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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Mammon pretty much gives a speech to Eda about this, saying that Eda [[NormalFishInATinyPond might be the biggest fish in the Boiling Isles (which he calls a pond) but calls Lucifer the biggest shark in Hell (which he calls an ocean)]].
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Mammon pretty much gives a speech to Eda about this, saying that Eda [[NormalFishInATinyPond [[BigFishInABiggerOcean might be the biggest fish in the Boiling Isles (which he calls a pond) but calls Lucifer the biggest shark in Hell (which he calls an ocean)]].
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* NotWorthKilling: [[spoiler:Luz sees Belos as this upon seeeing what he had been reduced to in Hell, a weak powerless demon who has many demons he owed money (including those on behalf of Carmilla Carmine the biggest arms dealer in Hell). She convinces the others to let him continue his miserable existence while also being forced to work as the custodian of the Hazbin Hotel as dictated by Lucifer]].
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* NotWorthKilling: [[spoiler:Luz sees Belos as this upon seeeing seeing what he had been reduced to in Hell, a weak powerless demon who has many demons he owed money (including those on behalf of Carmilla Carmine the biggest arms dealer in Hell). She convinces the others to let him continue his miserable existence while also being forced to work as the custodian of the Hazbin Hotel as dictated by Lucifer]].
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* Cabin 7 ends up trapped in a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. One of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
* ''Theatre/WillysChocolateExperience'' gets mocked as Lucifer puts up a social media post talking about it and thinking that Mammon could get inspiration. Mammon retorts in a reply that his shows are a lot more put together.
* ''Theatre/WillysChocolateExperience'' gets mocked as Lucifer puts up a social media post talking about it and thinking that Mammon could get inspiration. Mammon retorts in a reply that his shows are a lot more put together.
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* TakeThat: Cabin 7 ends up trapped in a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. One of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
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* Cabin 7 ends up trapped in a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. One of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of''Series/GameOfThrones''.''Series/GameOfThrones''.
* ''Theatre/WillysChocolateExperience'' gets mocked as Lucifer puts up a social media post talking about it and thinking that Mammon could get inspiration. Mammon retorts in a reply that his shows are a lot more put together.
* Cabin 7 ends up trapped in a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. One of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of
* ''Theatre/WillysChocolateExperience'' gets mocked as Lucifer puts up a social media post talking about it and thinking that Mammon could get inspiration. Mammon retorts in a reply that his shows are a lot more put together.
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* ExpyCoexistence: The infamous finale of Series/GameOfThrones gets brought up. However chapters later Emily is revealed to be a fan of [[Recap/InsideNo9S6E2SimonSays the Ninth Circle]] and goes over the backlash over its controversial finale. Said show and reaction of the finale were inspired by Game of Thrones.
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* EveryoneKnewAlready: To her shock, Emily finds that her crush on Charlie and Vaggie isn't a secret to anyone in Heaven. One Winner is actually more surprised that it was meant to be a secret at all.
* ExpyCoexistence: The infamous finale ofSeries/GameOfThrones ''Series/GameOfThrones'' gets brought up. However chapters later Emily is revealed to be a fan of [[Recap/InsideNo9S6E2SimonSays the ''[[Recap/InsideNo9S6E2SimonSays The Ninth Circle]] Circle]]'' and goes over the backlash over its controversial finale. Said show and reaction of the finale were inspired by Game ''Game of Thrones.Thrones''.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Sera reveals that she had a crush on Lucifer back in the early days, and still occasionally thinks of those feelings.
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* BrickJoke: In the first chapter, Lilith calls out Lucifer for never paying his tab in his favorite bar. Near the end of the story, he does exactly that when snapped out of his depression over [[spoiler: worrying about Sera's valid points about his relationship with Camilla]].
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: The first law of Hell is "Whatever Lucifer says fucking goes".
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* TakeThat: Cabin 7 ends up trapped in a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. one One of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
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* TakeThat: When Cabin 7 are debating possible punishments if they're caught while in Hell, one of the speculated options is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
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* TakeThat: When Cabin 7 are debating possible punishments if they're caught while ends up trapped in Hell, a Hell club after having attempted to dine and dash with security looking for them. one of the speculated options for punishments if they end up caught is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
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* TakeThat: When Cabin 7 are debating possible punishments if they're caught while in Hell, one of the speculated options is being made to watch the final season of ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
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* InternalReveal: Emily accidentally gets the existence of the Exterminations revealed to her in "Implications".
