith's apartment number is "[[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} 413]]".
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* StealthPun: "The speaker set had a Cherry on top."
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* StealthPun: "The speaker set had a Cherry on top.""
* TitleDrop: Two song-based examples, both said by Daddy Dearest:
-->"Here's something ta ''really'' get your blood pumping! It's coming up ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mx82b-3A--Q Fresh]]!"''
-->''"WELCOME TO THE '''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0WyKTSuX4U DAD BATTLE]]!!!'''"''
* TitleDrop: Two song-based examples, both said by Daddy Dearest:
-->"Here's something ta ''really'' get your blood pumping! It's coming up ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mx82b-3A--Q Fresh]]!"''
-->''"WELCOME TO THE '''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0WyKTSuX4U DAD BATTLE]]!!!'''"''
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* MonstrousScenery: The theater Week 1's showdown takes place in is packed with monsters, from demons to [[DemBones skeletons]] to goblins. Naturally, Keith is a bit unnerved by it.
-->''If Keith didn't have any contest, he'd have thought he stumbled onto an elaborate costume party, but given the magic door, he was growing less and less confident about that inference.''
-->''If Keith didn't have any contest, he'd have thought he stumbled onto an elaborate costume party, but given the magic door, he was growing less and less confident about that inference.''
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** The dialogue said in the recording of Daddy Dearest's battle with Keith is taken word-for-word from ''WebVideo/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' cover of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HX8e9hbj2WA Dad Battle]]":
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** The dialogue said in the recording of Daddy Dearest's battle with Keith is taken word-for-word from ''WebVideo/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' ''WebAnimation/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' cover of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HX8e9hbj2WA Dad Battle]]":
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** The dialogue said in the recording of Daddy Dearest's battle with Keith is taken word-for-word from ''WebVideo/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics's'' cover of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HX8e9hbj2WA Dad Battle]]":
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
-->''"So, kid... you wanna date '''MY''' daughter?"''
-->''"Yeah! I wanna kiss my hot girlfriend!"''
-->''"Not on my watch, The Boyfriend! Get ready to get '''ROOOOCKKKKED''' to your core!"''
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* BlackSpeech: The "English" spoken by Cherry and Monster is totally incomprehensible to humans.
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* BlackSpeech: The "English" spoken by Cherry and Monster [[HumanoidAbomination Monster]] is totally incomprehensible to humans.
