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Can be found on both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12426216/1/Three-Stars-of-Veldin here]] on FanFictionDotNet and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10500309/chapters/23166186 here]] on ArchiveOfOurOwn.

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Can be found on both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12426216/1/Three-Stars-of-Veldin here]] on FanFictionDotNet Website/FanFictionDotNet and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10500309/chapters/23166186 here]] on ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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Can be found on both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12426216/1/Three-Stars-of-Veldin Fanfiction Dot Com]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10500309/chapters/23166186 Archive of Our Own]].

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Can be found on both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12426216/1/Three-Stars-of-Veldin Fanfiction Dot Com]] here]] on FanFictionDotNet and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10500309/chapters/23166186 Archive of Our Own]].
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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, ''Three Stars of Veldin'' is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternateUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.

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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, ''Three Stars of Veldin'' is an a [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternateUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.



* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings to the point of rejecting the Nether Leader upon meeting him. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.

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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in ''[[VideoGame/RatchetAndClankIntoTheNexus Into the Nexus, Nexus]]'', Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings to the point of rejecting the Nether Leader upon meeting him. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.

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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings.siblings to the point of rejecting the Nether Leader upon meeting him. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.

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* FamilyOfChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they they’re formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.
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* TokenAdult: Starting in Chapter 17, the Prog siblings take the Grind Boot Inventor with them as part of a deal. In exchange for the Grind Boots, the Progs will drop off the Inventor at Kalebo III where they'll put in a good word for him to get hired.
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* GalacticConqueror: Vendra mentioned conquering the galaxy with her Gramps on his last trip to Veldin. Whether or not it'll taken seriously remains to be seen.

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* GalacticConqueror: Vendra mentioned conquering the galaxy with her Gramps on his last trip to Veldin. Whether or not it'll be taken seriously remains to be seen.
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* PervertRevengeMode: Vendra does not like being hit on, even though Ratchet, Neftin, and Clank were quick to threaten Al, Skidd, and the Deserter on here behalf, so it hasn't gotten violent yet.

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* PervertRevengeMode: Vendra does not like being hit on, even though Ratchet, Neftin, and Clank were quick to threaten Al, Skidd, and the Deserter on here her behalf, so it hasn't gotten violent yet.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Ratchet and Neftin are pretty protective of Vendra, having gotten aggressive with both Big Al and Skidd McMarx for flirting, or wanting to flirt with her, and Ratchet pulling rank on Vendra in Chapter 22 by having Clank accompany her in the war zone on Planet Batalia.

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\n* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Ratchet and Neftin are pretty protective of Vendra, having gotten aggressive with both Big Al and Skidd McMarx [=McMarx=] for flirting, or wanting to flirt with her, and Ratchet pulling rank on Vendra in Chapter 22 by having Clank accompany her in the war zone on Planet Batalia.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: In Chapter 4, the Prog siblings use their gear as children to force the settlers off of Veldin, and they enjoyed their new found reign until they realized that they did not know how to farm.

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\n* TakeOverTheWorld: In Chapter 4, the Prog siblings use their gear as children to force the settlers off of Veldin, and they enjoyed their new found reign until they realized that they did not know how to farm.farm.
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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, Three Stars of Veldin is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternateUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.

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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, Three ''Three Stars of Veldin Veldin'' is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternateUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.
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ActionGirl: Vendra is a capable fighter with her telekinesis and weapons.

AdaptationalHeroism: As Vendra and Neftin grew up with Ratchet on Veldin, that essentially means that they join him and Clank on their first adventure. While the Progs, including Ratchet, have their own reasons for fighting the Blarg, it is still a step up from being life long criminals in canon.

AdaptationalIntelligence: Neftin has been stated to have worked on some weapons for Gadgetron alongside his siblings instead of just leaving all the technical/scientific thinking to Vendra.

AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.

BigBrotherInstinct: Both Ratchet and Neftin are pretty protective of Vendra, having gotten aggressive with both Big Al and Skidd McMarx for flirting, or wanting to flirt with her, and Ratchet pulling rank on Vendra in Chapter 22 by having Clank accompany her in the war zone on Planet Batalia.

ClingyJealousGirl: Vendra, having come to be attracted to Ratchet as a growing woman would, doesn't like it when the Hoverboard Girl at Blackwater City winks at him and has to be calmed down by both of her brothers before Ratchet can enter the race.

