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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: The status quo of the world has been completely destroyed, thanks to the events of the Enies Lobby arc (detailed under FromBadToWorse above), as stated by Elder Nyon. The Straw Hats have completely destroyed the reputation of the World Government, and it causes a domino effect that leads to a severe loss of manpower for the Marines, shifting the BalanceOfPower in favor of the Four Emperors and generally ensuing chaos across the seas.

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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: The status quo of the world has been completely destroyed, is no more, thanks to the events of the Enies Lobby arc (detailed under FromBadToWorse above), as stated by Elder Nyon. The Straw Hats have completely destroyed the reputation of the World Government, and it causes a domino effect that leads to a severe loss of manpower for the Marines, shifting the BalanceOfPower in favor of the Four Emperors and generally ensuing unleashing chaos across the seas.

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** [[spoiler: The Going Merry eats the [[HumanityEnsues Human-Human Fruit, Model: Child]].]]

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** [[spoiler: The To survive past the Enies Lobby arc, the Going Merry eats the [[HumanityEnsues Human-Human Fruit, Model: Child]].]]]]
** [[spoiler:During the Strong World arc, Vivi eats the Gust-Gust Fruit, becoming the first Logia of the Straw Hat crew]].
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** Drake does it again when he asks Jonathan why the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral to take out the Straw Hat Pirates. Aside from one of them being a BloodKnight on the other side of the Red Line while the other two are BrillantButLazy, Jonathan mentions the MortonsFork scenario above.

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** Drake does it again when he asks Jonathan why the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral to take out the Straw Hat Pirates. Aside from one of them being a BloodKnight on the other side of the Red Line while the other two are BrillantButLazy, BrilliantButLazy, Jonathan mentions the MortonsFork scenario above.

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* BlowYouAway: In Strong World, Vivi consumes [[SecretWeapon the aril of the Gust-Gust Fruit]] [[GodzillaThreshold in response to Shiki curbstomping the Straw Hats]] and becomes a Logia in the process.

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* BlowYouAway: In Strong World, [[spoiler: Vivi consumes [[SecretWeapon the aril of the Gust-Gust Fruit]] [[GodzillaThreshold in response to Shiki curbstomping the Straw Hats]] and becomes a Logia in the process.]]



* PowerUpFood: Thanks to Dr. Indigo's toxin drugs, practically every piece of fauna (and a good chunk of flora) is this: the toxins grant super strength and stamina to whoever ingests them, and they remain in the body and blood of the consumer even after death, meaning anyone or anything that consumes the consumer's flesh will become empowered too.

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* PowerUpFood: Thanks to Dr. Indigo's toxin drugs, practically every piece of fauna (and a good chunk of flora) on Merveille is this: the toxins grant super strength and stamina to whoever ingests them, and they remain in the body and blood of the consumer even after death, meaning anyone or anything that consumes the consumer's flesh will become empowered too.


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** In Strong World, Robin {{Face Palm}}s multiple times when Bartolomeo asks how things can get worse.

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* BlowYouAway: In Strong World, Vivi consumes [[SecretWeapon the aril of the Gust-Gust Fruit]] [[GodzillaThreshold in response to Shiki curbstomping the Straw Hats]] and becomes a Logia in the process.



* GoombaStomp: Cross pulls this on the Unluckies when they go after him in Jaya. Soundbite even [[LampshadeHanging Lampshades]] it by playing the ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros1'' music.
* GracefulLoser: Foxy is surprisingly accepting about having to be a Straw Hat. [[spoiler:Or so he thinks]].
** "Long" John "Silverteeth" is outright happy to lose to Leo as it means he finally gets a satisfying death.



* GoombaStomp: Cross pulls this on the Unluckies when they go after him in Jaya. Soundbite even [[LampshadeHanging Lampshades]] it by playing the ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros1'' music.



* GracefulLoser: Foxy is surprisingly accepting about having to be a Straw Hat. [[spoiler:Or so he thinks]].
** "Long" John "Silverteeth" is outright happy to lose to Leo as it means he finally gets a satisfying death.



