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* SwissArmySuperpower: It's noted, often by Mami, that a Magical Girl's powers are limited only by their imagination. Mami's talent with her ribbons is a standout example, though she is far from the only example.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Where Soulbonds come from is something that Homura has wondered about in story. Having found evidence in her research all the way back to the age of cavemen, Homura is sure that it has to be the work of the Incubators and it can't be the work of God because she can't imagine He actually exists (she can't stomach God allowing the Incubators to run free). Kyubey in turn is completely clueless about their origins and has nothing to do with them,and is outright continuously thrown off by them, leaving their origins completely unsure. Every culture throughout the world has their own views on them, each claiming their origin to be from their own from the gods of Japan to the Christian God, with no indication of whom, if any, is right about it. So if Soulbonds are the creation of magic from another source than the Incubators, some divine blessing, or an unknown third source is unclear, and it seems that Homura and Kyubey, being outsiders to the system, are the only ones who ever dwell on it.

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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Where Soulbonds come from is something that Homura has wondered about in story. Having found evidence in her research all the way back to the age of cavemen, Homura is sure that it has to be the work of the Incubators and it can't be the work of God because she can't imagine He actually exists (she can't stomach God allowing the Incubators to run free). Kyubey in turn is completely clueless about their origins and has nothing to do with them,and is outright continuously thrown off by them, leaving their origins completely unsure. Every culture throughout the world has their own views on them, each claiming their origin to be from their own from the gods of Japan to the Christian God, with no indication of whom, if any, is right about it. So if Soulbonds are the creation of magic from another source than the Incubators, some divine blessing, or an unknown third source is unclear, and it seems that Homura and Kyubey, being outsiders to the system, are the only ones who ever dwell on it. [[spoiler:The fact that the Madoka from the most recent timeline that Homura had been in before this one gave Homura a book that fits very much with her current situation in the new timeline and that Homura does not know what that Madoka's fate or if she made a wish before Homura did her reset adds more questions into where Soulbonds came from.]]
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** [[Anime/HirogaruSkyPrettyCure Sora/Mashiro]]

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* SoulmateAUFic: The premise of the story being Homura Akemi time looping into one where she otherwise is not from and having to adapt to it. Soulmates in the universe have identifying marks, can come in groups anywhere from two people to at least five (as is the case with Homura), and in larger groups soulmates become 'active' in waves and are triggered by traumatic or life changing events. Homura waking up in the new timeline ended up triggering a Soulbond with Mami, Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko, though the latter two are not active when she wakes up. Soulmates that are active can share emotions, experience the other's dreams, are cold until they find their soulmate(s) after gaining their marks, have societal services and norms set up for their relationships, and have implicitly changed history in ways that Homura can easily see when going over history books. Soulmarks themselves are distinct between each set of them and change over time to show how close a soulmate is with another, which in turn increases their connections. Magical Girls in particular gain a few unique benefits, as their bonds can purify soul gems just by being around the other, making it very hard, though not impossible, for them to turn into witches. However Soulmates have one key weakness in that if one dies, all of them die. Known sets of Soulmates in the story include.

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* SoulmateAUFic: The premise of the story being Homura Akemi time looping into one where she otherwise is not from and having to adapt to it. Soulmates in the universe have identifying marks, can come in groups anywhere from two people to at least five (as is the case with Homura), and in larger groups soulmates become 'active' in waves and are triggered by traumatic or life changing events. According to Iroha, about a fifth of the world's population have Soulmates. Homura waking up in the new timeline ended up triggering a Soulbond with Mami, Madoka, Sayaka, and Kyoko, though the latter two are not active when she wakes up. Soulmates that are active can share emotions, experience the other's dreams, are cold until they find their soulmate(s) after gaining their marks, have societal services and norms set up for their relationships, and have implicitly changed history in ways that Homura can easily see when going over history books. Soulmarks themselves are distinct between each set of them and change over time to show how close a soulmate is with another, which in turn increases their connections. Magical Girls in particular gain a few unique benefits, as their bonds can purify soul gems just by being around the other, making it very hard, though not impossible, for them to turn into witches. However Soulmates have one key weakness in that if one dies, all of them die. Known sets of Soulmates in the story include.
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* GraveMarkingScene: Both Mami and Kyoko are shown visiting their family's graves, though Mami's the only one outright said to constantly visit and talk to the graves. Kyoko's status isn't as clear due to [[spoiler: her conversation being much more focused on what she learned versus a regular occurrence.]]

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** If the writer of ''The Immortal Story'', Yousra, is a Magical Girl like [[spoiler: Hitomi guesses]], retelling her own story, than she's been having adventures since the ''1320's''.

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** If the writer of ''The Immortal Story'', Explorer'' series, Yousra, is a Magical Girl like [[spoiler: Hitomi guesses]], retelling her own story, than she's been having adventures since the ''1320's''.



* ShowWithinAShow: Holy Quintet's Joyous Friendship, a magical girl series from decades ago that Madoka's family has VHS tapes of. As it turns out, as a child it was Homura's favorite show, a fandom only she had in the orphanage, and she'll still get angry if someone badmouths it.

