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* TheTeam:
** TheLeader: Megatron
** TheLancer: Soundwave, Dreadwing
** TheBigGuy: Predaking
** TheSmartGuy: Shockwave
** TheLeader: Megatron
** TheLancer: Soundwave, Dreadwing
** TheBigGuy: Predaking
** TheSmartGuy: Shockwave
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1070668/twilightnite13 twilightnite12]] worked alongside [=RyuJudge6614=] to write ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13048863/1/Transformers-RWBY-The-Light-of-Hope Transformers RWBY: The Light of Hope]]'' focusing on Predaking and Dreadwing as they meet Weiss and Blake before their run-ins with Yang and Megatron and has also written ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13647806/1/Transformers-RWBY-Chronicles-of-a-Herald Transformers RWBY: Chronicles of a Herald]]'' explaining how the Shockwave and the Salem-aligned Cybertronians arrived on Remnant. ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13796280/1/Transformers-RWBY-The-Flames-That-Could-Have-Been Transfomers RWBY: The Flames That Could Have Been]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/13686571/ZeroTheOne ZeroTheOne]] has the entire cast of ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' and Team RWBY transported to another dimension to react to the events of the original fic
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1070668/twilightnite13 twilightnite12]] worked alongside [=RyuJudge6614=] to write ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13048863/1/Transformers-RWBY-The-Light-of-Hope Transformers RWBY: The Light of Hope]]'' focusing on Predaking and Dreadwing as they meet Weiss and Blake before their run-ins with Yang and Megatron and has also written ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13647806/1/Transformers-RWBY-Chronicles-of-a-Herald Transformers RWBY: Chronicles of a Herald]]'' explaining how the Shockwave and the Salem-aligned Cybertronians arrived on Remnant. ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13796280/1/Transformers-RWBY-The-Flames-That-Could-Have-Been Transfomers RWBY: The Flames That Could Have Been]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/13686571/ZeroTheOne ZeroTheOne]] has the entire cast of ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' and Team RWBY transported to another dimension to react to the events of the original fic
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* CoveredInScars: Megatron's body is pretty much covered with all the scars he got from his past battles
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* CoveredInScars: Megatron's body is pretty much covered with all the scars he got from his past battlesbattles.
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---> '''Megatron''': I understand what it is like. To have your body taken from you, to have your soul overpowered by another. I felt the that same sense of hopelessness when Unicron had taken control of my body and forced my spark to endure unending suffering. But, thanks to the help of an old friend, and I learned much from that experience. Oscar, you are right to be afraid about losing yourself. It truly is a terrifying thing. But... let me ask you: you said that you wanted to help; is that right?
---> '''Oscar''': What? Well... yes, I want to help, but-,
---> '''Megatron''': Then do exactly that. If you run now, then you will regret it for the rest of your life. But, though you will one day merge with Ozpin's soul and become him, that day has not yet come to pass. It may come tomorrow, it may come in a year, but until that day comes, you are still you. You are still Oscar Pine. Ozpin is not in control; you are. So I ask you, Oscar Pine: what will you do now?
---> '''Oscar''': What? Well... yes, I want to help, but-,
---> '''Megatron''': Then do exactly that. If you run now, then you will regret it for the rest of your life. But, though you will one day merge with Ozpin's soul and become him, that day has not yet come to pass. It may come tomorrow, it may come in a year, but until that day comes, you are still you. You are still Oscar Pine. Ozpin is not in control; you are. So I ask you, Oscar Pine: what will you do now?
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* GoodAllAlong: [[spoiler: Shockwave reveals himself as Optimus Prime's DoubleAgent within Salem's forces at the Atlas council meeting after exposing Jacques Schnee's dealings with the traitorous Atlesian scientist Arthur Watts.]]
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* GoodAllAlong: [[spoiler: Shockwave reveals himself as Optimus Prime's DoubleAgent within Salem's forces at the Atlas council meeting after meeting, exposing Jacques Schnee's dealings with the traitorous Atlesian scientist Arthur Watts.Watts and apprehending the CorruptCorporateExecutive when Jacques attempts to flee.]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: It is implied that the one who sent the malevolvent Cybertronians to Remnant is none other than '''[[spoiler: [[GodOfEvil Unicron]]]]''', if the mysterious voice is anything to go by. Thunderwing's appearance and statement of Unicron's plan to use Remnant as his new body confirms that Unicron is indeed here and up to no good.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: It is implied that the one who sent the malevolvent Cybertronians to Remnant is none other than '''[[spoiler: [[GodOfEvil Unicron]]]]''', if the mysterious voice is anything to go by. [[spoiler: Thunderwing's appearance and statement of Unicron's plan to use Remnant as his new body confirms that Unicron is indeed here and up to no good.]]