* HopelessBossFight: Cross compares fighting Kuma to being worse than fighting Mihawk. With Mihawk they can at least run if he doesn't care enough. Against Kuma, they can't fight ''or'' run.

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Cross compares fighting Kuma to being worse than fighting Mihawk. With Mihawk they can at least run if he doesn't care enough. Against Kuma, they can't fight ''or'' run.run.
** Earlier, the Straw Hats suffered their first major defeat at the hands of [[AnIcePerson Admiral Aokiji]]. In Strong World, their first fight against [[PowerFloats Shiki the Golden Lion]] ends in failure when he uses [[DishingOutDirt Lion's Threat:]] [[BuriedAlive Earth Bind]].

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** Vivi fiddles with the [[SecretWeapon Sirocco-charm container]] that her father gave her whenever she is faced with a particularly terrifying enemy, as if contemplating crossing a threshold there is no going back from. [[spoiler:It contains the seed of an active Logia Devil Fruit.]]

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** Vivi fiddles with the [[SecretWeapon Sirocco-charm container]] that her father gave her whenever she is faced with a particularly terrifying enemy, as if contemplating crossing a threshold there is no going back from. [[spoiler:It contains the seed of an active Logia Devil Fruit. As of Chapter 57, she already crossed it after the Straw Hats' HopelessBossFight against Shiki and consumes the seed, making her a Logia.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11515678/1/This-Bites This Bites!]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060717/Xomniac Xomniac]], with assistance from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3056662/The-Patient-One The Patient One]]. It is currently the most popular SI fic in the ''One Piece'' fandom, and the sixth most popular fic overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11515678/1/This-Bites This Bites!]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060717/Xomniac Xomniac]], with assistance from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3056662/The-Patient-One The Patient One]]. It is currently the most popular SI fic in the ''One Piece'' fandom, and the sixth fifth most popular fic overall.
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** The preview for Chapter 57 ends with [[spoiler:Vivi finally consuming the seed of the Gust-Gust Fruit, making her a Logia]].
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: The status quo of the world has been completely destroyed, thanks to the events of the Enies Lobby arc (detailed under FromBadToWorse above), as stated by Elder Nyon. The Straw Hats have completely destroyed the reputation of the World Government, and it causes a domino effect that leads to a severe loss of manpower for the Marines, shifting the BalanceOfPower in favor of the Four Emperors and generally ensuing chaos across the seas.

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Luffy's Haki-powered shout doesn't qualify as Compelling Voice, as he's not commanding them to faint, just overwhelming them with pure awesome.


** This is often the description of other users of Conqueror's Haki, from Hancock's predatory world serpent and Sengoku's golden divine glow, to [[spoiler: Vivi's royal pharaonic countenance and Luffy's monster aura]].

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** This is often the description of other users of Conqueror's Haki, from Hancock's predatory world serpent and Sengoku's golden divine glow, to [[spoiler: Vivi's royal pharaonic countenance and Luffy's monster aura]].monstrous beast]].



** [[spoiler: After finally finding the Sunny after his week in hell and finding more mutant creatures chasing after them, Luffy has enough, unleashing (and unlocking) a Conqueror's Haki-powered shout that lays down nearby crew members, as well as the monsters.]]



* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt: [[spoiler:While fighting a giant frog and scorpion in a tree canopy, Cross whipped out Funkfreed and seemed to randomly strike at the pair, without landing a hit on them. However, the scorpion and frog then hear a creaking sound underneath them and realize that Cross was actually cutting away at the vines they were standing on, with one last stab causing the pair to fall to the ground]].

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* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt: [[spoiler:While fighting a giant frog and scorpion in a tree canopy, Cross whipped out Funkfreed and seemed to randomly strike at the pair, without landing a hit on them. However, the scorpion and frog then hear a creaking sound underneath them and realize that Cross was actually cutting away at the vines they were standing on, with one last stab [[FloorboardFailure causing the pair to fall to the ground]].ground]]]].



* ShipSinking: WordOfGod states that, for the simple reason that none of the three authors have skill in that particular area, they have no plans of putting any pairings into the story. The closes they ever get is emphasizing the already canon ShipTease between Vivi and her ChildhoodFriend Kohza.