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** Tasuke Satomi wrote several books, as in canon. One such book was one on Soulbond histories and folklore from around the world, a copy of which Yachiyo owns. He's mentioned to be working on a follow-up, alongside his canonical ''Magical Girls: Their Hope and Despair'' that Touka had discovered that Yachiyo also has a copy of.
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Holy Quintet's Joyous Friendship, a magical girl series from decades ago that Madoka's family has VHS tapes of. As it turns out, as a child it was Homura's favorite show, a fandom only she had in the orphanage, and she'll still get angry if someone badmouths it.
** The Endless Trail is a book Homura gives to [[spoiler: Hitomi]] that had she had been given in a previous timeline from its dead owner that is about a endless winding path they can't get off until they overcome their issues. According to the latter, a movie is in the works for it in the current timeline.
** The works of Umika Misaki from ''Kazumi'' also exist in story, with Homura having some such works as ''Lemon Kiss Memories'' and ''My First Love Was The Milky Way'' she obtained the same way as ''Endless Trail'' that she later gives to [[spoiler: Hitomi]], with emphasis that they were not originally hers added.
** ''Love for the Lost One'' is a book that Homura brought from the previous timeloop, a gift from the previous Madoka that follows a warrior who returned home from a long quest for justice whose empty heart was cured by the blessing of the Goddess of Love. Unlike the other books that Homura offered her however, [[spoiler: Hitomi]] did not recognize it.
** The Immortal Explorer series, which Hitomi had read the first book and plans to give it to Sayaka for her birthday, is a ongoing historical fantasy series about an girl from 14th century Egypt who gains magical powers she uses to see the world written by a historian. [[spoiler: Hitomi suspects it might be more than that.]]
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* MoveInTheFrozenTime: One effect of the Soulbond between Homura and her Soulmates is their immunity to her time stops. Whenever she freezes time they are unaffected, even if they aren't in direct contact with her. This was the first introduction Madoka had to magic, and she assumed that something was breaking time. Anything or anyone they are touching is also unaffected by time being frozen, which is how Sayaka ends up learning about magic on top of wandering into Cancri's labyrinth. This does not extend to inactive Soulmates, as Sayaka and Kyoko didn't gain the time immunity themselves until [[spoiler: Sayaka's contracting]].
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** Homura's answer to every question asking her how she does something being "hard work".
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*** The same drama CD, in tandem with other sources, also hinted that Junko was a delinquent in her youth as referenced in her first meeting with Kyoko in Soulmate.
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*** Madoka's ''[[StalkingIsLove forwardness]]'' towards Homura is derived from the game.
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler:Rika fuses with Bella Donna during the battle against the Uwasa of the Seance Shrine and can repeat the fusion later. Bella Donna’s explanation of how this happened (Ren, Rika’s Soulmate, meeting Bella Donna in a dream and then helping Rika accept her) implies that this could be possible for Madoka’s Soulmates as well.]]

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* FusionDance: [[spoiler:Rika fuses with Bella Donna during the battle against the Uwasa of the Seance Shrine and can repeat the fusion later. Bella Donna’s explanation of how this happened (Ren, Rika’s Soulmate, meeting Bella Donna in a dream and then helping Rika accept her) implies that this could be possible for Madoka’s Soulmates as well.well, and Chapter 17 hints that Yuuri Asuka also has this ability.]]



* HumansAreSpecial: Per Kyubey, Soulbonds are something only seen in humanity among the species they deal with and they just baffle the Incubators. On aspects that the Incubators understand more, humans create more emotional energy, are more numerous than many similar species along with being less prone to destructive violence. Also its implied that trans or non-binary humans being contractable is an unusual but useful feature to the Incubator's goals.

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* HumansAreSpecial: Per Kyubey, Soulbonds are something only seen in humanity among the species they deal with and they just baffle the Incubators. On aspects that the Incubators understand more, humans create more emotional energy, are more numerous than many similar species along with being less prone to destructive violence. Also its implied that trans or non-binary humans being contractable is an unusual but useful feature of the human race to the Incubator's goals.
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** Kyoko thinks that she must of really scared off Mayumi when she hasn't seen her make an attempt to get back into Mitakihara, [[spoiler:not knowing that Mayumi is already dead after having turned into the Swan Witch that Hitomi and Akasuki defeated]].

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--->'''Kirika:''' So you should make sure you have Grief Seeds to spare for when the Magius come to town or Kyoko Sakura suffers a FateWorseThanDeath at the hands of [[ItMakesSenseInContext dinosaurs and shonen manga]], when the scary one needs you to trust her you need to [[DeliberateInjuryGambit temporarily cripple yourself to keep a secret]], you need to teach her ‘Tiro Spade’ and ‘Tempesta Di Spade’, and you will be the last to find out what the pink one’s wish is, though it isn’t your fault. You couldn’t be there when it happens.

