Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Fanfic / TheQueensMercy

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments. [[spoiler: The 'Fallen' arc in particular gets this. Elsa gets possessed by her former incarnation, who then turns her wrath on Anna.

to:

* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments. [[spoiler: The 'Fallen' arc in particular gets this. Elsa gets possessed by her former incarnation, who then turns her wrath on Anna.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments. [[Spoiler: The 'Fallen' arc in particular gets this. Elsa gets possessed by her former incarnation, who then turns her wrath on Anna.
* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler: Sven, of all characters,]] bites the dust in Chapter 25. [[Spoiler: Kai]] later dies during the uprising, and [[spoiler: his wife Gerda]] is forced to poison herself by the eventual BigBad.

to:

* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: The 'Fallen' arc in particular gets this. Elsa gets possessed by her former incarnation, who then turns her wrath on Anna.
* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler: Sven, of all characters,]] bites the dust in Chapter 25. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Kai]] later dies during the uprising, and [[spoiler: his wife Gerda]] is forced to poison herself by the eventual BigBad.



** [[Spoiler: Kale chooses to remain behind and fight to the death against the Goddess's minions, buying time for Kristoff to escape and keep the truth alive.]]

to:

** [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Kale chooses to remain behind and fight to the death against the Goddess's minions, buying time for Kristoff to escape and keep the truth alive.]]



* RagstoRoyalty: Several characters comment that Anna is all but certain to eventually end up as this. [[Spoiler: It seems about to happen after Elsa proposes to Anna, but then the Queen's former incarnation gains control...]]

to:

* RagstoRoyalty: Several characters comment that Anna is all but certain to eventually end up as this. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: It seems about poised to happen after Elsa proposes to Anna, but then the Queen's former incarnation gains control...]]



** [[Spoiler: It's almost completely reversed when the Goddess takes over Elsa's body and shuns Anna, who loses her power upon believing the Goddess's lies. She does retain her swordsmanship training, however, as that was gained through normal means.]]

to:

** [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: It's almost completely reversed when the Goddess takes over Elsa's body and shuns Anna, who loses her power upon believing the Goddess's lies. She does retain her swordsmanship training, however, as that was gained through normal means.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Foreshadowing: ''Tons''.

to:

* Foreshadowing: ''Tons''.{{Foreshadowing}}:''Tons''.



** A dying conspirator mentions a ritual to Elsa with his dying words in Chapter 19. [[Spoiler: Her previous incarnation now intends to use one to bring the entire world to heel.]]

to:

** A dying conspirator mentions a ritual to Elsa with his dying words in Chapter 19. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Her previous incarnation now intends to use one to bring the entire world to heel.]]



** In Chapter 24, Kristoff mentions a war between gods that shaped the world humanity knows today, and notes that it may have ended by the Gods banishing themselves. [[Spoiler: Turns out that indeed happened, but one Goddess remained: ''Elsa''.]]
** Anna sees Elsa practicing her powers in Chapter 32, and notes that she's glad that [[Spoiler: they will never have to fight one another. Thirty-five chapters later, and a possessed Elsa ends up attacking and nearly killing her.]]

to:

** In Chapter 24, Kristoff mentions a war between gods that shaped the world humanity knows today, and notes that it may have ended by the Gods banishing themselves. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Turns out that indeed happened, but one Goddess remained: ''Elsa''.]]
** Anna sees Elsa practicing her powers in Chapter 32, and notes that she's glad that [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: they will never have to fight one another. Thirty-five chapters later, and a possessed Elsa ends up attacking and nearly killing her.]]



** A crack of thunder splits through the air (and wakes Anna up) the very second that [[Spoiler: King David]] is mentioned to have arrived for a conference. He turns out to be an enemy who [[spoiler: has Anna tortured.]]
** Jocasta's comments are ''filled'' with hints. [[Spoiler: She all but tells Anna that she doesn't know the ''real'' Elsa and will eventually be betrayed by her. FromACertainPointOfView, this indeed comes to pass.]]

to:

** A crack of thunder splits through the air (and wakes Anna up) the very second that [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: King David]] is mentioned to have arrived for a conference. He turns out to be an enemy who [[spoiler: has Anna tortured.]]
** Jocasta's comments are ''filled'' with hints. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: She all but tells Anna that she doesn't know the ''real'' Elsa and will eventually be betrayed by her. FromACertainPointOfView, this indeed comes to pass.]]