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* ShipSinking: WordOfGod states that, for the simple reason that none of the three authors have skill in that particular area, they have no plans of putting any pairings into the story. The closes closest they ever get is emphasizing the already canon ShipTease between Vivi and her ChildhoodFriend Kohza.
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** [[spoiler: After finally finding the Sunny after his week in hell and finding more mutant creatures chasing after them, Luffy has enough, unleashing (and unlocking) a Conqueror's Haki-powered shout that lays down nearby crew members, as well as the monsters.]]
* CompensatingForSomething: Soundbite tells a variation of this to "Big Knife" Sarquiss; that his knife isn't big enough for him to compensate with.

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** [[spoiler: After finally finding the Sunny after his week in hell and finding more mutant creatures chasing after them, Luffy has enough, unleashing (and unlocking) a Conqueror's Haki-powered shout that lays down nearby crew members, as well as the monsters.]]
* CompensatingForSomething: Soundbite tells a double-layered variation of this to "Big Knife" Sarquiss; that his knife isn't big enough for him to compensate with.



** Mr. 3, when he catches up to Cross and Soundbite in Rainbase, had learned from his experience with Soundbite's powers, so he came prepared: breath control to keep him from hearing his breath, a wax vest to mask his heartbeat, and earplugs to guard against Soundbite's distractions. The Unluckies, Ohm, and the Foxy Pirates are among others who used forewarning to guard against Soundbite's powers.

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** Mr. 3, when he catches up to Cross and Soundbite in Rainbase, had learned from his experience with Soundbite's powers, so he came prepared: breath control to keep him from hearing his breath, a wax vest to mask his heartbeat, a little tapper to make it seem like a heartbeat is coming from elsewhere, and earplugs to guard against Soundbite's distractions. The Unluckies, Ohm, and the Foxy Pirates are among others who used forewarning to guard against Soundbite's powers.



* DehumanizingInsult: When Shiki appears at the end of Chapter 56, he calls both Nami and Billy his '''property''' and demands the Straw Hats give them back. Naturally, their reaction is ''[[BerserkButton murderous rage]]''.



** The Unluckies probably should've waited for their concussions to wear off, else they might have reconsidered busting into a crowded train car to get to Cross, while his much-stronger crewmates are present.



** After Spandam's incompetence helps completely humiliate the World Government and he announces his intention to overthrow the Five Elder Stars, Sengoku calls him and tells him to report to the Five Elder Stars and receive everything he has coming to him. Idiot that he is, Spandam thinks he's being rewarded.

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** After Spandam's incompetence helps completely humiliate the World Government and he announces his intention to overthrow the Five Elder Stars, Sengoku calls him and tells him to report to the Five Elder Stars and receive everything he has coming to him. Idiot that he is, Spandam thinks he's being rewarded.''rewarded''.



* GrowingWings: In Merveille, Conis's vestigial wings suddenly grow in size in response to Su's suffering as they fall. However, her limited flying abilities are cut short due to unfamiliarity in using them.

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* GrowingWings: In Merveille, Conis's vestigial wings suddenly grow in size in response to Su's suffering as they fall. fall and all the [[PowerUpFood SIQ-laced bushmeat]] she'd been eating. However, her limited flying abilities are cut short due to unfamiliarity in using them.them and sudden muscle sprains.



** Foxy goes catatonic when [[spoiler:Whitebeard calls into the SBS during the broadcasted Davy Back Fight, and Luffy manages to impress him.]] It takes Cross's foghorn to snap him out of it.

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** Foxy goes catatonic when [[spoiler:Whitebeard [[spoiler: [[WorldsStrongestMan Whitebeard]] calls into the SBS during the broadcasted Davy Back Fight, and Luffy manages to impress him.]] It takes Cross's foghorn to snap him out of it.



** What was it that swore Buggy, someone who has seen the insanity of the New World, off the Grand Line and made him stay firmly in the East Blue? [[spoiler:Lily Carnation]]. [[spoiler:His old crew weren't even that lucky.]]