TheConscience: Clank's role to the PunchClockHero Prog Trio, beleaguered, though, it may be.

EveryoneHasStandards: Although Vendra does not see herself as a genuine hero, she immediately voted to head to Eudora to prevent the deforestation.

FamilyOfChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.

ForbiddenLove: By the time both Ratchet and Vendra become adolescents, they become conflicted about seeing each other as siblings still when they start to see how well-developed the other is becoming.

GalacticConqueror: Vendra mentioned conquering the galaxy with her Gramps on his last trip to Veldin. Whether or not it'll taken seriously remains to be seen.

HappilyAdopted: Although the Prog trio were unsure about Wendell's involvement in their lives at first, they become fonder of him for when he came to care for Vendra when she got sick.

HarmfulToMinors: Ratchet was kicked out of the farming settlement Gadgetron owned on Veldin for being an non-contributive orphan. Not only did he steal food from the settlement in retaliation for them selling the space pod he came in just before meeting his future siblings, but this comes to influence the Prog siblings kicking the settlers off the planet and taking it for themselves in Chapter 4.

HeelRealization: After a rather unkind joke to the Plumber in Chapter 15, the Progs come to realize that they've been working for their adoptive grandfather's approval for too long, they hadn't been more considerate to others.

HonestCorporateExecutive: Wendell Lumos himself said that he started Gadgetron to group together the "small people with big brains" to benefit society as a whole as much as to give his employees a place to belong. Combined with being a good grandfather figure to the Prog siblings he adopted, and he's far better a person than Chairman Drek.

InterspeciesAdoption: Ratchet is a Lombax, Vendra and Neftin are Nethers, and Wendell Lumos is a reptilian kind of alien, and yet the Nether siblings were quick to call Ratchet their brother upon his kind approach to them in their first meeting followed eventually by Wendell formally adopting the trio as his grandchildren to help settle legal issues.

PervertRevengeMode: Vendra does not like being hit on, even though Ratchet, Neftin, and Clank were quick to threaten Al, Skidd, and the Deserter on here behalf, so it hasn't gotten violent yet.

ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: More like "the Mercenaries who do Pro Bono work", but while the Progs said that they were mercenaries since meeting the Novalis Chairman, they haven't been paid in bolts yet.

PunchClockHero: Upon the Novalis Chairman asking if they were mercenaries, the Progs are claiming to be this even though the rewards they get for now are information and gadgets instead of money.

ShoutOut: Among references to "old Earth anime", Vendra sings her own spin of Do You Want to Build a Snowman from [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Frozen]] to rouse her brothers to build a spaceship, so that they could visit Wendell as a surprise.

TakeOverTheWorld: In Chapter 4, the Prog siblings use their gear as children to force the settlers off of Veldin, and they enjoyed their new found reign until they realized that they did not know how to farm.

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* ActionGirl: Vendra is a capable fighter with her telekinesis and weapons.

* AdaptationalHeroism: As Vendra and Neftin grew up with Ratchet on Veldin, that essentially means that they join him and Clank on their first adventure. While the Progs, including Ratchet, have their own reasons for fighting the Blarg, it is still a step up from being life long criminals in canon.

* AdaptationalIntelligence: Neftin has been stated to have worked on some weapons for Gadgetron alongside his siblings instead of just leaving all the technical/scientific thinking to Vendra.

* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.

* BigBrotherInstinct: Both Ratchet and Neftin are pretty protective of Vendra, having gotten aggressive with both Big Al and Skidd McMarx for flirting, or wanting to flirt with her, and Ratchet pulling rank on Vendra in Chapter 22 by having Clank accompany her in the war zone on Planet Batalia.

* ClingyJealousGirl: Vendra, having come to be attracted to Ratchet as a growing woman would, doesn't like it when the Hoverboard Girl at Blackwater City winks at him and has to be calmed down by both of her brothers before Ratchet can enter the race.

* TheConscience: Clank's role to the PunchClockHero Prog Trio, beleaguered, though, it may be.

* EveryoneHasStandards: Although Vendra does not see herself as a genuine hero, she immediately voted to head to Eudora to prevent the deforestation.

* FamilyOfChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.

* ForbiddenLove: By the time both Ratchet and Vendra become adolescents, they become conflicted about seeing each other as siblings still when they start to see how well-developed the other is becoming.

