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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: While Emperor Belos was introduced in the last two episodes of Season 1, here he appears in the fifth chapter of the story, where he is informed about Booker's existence.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:
** While Emperor Belos was introduced in the last two episodes of Season 1, here he appears in the fifth chapter of the story, where he is informed about Booker'sexistence.existence.
** Although Hunter still first appears in "Agony of a Witch", he makes his speaking debut an episode early in "Young Blood, Old Souls".
** While Emperor Belos was introduced in the last two episodes of Season 1, here he appears in the fifth chapter of the story, where he is informed about Booker's
** Although Hunter still first appears in "Agony of a Witch", he makes his speaking debut an episode early in "Young Blood, Old Souls".
** Unlike in the [[https://moringmark.tumblr.com/post/653884443874017280 comic]] she appeared in, the siren that provokes Luz by saying "shipping is cringe" gets knocked over by a wave of water created when Booker drives the ship away at full speed.
* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Since "Sense and Insensitivity" is left out, Steve makes his debut between "Enchanting Grom Fright" and "Wing It Like Witches".
* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Since "Sense and Insensitivity" is left out, Steve makes his debut between "Enchanting Grom Fright" and "Wing It Like Witches".
* AdaptationExpansion: In canon, it was mentioned that Amity's parents work with Boscha and Skara's, but not in what capacity. Here, Skara's mother Kimberly works as Odalia's assistant ([[spoiler:at least until she quits after Odalia attempts to murder Booker during her weapons expo and threatened to turn in the remaining Bridges had Kimberly interfered and tried to help him.]])
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* AdoptiveNameChange: To protect Booker from Belos, he's told to change his name since being a Bridges puts him in danger. Eda would later come up with the perfect name: [[spoiler:Booker Clawthorne, which would be officialized once he signed the adoption papers Eda had written to adopt Booker as her son.]]
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* AdoptiveNameChange: To protect Booker from Belos, he's told to change his name since being a Bridges puts him in danger. Eda would later come up with the perfect name: [[spoiler:Booker Clawthorne, Clawthorne (Bridges), which would be officialized once he signed the adoption papers Eda had written up to adopt Booker as her son.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Booker always [[LuminescentBlush turns red]] whenever Luz calls him "Booky".
* FeudEpisode: "Separate Tides" sees Luz holding a grudge against Booker for destroying the portal door when he fought Belos, stranding them in the Boiling Isles and preventing Luz from seeing her mother. She eventually drops it when she sees what lengths he's going to to make up for it.
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* IWantGrandkids: PlayedForDrama in Chapter 16 when Eda tells Booker to confess his love to Luz and Amity and have kids before [[spoiler:she runs out of magic and gets captured by Lilith.]]
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* IWantGrandkids: PlayedForDrama in Chapter 16 when Eda tells Booker to confess his love to Luz and Amity and have kids in the future before [[spoiler:she runs out of magic and gets captured by Lilith.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: While training in grudgby, Luz uses the Thorn Vault and injures Booker as a result. She then gets an earful from Booker about how she always gets her friends into trouble, him especially, and never seems to learn from her mistakes. After thinking about it, she comes to see that he's right and apologizes to both Booker and Willow for not taking their feelings into consideration.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** While training in grudgby, Luz uses the Thorn Vault and injures Booker as a result. She then gets an earful from Booker about how she always gets her friends into trouble, him especially, and never seems to learn from her mistakes. After thinking about it, she comes to see that he's right and apologizes to both Booker and Willow for not taking their feelings intoconsideration.consideration.
** Luz later feels ashamed of herself when she sees that her anger towards Booker for destroying the portal door made him feel like he hates her for it, and he'd do anything to make amends for it, including slaying an innocent creature.
** While training in grudgby, Luz uses the Thorn Vault and injures Booker as a result. She then gets an earful from Booker about how she always gets her friends into trouble, him especially, and never seems to learn from her mistakes. After thinking about it, she comes to see that he's right and apologizes to both Booker and Willow for not taking their feelings into
** Luz later feels ashamed of herself when she sees that her anger towards Booker for destroying the portal door made him feel like he hates her for it, and he'd do anything to make amends for it, including slaying an innocent creature.