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** What was it that swore Buggy, someone who has seen the insanity of the New World, off the Grand Line and made him stay firmly in the East Blue? [[spoiler:Lily Carnation]].[[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination Lily Carnation]]]]. [[spoiler:His old crew weren't even that lucky.]]



* ItsPersonal: Unlike the rest of Baroque Works' agents who hold no real grudge against the Straw Hats, the Unluckies have made it clear they will only retire after they've brutally killed Cross and Soundbite.

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* ItsPersonal: Unlike the rest of Baroque Works' agents who hold no real grudge against the Straw Hats, [[AnimalNemesis the Unluckies Unluckies]] have made it clear they will only retire after they've brutally killed Cross and Soundbite.



* MindVirus: It's stated that the reason for [[spoiler:the crew's [[OutOfCharacterAlert out-of-character moments]] on [[Anime/BaronOmatsuriAndTheSecretIsland the Secret Island]], leading to their bonds fracturing,]] is all due to [[spoiler:Lily Carnation's spores]]. [[spoiler:And the more human someone is, the more they are susceptible to it.]]

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* MindVirus: It's stated that the reason for [[spoiler:the crew's [[OutOfCharacterAlert out-of-character moments]] on [[Anime/BaronOmatsuriAndTheSecretIsland the Secret Island]], leading to their bonds fracturing,]] is all due to [[spoiler:Lily Carnation's spores]].pollens]]. [[spoiler:And the more human someone is, the more they are susceptible to it.]]



** Perona flipflops between worrying if Nami is okay and being assured that she is okay while the two of them escape from Shiki's palace.



*** The fifth time (even if it's Soundbite aping his voice), it's to announce a special guest on their ship: [[Anime/OnePieceFilmStrongWorld Shiki the Golden Lion]].



** Boss and Franky flexing at each other is so manly it makes Cross' chest hair grow.

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** Boss and Franky flexing [[PecFlex flexing]] at each other is so manly it makes Cross' chest hair grow.


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** Through the discussion about how survival of the fittest is an EnforcedTrope on [[Anime/OnePieceFilmStrongWorld Merveille]] (Dr. Indigo injected his strength-boosting toxins into the wildlife, animals beat other animals, [[CannibalismSuperpower consume their bodies and the toxins inside them]] and grow even stronger), Luffy, Boss, and Cross and his partners realise why the beasts are following them: they've been beating the alpha beasts, the ones who had consumed enough toxin to stand strong alone until now, and as such have invited the other animals to feed on their corpses and grow even stronger in a very short amount of time.
** Yet another one for Strong World - through their discussion, Cross and Vivi figure out exactly why Shiki has villages filled with inhabitants living on his floating archipelago: ''super-weapon test targets''.

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** Through the discussion about how survival of the fittest is an EnforcedTrope on [[Anime/OnePieceFilmStrongWorld Merveille]] (Dr. Indigo injected his strength-boosting toxins into the wildlife, animals beat other animals, [[CannibalismSuperpower consume their bodies and the toxins inside them]] and grow even stronger), Luffy, Boss, and Cross and his partners realise realize why the beasts are following them: they've the animals have been beating driving them into the paths of the alpha beasts, beasts (which they inevitably beat), the ones who had consumed enough toxin to stand strong alone until now, and as such have invited the other animals to feed on their corpses and grow even stronger in a very short amount of time.
time. And since these animals have been trained to believe that eating the strong will make them stronger, they've already set their eyes on their final targets, those that have established themselves as the strongest on the archipelago. Guess who that is?
** Yet another one for Strong World - -- through their discussion, Cross and Vivi figure out exactly why Shiki has villages filled with inhabitants living on his floating archipelago: ''super-weapon test targets''.

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* AWizardDidIt: Whenever people react to Soundbite being able to speak, Cross is able to erase any shock just by saying "Devil Fruit."

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* AWizardDidIt: Whenever people react to Soundbite being able to speak, Cross is able to erase any shock just by saying "Devil Fruit."" This soon applies for pretty much any weird occurrence (like Brook), and many people often give a deadpan response to anyone who should be inured to the weirdness by now.