* GalacticConqueror: Vendra mentioned conquering the galaxy with her Gramps on his last trip to Veldin. Whether or not it'll taken seriously remains to be seen.

* HappilyAdopted: Although the Prog trio were unsure about Wendell's involvement in their lives at first, they become fonder of him for when he came to care for Vendra when she got sick.

* HarmfulToMinors: Ratchet was kicked out of the farming settlement Gadgetron owned on Veldin for being an non-contributive orphan. Not only did he steal food from the settlement in retaliation for them selling the space pod he came in just before meeting his future siblings, but this comes to influence the Prog siblings kicking the settlers off the planet and taking it for themselves in Chapter 4.

* HeelRealization: After a rather unkind joke to the Plumber in Chapter 15, the Progs come to realize that they've been working for their adoptive grandfather's approval for too long, they hadn't been more considerate to others.

* HonestCorporateExecutive: Wendell Lumos himself said that he started Gadgetron to group together the "small people with big brains" to benefit society as a whole as much as to give his employees a place to belong. Combined with being a good grandfather figure to the Prog siblings he adopted, and he's far better a person than Chairman Drek.

* InterspeciesAdoption: Ratchet is a Lombax, Vendra and Neftin are Nethers, and Wendell Lumos is a reptilian kind of alien, and yet the Nether siblings were quick to call Ratchet their brother upon his kind approach to them in their first meeting followed eventually by Wendell formally adopting the trio as his grandchildren to help settle legal issues.

* PervertRevengeMode: Vendra does not like being hit on, even though Ratchet, Neftin, and Clank were quick to threaten Al, Skidd, and the Deserter on here behalf, so it hasn't gotten violent yet.

* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: More like "the Mercenaries who do Pro Bono work", but while the Progs said that they were mercenaries since meeting the Novalis Chairman, they haven't been paid in bolts yet.

* PunchClockHero: Upon the Novalis Chairman asking if they were mercenaries, the Progs are claiming to be this even though the rewards they get for now are information and gadgets instead of money.

* ShoutOut: Among references to "old Earth anime", Vendra sings her own spin of Do You Want to Build a Snowman from [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Frozen]] to rouse her brothers to build a spaceship, so that they could visit Wendell as a surprise.

* TakeOverTheWorld: In Chapter 4, the Prog siblings use their gear as children to force the settlers off of Veldin, and they enjoyed their new found reign until they realized that they did not know how to farm.
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FamilyByChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.

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FamilyByChoice: FamilyOfChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.



ShoutOut: Among references to "old Earth anime", Vendra sings her own spin of Do You Want to Build a Snowman from [[WesternAnimation/Fronzen2013 Frozen]] to rouse her brothers to build a spaceship, so that they could visit Wendell as a surprise.

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ShoutOut: Among references to "old Earth anime", Vendra sings her own spin of Do You Want to Build a Snowman from [[WesternAnimation/Fronzen2013 [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Frozen]] to rouse her brothers to build a spaceship, so that they could visit Wendell as a surprise.
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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, Three Stars of Veldin is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternativeUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.

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At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, Three Stars of Veldin is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternativeUniverseFic AlternateUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.
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Many parallels exist between Ratchet's story and that of the Prog twins. Both orphans in a world not their own. Both socially outcast young. Both far smarter than all around them. It's easy to believe that had their paths been different, Ratchet could have been the villain and the Progs the heroes.
But what if they walked their path together from the first day? What if Vendra and Neftin were left on Veldin when they were expelled from the Nether?

This is that story.

At twenty-three chapters and ongoing, Three Stars of Veldin is an [[Franchise/RatchetAndClank Ratchet & Clank]] AlternativeUniverseFic by Tatsurou depicting how Ratchet and the Prog siblings' (Neftin and Vendra) lives would develop if the latter two ended up on the same planet as the former instead of their canon location.

Can be found on both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12426216/1/Three-Stars-of-Veldin Fanfiction Dot Com]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10500309/chapters/23166186 Archive of Our Own]].

ActionGirl: Vendra is a capable fighter with her telekinesis and weapons.

AdaptationalHeroism: As Vendra and Neftin grew up with Ratchet on Veldin, that essentially means that they join him and Clank on their first adventure. While the Progs, including Ratchet, have their own reasons for fighting the Blarg, it is still a step up from being life long criminals in canon.

