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* AnimalMotifs: Kamala compares the bad blood between Lunella and Valeria to Betta fish.
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* AlternateUniverseReedRichardsIsAwesome: Inverted with this version of Franklin Richards, who's just a young man suffering from PowerIncontinence without the help of [[Characters/XMenMorlocks Leech]].
* AnimalMotifs: Kamala compares the bad blood between Lunella and Valeria toBetta fish.betta fish.
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Stated to be what will happen to Franklin if he fully loses control over his powers.
* AnimalMotifs: Kamala compares the bad blood between Lunella and Valeria to
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Stated to be what will happen to Franklin if he fully loses control over his powers.
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* DoubleMeaningTitle: Ch. 4, "The Bomb", refers to the Atom Bomb, the [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Gamma Bomb]], the [[ComicBook/{{Infinity}} Terrigen]] [[ComicBook/{{Inhumanity}} Bomb]], and to Screentime's bombing campaign.
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* DoubleMeaningTitle: Ch. 4, "The Bomb", refers to the Atom Bomb, atom bomb, the [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Gamma Bomb]], gamma bomb]], the [[ComicBook/{{Infinity}} Terrigen]] terrigen]] [[ComicBook/{{Inhumanity}} Bomb]], bomb]], and to Screentime's bombing campaign.
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* MythologyGag: Valeria mentions curing the [[ComicBook/MarvelUniverseVsThePunisher Survivor 118 virus]] as part of her BadassBoast in ch. 12.
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* MythologyGag: ManOfKryptonite: [[Characters/XMenMorlocks Leech]] is a benelovent version, helping to supress Franklin Richards powers when they flare up.
* MythologyGag:
** Ch. 7 is this story's version of the [[TheCameo/StanLee Stan Lee Cameo]].
** Valeria mentions curing the [[ComicBook/MarvelUniverseVsThePunisher Survivor 118 virus]] as part of her BadassBoast in ch. 12.
* MythologyGag:
** Ch. 7 is this story's version of the [[TheCameo/StanLee Stan Lee Cameo]].
** Valeria mentions curing the [[ComicBook/MarvelUniverseVsThePunisher Survivor 118 virus]] as part of her BadassBoast in ch. 12.
* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Kamala is mentioned to constantly shapeshift her hands into AbsurdlySharpClaws as a constant reminder of killing the Skrull that killed Sam Alexander.
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** Ch. 3 ends with Valeria receiving the following in [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]]: "GALACTUS IS DOWN, READY FOR STEP TWO?", indicating she's in some sort of relation with the House of Galaxy.
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** Ch. 3 ends with Valeria receiving the following in [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]]: "GALACTUS IS DOWN, READY FOR STEP TWO?", indicating she's in some sort of relation alliance with the House of Galaxy.
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** Ch. 1 ends with [[spoiler: the reveal that Wonder Man and Beast are conniving with each other, potentially against their own houses.]]
** Ch. 3 reveals via [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]] [[spoiler:that Valeria is in contact with the House of Galaxy]].
** Ch. 3 reveals via [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]] [[spoiler:that Valeria is in contact with the House of Galaxy]].
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** Ch. 1 2 ends with [[spoiler: the reveal that Wonder Man and "Through Simon, Beast are conniving with each other, potentially against could hear their own houses.]]
little political games and he took notes of all of their responses".
** Ch. 3reveals via ends with Valeria receiving the following in [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]] [[spoiler:that Valeria is morse]]: "GALACTUS IS DOWN, READY FOR STEP TWO?", indicating she's in contact some sort of relation with the House of Galaxy]].Galaxy.
** Ch 12. with Kamala saying she's interested in joining the Houses of X and Fantasic's alliance
** Ch. 3
** Ch 12. with Kamala saying she's interested in joining the Houses of X and Fantasic's alliance
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** Reed Richards and Sue Storm were killed in an Explosion.
** It's implied that Devil Dinosaur and Nova were killed by Deadpool, just like Luke Cage.
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** Reed Richards and Sue Storm were killed in an Explosion.
explosion.
** It's implied that Devil Dinosaur andNova were was killed by Deadpool, just like Luke Cage.Cage.
** Sam Alexander is killed by a Skrull impostor of Carol Danvers.
* DoubleMeaningTitle: Ch. 4, "The Bomb", refers to the Atom Bomb, the [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Gamma Bomb]], the [[ComicBook/{{Infinity}} Terrigen]] [[ComicBook/{{Inhumanity}} Bomb]], and to Screentime's bombing campaign.
* [[TheGoodKing The Good Queen]]: Kamala genuinely tires to be this, as shown by torpedoing the Genetic Council's attempts to bring back the Alpha Primitives and not wanting preemptively attack Houses Fantastic and X.
** It's implied that Devil Dinosaur and
** Sam Alexander is killed by a Skrull impostor of Carol Danvers.
* DoubleMeaningTitle: Ch. 4, "The Bomb", refers to the Atom Bomb, the [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Gamma Bomb]], the [[ComicBook/{{Infinity}} Terrigen]] [[ComicBook/{{Inhumanity}} Bomb]], and to Screentime's bombing campaign.