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* ADayInTheLimelight: A No So Simple Caper serves as this for Vee and Cabin 7; after serving a minor supporting role in the previous story.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: A "A No So Simple Caper Caper" serves as this for Vee and Cabin 7; 7, after serving a minor supporting role in the previous story.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Fizz bitterly reflects via flashback how Mammon had no problem using his likeness for a sex doll (despite the Sin saying that he viewed Fizz as a son), but flew into a rage when he found out that one of Asmodeus's designers had made a prototype one with Charlie (who Mammon viewed as an honorary niece).
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Fizz bitterly reflects via flashback how Mammon had no problem using his likeness for a sex doll (despite the Sin saying that he viewed Fizz as a son), but flew into a rage when he found out that one of Asmodeus's designers had made a prototype one with Charlie (who Mammon viewed views as an honorary niece).
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Fizz bitterly reflects via flashback how Mammon had no problem using his likeness for a sex doll, but flew into a rage when one of his other employees did the same with Charlie.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Fizz bitterly reflects via flashback how Mammon had no problem using his likeness for a sex doll, doll (despite the Sin saying that he viewed Fizz as a son), but flew into a rage when he found out that one of his other employees did the same Asmodeus's designers had made a prototype one with Charlie.Charlie (who Mammon viewed as an honorary niece).
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Vee's friends in Cabin 7 besides Marsha are given the names Marcus and Rachel.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Vee's friends in Cabin 7 besides Marsha Masha are given the names Marcus and Rachel.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Like in the original fic's inspiration, Lilith is stated to have become Amity's mother figure to the point where she gets directly referred to as "Mum" by Amity.
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earth for Adam's firstborn son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]].
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earth for Adam's firstborn first born son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: As confirmed by WordOfGod, Adam throws Belos out of the Heaven embassy, not just due to his usual dismissal of sinners, but the fact that Belos was: a dictator, a genocidal maniac against the Boiling Isles[[note]]Adam exterminates sinners, but has the excuse they are there due to their actions, rather than just born that way[[/note]], and is another religious fundamentalist claiming their sins were in the name of God.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards:
** As confirmed by WordOfGod, Adam throws Belos out of the Heaven embassy, not just due to his usual dismissal of sinners, but the fact that Belos was: a dictator, a genocidal maniac against the Boiling Isles[[note]]Adam exterminates sinners, but has the excuse they are there due to their actions, rather than just born that way[[/note]], and is another religious fundamentalist claiming their sins were in the name ofGod.God.
** When Belphegor reveals that Beelzebub lied to her about Charlie proposing to Vaggie; in order to trick her into unlocking her party drugs, the other Sins react judgementally towards Beelzebub. Mammon admits that even he thinks that it was a low move.
** As confirmed by WordOfGod, Adam throws Belos out of the Heaven embassy, not just due to his usual dismissal of sinners, but the fact that Belos was: a dictator, a genocidal maniac against the Boiling Isles[[note]]Adam exterminates sinners, but has the excuse they are there due to their actions, rather than just born that way[[/note]], and is another religious fundamentalist claiming their sins were in the name of
** When Belphegor reveals that Beelzebub lied to her about Charlie proposing to Vaggie; in order to trick her into unlocking her party drugs, the other Sins react judgementally towards Beelzebub. Mammon admits that even he thinks that it was a low move.
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* InternalReveal: Emily accidentally gets the existence of the Exterminations revealed to her here in "Implications".
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earth on Adam's firstborn son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]].
* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earth on Adam's firstborn son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]].
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* InternalReveal: Emily accidentally gets the existence of the Exterminations revealed to her here in Implications.
AllMythsAreTrue: Discussed, when Luz questions if other pantheons are real or if it's just Christianity.
* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earthon for Adam's firstborn son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]].so]].
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Followed by a sequel ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/54628897/chapters/138427555 Tales of the Nocedas & Morningstars]''
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Followed by a sequel sequel, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/54628897/chapters/138427555 Tales of the Nocedas & Morningstars]''
Morningstars]]''.
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler:It turns out that some of Adam's hostility over Lucifer comes from blaming free will being brought into Earth on Adam's firstborn son Cain killing his brother Abel. Reasoning that if he didn't have free will then he would never have done so]]/
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[[folderTales of the Nocedas & Morningstars]]
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