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* TheReveal:
** Chapter 9: "The Crow Wizard" shows that the titualar character is Booker's cousin York, that Skara is a member of the Bridges family, and that [[spoiler:Belos slaughtered a majority of the Bridges in a raid where he wanted to capture Booker before he was born.]]
** According to the narrations of Chapters 17 and 18, [[spoiler:Booker is the reincarnation of Evelyn]], furthering Belos' interest in him.
** Chapter 9: "The Crow Wizard" shows that the titualar character is Booker's cousin York, that Skara is a member of the Bridges family, and that [[spoiler:Belos slaughtered a majority of the Bridges in a raid where he wanted to capture Booker before he was born.]]
** According to the narrations of Chapters 17 and 18, [[spoiler:Booker is the reincarnation of Evelyn]], furthering Belos' interest in him.
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** During the voage to the Shimmering Shoals, this [[Webcomic/MoringMarkTOHComics Moringmark]] [[https://moringmark.tumblr.com/post/653884443874017280 comic]] gets added to the mix.
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* TwirlOfLove: In his excitement over growing taller due to his body adjusting to the magic of the Demon Realm, Booker spins Luz around in his arms.
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* AdaptationalKarma: Boscha gets an even poignant fall from grace when she [[spoiler:loses to the Hexsquad in their grudgby match, then is strong-armed into taking the loss by Willow when she threatens to get Booker arrested.]]
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* AdaptationalKarma: AdaptationalKarma:
** Boscha gets an even poignant fall from grace when she [[spoiler:loses to the Hexsquad in their grudgby match, then is strong-armed into taking the loss by Willow when she threatens to get Booker arrested.]] Beforehand, she gets slammed through a wall by Booker for messing with Willow and threatening them both.
** Lilith [[spoiler:takes a direct magic blast from Booker after he learns that she cursed Eda, which sends her into a wall as well.]]
** Boscha gets an even poignant fall from grace when she [[spoiler:loses to the Hexsquad in their grudgby match, then is strong-armed into taking the loss by Willow when she threatens to get Booker arrested.]] Beforehand, she gets slammed through a wall by Booker for messing with Willow and threatening them both.
** Lilith [[spoiler:takes a direct magic blast from Booker after he learns that she cursed Eda, which sends her into a wall as well.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In the canon show, Boscha was just a bully who targeted Luz and co. for petty reasons. Here, she is straight-up vile and controlling of her friends, such as Skara. In fact, [[spoiler:she tries to ''kill'' Booker during their Grudgby match, only for Skara to step in]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** In the canon show, Boscha was just a bully who targeted Luz and co. for petty reasons. Here, she is straight-up vile and controlling of her friends, such as Skara. In fact, [[spoiler:she tries to ''kill'' Booker during their Grudgby match, only for Skara to stepin]].in]].
** Hunter falls into this during the Season 1 finale, when he [[spoiler:knocks out Luz and throws her into the cage containing Eda, King, and Lilith so she'll be peteified alongside them.]]
** In the canon show, Boscha was just a bully who targeted Luz and co. for petty reasons. Here, she is straight-up vile and controlling of her friends, such as Skara. In fact, [[spoiler:she tries to ''kill'' Booker during their Grudgby match, only for Skara to step
** Hunter falls into this during the Season 1 finale, when he [[spoiler:knocks out Luz and throws her into the cage containing Eda, King, and Lilith so she'll be peteified alongside them.]]
* AdoptiveNameChange: To protect Booker from Belos, he's told to change his name since being a Bridges puts him in danger. Eda would later come up with the perfect name: [[spoiler:Booker Clawthorne, which would be officialized once he signed the adoption papers Eda had written to adopt Booker as her son.]]
** In Chapter 16, Booker discovers Luz and Amity's feelings for him due to Willow blurting it out while he's invisible.
* IWantGrandkids: PlayedForDrama in Chapter 16 when Eda tells Booker to confess his love to Luz and Amity and have kids before [[spoiler:she runs out of magic and gets captured by Lilith.]]