* [[TheGoodKing The Good Queen]]: Kamala genuinely tires to be this, as shown by torpedoing the Genetic Council's attempts to bring back the Alpha Primitives and not wanting preemptively attack Houses Fantastic and X.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Starlord is typically a man in most settings, but in this fanfiction is almost exclusively referred to as 'she'.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Starlord is typically a man in most settings, but in this fanfiction is almost exclusively referred to as 'she'. Granted, it could also be an AffirmativeActionLegacy at the helm.
* AdaptationalSexuality:
** Neither Beast nor Wonder Man haven shown to be interested in each other. Here they are in a relationship with each other.
** Kamala in canon has only been shown to be heterosexual and monogamous. Here she has shown to take multiple consorts, including [[ComicBook/TheVision2015 Viv Vision]], Nakia Bahadir and Zoe Zimmer.
** Neither Beast nor Wonder Man haven shown to be interested in each other. Here they are in a relationship with each other.
** Kamala in canon has only been shown to be heterosexual and monogamous. Here she has shown to take multiple consorts, including [[ComicBook/TheVision2015 Viv Vision]], Nakia Bahadir and Zoe Zimmer.
* MythologyGag: Valeria mentions curing the [[ComicBook/MarvelUniverseVsThePunisher Survivor 118 virus]] as part of her BadassBoast in ch. 12.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.siblings.
* SheIsTheKing: Kamala is refered to as the Midnight King. {{Downplayed}} as she's also referred as Queen Marvel.
* WhamLine:
** Ch. 1 ends with [[spoiler: the reveal that Wonder Man and Beast are conniving with each other, potentially against their own houses.]]
** Ch. 3 reveals via [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]] [[spoiler:that Valeria is in contact with the House of Galaxy]].
* SheIsTheKing: Kamala is refered to as the Midnight King. {{Downplayed}} as she's also referred as Queen Marvel.
* WhamLine:
** Ch. 1 ends with [[spoiler: the reveal that Wonder Man and Beast are conniving with each other, potentially against their own houses.]]
** Ch. 3 reveals via [[EveryoneKnowsMorse morse]] [[spoiler:that Valeria is in contact with the House of Galaxy]].
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Kamala Khan is the Midnight King of ComicBook/TheInhumans
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Kamala Khan is the Midnight King of ComicBook/TheInhumansComicBook/TheInhumans.
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* OffingTheOffspring: Magneto killed Quicksilver in the backstory.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43379752 Twilight of The Superheroes]]'' is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43379752 Twilight of The Superheroes]]'' is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel.Franchise/MarvelUniverse. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.
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* DeathByAdaptation:
**Jubilee was murdered by Laura Kinney.
**Reed Richards and Sue Storm were killed in an Explosion.
**It's implied that Devil Dinosaur and Nova were killed by Deadpool, just like Luke Cage.
**Jubilee was murdered by Laura Kinney.
**Reed Richards and Sue Storm were killed in an Explosion.
**It's implied that Devil Dinosaur and Nova were killed by Deadpool, just like Luke Cage.
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* BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage: Valeria Richards of the House of Fantastic is set to marry Gabby Kinney of the House of X.
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'''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43379752 Twilight of The Superheroes]]'' is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.
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'''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43379752 Twilight of The Superheroes Superheroes]]'' is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.
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* RelatedInAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.
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* RelatedInAdaptation: RelatedInTheAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.
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* AdaptionalJerkass: Lunella Layfayette always landed on the softer side of meanness, but in the story, she very casually aids in a torturous punishment of a Screentime.
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* AdaptionalJerkass: AdaptationalJerkass: Lunella Layfayette always landed on the softer side of meanness, but in the story, she very casually aids in a torturous punishment of a Screentime.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Starlord is typically a man in most settings, but in this fanfiction is almost exclusively referred to as 'she'.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Starlord is typically a man in most settings, but in this fanfiction is almost exclusively referred to as 'she'.'she'.
*AdaptionalJerkass: Lunella Layfayette always landed on the softer side of meanness, but in the story, she very casually aids in a torturous punishment of a Screentime.
*AdaptationalJobChange: Kamala Khan is the Midnight King of ComicBook/TheInhumans
*NamedByTheAdaptation: The character Screentime was originally meant to appear in a revival of Marvel's ComicBook/NewWarriors, but the project never got off the table. In this fanfiction, he is given the name Sile Chen.
*RelatedInAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.
*AdaptionalJerkass: Lunella Layfayette always landed on the softer side of meanness, but in the story, she very casually aids in a torturous punishment of a Screentime.
*AdaptationalJobChange: Kamala Khan is the Midnight King of ComicBook/TheInhumans
*NamedByTheAdaptation: The character Screentime was originally meant to appear in a revival of Marvel's ComicBook/NewWarriors, but the project never got off the table. In this fanfiction, he is given the name Sile Chen.
*RelatedInAdaptation: Screentime and Xiaoyi Chen are siblings.
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Twilight of The Superheroes is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.Avengers.
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*AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Starlord is typically a man in most settings, but in this fanfiction is almost exclusively referred to as 'she'.
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Twilight of The Superheroes is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel. It deviates further from there with it taking place fully within the present of a world divided by The Houses of Heroes with the House of Fantastic planning on taking full control away from The House of Might which is headed by the Avengers.
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Twilight of The Superheroes is a Marvel Comics fanfiction by the writer Maksvell that bases its premise on Alan Moore's Script/TwilightOfTheSuperheroes, Script/TheTwilightOfTheSuperheroes, but setting it within the universe of Marvel.
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