** Another hard to spot example: When Elsa rescues Kayla during the uprising in Chapter 50, the young maid responds with "G...Y...Your Majesty?" [spoiler: It turns out that in a moment of distress, Kayla nearly slipped up and referred to Elsa as 'Goddess'.]]

to:

** Another hard to spot example: When Elsa rescues Kayla during the uprising in Chapter 50, the young maid responds with "G...Y...Your Majesty?" [spoiler: [[spoiler: It turns out that in a moment of distress, Kayla nearly slipped up and referred to Elsa as 'Goddess'.]]

Added: 5145

Changed: 2364

Removed: 433

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].
* AttemptedRape: In an earlier chapter, Anna is nearly raped by Prince Alec but was stopped by Elsa [[spoiler: though he lied and said Anna tried to mug him, she didn't buy it.]].[[spoiler: he actually has long been rumored to be 'forward' with women as wherever he goes the female servants have been seen shaken and bruised after he has left.]]

to:

* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: Also, Kale, Elsa is subjected to this after her former incarnation possesses her body. She's forced to watch her body torment her loved ones and commit atrocities while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal being completely helpless to the royal family]].
stop it.]]
* AttemptedRape: In an earlier chapter, Anna is nearly raped by Prince Alec but was stopped by Elsa [[spoiler: though Though he lied and said Anna tried to mug him, she didn't buy it.]].[[spoiler: It turns out he actually has long been rumored to be 'forward' with women as wherever he goes the female servants have been seen shaken and bruised after he has left.departed.]]



* BigBad: Unknown. Part of what makes the conspiracy such a threat is that no one knows anything about them...or who their leader is. [[spoiler: the queens swordsmaster Vrael and his conspiracy group believe that Elsa is an evil goddess reincarnate and if they dont kill her soon she will unleash her wrath upon the world]].[[spoiler: not ling after Vrael's defeat turns out that Elsa IS the evil goddess reincarnate and after being possessed by her former life plans to re-take over the world.]]
* BigGood: Elsa.[[spoiler: subverted: while she is good as Elsa, her previous life was a power hungary, ruthless goddess.]]

to:

* BigBad: Unknown. Part of what makes the conspiracy such a threat is that no one knows anything about them...or who their leader is. [[spoiler: the queens Anna's swordsmaster Vrael Drell and his conspiracy group initially seem to take the role; they believe that Elsa is an evil goddess reincarnate and if they dont kill her soon she will reincarnated who intends to unleash her wrath upon the world]].[[spoiler: not world]].
**[[spoiler: Not
ling after Vrael's Drell's defeat it turns out that Elsa IS the evil goddess reincarnate and reincarnated and, after being possessed by her former life life, plans to re-take over the world.]]
* BigGood: Elsa.[[spoiler: subverted: while Subverted: While she is good as Elsa, her previous life was a power hungary, hungry, ruthless goddess.Goddess who later assumes control of Elsa's body and becomes the unquestionable BigBad.]]



** She gets his with this far worse after [[spoiler: Elsa is possessed by her original incarnation. Anna ends up beaten physically and emotionally to such an extent that she has to remove her own memories just to continue on.]]



* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments.
* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler: Sven, of all characters,]] bites the dust in Chapter 25.

to:

* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments.
moments. [[Spoiler: The 'Fallen' arc in particular gets this. Elsa gets possessed by her former incarnation, who then turns her wrath on Anna.
* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler: Sven, of all characters,]] bites the dust in Chapter 25. [[Spoiler: Kai]] later dies during the uprising, and [[spoiler: his wife Gerda]] is forced to poison herself by the eventual BigBad.