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---> '''Dreadwing''': This planet certainly has more familiarities from Cybertron than what meets the eye. Such as the one who you used as an orbital gun over Cybertron.
---> '''Nora''': Please tell me you're kidding...
--->'''Megatron''': No, the Decepticons did indeed have a soldier that was about the same size and similar shape as the Grimm. It certainly does remind me of the Titan Trypticon. That is, before he failed his mission and I had to use his chassis as my personal flagship, the Nemesis.
---> '''Jaune''': Megatron... Please tell me you're joking...
---> '''Megatron'''(''rolls eyes''): [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, Jaune Arc,]] [[VideoGame/TransformersWarForCybertron I am widely known for my sense of humor.]]
---> '''Nora''': Please tell me you're kidding...
--->'''Megatron''': No, the Decepticons did indeed have a soldier that was about the same size and similar shape as the Grimm. It certainly does remind me of the Titan Trypticon. That is, before he failed his mission and I had to use his chassis as my personal flagship, the Nemesis.
---> '''Jaune''': Megatron... Please tell me you're joking...
---> '''Megatron'''(''rolls eyes''): [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, Jaune Arc,]] [[VideoGame/TransformersWarForCybertron I am widely known for my sense of humor.]]
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** [[spoiler: Megatronus]] gives Cinder one on her incompetence and [[EntitledBitch entitled behavior]], flat-out telling her that she ain't got ''shit'' on him when it comes to tragic pasts and needs to stop being so petty and immature.
---> '''[[spoiler: Megatronus]]''': You think that just because you suffered, you can have whatever it is that you want. But for one thing: suffering alone does not equal entitlement. And for another: your suffering is nothing compared to mine. I will endure whatever pain I must if it means being reunited with [[LostLenore Solus]] again. I learned that strength alone does not decide a war. Cunning is just as important. And it's not just about what you deserve; it's about proving yourself worthy. But, as long as you continue these little failures of yours due to your shortsightedness and inability to look at the bigger picture, the only thing you'll be worthy of... is a cold, empty grave. Where no one will mourn you.
---> '''[[spoiler: Megatronus]]''': You think that just because you suffered, you can have whatever it is that you want. But for one thing: suffering alone does not equal entitlement. And for another: your suffering is nothing compared to mine. I will endure whatever pain I must if it means being reunited with [[LostLenore Solus]] again. I learned that strength alone does not decide a war. Cunning is just as important. And it's not just about what you deserve; it's about proving yourself worthy. But, as long as you continue these little failures of yours due to your shortsightedness and inability to look at the bigger picture, the only thing you'll be worthy of... is a cold, empty grave. Where no one will mourn you.
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** [[spoiler: Megatronus]] gives Cinder one on her incompetence and [[EntitledBitch entitled behavior]], flat-out telling her that unless she ain't stops throwing tantrums over not getting what she wants, she's only got ''shit'' on him when it comes herself to tragic pasts and needs to stop being so petty and immature.
--->blame if someone puts her six feet under.
--> '''[[spoiler: Megatronus]]''': You think that just because you suffered, you can have whatever it is that you want. But for one thing: suffering alone does not equal entitlement. And for another: your suffering is nothing compared to mine. I will endure whatever pain I must if it means being reunited with [[LostLenore Solus]] again. I learned that strength alone does not decide a war. Cunning is just as important. And it's not just about what you deserve; it's about proving yourself worthy. But, as long as you continue these little failures of yours due to your shortsightedness and inability to look at the bigger picture, the only thing you'll be worthyof... of is a cold, empty grave. Where grave, where no one will mourn you.
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--> '''[[spoiler: Megatronus]]''': You think that just because you suffered, you can have whatever it is that you want. But for one thing: suffering alone does not equal entitlement. And for another: your suffering is nothing compared to mine. I will endure whatever pain I must if it means being reunited with [[LostLenore Solus]] again. I learned that strength alone does not decide a war. Cunning is just as important. And it's not just about what you deserve; it's about proving yourself worthy. But, as long as you continue these little failures of yours due to your shortsightedness and inability to look at the bigger picture, the only thing you'll be worthy
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Starscream in ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' would later become one of the nicer and more loyal Decepticons despite his constant treachery. Here, he's more in line with his vengeful ''[[WesternAnimation/TransformersRobotsInDisguise2015 Robots in Disguise(2015)]]'' version with the grudge he has against his former boss Megatron.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Starscream in ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' would later become one of the nicer and more loyal and pragmatic Decepticons despite his constant treachery. Here, he's more in line with his vengeful ''[[WesternAnimation/TransformersRobotsInDisguise2015 Robots in Disguise(2015)]]'' version with the grudge he has against his former boss Megatron.