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--->'''Kirika:''' So you should make sure you have Grief Seeds to spare for when the Magius come to town or Kyoko Sakura suffers a FateWorseThanDeath at the hands of [[ItMakesSenseInContext dinosaurs and shonen manga]], manga]][[note]]Mami and Homura giving five Grief Seeds to Ryoko and Sute to prevent them from taking Kyoko back to Kamihama[[/note]], when the scary one needs you to trust her you need to [[DeliberateInjuryGambit temporarily cripple yourself to keep a secret]], secret]][[note]]Mami deliberately deafening herself to not hear Akasuki's attempt at [[BreakThemByTalking break her]] by revealing the [[AwfulTruth truth about Witches]].[[/note]], you need to teach her ‘Tiro Spade’ and ‘Tempesta Di Spade’, Spade’[[note]]Mami will help/teach Sayaka how to use the two attacks in question.[[/note]], and you will be the last to find out what the pink one’s wish is, though it isn’t your fault. You couldn’t be there when it happens.


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* FunbagAirbag: Kyoko's attempt to run away from having the others wash her hair is stopped by her walking into Mami's chest.

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* KilledOffscreen: Zenobia, Albertine and Boxwood are vaguely referenced and having been killed in battle by Iroha and Momoko, Yachiyo, and Haruka respectively, though we don't see the fights in question. Roberta is also confirmed to have been one of the Witches Homura killed in Chapter 1.

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* KilledOffscreen: Zenobia, Albertine and Boxwood are vaguely referenced and having been killed in battle by Iroha and Momoko, Yachiyo, and Haruka respectively, though we don't see the fights in question. Roberta is also confirmed to have been one of the Witches Homura killed in Chapter 1. 1 alongside an un-seen and undescribed 'Rust Witch'.



** Nanaka has been keeping the truth of Soul Gems from her teammates while she evalutes how they might take it. [[spoiler:After Meiyui finds out due to necessity, they decide to tell Akira but not Kako.]]

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** Nanaka has been keeping the truth of Soul Gems from her teammates while she evalutes evaluates how they might take it. [[spoiler:After Meiyui finds out due to necessity, they decide to tell Akira but not Kako.]]



** Mami and Kyoko have a few from their time as teammates, including one that left Mami unable to look at a coffee pot the same way again, and another that involved Kyoko and a cat stealing used underwear.

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** Mami and Kyoko have a few from their time as teammates, including one that left Mami unable to look at a coffee pot the same way again, and another that involved Kyoko and a cat stealing used underwear. In Chapter 16 she starts on a story involving Mami using her clones to sweep and help her cook, but Mami cuts her off before she can get into any more details.


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** Where Homura got her projector that turns an apartment into a while void filled with floating information and gears isn't explained. All Kyoko was able to get out of her about it was that it ''wasn't'' stolen from the government.

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* KilledOffscreen: Zenobia, Albertine and Boxwood are vaguely referenced and having been killed in battle by Iroha and Momoko, Yachiyo, and Haruka respectively, though we don't see the fights in question.

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* KilledOffscreen: Zenobia, Albertine and Boxwood are vaguely referenced and having been killed in battle by Iroha and Momoko, Yachiyo, and Haruka respectively, though we don't see the fights in question. Roberta is also confirmed to have been one of the Witches Homura killed in Chapter 1.


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* SupernaturallyValidatedTransPerson: Kyubey has no problem contracting with trans girls the same way as non-trans Girls.


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** Kyoko tells Kamihama to 'bring it' near the end of chapter 17, ready for anything it might throw at her after a thank-you kiss from Mami and Madoka. The chapter ends with the point of view of [[EvilRedhead Touka]].
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** [[spoiler: Candeloro now has a second type of Familiar called Familga Viscounti that represent Mami's separation from her maternal family in Italy].]

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** Kyoko's admitting that she doesn't do anything special with her hair and the other holding her down so they can treat it is taken straight from her Pajama Costume story from ''Magica Record''.
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* BetterWithTheBadGuys: The girls Kyoko saves from the Griefer are sent to the Wings of the Magius, who will induct them into their cult and treat them like other members. Much better than being murdered by a serial killer.

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* BetterWithTheBadGuys: BetterOffWithTheBadGuys: The girls Kyoko saves from the Griefer are sent to the Wings of the Magius, who will induct them into their cult and treat them like other members. Much better than being murdered by a serial killer.

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* AmnesiaMissedASpot: Despite Ui being erased from almost everyone's memories and records, Dr. Satomi still has the research he did into her heart condition, although he no longer remembers why he did that research, and Touka's memory of her math on how likely it is to meet your Soulmate in a hospital is not the correct figure for only one Soulmate.



* BetterWithTheBadGuys: The girls Kyoko saves from the Griefer are sent to the Wings of the Magius, who will induct them into their cult and treat them like other members. Much better than being murdered by a serial killer.



** Paster Sakura was a very tolerant man who liked to discuss faith with those of different denominations and respecting their beliefs as valid as his own, but he had no love of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prosperity_theology prosperity gospel]] interpretation of the faith, considering it just a way to use religion for money and power.

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** Paster Pastor Sakura was a very tolerant man who liked to discuss faith with those of different denominations and respecting their beliefs as valid as his own, but he had no love of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prosperity_theology prosperity gospel]] interpretation of the faith, considering it just a way to use religion for money and power.