* Foreshadowing: ''Tons''.
** It's mentioned in Chapter 5 that there are rumors of cults that are centered around magic and the arcane abilities of their leaders. [[spoiler: The ''true'' conspiracy turns out to be one, and the leader they're centered around is ''Elsa''.]]
** Anna directly compares Elsa to a [[spoiler: Goddess]] in Chapter 10...
** A dying conspirator mentions a ritual to Elsa with his dying words in Chapter 19. [[Spoiler: Her previous incarnation now intends to use one to bring the entire world to heel.]]
** Anna has a dream sequence in Chapter 23 of Elsa [[spoiler: kicking her out of the Castle and back to her old life. Come chapter 68...]]
** In Chapter 24, Kristoff mentions a war between gods that shaped the world humanity knows today, and notes that it may have ended by the Gods banishing themselves. [[Spoiler: Turns out that indeed happened, but one Goddess remained: ''Elsa''.]]
** Anna sees Elsa practicing her powers in Chapter 32, and notes that she's glad that [[Spoiler: they will never have to fight one another. Thirty-five chapters later, and a possessed Elsa ends up attacking and nearly killing her.]]
** Rapunzel, Eugene, and Anna agree in Chapter 33 that it would be unthinkable to have to face an enemy magic-user with Elsa's level of powers and none of her morals. [[spoiler: Elsa herself ends up an enemy, and is possessed by a Goddess with zero empathy.]]
** A crack of thunder splits through the air (and wakes Anna up) the very second that [[Spoiler: King David]] is mentioned to have arrived for a conference. He turns out to be an enemy who [[spoiler: has Anna tortured.]]
** Jocasta's comments are ''filled'' with hints. [[Spoiler: She all but tells Anna that she doesn't know the ''real'' Elsa and will eventually be betrayed by her. FromACertainPointOfView, this indeed comes to pass.]]
** In Chapter 46, after Jocasta is captured, she ends up [[spoiler: treating Elsa with respect, and not in a sarcastic sense. Evangeline also convinces Elsa to cease striking the chained up woman. Twenty chapters later, it turns out Evangeline and Jocasta were allies, both members of a cult desiring to restore Elsa's divinity.
** A ''very'' subtle one: [[spoiler: Drell's version of the central prophecy is missing some key words that were said during its first reciting (which Anna glimpsed in a dream/flashback.) This turns out to be significant: the ''other'' conspiracy knows the correct version, which requires Elsa to regain her memories before reclaiming her divinity.]]
** Another hard to spot example: When Elsa rescues Kayla during the uprising in Chapter 50, the young maid responds with "G...Y...Your Majesty?" [spoiler: It turns out that in a moment of distress, Kayla nearly slipped up and referred to Elsa as 'Goddess'.]]
** Kale notes in Chapter 53 that the initial group of kidnappers clearly did ''not'' want to kill Elsa, but Anna brushes him off. Though he is wrong in suspecting Anna, [[spoiler: he's completely right about there being two different groups.]]
** ''Everything'' about [[spoiler: Evangeline's]] POV moments can be seen through a different light after [[spoiler: her]] true intentions are made known. [[spoiler: Her]] reaction to the King of Eldora's death was probably the biggest clue.
** Rohan tells Anna in Chapter 60 that he hopes for her sake that she dies from her wounds; [[spoiler: otherwise, she will face a FateWorseThanDeath when Elsa shows her true colors. While he doesn't know that Goddess!Elsa is a separate personality from the real one, he still ends up being completely right.]]
** Elsa and Anna watch the sunset as they leave for Eldora. [[spoiler: It symbolizes the coming end of their relationship and the darkness that will soon consume their lives after Elsa is possessed.]]



** [[Spoiler: Kale chooses to remain behind and fight to the death against the Goddess's minions, buying time for Kristoff to escape and keep the truth alive.]]



* TheSociopath: [[spoiler: the winter goddess is this, she is completely ruthless and views mortals as insects to her, while she does favor those with magic she despises non-magical mortals and those who are "weak"(not as ruthless), takes sadistic pleasure in killing her enemies and holds No love for her reincarnated selves family or Anna. Attempting to kill the former and imprison the latter.]]

to:

* TheSociopath: [[spoiler: the winter goddess The Goddess of Winter, Elsa's previous incarnation, is this, she this full stop. She is completely ''completely'' ruthless and views mortals as insects to her, and while she does favor those with magic she despises non-magical mortals and those who are "weak"(not as ruthless), takes sadistic pleasure in killing her enemies enemies, and holds No no love for her reincarnated selves self's family or Anna. Attempting She happily imprisons the latter and fully intends to kill subject the former and imprison the latter.to a FateWorseThanDeath.]]