** This is often the description of other users of Conqueror's Haki, from Hancock's predatory world serpent and Sengoku's golden divine glow, to [[spoiler: Vivi's royal pharaonic countenance and Luffy's monster aura]].



* BewareTheNiceOnes: Vivi. It was scary enough when she got angry at Cross for lying to her face about where the Rebel Army was (for good reason, and she apologizes for it later), but after escaping Rain Dinners and Smoker decides to try arresting the Straw Hats...well.

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Vivi. It was scary enough when she got angry at Cross for lying to her face about where the Rebel Army was (for good reason, and she apologizes for it later), but after escaping Rain Dinners and Smoker decides to try arresting the Straw Hats...well.



** What makes this doubly impressive is that, for the first time, Vivi [[spoiler:invokes her family name as one of the 20 original world-creating kingdoms to do so]].
** Later Vivi fantasizes (to the point of drooling) over having a Buster Call initiated on a World Government island like Enies Lobby.

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** *** What makes this doubly impressive is that, for the first time, Vivi [[spoiler:invokes her family name as one of the 20 original world-creating kingdoms to do so]].
** *** Later Vivi fantasizes (to the point of drooling) over having a Buster Call initiated on a World Government island like Enies Lobby.Lobby.
** Shanks, as in canon. NiceGuy all the way through, but this line says it all:
---> '''Shanks:''' We'll see if the Golden Lion has bitten off more than he can chew by challenging [=[the Straw Hats]=]. And if he hasn't? '''[[ThisMeansWar Then he'll wish that he had.]]'''



* BigDamnKiss: An example played for comedy - Nami lays one on both Cross ''and'' [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Robin]] when they deliver the [[MoneyFetish giant pillar of gold]] from Skypiea.



** Why is [[DemBones Brook]] so appalled at his face? Especially since he's senile enough to get scared by it?
---> '''Brook:''' I'm starting to go yellow around my orbital sockets! Now how will I get all the hot young skeletons to love me?!



* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: When the Straw Hats first meet Shiki, this is Leo's reaction after blurts out that he wants Shiki's legs (on account of Shiki's legs being Grade Swords, Oto and Kogarashi).



** Yet another one for Strong World - through their discussion, Cross and Vivi figure out exactly why Shiki has villages filled with inhabitants living on his floating archipelago: ''super-weapon test targets''.



** When Soundbite fails to induce {{Head Desk}}ing in Cross on account of it not being the universe screwing with him, Soundbite invokes B.R.O.B. to try again. In response, the AllPowerfulBystander makes a tree branch fall into Soundbite's face with some twigs curled into the above gesture.



** When the [=CP9=] investigated several countries that formed a trading coalition, said coalition was found to be completely innocuous. Rather than simply withdraw, they utilized the worse case scenario to pit every country at war with the others and stole all possible liquid assets which were added to the Celestial Dragons' tribute.

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** When the [=CP9=] investigated several countries that formed a trading coalition, said coalition was found to be completely innocuous. Rather than simply withdraw, they utilized the worse case scenario to pit every country at war with the others and stole all possible liquid assets which were added to the Celestial Dragons' tribute.



* ParentheticalSwearing: After learning the truth of Ohara, Tsuru responds to Sengoku's orders with a "Yes sir" that sounds far more like "Fuck you".

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* ParentheticalSwearing: After learning the truth of Ohara, Tsuru responds to Sengoku's orders with a "Yes sir" an "At once" that sounds far more like "Fuck you".



** Once Luffy's group finally find the Sunny after a week of searching Merveille, one last group of enhanced beasts attacks, but Luffy is so frustrated that he finally tells them off - [[spoiler: with '''Conqueror's Haki''']].



---> '''Soundbite''': ''(about [[spoiler:Moria]]))'' [[spoiler:'''[[EnlightenmentSuperpowers HE FIGURED IT OUT...]]''']]

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---> '''Soundbite''': ''(about [[spoiler:Moria]]))'' [[spoiler:Moria]])'' [[spoiler:'''[[EnlightenmentSuperpowers HE FIGURED IT OUT...]]''']]
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** When Tashigi informs Cross of Shiki [[spoiler:using the Snail Transceiver and]] broadcasting the Straw Hats' struggles in Strong World, he is miffed over the amount of viewers Shiki received in comparison to his listeners [[spoiler:on the SBS]].