* TheManInTheMirrorTalksBack: Throughout "Agony of the Witch", Lilith is haunted by an image of herself as a teenager in numerous reflections that represents her suppressed guilt in wanting to cure Eda when she's the one who cursed her in the first place...
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf: And when she ''does'' capture Eda and is told by Belos to [[spoiler:destroy the Dragon's Bite]], she looks into the reflection of the blade expecting to see her younger self. In in averted case of this trope, she only sees her bruised, burned present day self, the monster she had become.
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf: And when she ''does'' capture Eda and is told by Belos to [[spoiler:destroy the Dragon's Bite]], she looks into the reflection of the blade expecting to see her younger self. In in averted case of this trope, she only sees her bruised, burned present day self, the monster she had become.
** For Chapter 16:
*** Before Booker steals the Healing Hat, Gus suggests [[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk replacing it with something that weighs the same]]. Booker responds with this:
--->'''Booker:''' Oh, sure, like that fucking worked in the movie. If it didn't work for Indy, it's not gonna work here.
*** Luz attempts to mess around with a relic, only for Amity to [[EarAche pull her back by her ear]], Luz apologizing and begging her to stop treating her like she's [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Brock]].
*** Before Booker steals the Healing Hat, Gus suggests [[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk replacing it with something that weighs the same]]. Booker responds with this:
--->'''Booker:''' Oh, sure, like that fucking worked in the movie. If it didn't work for Indy, it's not gonna work here.
*** Luz attempts to mess around with a relic, only for Amity to [[EarAche pull her back by her ear]], Luz apologizing and begging her to stop treating her like she's [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Brock]].
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Fire is this one to Booker, since it's how his family died on the day of his 7th birthday.]]
* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family, something that said bully lambasts him for.
* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family, something that said bully lambasts him for.
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Fire is this one to Booker, since it's how his family died on the day of his 7th birthday.]]
* WhamLine: In Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Belos tells Booker that since he has the power of a Titan, he also holds ''Titan's Blood'' in his body.]] That's the reason why Belos wants Booker's blood.
* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family, something that said bully lambasts him for. In Chapter 15, he doesn't even hesitate to attack Boscha in Willow's defense when she won't stop picking on her.
* WhamLine: In Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Belos tells Booker that since he has the power of a Titan, he also holds ''Titan's Blood'' in his body.]] That's the reason why Belos wants Booker's blood.
* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family, something that said bully lambasts him for. In Chapter 15, he doesn't even hesitate to attack Boscha in Willow's defense when she won't stop picking on her.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Amity's time as grudgby captain has some more angst added on to it as she not only got her teammates hurt using the Thorn Vault: she [[spoiler:caused Bo to lose all vision in one of her eyes. Had she not fallen in love with Skara, Amity fears Bo would've committed [[DrivenToSuicide suicide]].]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Emira shows herself to be far more powerful that she had been in canon, able to make a giant illusion hand that can [[PunchCatch catch the fist]] of a [[spoiler:stone giant construct about to kill her crush]] before it forms into an entire copy of her upper body and [[spoiler:destroys the stone giant with a karate chop]].
* AdaptationalBadass: Emira shows herself to be far more powerful that she had been in canon, able to make a giant illusion hand that can [[PunchCatch catch the fist]] of a [[spoiler:stone giant construct about to kill her crush]] before it forms into an entire copy of her upper body and [[spoiler:destroys the stone giant with a karate chop]].
* AdaptationalKarma: Boscha gets an even poignant fall from grace when she [[spoiler:loses to the Hexsquad in their grudgby match, then is strong-armed into taking the loss by Willow when she threatens to get Booker arrested.]]
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* BreakingTheForthWall: Booker outright does this in Chapter 13 when he asks where Gus had been for the last few chapters after his friends show concern over his lack of knowledge regarding Grom.
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* BreakingTheForthWall: BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:In Chapter 5, Amity's smug attitude comes crashing down during her witch's duel against Booker, when after she crushes him with her abomination's foot, he loses control of his powers and effortlessly knocks away any Emperor's Coven worker including Lilith, nearly attacking Amity until Luz stops him.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall:
** Booker outright does this in Chapter 13 when he asks where Gus had been for the last few chapters after his friends show concern over his lack of knowledge regardingGrom.Grom.