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* TragicKeepsake: Homura has a number of books given to her by past iterations of her teammates.


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* YouAreWorthHell: Both Homura and Kyoko consider their loved ones worth any amount of suffering.
-->'''Kyoko:''' To keep Mami safe, I’d go to hell. You’re the same I’m sure.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Mami's Soulmates and subordinates go out of their way to reassure her after her HeroicBSOD over all the Magical Girls who died in Mitakihara during her tenure, pointing out that she's done well by the ones she did find and Kyubey deliberately didn't tell them about her or vice versa.

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*** Hitomi's time loop of crushing on Homura is referenced by Homura in Chapter 17.



** Matsuri's Magical Girl Story event and the events of Cross Connection come up a lot in Kamihama Interlude 2 as part of Matsuri and her friends having history in Kamihama.

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** Matsuri's Magical Girl Story event and the events of Cross Connection come up a lot in Kamihama Interlude 2 as part of Matsuri and her friends having history in Kamihama. Matsuri's friend group looking for Takoyaki is also referenced by Yuuri, who mentions Arisa pointed her to a good Takoyaki place.
** Kyoko invites Homura to Récompense, the cafe owned by Mabayu's aunt, for a 'not-date'.



** Patricia and Kirsten are given the human names of Noriko Chiasa and Hiroko Nako respectively.



*** Apparently the first meetings of past Sayakas and Kyokos have ended in dismemberment.
*** Homura has had Hitomi crush on her at least once in the time loops, which she describes as having Hitomi be very forward, if not as much as Madoka can be.



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* CanonForeigner: [[spoiler: Candeloro now has a second type of Familiar called Familga Viscounti that represent Mami's separation from her maternal family in Italy]]

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** Hitomi's Witch form, Coppelia, is not from any canon material.



** Several Magical Girls who tend to be active around Mitakihara from the Oriko series of manga, specifically Komami Asako, Lina Hitomi, Futaba, Mio, Miyako Saki, Mai Akane, and Sasa Yuuki, have been mentioned or referenced a few times by Homura, Kyoko, and Akasuki, but none have been confirmed where they are currently, making it unclear if they are dead, turned into Witches, or had to migrate to a different city like Tokyo or Kamihama due to the Witch drought.

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** Several Magical Girls who tend to be active around Mitakihara from the Oriko series of manga, specifically Komami Komaki Asako, Lina Hitomi, Futaba, Mio, Miyako Saki, Mai Akane, and Sasa Yuuki, have been mentioned or referenced a few times by Homura, Kyoko, and Akasuki, but none have been confirmed where they are currently, making it unclear if they are dead, turned into Witches, or had to migrate to a different city like Tokyo or Kamihama due to the Witch drought.drought. Chapter 17 would confirm that Komaki is in Kamihama, alongside minor Oriko characters Chihana Masumi and Hikari Ayano, while Sasa had joined the Wings of The Magius, tried to take it over from within, but was defeated.


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* PublicSecretMessage: [[spoiler: Hitomi]] speculates the writer of both history books and a new historical fiction series called ''The Immortal Traveler'', Yousra, is a Magical Girl writing down her adventures for others to learn from. Homura doesn't know for sure, but can see how Hitomi might have guessed that.

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* ShoutOut:
** In one timeloop, Sayaka was convinced that Homura was a [[Film/InvasionOfTheBodySnatchers1978 pod person.]]
** Oriko, via the cue cards she gives Kirika, describes what she's doing with the Magius as [[Series/GameOfThrones playing the game of thrones.]] Comments from Kirika about Mami's confusion about the phrase implies the series itself hasn't debuted yet and that Oriko [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire is a fan of the books.]]
** Sorashido City is mentioned by Kanagi, Sayaka, and Takako. Sora is also established to be Sayaka's cousin.
** Mary Jane the Comicbook Witch from the second chapter is a massive shout out to superhero comics, and Spider-man in particular (being named after his primary love interest and having a design and powers taking an inspiration from the Green Goblin, Doctor Octopus, and Venom.)
** Iroha recalls from her recently-restored memories while trying to follow along with Mel's tarot reading powers that she used to play ''TabletopGame/YuGiOh'' with her little sister Ui, and they got Nemu and Touka into the hobby during their hospital stay. Touka [[LargeHam really got into]] the dramatic flourishes and attack calls, and on the three young Soulmates' bucket list was a desire to make real holographic monsters inspired by the card game.
** Madoka compares one of Homura's parodies of Mami's Italian-named attacks to [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight a visual novel Sayaka likes where King Arthur is a woman]].
** Kyubey namedrops [[Fanfic/ResonanceDays Dockengauts]] as one of the races that, like humanity, are contracted.
** After seeing Homura in action as a Magical Girl for the first time, Sayaka mentally afterwards calls her essentially "[[Manga/SailorMoon Sailor]] [[Literature/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya]]". Ironically, she doesn't even guess how similar she is to him in personality at the time either...
** Takako Takeda wears a shirt in her casual outfit that's heavily implied to depict [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], as Homura describes the character as some orange-haired teen in black and wielding a giant sword. Takako also references Rukia's speech to Ichigo about attacking Hollows from behind so as to never see their true face.
** Nagisa's reaction to how [[InASingleBound high she can jump]] when she does for the first time is very similar to most [[Anime/PrettyCure Pretty Cure's]] reactions when they do the same.
** The chapter description for Chapter 7 mentions Kyoko being Series/ChasedByDinosaurs.
** Sute's Magical Girl outfit and her use of powers are based very clearly on four Shonen manga series: ''Dragon Ball'', ''Bleach'', ''Naruto'', and ''One Piece''.
** Kyoko describes one of the new spear moves she developed and uses on Ryoko (that being throwing a spear charged with magic at the ground which then erupts back up in a different location) as one inspired by a "crazy Irish spear that exploded into barbs", heavily implied to be [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Gae Bolg]].
** During her conversation with Inuhiko Kajimoto, the cop in charge of the Chitose case, Kyoko makes a few ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' references, which Kajimoto gets; he notes that the judge who'll oversee the trial of Yuma's mother would also find them funny, but the prosecutor would prefer to not hear them.
** The name of Homura's strongest attack is [[Anime/DragonBallZ Hellzone Grenade]].
** [[spoiler: When Rika {{Fusion Dance}}s with her Witch, Bella Donna and gains a ton of floating attack compacts around her like attack drones, Tsuruno asks why Rika turned into a Franchise/{{Gundam}}.]]
** Emiri gave Hinano, who fights by creating chemical reactions and can create types of metals with magic, a [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist red jacket]] for her birthday.