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* CompellingVoice: Sovereign's Will, [[spoiler:a variation of Conqueror's Haki that Vivi unlocks. Everyone who hears it is forced to follow her orders, no questions asked.]]

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* GrowingWings: In Merveille, Conis's vestigial wings suddenly grow in size in response to Su's suffering as they fall. However, her limited flying abilities are cut short due to unfamiliarity in using them.


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** A variation. Tsuru warns the Straw Hats of Shiki [[spoiler: on the SBS]] with him nearby on the Sunny. The Straw Hats are ''very'' terrified.
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* EngineeredPublicConfession: Or, as Cross and Soundbite like to call it, "Candid Snail". Thanks to Cross' knowledge of canon and the transceiver they got from B.R.O.B., they manage to pull this trick several times on many World Government Officials and Marines (most notably Spandam and Vice-Admiral Onigumo), exposing their heinous plans, corruption and/or monstrous ideals to the entire ''world''.
-->'''Soundbite''': '''BUUU~STEEE~D!'''


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*** Spandam in general has inspired this feeling. By the time [[spoiler:Cross tricks him into announcing his plans to overthrow the Five Elder Stars using Pluton]], even the World Government is thoroughly sickened of him. In the aftermath of Enies Lobby, several Marine higher-ups, including Aokiji, Tsuru, and Sengoku himself, are absolutely ''relishing'' at the thought of his eventual and inevitable punishment.
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* BookSafe: The priest who was supposed to perform the Accino-Hiruno wedding is revealed to have hollowed out his bible and used it to store a flash of vodka.

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** Drake does it again when he asks Jonathan while the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral to take out the Straw Hat Pirates. Aside from one of them being a BloodKnight on the other side of the Red Line while the other two are BrillantButLazy, Jonathan mentions the MortonsFork scenario above.

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** Drake does it again when he asks Jonathan while why the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral to take out the Straw Hat Pirates. Aside from one of them being a BloodKnight on the other side of the Red Line while the other two are BrillantButLazy, Jonathan mentions the MortonsFork scenario above.
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** Turns out that avoiding this is the reason [[StatingTheSimpleSolution the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral against the Straw Hats]]. The CurbStompBattle the Admiral would dish out to the Straw Hats would [[NoKillLikeOverKill seem excessive]] and make the Marines appear weak if they need to send in an Admiral to beat a mere bunch of rookie pirates. And in the slightest chance that [[DefeatingTheUndefeatable the Straw Hats manage to defeat one of the Marine's Greatest Military Powers]], it would convince the Warlords to rebel and throw the balance of Three Powers off-kilter.

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** Turns out that avoiding this is the reason [[StatingTheSimpleSolution the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral against the Straw Hats]]. The CurbStompBattle the Admiral would dish out to the Straw Hats would [[NoKillLikeOverKill seem excessive]] and make the Marines appear weak if they need to send in an Admiral to beat a mere bunch of rookie pirates. And in the slightest chance that [[DefeatingTheUndefeatable the Straw Hats manage to defeat one of the Marine's Greatest Military Powers]], it would convince the Warlords to rebel and throw the balance of the Three Powers off-kilter.
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** Turns out that avoiding this is the reason [[StatingTheSimpleSolution the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral against the Straw Hats]]. The CurbStompBattle the Admiral would dish out to the Straw Hats would [[NoKillLikeOverKill seem excessive]] and make the Marines appear weak if they need to send in an Admiral to beat a mere bunch of rookie pirates. And in the remote event that [[DefeatingTheUndefeatable the Straw Hats manage to defeat one of the Marine's greatest military powers]], it would convince the Warlords to rebel and throw the balance of Three Powers off-kilter.

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** Turns out that avoiding this is the reason [[StatingTheSimpleSolution the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral against the Straw Hats]]. The CurbStompBattle the Admiral would dish out to the Straw Hats would [[NoKillLikeOverKill seem excessive]] and make the Marines appear weak if they need to send in an Admiral to beat a mere bunch of rookie pirates. And in the remote event slightest chance that [[DefeatingTheUndefeatable the Straw Hats manage to defeat one of the Marine's greatest military powers]], Greatest Military Powers]], it would convince the Warlords to rebel and throw the balance of Three Powers off-kilter.