** The following chapter, Eda and Booker lampshade how weird it was for someone else (Emira) to have an adventure besides them, but know things will return to normal by the next adventure.
* BreakingTheFourthWall:
** Booker outright does this in Chapter 13 when he asks where Gus had been for the last few chapters after his friends show concern over his lack of knowledge regarding
** The following chapter, Eda and Booker lampshade how weird it was for someone else (Emira) to have an adventure besides them, but know things will return to normal by the next adventure.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 14 shifts focus to Emira and her crush Warrick Riley, a bat witch inventor in the Construction track who hopes to impress his idol, Holmes.
* DeathGlare:
** Every time Booker [[PowerIncontinence loses control of his powers]], he shoots one of these at anyone stupid enough to challenge him in that state of being.
** Eda shoots one at Lilith to get to to answer whether or not Lilith [[spoiler:was there when Belos murdered most of the Bridges family the night Booker was born.]] She was, but not for the reason Eda thinks.
** Every time Booker [[PowerIncontinence loses control of his powers]], he shoots one of these at anyone stupid enough to challenge him in that state of being.
** Eda shoots one at Lilith to get to to answer whether or not Lilith [[spoiler:was there when Belos murdered most of the Bridges family the night Booker was born.]] She was, but not for the reason Eda thinks.
** All of the Blight siblings know each other's love interests (Amity with Booker and Luz, Edric and Roswell, Emira and Warrick) and [[SecretKeeper make a pact to never let their mother know about them]] since she wouldn't approve of any of them.
* {{Expy}}: Holmes, the inventor hero of Warrick, is one of [[Literature/HarryPotter Gilderoy Lockheart]] in the case that he turns out to be a fraud who's stolen the credit of other witches to make himself famous. [[spoiler:Holmes takes it further by being a CorruptedCharacterCopy, as he would ''kill'' the people he stole credit from instead of erasing their memories.]]
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Boscha refuses to accept defeat when [[spoiler:Willow's team beats her in grudgby]] and decides to renege on her deal with Booker to not turn him in to the Emeror's Coven [[EvilIsPetty out of spite]]. Willow then threatens her to [[spoiler:take the loss]] when she points out that doing so would mean admitting that she [[spoiler:knows the Seventh Son's identity because she ''lost'' a grudgby match to him, which would ruin her reputation.]] Add to that Amelia and Cat offering to support Willow's claims, and Boscha agrees to [[spoiler:accept her defeat]] and leave Willow and her friends alone.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Boscha refuses to accept defeat when [[spoiler:Willow's team beats her in grudgby]] and decides to renege on her deal with Booker to not turn him in to the Emeror's Coven [[EvilIsPetty out of spite]]. Willow then threatens her to [[spoiler:take the loss]] when she points out that doing so would mean admitting that she [[spoiler:knows the Seventh Son's identity because she ''lost'' a grudgby match to him, which would ruin her reputation.]] Add to that Amelia and Cat offering to support Willow's claims, and Boscha agrees to [[spoiler:accept her defeat]] and leave Willow and her friends alone.
* InternalReveal:
** Luz learns about Amity's crush on Booker in "Face Your Fears", and since Amity calls her out on her own feelings for Booker, Luz confirms hers, too. Two chapters later, they learn that he has feelings for both of them, thanks to Gus blurting it out.
** Chapter 15 has Booker introduce Luz, Willow, Gus, and Amity to his uncle York and aunt Sarah when they visit Eda at the Owl House.
** Luz learns about Amity's crush on Booker in "Face Your Fears", and since Amity calls her out on her own feelings for Booker, Luz confirms hers, too. Two chapters later, they learn that he has feelings for both of them, thanks to Gus blurting it out.
** Chapter 15 has Booker introduce Luz, Willow, Gus, and Amity to his uncle York and aunt Sarah when they visit Eda at the Owl House.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The snot-nosed toddler from "Escape of the Palisman" is named Gray in this story.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: MyGodWhatHaveIDone: While training in grudgby, Luz uses the Thorn Vault and injures Booker as a result. She then gets an earful from Booker about how she always gets her friends into trouble, him especially, and never seems to learn from her mistakes. After thinking about it, she comes to see that he's right and apologizes to both Booker and Willow for not taking their feelings into consideration.