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* ShoutOut:
** In one timeloop, Sayaka was convinced that Homura was a [[Film/InvasionOfTheBodySnatchers1978 pod person.]]
** Oriko, via the cue cards she gives Kirika, describes what she's doing with the Magius as [[Series/GameOfThrones playing the game of thrones.]] Comments from Kirika about Mami's confusion about the phrase implies the series itself hasn't debuted yet and that Oriko [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire is a fan of the books.]]
** Sorashido City is mentioned by Kanagi, Sayaka, and Takako. Sora is also established to be Sayaka's cousin.
** Mary Jane the Comicbook Witch from the second chapter is a massive shout out to superhero comics, and Spider-man in particular (being named after his primary love interest and having a design and powers taking an inspiration from the Green Goblin, Doctor Octopus, and Venom.)
** Iroha recalls from her recently-restored memories while trying to follow along with Mel's tarot reading powers that she used to play ''TabletopGame/YuGiOh'' with her little sister Ui, and they got Nemu and Touka into the hobby during their hospital stay. Touka [[LargeHam really got into]] the dramatic flourishes and attack calls, and on the three young Soulmates' bucket list was a desire to make real holographic monsters inspired by the card game.
** Madoka compares one of Homura's parodies of Mami's Italian-named attacks to [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight a visual novel Sayaka likes where King Arthur is a woman]].
** Kyubey namedrops [[Fanfic/ResonanceDays Dockengauts]] as one of the races that, like humanity, are contracted.
** After seeing Homura in action as a Magical Girl for the first time, Sayaka mentally afterwards calls her essentially "[[Manga/SailorMoon Sailor]] [[Literature/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya]]". Ironically, she doesn't even guess how similar she is to him in personality at the time either...
** Takako Takeda wears a shirt in her casual outfit that's heavily implied to depict [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], as Homura describes the character as some orange-haired teen in black and wielding a giant sword. Takako also references Rukia's speech to Ichigo about attacking Hollows from behind so as to never see their true face.
** Nagisa's reaction to how [[InASingleBound high she can jump]] when she does for the first time is very similar to most [[Anime/PrettyCure Pretty Cure's]] reactions when they do the same.
** The chapter description for Chapter 7 mentions Kyoko being Series/ChasedByDinosaurs.
** Sute's Magical Girl outfit and her use of powers are based very clearly on four Shonen manga series: ''Dragon Ball'', ''Bleach'', ''Naruto'', and ''One Piece''.
** Kyoko describes one of the new spear moves she developed and uses on Ryoko (that being throwing a spear charged with magic at the ground which then erupts back up in a different location) as one inspired by a "crazy Irish spear that exploded into barbs", heavily implied to be [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Gae Bolg]].
** During her conversation with Inuhiko Kajimoto, the cop in charge of the Chitose case, Kyoko makes a few ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' references, which Kajimoto gets; he notes that the judge who'll oversee the trial of Yuma's mother would also find them funny, but the prosecutor would prefer to not hear them.
** The name of Homura's strongest attack is [[Anime/DragonBallZ Hellzone Grenade]].
** [[spoiler: When Rika {{Fusion Dance}}s with her Witch, Bella Donna and gains a ton of floating attack compacts around her like attack drones, Tsuruno asks why Rika turned into a Franchise/{{Gundam}}.]]
** Emiri gave Hinano, who fights by creating chemical reactions and can create types of metals with magic, a [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist red jacket]] for her birthday.
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** Mitakihara's history as a city is explored in bits and bobs, noting how it started off as an industrial city that has successfully transitioned past the post industrial phase of its existence. Its tendency to have buildings based on other structures from throughout the world is also explained as being inspired on the first building to do so, the St. Jeanne Anglican Church.