* PreventTheWar: Anna convinces Elsa to try and avert a brewing conflict between Albion and Lucrania over recently discovered copper mines, using her powers as a threat to both Kings. [[spoiler: RealityEnsues as it leads to King David trying to kill Elsa and torturing Anna, though the conflict is indeed averted.]]

to:

* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Subverted with Kale, who does not believe that women should be allowed in Arendelle's military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs. Yet he eventually proves that he is ''not'' a villain and eventually makes a HeroicSacrifice.]]
* PreventTheWar: Anna convinces Elsa to try and avert a brewing conflict between Albion and Lucrania over recently discovered copper mines, using her powers as a threat to threaten to both Kings. [[spoiler: RealityEnsues as it leads to King David trying to kill Elsa and torturing Anna, though the conflict is indeed averted.]]



* RagstoRoyalty: Several characters comment that Anna is all but certain to eventually end up as this. [[Spoiler: It seems about to happen after Elsa proposes to Anna, but then the Queen's former incarnation gains control...]]



* AndIMustScream: Evangline and the Faithful believed their spell would simply make Elsa remember being the winter goddess. [[spoiler: Actually, it just reversed their roles so that the evil goddess is in control of the body while Elsa is trapped in a limbo and cant do anything. She is completely regretful and horrified by the actions that the goddess is doing with her body and is possibly the source of the goddesses headaches.]]



* TheSpymaster: Evangeline is this for Queen Elsa. Initially, she's unable to make much progress in uncovering the conspiracy, something that frustrates her to no end. [[spoiler: She succeeds in capturing Jocasta, but their valuable prisoner is poisoned before she can be interrogated.]][[spoiler: turns out that she is a member of the "Faithful" who wish to bring back Elsa's evil past life to retake the world.]]

to:

* TheSpymaster: Evangeline is this for Queen Elsa. Initially, she's unable to make much progress in uncovering the conspiracy, something that frustrates her to no end. [[spoiler: She succeeds in capturing Jocasta, but their valuable prisoner is poisoned before she can be interrogated.]][[spoiler: It turns out that she is a member of the "Faithful" who wish to bring back Elsa's evil past life to retake the world.]]



* TookALevelInBadass: After being exposed to Elsa's magic, Anna gradually develops superhuman strength and enhanced durability. The mechanics of this are unclear, as Anna was far from the first person to be healed by Elsa's magic. WordofGod claims that the answer will be revealed eventually, and is central to the plot.[[spoiler: she actually gains this through her relationship with Elsa, and the stonger their relationship the stronger she becomes, when the goddess takes over Elsa's body and shuns Anna, she looses her power upon believing her lies.]]

to:

* TookALevelInBadass: After being exposed to Elsa's magic, Anna gradually develops superhuman strength and enhanced durability. The mechanics of this are unclear, as Anna was far from the first person to be healed by Elsa's magic. WordofGod claims that the answer will be revealed eventually, and is central to the plot.[[spoiler: she She actually gains this through her relationship with Elsa, thanks to the Queen being a reincarnation of a Goddess. Divine consorts receive magic from their relationships, and the stonger stronger their relationship grows the stronger she becomes, Anna becomes.]]
** [[Spoiler: It's almost completely reversed
when the goddess Goddess takes over Elsa's body and shuns Anna, she looses who loses her power upon believing the Goddess's lies. She does retain her lies.swordsmanship training, however, as that was gained through normal means.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* AttemptedRape: In an earlier chapter, Anna is nearly raped by Prince Alec but was stopped by Elsa [[spoiler: though he lied and said Anna tried to mug him, she didn't buy it.]].[[spoiler: he actually has long been rumored to be 'forward' with women as wherever he goes the female servants have been seen shaken and bruised after he has left.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* PolicticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].

to:

* PolicticallyIncorrectVillain: PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Polictically Incorrect villain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].

to:

* Polictically Incorrect villain: PolicticallyIncorrectVillain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].

Added: 433

Changed: 235

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AndIMustScream: Evangline and the Faithful believed their spell would simply make Elsa remember being the winter goddess. [[spoiler: Actually, it just reversed their roles so that the evil goddess is in control of the body while Elsa is trapped in a limbo and cant do anything. She is completely regretful and horrified by the actions that the goddess is doing with her body and is possibly the source of the goddesses headaches.]]