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** The snot-nosed toddler from "Escape of the Palisman" is named Gray in thisstory.story.
** Skara has a last name in this story: Foxbat.
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** The snot-nosed toddler from "Escape of the Palisman" is named Gray in this
** Skara has a last name in this story: Foxbat.
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** In chapter 15, Booker lays one out for Luz not only endangering her friends with a move from an Azura movie during Grudgby training, but for all the times her impulsiveness became a problem, both before and after arriving to the Boiling Isles. While Booker regrets saying all of that stuff, Luz admits that she never took into account how her reckless and impulsive actions, desire to live out her fantasies, and refusal to acknowledge the reality of the situation have consequences.
-->"This is exactly what [Booker] been saying all day! All this time, [Luz] been so focused on living out your fantasies that you fail to consider other people! None of this would have happened if you had kept your mouth shut! After all the times I had your back and after all the sh** you put me through, I would have thought you would at least learn by now. But no! You just keep getting people you know into bad situations!"
-->"This is exactly what [Booker] been saying all day! All this time, [Luz] been so focused on living out your fantasies that you fail to consider other people! None of this would have happened if you had kept your mouth shut! After all the times I had your back and after all the sh** you put me through, I would have thought you would at least learn by now. But no! You just keep getting people you know into bad situations!"
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** In chapter 15, Booker lays one out for Luz not only endangering her friends with a move from an Azura movie during Grudgby training, but for all the times her impulsiveness became a problem, both before and after arriving to the Boiling Isles. While Booker regrets saying all of that stuff, Luz admits that she never took into account how her reckless and impulsive actions, desire to live out her fantasies, and refusal to acknowledge the reality of the situation have has consequences.
-->"This --->"This is exactly what [Booker] been saying all day! All this time, [Luz] been so focused on living out your fantasies that you fail to consider other people! None of this would have happened if you had kept your mouth shut! After all the times I had your back and after all the sh** you put me through, I would have thought you would at least learn by now. But no! You just keep getting people you know into bad situations!"
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-->"So that's it?! After all that talk to Booker about leading a revolution and getting back at Belos, [York] chose to hide like a coward?! [...] Y-You heard [King], coward! As the King of the Demons, you're going to listen to me! You're the Crow Wizard! The witch who's been inspiring many to stand up against Belos. And now, when you have a chance to strike at the heart of Belos' institution, you think you're not powerful enough to [[spoiler:stop a petrification ceremony]]? Not only that, you're just gonna let your friend, Booker's [[spoiler:new mom]], die?! Without even a fight?! You say you're protecting your family, but you're letting your family die right now. This isn't you being cautious. This is you hiding like a coward! If you can't do what's right for your family, then you don't deserve to wear that mask!"
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** At one point, Booker namedrops [[WesternAnimation/TheAdventuresOfJimmyNeutron Jimmy Neutron]] when saying he and his friends aren't as smart as Warrick when it comes to inventing.
** Boscha quotes [[WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}} Sasha Waybright]] when telling Skara to back off after making an attempt to defent Booker.
--->'''Boscha:''' [''angrily''] I'm not going to lose to a loser who forgot his place! And I suggest you remember yours and do as you're told. End. Of. Discussion.
* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: During the period when Amity was captain of the Banshees grudgby team, Bo had been one as well, something that didn't happen in the show.
** Boscha quotes [[WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}} Sasha Waybright]] when telling Skara to back off after making an attempt to defent Booker.
--->'''Boscha:''' [''angrily''] I'm not going to lose to a loser who forgot his place! And I suggest you remember yours and do as you're told. End. Of. Discussion.
* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: During the period when Amity was captain of the Banshees grudgby team, Bo had been one as well, something that didn't happen in the show.
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* AbsurdPhobia: Some of Booker's cousins have some questional ones; Jason fears monkeys, Roswell hates figure skaters due to how they spin, and Felix has something against a hairy mailman he believes is a werewolf.
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** "Once Upon a Swap" is skipped over, moving the story ahead to "Something Ventured, Someone Framed".