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** Mitakihara's history as a city is explored in bits and bobs, noting how it started off as an industrial city that has successfully transitioned past the post industrial phase of its existence. Its tendency to have buildings based on other structures from throughout the world is also explained as being inspired on by the first building to do so, the St. Jeanne Anglican Church.



** While Homura's starting actions usually tend to rub Mami the wrong way in canon, she is much more inclined to give Homura the benefit of the doubt when it comes to her dislike of Kyubey. While Mami doesn't immediately side with Homura against her old friend, she comes up with a (incorrect) assumption of why Homura doesn't want Kyubey around that she can at least understand and their relationship begins a lot more civilly, if not without disagreement about if Madoka should contract. This quickly warms up to a point the two start to fully develop close, romantic feelings for the other in about a week.

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** While Homura's starting actions usually tend to rub Mami the wrong way in canon, she is much more inclined to give Homura the benefit of the doubt here when it comes to her dislike of Kyubey. While Mami doesn't immediately side with Homura against her old friend, she comes up with a (incorrect) assumption of why Homura doesn't want Kyubey around that she can at least understand and their relationship begins a lot more civilly, if not without disagreement about if Madoka should contract. This quickly warms up to a point the two start to fully develop close, romantic feelings for the other in about a week.



** Mami recalls the difference in earing culture between herself in Japan (where they don't pierce their ears) and her Italian cousins (who do) while shopping.

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** Mami recalls the difference in earing earring culture between herself in Japan (where they don't pierce their ears) and her Italian cousins (who do) while shopping.



** The Magical Girls of Asunaro City, also known as the Pleiades Saints, have a reputation for being extremely territorial. Even though Asunaro is one of the few places left to still have Witches present, the fact no other Magical Girl who has come to that city has returned has made the city a last resort for any desperate magical girl. They'd rather try their luck at Mitakihara or go on to Kamihama instead.

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** The Magical Girls of Asunaro City, also known as the Pleiades Saints, have a reputation for being extremely territorial. Even though Asunaro is one of the few places left to still have Witches present, the fact that no other Magical Girl who has come to that city has returned has made the city a last resort for any desperate magical girl. They'd rather try their luck at Mitakihara or go on to Kamihama instead.



** When Kyoko demands Suzumebachi to tell her why she's kidnapped so many young girls, Suzumebachi shoots back it's [[NotSoDifferentRemark the same thing Kyoko does with Witches]]. Kyoko takes this to mean she captures girls to directly feed to Familiars in order to grow new Witches for Grief Seeds, which causes Kyoko to swear off Familiar farming entirely just so she can stop any such comparisons in her mind. What Suzumebachi actually meant is that she's cultivating new Witches directly by manipulating vulnerable young girls into becoming Magical Girls, then forcing them to Witch Out and harvesting their Grief Seeds, but Kyoko not knowing of the true nature of the link between Magical Girls and Witches doesn't even consider this possibility.

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** When Kyoko demands that Suzumebachi to tell her why she's kidnapped so many young girls, Suzumebachi shoots back it's [[NotSoDifferentRemark the same thing Kyoko does with Witches]]. Kyoko takes this to mean she captures girls to directly feed to Familiars in order to grow new Witches for Grief Seeds, which causes Kyoko to swear off Familiar farming entirely just so she can stop any such comparisons in her mind. What Suzumebachi actually meant is that she's cultivating new Witches directly by manipulating vulnerable young girls into becoming Magical Girls, then forcing them to Witch Out and harvesting their Grief Seeds, but Kyoko not knowing doesn't even consider this possibility because she doesn’t know of the true nature of the link between Magical Girls and Witches doesn't even consider this possibility.Witches.



* HeroicLineage: One of Tasuke Satomi's theories in his unfinished transcript about Magical Girls is that the potential to be a Magical Girl is genetic and passed through families. Yachiyo isn't sure about this herself, though she admits there just isn't a lot of examples she knows of one way or another and she can't tell if that absence if evidence to the contrary or not.

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* HeroicLineage: One of Tasuke Satomi's theories in his unfinished transcript about Magical Girls is that the potential to be a Magical Girl is genetic and passed through families. Yachiyo isn't sure about this herself, though she admits there just isn't a lot of examples she knows of one way or another and she can't tell if that absence if is evidence to the contrary or not.



* MusclesAreMeaningless: Once someone becomes a Magical Girl, it doesn't matter how young or petite they look as part of the package comes with increased physical prowess not directly correlated to muscle mass, making them far stronger than any mere {{Muggle}}. This is shown in full when Homura can literally drag Madoka and Sayaka along and carry them under her arms, and when Akasuki casually knocks Sayaka aside after easily disarming her of the sword Homura lent her, despite both being described as very thin.