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** Turns out that avoiding this is the reason [[StatingTheSimpleSolution the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral against the Straw Hats]]. The CurbStompBattle the Admiral would dish out to the Straw Hats would [[NoKillLikeOverKill seem excessive]] and make the Marines appear weak if they need to send in an Admiral to beat a mere bunch of rookie pirates. And in the remote event that [[DefeatingTheUndefeatable the Straw Hats manage to defeat one of the Marine's greatest military powers]], it would convince the Warlords to rebel and throw the balance of Three Powers off-kilter.



* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Commander Drake asks why Vice Admiral Jonathan hasn't simply shot Terry and Isaiah, to which Jonathan responds that he can't afford the two million-beri fine.

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** Drake does it again when he asks Jonathan while the Marines haven't dispatched an Admiral to take out the Straw Hat Pirates. Aside from one of them being a BloodKnight on the other side of the Red Line while the other two are BrillantButLazy, Jonathan mentions the MortonsFork scenario above.
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* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt:[[spoiler:While fighting a giant frog and scorpion in a tree canopy, Cross whipped out Funkfreed and seemed to randomly strike at the pair, without landing a hit on them. However, the scorpion and frog then hear a creaking sound underneath them and realize that Cross was actually cutting away at the vines they were standing on, with one last stab causing the pair to fall to the ground]].

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* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt:[[spoiler:While ExactlyWhatIAimedAt: [[spoiler:While fighting a giant frog and scorpion in a tree canopy, Cross whipped out Funkfreed and seemed to randomly strike at the pair, without landing a hit on them. However, the scorpion and frog then hear a creaking sound underneath them and realize that Cross was actually cutting away at the vines they were standing on, with one last stab causing the pair to fall to the ground]].
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* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt:[[spoiler:While fighting a giant frog and scorpion in a tree canopy, Cross whipped out Funkfreed and seemed to randomly strike at the pair, without landing a hit on them. However, the scorpion and frog then hear a creaking sound underneath them and realize that Cross was actually cutting away at the vines they were standing on, with one last stab causing the pair to fall to the ground]].

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* ShipSinking: WordOfGod states that, for the simple reason that none of the three authors have skill in that particular area, they have no plans of putting any pairings into the story.

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* ShipSinking: WordOfGod states that, for the simple reason that none of the three authors have skill in that particular area, they have no plans of putting any pairings into the story. The closes they ever get is emphasizing the already canon ShipTease between Vivi and her ChildhoodFriend Kohza.
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*** The moment when Vivi and Conis [[spoiler: ask to learn the Poneglyph language]] from Robin goes from heartwarming to hilarious when Robin shows just how... ''[[{{Squee}} suppressed]]'' her dream of being a teacher was.

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*** ** The moment when Vivi and Conis [[spoiler: ask to learn the Poneglyph language]] from Robin goes from heartwarming to hilarious when Robin shows just how... ''[[{{Squee}} suppressed]]'' her dream of being a teacher was.
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'''Leo''': Uh, are they...''always'' like this?\\

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'''Leo''': -->'''Leo''': Uh, are they...''always'' like this?\\
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* IsItAlwaysLikeThis: When the Straw Hats see Franky and Iceburg arguing the moment they come into contact:
'''Leo''': Uh, are they...''always'' like this?\\
'''Paulie''': ''(With an exasperated sigh)'' Sadly, yes. Seriously, half of Water 7 sets their clocks to these damn fights...\\
'''Kaku''': Half nothing, I take my lunch breaks whenever they clash.
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* GenreShift: FF.net Chapter 38. ''[[spoiler:Anime/BaronOmatsuriAndTheSecretIsland]]''. Need I say more?

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* GenreShift: FF.net Chapter 38. ''[[spoiler:Anime/BaronOmatsuriAndTheSecretIsland]]''. Need I say more?Nuff said.

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