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** The events of "Once Upon a Swap" is Swap", "Sense and Insenseitivity", and "Really Small Problems" are skipped over, moving over to keep the story ahead to "Something Ventured, Someone Framed".plot moving.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Booker is disliked by the kids at school, the kids at the orphanage, and the nuns as well due to his tempermental nature.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Booker is disliked by the kids at school, the kids at the orphanage, and the nuns as well due to his tempermental nature.nature and the fact that he's friends with Luz, who's always been considered an outcast in Gravesfield.
** The same goes for Bo. Originally a background character as well, here she's Skara's girlfriend and has more screentime at times when the bard appears.
* BreakingTheForthWall: Booker outright does this in Chapter 13 when he asks where Gus had been for the last few chapters after his friends show concern over his lack of knowledge regarding Grom.
* BreakingTheForthWall: Booker outright does this in Chapter 13 when he asks where Gus had been for the last few chapters after his friends show concern over his lack of knowledge regarding Grom.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's not hard for Luz and Booker's friends to tell that they have feelings for each other. The fact that Luz kissed Booker on the cheek before his duel with Amity and deny that it meant anything to a nearby Eda when she didn't actually question it doesn't help. Willow actually has to fill in Gus about their attraction when he shows that he didn't suspect it at all.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's not hard for Luz and Booker's friends to tell that they have feelings for each other. The fact that Luz kissed Booker on the cheek before his duel with Amity and deny that it meant anything to a nearby Eda when she didn't actually question it doesn't help. help, Willow actually has to fill in Gus about their attraction when he shows that he didn't suspect it at all.all, and Principal Bump outright calls Booker Luz's boyfriend. Even Amity, who has feelings for both of them, sees how close they are and doubts either of them would like her as a result.
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* AdaptedOut:
** Due to Warden Wrath's DeathByAdaptation here, Braxas is excluded and replaced with a mantis girl named Mandy.
** "Once Upon a Swap" is skipped over, moving the story ahead to "Something Ventured, Someone Framed".
** Due to Warden Wrath's DeathByAdaptation here, Braxas is excluded and replaced with a mantis girl named Mandy.
** "Once Upon a Swap" is skipped over, moving the story ahead to "Something Ventured, Someone Framed".
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* {{Foil}}: Both Luz and Booker are social outcasts, but both differ in their response to it.
** Luz prefers to TurnTheOtherCheek and deals with her problems by laughing them off.
** Booker uses his fists and aggressions to deal with them.
** Luz prefers to TurnTheOtherCheek and deals with her problems by laughing them off.
** Booker uses his fists and aggressions to deal with them.
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* {{Foil}}: Both Luz and Booker are social outcasts, but both differ in their response to it.
**it. While Luz prefers to TurnTheOtherCheek and deals with her problems by laughing them off.
**off, Booker uses his fists and aggressions to deal fights back with them.fisticuffs and aggressively clobbers anyone and everyone who wrongs him.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Booker is disliked by the kids at school, the kids at the orphanage, and the nuns as well.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Booker is disliked by the kids at school, the kids at the orphanage, and the nuns as well.well due to his tempermental nature.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's not hard for Luz and Booker's friends to tell that they have feelings for each other. The fact that Luz kissed Booker on the cheek before his duel with Amity and deny that it meant anything to a nearby Eda when she didn't actually question it doesn't help. Willow actually has to fill in Gus about their attraction when he shows that he didn't suspect it at all.
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* ShoutOut: Booker lashing out when someone brings up his height will bring to mind [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Edward Elric]].
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* ShoutOut: ShipperOnDeck: Willow makes an instant fan out of Gus after informing him of Booker and Luz's crushes on each other before admitting her belief that they're adorable together.
* ShoutOut:
** Booker lashing out when someone brings up his height will bring to mind [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist EdwardElric]].Elric]].
** See ''WesternAnimation/BillyAndMandysBigBoogeyAdventure'' for clarity on the "Because we own you"/"Because you love us" gag.
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** Booker lashing out when someone brings up his height will bring to mind [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Edward
** See ''WesternAnimation/BillyAndMandysBigBoogeyAdventure'' for clarity on the "Because we own you"/"Because you love us" gag.