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* MusclesAreMeaningless: Once someone becomes a Magical Girl, it doesn't matter how young or petite they look look, as part of the package comes with increased physical prowess not directly correlated to muscle mass, making them far stronger than any mere {{Muggle}}. This is shown in full when Homura can literally drag Madoka and Sayaka along and carry them under her arms, and when Akasuki casually knocks Sayaka aside after easily disarming her of the sword Homura lent her, despite both being described as very thin.



*** The name 'Holy Quintet' and the Cake Song appear in the third side story chapter, in-universe being from a old Magical Girl show that Homura loved as a child.

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*** The name 'Holy Quintet' and the Cake Song appear in the third side story chapter, in-universe being from a an old Magical Girl show that Homura loved as a child.



** Akasuki, while reviewing everything that's gone wrong since kidnapping [[spoiler:Hitomi]], including realizing that [[spoiler:Hitomi is friends with Madoka, who is the Soulmate to Mami (aka, the veteran Magical Girl of Mitakihara) and Homura (yet another Magical Girl of unknown but presumably decent skill), and no doubt both of them are tearing up the city looking for Hitomi and all but certainly have Nagisa to give them a name and description of herself]], contents herself by noting it could only get any worse if that "red-haired cult girl with a spear" showed up, not realizing that not only is Kyoko here, but she's just as eager to finish putting her into the ground.

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** Akasuki, while reviewing everything that's gone wrong since kidnapping [[spoiler:Hitomi]], including realizing that [[spoiler:Hitomi is friends with Madoka, who is the Soulmate to Mami (aka, the veteran Magical Girl of Mitakihara) and Homura (yet another Magical Girl of unknown but presumably decent skill), and no doubt both of them are tearing up the city looking for Hitomi and all but certainly have Nagisa to give them a name and description of herself]], contents herself by noting it could only get any worse if that "red-haired cult girl with a spear" showed up, not realizing that not only is Kyoko here, but she's just as eager to finish putting her into the ground. [[spoiler:While Kyoko isn’t able to physically participate in the final showdown with Akasuki, the advice she gives based on their previous fight proves pivotal in allowing Homura, Madoka, and Sayaka to evade her initial ambush.]]



* YouRemindMeOfX: In a brief moment of honesty, Suzumebachi admits to a paralyzed [[spoiler:Hitomi]] that a part of her actually feels bad about what she plans to do, as the latter proved to be a friendly and open girl to an apparent stranger, which reminds her of an old friend of hers (implied to be the very one she wished to save from suicide [[StartOfDarkness who then Witched Out]]). Unfortunately, Suzumebachi then admits that still won't stop her from going through with her plan [[ItsAllAboutMe for her own survival]].

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* YouRemindMeOfX: In a brief moment of honesty, Suzumebachi admits to a paralyzed [[spoiler:Hitomi]] that a part of her actually feels bad about what she plans to do, as the latter proved to be a friendly and open girl to an apparent stranger, which reminds her of an old friend of hers (implied to be the very one she wished to save from suicide [[StartOfDarkness who then Witched Out]]). Unfortunately, Suzumebachi then admits that this still won't stop her from going through with her plan [[ItsAllAboutMe for her own survival]].
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* After Nanaka presses Matsuri on the details of Arisa's vision due to its similarity to Iroha's and learning it was about the salvation of Magical Girls instead of a missing sister, Meiyui starts thinking about hypothetical siblings of other Magical Girls. Matsuri is one of the ones where she thinks a sister like her would be a good thing and a sister unlike her would be a bad thing. She also believes that Kagari is likely not related to anyone. As readers of ''Manga/PuellaMagiSuzuneMagica'' would know, [[spoiler:Kagari is Matsuri's EvilTwin]].

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* ** After Nanaka presses Matsuri on the details of Arisa's vision due to its similarity to Iroha's and learning it was about the salvation of Magical Girls instead of a missing sister, Meiyui starts thinking about hypothetical siblings of other Magical Girls. Matsuri is one of the ones where she thinks a sister like her would be a good thing and a sister unlike her would be a bad thing. She also believes that Kagari is likely not related to anyone. As readers of ''Manga/PuellaMagiSuzuneMagica'' would know, [[spoiler:Kagari is Matsuri's EvilTwin]].



** Matsuri's Magical Girl Story event and the events of Cross Connection come up a lot in Kamihama Interlude 2 as part of Matsuri and her friend's having history in Kamihama.

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** Matsuri's Magical Girl Story event and the events of Cross Connection come up a lot in Kamihama Interlude 2 as part of Matsuri and her friend's friends having history in Kamihama.



** Nagisa's reaction to how [[InASingleBound high she can jump]] when she does for the first time is very similar to how most [[Anime/PrettyCure Pretty Cure's]] reactions when they do the same.

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** Nagisa's reaction to how [[InASingleBound high she can jump]] when she does for the first time is very similar to how most [[Anime/PrettyCure Pretty Cure's]] reactions when they do the same.



* TarotMotifs: One aspect of Mel's powers allows the cards she uses as a Magical Girl to shift their appearance based on whose predictions are being told or who is seeing it. For example when Iroha is looking at the Death card, it takes the form based on Homura.