* TookALevelInBadass: After being exposed to Elsa's magic, Anna gradually develops superhuman strength and enhanced durability. The mechanics of this are unclear, as Anna was far from the first person to be healed by Elsa's magic. WordofGod claims that the answer will be revealed eventually, and is central to the plot.

to:

* TookALevelInBadass: After being exposed to Elsa's magic, Anna gradually develops superhuman strength and enhanced durability. The mechanics of this are unclear, as Anna was far from the first person to be healed by Elsa's magic. WordofGod claims that the answer will be revealed eventually, and is central to the plot.[[spoiler: she actually gains this through her relationship with Elsa, and the stonger their relationship the stronger she becomes, when the goddess takes over Elsa's body and shuns Anna, she looses her power upon believing her lies.]]

Added: 848

Changed: 599

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Polictically Incorrect villain: When Elsa and Anna's relationship is revealed many of her higher level subjects lead a revolution because Anna is a woman. [[spoiler: Also, Kale, while not a villain, does not believe that women should be allowed in the Arrendelle military and constantly berates Anna for going against his beliefs]], [[spoiler: he also looses respect for Elsa for falling for Anna (a thief) but is still loyal to the royal family]].



* BigBad: Unknown. Part of what makes the conspiracy such a threat is that no one knows anything about them...or who their leader is.
* BigGood: Elsa.

to:

* BigBad: Unknown. Part of what makes the conspiracy such a threat is that no one knows anything about them...or who their leader is.
is. [[spoiler: the queens swordsmaster Vrael and his conspiracy group believe that Elsa is an evil goddess reincarnate and if they dont kill her soon she will unleash her wrath upon the world]].[[spoiler: not ling after Vrael's defeat turns out that Elsa IS the evil goddess reincarnate and after being possessed by her former life plans to re-take over the world.]]
* BigGood: Elsa.[[spoiler: subverted: while she is good as Elsa, her previous life was a power hungary, ruthless goddess.]]



* TheSociopath: [[spoiler: the winter goddess is this, she is completely ruthless and views mortals as insects to her, while she does favor those with magic she despises non-magical mortals and those who are "weak"(not as ruthless), takes sadistic pleasure in killing her enemies and holds No love for her reincarnated selves family or Anna. Attempting to kill the former and imprison the latter.]]



* TheSpymaster: Evangeline is this for Queen Elsa. Initially, she's unable to make much progress in uncovering the conspiracy, something that frustrates her to no end. [[spoiler: She succeeds in capturing Jocasta, but their valuable prisoner is poisoned before she can be interrogated.]]
* SwordAndSorcerer: Anna and Elsa, respectively.

to:

* TheSpymaster: Evangeline is this for Queen Elsa. Initially, she's unable to make much progress in uncovering the conspiracy, something that frustrates her to no end. [[spoiler: She succeeds in capturing Jocasta, but their valuable prisoner is poisoned before she can be interrogated.]]
]][[spoiler: turns out that she is a member of the "Faithful" who wish to bring back Elsa's evil past life to retake the world.]]
* SwordAndSorcerer: Anna and Elsa, respectively.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: Despite a romance between a poor thief and a magical Queen taking center stage, the setting is far closer to the cynic end of the scale than you may expect. Noble characters die for no good reason, protagonists are more than willing to kill their enemies, and the some of the aristocracy hates the situation [[spoiler: to the extent that they plan to launch a revolt.]]

to:

* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: Despite a romance between a poor thief and a magical Queen taking center stage, the setting is far closer to the cynic end of the scale than you may expect. Noble characters die for no good reason, protagonists are more than willing to kill their enemies, and the some of the aristocracy hates the situation [[spoiler: to the extent that they plan to launch a revolt.]]

Removed: 27

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* CompleteMonster: Jocasta.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Break the Cutie: [[spoiler: Anna undergoes this to some extent when captured by David and interrogated (i.e. tortured) by Jocasta, but her abilities shield her from the worst of the pain. She ends up suffering from PTSD, but her psyche survives intact.]]

to:

* Break the Cutie: BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Anna undergoes this to some extent when captured by David and interrogated (i.e. tortured) by Jocasta, but her abilities shield her from the worst of the pain. She ends up suffering from PTSD, but her psyche survives intact.]]