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** Skara gets this treatment as well. While she was mostly a background character, she is featured more in the story, where she plays a major part in the rewrite of "Wing It Like Witches".
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** Skara gets this treatment as well. While she was mostly a background character, she is featured more in the story, where she is Booker's cousin, therefore making her a Bridges. In fact, she plays a major part in the rewrite of "Wing It Like Witches".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, during his fight with Booker, Belos remarks that the boy doesn't remember him, which Booker replies that he doesn't.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, during his fight with Booker, Belos remarks that the boy doesn't remember him, to which Booker replies that he doesn't.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, during his fight with Booker, Belos remarks that the boy doesn't remember him, which Booker replies that he doesn't.]]
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* HeightAngst: Booker, naturally.
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptive mother.]]
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptive mother.]]
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* HeightAngst: Booker, naturally.
naturally. [[spoiler:He eventually gains a magical growth spurt in Chapter 18 as a result of himself and Luz staying in the Demon Realm.]]
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptivemother.mother, all while earning the nickname "Mama Eda".]]
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptive
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* CoolSword: Booker wields a sword called Dragon's Bite, which belonged to his family before him. The sword has an anti-magic material which can repel any magic and can be called to Booker or any member of the Bridges family such as his uncle or cousin.
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* CoolSword: Booker wields a sword called Dragon's Bite, which belonged to his family before him. The sword has an is made of anti-magic material which can repel any magic and can be called to Booker or any member of the Bridges family such as his uncle or cousin.
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* CoolSword: Booker wields a sword called Dragon's Bite, which belonged to his family before him. The sword has an anti-magic blade which can repel any magic and can be called to Booker or any member of the Bridges family such as his uncle or cousin.
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* CoolSword: Booker wields a sword called Dragon's Bite, which belonged to his family before him. The sword has an anti-magic blade material which can repel any magic and can be called to Booker or any member of the Bridges family such as his uncle or cousin.
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 12, once Booker asks to see his memory from his birthday, which was the day his family died, he sees a photo of himself summoning the fire spell. This immediately causes him to break down in tears, and he starts blaming himself for his family's death. Eda comforts him by hugging him and tells him what happened wasn't his fault.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 12, once Booker asks to see his memory from his birthday, which was the day his family died, he sees a photo of himself summoning the fire spell.spell, which consequently leads to him reaching the conclusion that it was his spell that started the fire that killed his family. This immediately causes him to break down in tears, and he starts blaming himself for his family's death. Eda comforts him by hugging him and tells him what happened wasn't his fault.]]
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Would Hit A Girl examples must now make reference to the idea that it’s not socially acceptable for a boy to hit a girl in order to count as a proper example of the trope (something which the chapter you mentioned - technically - does)
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* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family.
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* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family.family, something that said bully lambasts him for.
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Fire is this one to Booker, since it's how his family died on the day of his 7th birthday.]]
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Fire is this one to Booker, since it's how his family died on the day of his 7th birthday.]]]]
* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family.
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* WouldHitAGirl: In a flashback in Chapter 4, Booker attacked one of the female bullies for taunting him about the death of his family.
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* HappilyAdopted: Since the death of his family, Eda starts thinking of Booker as the son she never had. [[spoiler:By chapter 17, she officially adopts him as her son.]]
* HeightAngst: Booker, naturally.
* HeightAngst: Booker, naturally.
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* HappilyAdopted: Since the death of his family, Eda starts thinking of Booker as the son she never had. [[spoiler:By chapter Chapter 17, she officially adopts him as her son.]]
* HeightAngst: Booker,naturally. naturally.
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptive mother.]]
* HeightAngst: Booker,
* HonoraryAunt: Throughout the first half of the story, Booker refers to Eda as "Aunt Eda". [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, she officially becomes his adoptive mother.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 12, once Booker asks to see his memory from his birthday, which was the day his family died, he sees a photo of himself summoning a light spell. This immediately causes him to break down in tears, and he starts blaming himself for his family's death. Eda comforts him by hugging him and tells him what happened wasn't his fault.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 12, once Booker asks to see his memory from his birthday, which was the day his family died, he sees a photo of himself summoning a light the fire spell. This immediately causes him to break down in tears, and he starts blaming himself for his family's death. Eda comforts him by hugging him and tells him what happened wasn't his fault.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: Since the death of his family, Eda starts thinking of Booker as the son she never had. [[spoiler:By chapter 17, she officially adopts him as her son.]]