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* TarotMotifs: One aspect of Mel's powers allows the cards she uses as a Magical Girl to shift their appearance based on whose predictions are being told or who is seeing it. For example when Iroha is looking at the Death card, it takes the a form based on Homura.



* ThouShaltNotKill: Downplayed. Magical Girls in-story either don't even consider the use of lethal force, or only do so as a last resort. While they often do end up fighting each other over resources and will defend themselves and their friends, killing is always something that a willing Magical Girl uses as a last resort both to preserve their humanity and to avoid dealing with the police afterwards. While Homura is more willing to immediately kill a target than most, this is based on her time loop experiences with Magical Girls prone to attacking her friends and is perfectly willing to knock out a target non-lethally (as shown with Takako and Sute).

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Downplayed. Magical Girls in-story either don't even consider the use of lethal force, or only do so as a last resort. While they often do end up fighting each other over resources and will defend themselves and their friends, killing is always something that a willing Magical Girl uses as a last resort both to preserve their humanity and to avoid dealing with the police afterwards. While Homura is more willing to immediately kill a target than most, this is based on her time loop experiences with Magical Girls prone to attacking her friends friends, and she is perfectly willing to knock out a target non-lethally (as shown with Takako and Sute).



** Deconstructed with [[SerialKiller Akasuki Suzumebachi]], whose pure power is on the low end for a Magical Girl but who's managed to leverage her [[PeoplePuppets power]] to its full potential in her lifestyle to live for decades honing her craft. However, it's made clear that her preference for targeting young and inexperienced Magical Girls and their resulting weak Witches to farm Grief Seeds for years has left her ill-prepared for throwing down with more honed Magical Girls and tougher Witches without [[CombatPragmatist stacking the deck in her favor]]. She was quickly overpowered by Mifuyu and needed Kyubey to intervene to take her down, and she was pretty easily beaten by Kyoko, only getting away because Kyoko prioritized getting her victims away from her, being sure Suzumebachi was dead or doomed to die. She also fairs very badly against a newly contracted Sayaka, who compensates for her inexperience with sheer strength, UnstoppableRage, and a superior HealingFactor.

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** Deconstructed with [[SerialKiller Akasuki Suzumebachi]], whose pure power is on the low end for a Magical Girl but who's managed to leverage her [[PeoplePuppets power]] to its full potential in her lifestyle to live for decades honing her craft. However, it's made clear that her preference for targeting young and inexperienced Magical Girls and their resulting weak Witches to farm Grief Seeds for years has left her ill-prepared for throwing down with more honed Magical Girls and tougher Witches without [[CombatPragmatist stacking the deck in her favor]]. She was quickly overpowered by Mifuyu and needed Kyubey to intervene to take her down, and she was pretty easily beaten by Kyoko, only getting away because Kyoko prioritized getting her victims away from her, being sure Suzumebachi was dead or doomed to die. She also fairs fares very badly against a newly contracted Sayaka, who compensates for her inexperience with sheer strength, UnstoppableRage, and a superior HealingFactor.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Downplayed. Magical Girls in-story either don't even consider the use of lethal force, or only do so as a last resort. While they often do end up fighting each other over resources and will defend themselves and their friends, killing is always something that a willing Magical Girl uses as a last resort both to preserve their humanity and to avoid dealing with the police afterwards. While Homura is more willing to immediately kill a target than most, this is based on her time loop experiences with Magical Girls prone to attacking her friends and is perfectly willing to knock out a target non-lethally (as shown with Takako and Sute).
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** Yachiyo has used her ability to create halberds, which she can throw, rocket, and control at will, to dispose of trash if she forgets to take it out for trash day, using her halberds to rocket the trash into the garbage truck.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Kamihama Magical Union, as Iroha wants to name it, formed during the events of Act 1 instead of between Act 1 and Act 2.



** Mitakihara's history as a city is explored in bits and bobs, noting how it started off as an industrial city that has successfully transitioned past the post industrial phase of its existence. Its tendency to have buildings based on other structures from throughout the world is also explained as being inspired on the first building to do so, the St. Jeanne Anglican Church, and

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** Mitakihara's history as a city is explored in bits and bobs, noting how it started off as an industrial city that has successfully transitioned past the post industrial phase of its existence. Its tendency to have buildings based on other structures from throughout the world is also explained as being inspired on the first building to do so, the St. Jeanne Anglican Church, and Church.

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler:Candeloro]] has one for Homura.
---> '''Homura''': I consider taking responsibility for my mistakes a good thing.
---> '''[[spoiler:Candeloro]]''': Is that Homura talking, or is that the orphanage talking?

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: During a tense converstaion between [[spoiler:Candeloro]] has one for Homura.
---> '''Homura''': I consider
and Homura about Homura's failures and how Homura nearly threw herself back into her self-pity until Madoka stopped her. When Homura says that she is taking responsibility for my mistakes a good thing.
---> '''[[spoiler:Candeloro]]''':
her mistakes, [[spoiler: Candeloro]] stops Homura in her tracks with one simple question.
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Is that Homura talking, or is that the orphanage talking?

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