Added: 427

Changed: 94

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TheConspiracy: The main force opposing Elsa is a shadowy group that so far has not revealed itself. All we know is that they want her dead...and have more than enough resources to make a good show of it.* CurbStompBattle: One hundred soldiers vs. Elsa. [[spoiler: They never had a chance.]]

to:

* TheConspiracy: The main force opposing Elsa is a shadowy group that so far has not revealed itself. All we know is that they want her dead...and have more than enough resources to make a good show of it.it.
** [[spoiler: So far, they've managed to nearly kill both Elsa and Anna several times, torture and permanently scar the latter, cause Rapunzel to lose her arm, nearly start a war between two powerful nations, and organize a conservative revolt against Elsa's rule...all while working from the shadows and keeping their true agenda hidden.]]
* CurbStompBattle: One hundred soldiers vs. Elsa. [[spoiler: They never had a chance.]]



* GlassCannon: Elsa, just like in the movie.

to:

* GlassCannon: Elsa, just like in the movie.film.

Added: 2110

Changed: 130

Removed: 314

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AllForNothing: Anna goes alone to see the trolls, hoping that they'll know something that can help Arendelle identify the conspirators. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, Grand Pabbie knows nothing that can be of use at the moment, and on the journey back Sven is killed.]]



* AnArmAndALeg: During an attack in Corona, [[spoiler: Rapunzel loses part of her right arm to an ambush. Her magic is able to heal the wound and prevent blood loss, but not reattach the limb.]]



* Break the Cutie: [[spoiler: Anna undergoes this to some extent when captured by David and interrogated (i.e. tortured) by Jocasta, but her abilities shield her from the worst of the pain. She ends up suffering from PTSD, but her psyche survives intact.]]



* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: After being captured by King David of Lucrania, Anna is subjected to this.]]
* TheConspiracy: The main force opposing Elsa is a shadowy group that so far has not revealed itself. All we know is that they want her dead...and have more than enough resources to make a good show of it.



* CurbStompBattle: One hundred soldiers vs. Elsa. [[spoiler: They never had a chance.]]

to:

* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: After being captured by King David of Lucrania, Anna is subjected to this.]]
* TheConspiracy: The main force opposing Elsa is a shadowy group that so far has not revealed itself. All we know is that they want her dead...and have more than enough resources to make a good show of it.
* CurbStompBattle: One hundred soldiers vs. Elsa. [[spoiler: They never had a chance.]]



* PreventTheWar: Anna convinces Elsa to try and avert a brewing conflict between Albion and Lucrania over recently discovered copper mines, using her powers as a threat to both Kings. [[spoiler: RealityEnsues as it leads to King David trying to kill Elsa and torturing Anna, though the conflict is indeed averted.]]



* SecretRelationship: Due to the inevitable backlash, Elsa and Anna agree to keep their relationship secret for a few months until the rumor mill can brace the public for the revelation. [[spoiler: Anna accidentally outs them in a moment of rashness.]]
** [[spoiler: We don't find out until after Vlora's death, but she and Evangeline were in one. Vlora (correctly) knew her aristocratic family would not approve.]]



* TheSpymaster: Evangeline is this for Queen Elsa. Initially, she's unable to make much progress in uncovering the conspiracy, something that frustrates her to no end. [[spoiler: She succeeds in capturing Jocasta, but their valuable prisoner is poisoned before she can be interrogated.]]



* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Elsa and Anna, [[BattleCouple to each other.]]

to:

* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Elsa and Anna, [[BattleCouple to each other.]]
* TheWoobie: It's hard not to feel bad for Kristoff [[spoiler: after Sven is killed.
]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ColdBloodiedTorture: [[spoiler: After being captured by King David of Lucrania, Anna is subjected to this.]]

to:

* ColdBloodiedTorture: ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: After being captured by King David of Lucrania, Anna is subjected to this.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* ColdBloodiedTorture: [[spoiler: After being captured by King David of Lucrania, Anna is subjected to this.]]


Added DiffLines:

* CompleteMonster: Jocasta.