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** The same applies to Lilith here. While canonically aroace, the story depicts Lilith as being romantically attracted to Booker’s father, Malcolm. Not only that, but she was also in a love triangle against her sister Eda.
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** The same applies to Lilith here. While canonically aroace, the story depicts Lilith as being romantically attracted to Booker’s Booker's father, Malcolm. Not only that, but she was also in a love triangle LoveTriangle against her sister Eda.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In chapter 15, Booker lays one out for Luz not only endangering her friends with a move from an Azura movie during Grudgby training, but for all the times her impulsiveness became a problem, both before and after arriving to the Boiling Isles. While Booker regrets saying all of that stuff, Luz admits that she never took into account how her reckless and impulsive actions, desire to live out her fantasies, and refusal to acknowledge the reality of the situation have consequences.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** In chapter 15, Booker lays one out for Luz not only endangering her friends with a move from an Azura movie during Grudgby training, but for all the times her impulsiveness became a problem, both before and after arriving to the Boiling Isles. While Booker regrets saying all of that stuff, Luz admits that she never took into account how her reckless and impulsive actions, desire to live out her fantasies, and refusal to acknowledge the reality of the situation have consequences.
** In chapter 15, Booker lays one out for Luz not only endangering her friends with a move from an Azura movie during Grudgby training, but for all the times her impulsiveness became a problem, both before and after arriving to the Boiling Isles. While Booker regrets saying all of that stuff, Luz admits that she never took into account how her reckless and impulsive actions, desire to live out her fantasies, and refusal to acknowledge the reality of the situation have consequences.
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** King later lays one out for Booker's uncle York in chapter 17 when he refuses to help Booker and his friends break into the Conformatorium and free Eda.
-->"So that's it?! After all that talk to Booker about leading a revolution and getting back at Belos, [York] chose to hide like a coward?! [...] Y-You heard [King], coward! As the King of the Demons, you're going to listen to me! You're the Crow Wizard! The witch who's been inspiring many to stand up against Belos. And now, when you have a chance to strike at the heart of Belos' institution, you think you're not powerful enough to [[spoiler:stop a petrification ceremony]]? Not only that, you're just gonna let your friend, Booker's [[spoiler:new mom]], die?! Without even a fight?! You say you're protecting your family, but you're letting your family die right now. This isn't you being cautious. This is you hiding like a coward! If you can't do what's right for your family, then you don't deserve to wear that mask!"
-->"So that's it?! After all that talk to Booker about leading a revolution and getting back at Belos, [York] chose to hide like a coward?! [...] Y-You heard [King], coward! As the King of the Demons, you're going to listen to me! You're the Crow Wizard! The witch who's been inspiring many to stand up against Belos. And now, when you have a chance to strike at the heart of Belos' institution, you think you're not powerful enough to [[spoiler:stop a petrification ceremony]]? Not only that, you're just gonna let your friend, Booker's [[spoiler:new mom]], die?! Without even a fight?! You say you're protecting your family, but you're letting your family die right now. This isn't you being cautious. This is you hiding like a coward! If you can't do what's right for your family, then you don't deserve to wear that mask!"
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** The same applies to Lilith here. While canonically aroma to aromantically asexual, the story depicts Lilith as being romantically attracted to Booker’s father, Malcolm. Not only that, but she was also in a love triangle against her sister Eda.
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** The same applies to Lilith here. While canonically aroma to aromantically asexual, aroace, the story depicts Lilith as being romantically attracted to Booker’s father, Malcolm. Not only that, but she was also in a love triangle against her sister Eda.
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**The same applies to Lilith here. While canonically aroma to aromantically asexual, the story depicts Lilith as being romantically attracted to Booker’s father, Malcolm. Not only that, but she was also in a love triangle against her sister Eda.
