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* HowUnscientific: The Fling Of Shame, mentioned by the Announcer, probably would be deadly in a series with graphic depictions of violence and would not make sense.
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* HowUnscientific: The Fling Of Shame, mentioned by the Announcer, probably would be deadly in a series with graphic depictions of violence and would not make sense.sense, especially considering what happened to Smokepaw during the Great Journey, yet these cats easily survived being flung into the air and later landing in the FOCAL relatively unharmed.
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Total Warriors Island is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' and ''WebAnimation/BattleForDreamIsland'' crossover. 24 cats [[BackFromTheDead (including 9 dead ones (4 of which would otherwise have faded to the Void, and another 2 which were mistakenly put as alive in the Allegiances)]] are competing for 1 Lake Territory, as a whole.
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Total Warriors Island is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' and ''WebAnimation/BattleForDreamIsland'' crossover. 24 cats [[BackFromTheDead (including 9 dead ones (4 of which would otherwise have faded to the Void, and another 2 which were mistakenly put as alive in the Allegiances)]] Allegiances) are competing for 1 Lake Territory, as a whole.
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* HowUnscientific: The Fling Of Shame, mentioned by the Announcer, probably would be deadly in a series with graphic depictions of violence and would not make sense.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Yellow Face’s commercials, as always.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Yellow Face’s commercials, as always.
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* ThatRemindsMeOfASong: The contestants almost started the ''WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants'' intro, but the Announcer stopped it before it could start.
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* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster, similar to what happened to Blocky in BFDI 1b, and the exact opposite happened to Hawkfrost, which also landed into the lake but didn’t get eaten.
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* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', ''Series/{{Solitary}}'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster, similar to what happened to Blocky in BFDI 1b, and the exact opposite happened to Hawkfrost, which also landed into the lake but didn’t get eaten.
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* DeusExMachina: Hawkfrost gets one after landing in the lake,
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* DeusExMachina: Hawkfrost gets one after landing in the lake,lake, jamming the heating system and allowing him to stay inside it for longer, leading to his team’s victory.
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You can read it here on FanFictionDotNet (https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13996090/1/) or Archive of Our Own (https://archiveofourown.org/works/35496181/chapters/88483351)
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You can read it here on FanFictionDotNet Website/FanFictionDotNet (https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13996090/1/) or Archive of Our Own (https://archiveofourown.org/works/35496181/chapters/88483351)
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* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster.
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* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster.Monster, similar to what happened to Blocky in BFDI 1b, and the exact opposite happened to Hawkfrost, which also landed into the lake but didn’t get eaten.
* DeusExMachina: Hawkfrost gets one after landing in the lake,
* DiabolusExMachina: The Purple Button for Mothwing. It nearly killed her because she almost got eaten by a giant fish that likes grabbing Pencil. Only thanks to Brokenstar’s elimination was she able to survive. WordOfGod says that it probably wouldn’t have mattered whether or not she survived since she would’ve been revived by her Recovery Center.
* DeusExMachina: Hawkfrost gets one after landing in the lake,
* DiabolusExMachina: The Purple Button for Mothwing. It nearly killed her because she almost got eaten by a giant fish that likes grabbing Pencil. Only thanks to Brokenstar’s elimination was she able to survive. WordOfGod says that it probably wouldn’t have mattered whether or not she survived since she would’ve been revived by her Recovery Center.
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Total Warriors Island is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' and ''WebAnimation/BattleForDreamIsland'' crossover. 24 cats [[BackFromTheDead (including 9 dead ones (4 of which would otherwise have faded to the Void, and another 2 which were mistakenly put as alive in the Allegiances)]] are competing for 1 Lake Territory, as a whole.
You can read it here on FanFictionDotNet (https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13996090/1/) or Archive of Our Own (https://archiveofourown.org/works/35496181/chapters/88483351)
!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BackFromTheDead: Bluestar, Brokenstar, Firestar, Hawkfrost, Hollyleaf, Mapleshade, Spottedleaf, Scourge, and Tigerstar are competing with physical forms despite being dead at the time.
* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster.
* FiendishFish: The Fish Monster of BFDI almost ate Mothwing, while she was trapped inside a box.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Brokenstar pretty much didn’t do much aside from being a manipulative uncooperative jerk and was eliminated really quickly with 1 comment.
* WhatDoesThisButtonDo: Hawkfrost’s attitude towards the Purple Button. Thankfully {{Subverted}}, though, since there was no fish monster that tried to eat him.
You can read it here on FanFictionDotNet (https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13996090/1/) or Archive of Our Own (https://archiveofourown.org/works/35496181/chapters/88483351)
!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BackFromTheDead: Bluestar, Brokenstar, Firestar, Hawkfrost, Hollyleaf, Mapleshade, Spottedleaf, Scourge, and Tigerstar are competing with physical forms despite being dead at the time.
* BigRedButton: The Black Box challenge is based off of ''Series/Solitary'', and PlayedForLaughs with the Purple Button, which really screwed up Mothwing when she nearly got eaten by a Fish Monster.
* FiendishFish: The Fish Monster of BFDI almost ate Mothwing, while she was trapped inside a box.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Brokenstar pretty much didn’t do much aside from being a manipulative uncooperative jerk and was eliminated really quickly with 1 comment.
* WhatDoesThisButtonDo: Hawkfrost’s attitude towards the Purple Button. Thankfully {{Subverted}}, though, since there was no fish monster that tried to eat him.