AdaptationalIntelligence: Neftin has been stated to have worked on some weapons for Gadgetron alongside his siblings instead of just leaving all the technical/scientific thinking to Vendra.

AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of being enemies turned sympathetic allies of Ratchet and Clank as in Into the Nexus, Neftin and Vendra Prog grew up with Ratchet as the latter's younger siblings. Similarly, Wendell Lumos, the CEO of Gadgetron as named in the reimagined game, goes from a one time acquaintance of Ratchet and Clank's on their first adventure, to the adopted grandfather of Ratchet, Vendra, and Neftin alike.

BigBrotherInstinct: Both Ratchet and Neftin are pretty protective of Vendra, having gotten aggressive with both Big Al and Skidd McMarx for flirting, or wanting to flirt with her, and Ratchet pulling rank on Vendra in Chapter 22 by having Clank accompany her in the war zone on Planet Batalia.

ClingyJealousGirl: Vendra, having come to be attracted to Ratchet as a growing woman would, doesn't like it when the Hoverboard Girl at Blackwater City winks at him and has to be calmed down by both of her brothers before Ratchet can enter the race.

TheConscience: Clank's role to the PunchClockHero Prog Trio, beleaguered, though, it may be.

EveryoneHasStandards: Although Vendra does not see herself as a genuine hero, she immediately voted to head to Eudora to prevent the deforestation.

FamilyByChoice: Having been accepted by Vendra and Neftin due to his own starting act of kindness to them, Ratchet preferred for his surname to be "Prog" as well, and the three of them have been pretty happy among each other, especially when they formally recognized as siblings via being adopted by the same grandfather, Wendell Lumos.

ForbiddenLove: By the time both Ratchet and Vendra become adolescents, they become conflicted about seeing each other as siblings still when they start to see how well-developed the other is becoming.

GalacticConqueror: Vendra mentioned conquering the galaxy with her Gramps on his last trip to Veldin. Whether or not it'll taken seriously remains to be seen.

HappilyAdopted: Although the Prog trio were unsure about Wendell's involvement in their lives at first, they become fonder of him for when he came to care for Vendra when she got sick.

HarmfulToMinors: Ratchet was kicked out of the farming settlement Gadgetron owned on Veldin for being an non-contributive orphan. Not only did he steal food from the settlement in retaliation for them selling the space pod he came in just before meeting his future siblings, but this comes to influence the Prog siblings kicking the settlers off the planet and taking it for themselves in Chapter 4.

HeelRealization: After a rather unkind joke to the Plumber in Chapter 15, the Progs come to realize that they've been working for their adoptive grandfather's approval for too long, they hadn't been more considerate to others.

HonestCorporateExecutive: Wendell Lumos himself said that he started Gadgetron to group together the "small people with big brains" to benefit society as a whole as much as to give his employees a place to belong. Combined with being a good grandfather figure to the Prog siblings he adopted, and he's far better a person than Chairman Drek.

InterspeciesAdoption: Ratchet is a Lombax, Vendra and Neftin are Nethers, and Wendell Lumos is a reptilian kind of alien, and yet the Nether siblings were quick to call Ratchet their brother upon his kind approach to them in their first meeting followed eventually by Wendell formally adopting the trio as his grandchildren to help settle legal issues.

PervertRevengeMode: Vendra does not like being hit on, even though Ratchet, Neftin, and Clank were quick to threaten Al, Skidd, and the Deserter on here behalf, so it hasn't gotten violent yet.

ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: More like "the Mercenaries who do Pro Bono work", but while the Progs said that they were mercenaries since meeting the Novalis Chairman, they haven't been paid in bolts yet.

PunchClockHero: Upon the Novalis Chairman asking if they were mercenaries, the Progs are claiming to be this even though the rewards they get for now are information and gadgets instead of money.

ShoutOut: Among references to "old Earth anime", Vendra sings her own spin of Do You Want to Build a Snowman from [[WesternAnimation/Fronzen2013 Frozen]] to rouse her brothers to build a spaceship, so that they could visit Wendell as a surprise.

TakeOverTheWorld: In Chapter 4, the Prog siblings use their gear as children to force the settlers off of Veldin, and they enjoyed their new found reign until they realized that they did not know how to farm.

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