Added DiffLines:

* JustifiedCriminal: Anna.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* TakingAdvantageOfGenerosity: Anna is often accused of this, given that the Queen rescued her from poverty and gave her a new lifestyle soon after they met. [[spoiler: Jocasta in particular mocks her for it during an interrogation session.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Orphan'sOrdeal: Both Anna and Elsa are orphans by the time the story starts, and both are affected by the loss. Anna arguably has it worse, as she never even knew her parents and had to grow up alone.

to:

* Orphan'sOrdeal: OrphansOrdeal: Both Anna and Elsa are orphans by the time the story starts, and both are affected by the loss. Anna arguably has it worse, as she never even knew her parents and had to grow up alone.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ThouShaltNotKill: Averted by both Elsa and Anna, though the latter is more reluctant.

to:

* ThouShaltNotKill: Averted by both Elsa and Anna, though the latter is more reluctant. reluctant than the former.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* CurbStompBattle: One hundred soldiers vs. Elsa. [[spoiler: They never had a chance.]]


Added DiffLines:

* ShipperOnDeck: Rapunzel, for Elsa and Anna.


Added DiffLines:

* SwordAndSorcerer: Anna and Elsa, respectively.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* Orphan'sOrdeal: Both Anna and Elsa are orphans by the time the story starts, and both are affected by the loss. Anna arguably has it worse, as she never even knew her parents and had to grow up alone.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]

to:

* BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, possesses a significant GuiltComplex, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* * TheAce/BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]

to:

* * TheAce/BrokenAce: BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]

Added: 303

Removed: 222

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TheAce/BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]



* * TheAce/BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]



* UptownGirl: Elsa, to Anna.

to:

* UptownGirl: Elsa, to Anna.Anna.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Elsa and Anna, [[BattleCouple to each other.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* TheAce/BrokenAce: Queen Elsa is beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and kind. However, she is unskilled in social interactions, has no qualms about killing her enemies, and even [[spoiler: kills King David in cold blood.]]


Added DiffLines:

* AscendedExtra: Rapunzel and the rest of the Coronan Royal Family are relatively prominent characters.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Part of the reason Anna falls for Elsa is because she is one of the few people to show her genuine kindness.
* BigBad: Unknown. Part of what makes the conspiracy such a threat is that no one knows anything about them...or who their leader is.
* BigGood: Elsa.


Added DiffLines:

* DemotedToExtra: [[spoiler: Hans]] only appears in one brief scene.


Added DiffLines:

* MagicRealism


Added DiffLines:

* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: Despite a romance between a poor thief and a magical Queen taking center stage, the setting is far closer to the cynic end of the scale than you may expect. Noble characters die for no good reason, protagonists are more than willing to kill their enemies, and the some of the aristocracy hates the situation [[spoiler: to the extent that they plan to launch a revolt.]]


Added DiffLines:

* ThouShaltNotKill: Averted by both Elsa and Anna, though the latter is more reluctant.
* TookALevelInBadass: After being exposed to Elsa's magic, Anna gradually develops superhuman strength and enhanced durability. The mechanics of this are unclear, as Anna was far from the first person to be healed by Elsa's magic. WordofGod claims that the answer will be revealed eventually, and is central to the plot.

Added: 1166

Changed: 1

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TheConspiracy: The main force opposing Elsa is a shadowy group that so far has not revealed itself. All we know is that they want her dead...and have more than enough resources to make a good show of it.
* CerberusSyndrome: The story gets darker and more intense after the first fifteen chapters or so, although it still has its lighter moments.
* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler: Sven, of all characters,]] bites the dust in Chapter 25.



* Healing Hands: Rapunzel and Elsa both have this ability. Elsa's is easier to use, but Rapunzel's is stronger (her tears can heal anything that isn't dead.)

to:

* Healing Hands: HealingHands: Rapunzel and Elsa both have this ability. Elsa's is easier to use, but Rapunzel's is stronger (her tears can heal anything that isn't dead.))
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Anna attempts this twice, first taking an arrow for Elsa and later staying behind to hold off any overwhelming force of enemy soldiers. She survives both times, but only through incredible luck.]]



* RagsToRiches: Anna goes through this, thanks to Elsa. It's not all sunshine and roses, thanks to some of the nobility resenting her rise. Still, she's clearly grateful to get off the streets.

to:

* RagsToRiches: Anna goes through this, thanks to Elsa. It's not all sunshine and roses, thanks to some of the nobility resenting her rise. Still, she's clearly grateful to get off the streets.streets.
* RealityEnsues: Yes, it's enjoyable to see how a poor girl is suddenly ushered into a life of luxury by the Queen of Arendelle. But a great many of people take issue with a commoner becoming so close to the Queen, especially after [[spoiler: Anna's criminal past is revealed.]]
* SmugSuper: Downplayed. Elsa is the most powerful user of magic on the playing field and knows it, but she is willing to admit that her arrogance blinded her to the fact that she can be caught off guard.
*UptownGirl: Elsa, to Anna.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Body Guarding A Badass: Anna does this for Elsa. A justified example, because while Elsa is incredibly powerful, she remains human and can be taken down by surprise attacks.

to:

* Body Guarding A Badass: BodyguardingABadass: Anna does this for Elsa. A justified example, because while Elsa is incredibly powerful, she remains human and can be taken down by surprise attacks.



* PrincessinRags: Averted. Per WordofGod, Anna does ''not'' have a wealthy background, nor was she Elsa's sister taken at birth.
* RagstoRiches: Anna goes through this, thanks to Elsa. It's not all sunshine and roses, thanks to some of the nobility resenting her rise. Still, she's clearly grateful to get off the streets.

to:

* PrincessinRags: PrincessInRags: Averted. Per WordofGod, Anna does ''not'' have a wealthy background, nor was she Elsa's sister taken at birth.
* RagstoRiches: RagsToRiches: Anna goes through this, thanks to Elsa. It's not all sunshine and roses, thanks to some of the nobility resenting her rise. Still, she's clearly grateful to get off the streets.

Added: 686

Changed: 7

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BodyguardingaBadass: Anna does this for Elsa. A justified example, because while Elsa is incredibly powerful, she remains human and can be taken down by surprise attacks.

to:

* BodyguardingaBadass: Body Guarding A Badass: Anna does this for Elsa. A justified example, because while Elsa is incredibly powerful, she remains human and can be taken down by surprise attacks.attacks.
* GlassCannon: Elsa, just like in the movie.
* Healing Hands: Rapunzel and Elsa both have this ability. Elsa's is easier to use, but Rapunzel's is stronger (her tears can heal anything that isn't dead.)
* JustLikeRobinHood: Sort of. Anna steals for herself (she's very poor,) but only from those who can afford it (and nothing more than a handful of coins at a time.)
* PrincessinRags: Averted. Per WordofGod, Anna does ''not'' have a wealthy background, nor was she Elsa's sister taken at birth.
* RagstoRiches: Anna goes through this, thanks to Elsa. It's not all sunshine and roses, thanks to some of the nobility resenting her rise. Still, she's clearly grateful to get off the streets.

Added: 1131

Changed: 551

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


s

to:

s'''''The Queen's Mercy''''' is a fanfiction of the 2013 film {{Disney/Frozen}} written by the author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3235213/JYN044 JYN044]]. The story is set in an alternate universe in which Elsa, Princess of Arendelle, grew up an only child and thus never came to fear her magical abilities. At the age of twenty three, she has ruled Arendelle for five years following the deaths of her parents. Despite public knowledge of her powers and her status as an unmarried Queen, her reign has been stable and allowed her kingdom to prosper.

But everything changes the night that an orphaned, impoverished thief named Anna mistakenly breaks into her bedroom. Despite her duties as Queen, Elsa takes pity on Anna's situation and allows her to walk free. And after the thief returns the favor by rescuing Elsa from the first strike of a brewing conspiracy, she is invited to lodge temporarily within the Queen's Palace.

It's not long before the two women start growing close. And as Elsa suddenly finds herself under attack from all sides by a mysterious group that will go to any lengths to see her fall, she and Anna have no choice but to depend upon one another for survival.

The story is being hosted on Website/FanFictionDotNet and the first chapter can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10910214/1/The-Queen-s-Mercy here]]. As of July 11, 2015, it stands at 48 chapters and receives weekly updates.

----
!!''The Queen's Mercy'' demonstrates examples of the following tropes:
* AlternateUniverseFic
* BodyguardingaBadass: Anna does this for Elsa. A justified example, because while Elsa is incredibly powerful, she remains human and can be taken down by surprise attacks.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

s

Top