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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords and [[BladeOnAStick spears]]. Not so much the whip, but since that's what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords and [[BladeOnAStick spears]].spears. Not so much the whip, but since that's what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
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“[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12750609/1/The-Prince-of-Dorne The Prince of Dorne]] is a ‘’Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire’’ fanfic that follows [[OriginalCharacter Prince Lewyn Martell]], son of Doran Martell and his part in his father’s schemes to avenge his family.
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* AgeLift: Arianne Martell is younger than she was in canon to accommodate for Lewyn being the eldest of Prince Doran’s children.
* AloofOlderBrother: Lewyn isn’t very close with his younger brothers Quentyn and Trystane; Quentyn because he was fostered with the Yronwoods and Trystane because they are far apart in age.
* AscendedExtra:
* AloofOlderBrother: Lewyn isn’t very close with his younger brothers Quentyn and Trystane; Quentyn because he was fostered with the Yronwoods and Trystane because they are far apart in age.
* AscendedExtra:
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* AgeLift: Arianne Martell is younger than she was in canon to accommodate for Lewyn being the eldest of Prince Doran’s Doran's children.
* AloofOlderBrother: Lewynisn’t isn't very close with his younger brothers Quentyn and Trystane; Quentyn because he was fostered with the Yronwoods and Trystane because they are far apart in age.
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* CombatPragmatist: Obara Sand shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
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* CombatPragmatist: Obara Sand shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s Lewyn's eye while sparring.
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** Trystane Martell is named for Doran’s father.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Lewyn kills the Mountain in the Hand’s Tourney]].
* DeathByChildbirth: Symon Santagar’s wife died giving birth to her 12th daughter.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Lewyn kills the Mountain in the Hand’s Tourney]].
* DeathByChildbirth: Symon Santagar’s wife died giving birth to her 12th daughter.
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** Trystane Martell is named for Doran’s Doran's father.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Lewyn kills the Mountain in theHand’s Hand's Tourney]].
* DeathByChildbirth: SymonSantagar’s Santagar's wife died giving birth to her 12th daughter.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Lewyn kills the Mountain in the
* DeathByChildbirth: Symon
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* FreudianExcuse: Discussed; Lewyn thinks that while Queen Cersei is unpleasant, he doesn’t blame her; anyone wouldn’t be nice if they married Robert Baratheon and watched him sire bastards all around the Seven Kingdoms. Joffrey on the other hand has no excuse.
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* FreudianExcuse: Discussed; Lewyn thinks that while Queen Cersei is unpleasant, he doesn’t doesn't blame her; anyone wouldn’t wouldn't be nice if they married Robert Baratheon and watched him sire bastards all around the Seven Kingdoms. Joffrey on the other hand has no excuse.
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* AHeroIsBorn: The story begins with Lewyn’s birth.
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* AHeroIsBorn: The story begins with Lewyn’s Lewyn's birth.
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Symon Santagar has 12 daughters.
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Symon Santagar has 12 twelve daughters.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords and [[BladeOnAStick spears]]. Not so much the whip, but since that’s what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was named Darius.
** Doran’s mother, the ruling Princess of Dorne, was named Loreza.
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was named Darius.
** Doran’s mother, the ruling Princess of Dorne, was named Loreza.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords and [[BladeOnAStick spears]]. Not so much the whip, but since that’s that's what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
*NamedByTheAdaptation:
NamedByTheAdaptation:
**Doran’s Doran's father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s Mellario's was named Darius.
**Doran’s Doran's mother, the ruling Princess of Dorne, was named Loreza.
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* ProfessionalButtKisser: Lewyn’s opinion of Ned Stark, the “Usurper’s dog, who had obeyed him in all things and came running from his home for him whenever he was asked.”
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, Aron Santagar’s relationship to Ser Symon Santagar isn’t mentioned. Here, he is Symon’s younger brother.
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises that he’ll force her to wed a DirtyOldMan, forcing the servants to do weird tasks and threatening to whip them if they refuse.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, Aron Santagar’s relationship to Ser Symon Santagar isn’t mentioned. Here, he is Symon’s younger brother.
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises that he’ll force her to wed a DirtyOldMan, forcing the servants to do weird tasks and threatening to whip them if they refuse.
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* ProfessionalButtKisser: Lewyn’s Lewyn's opinion of Ned Stark, the “Usurper’s "Usurper's dog, who had obeyed him in all things and came running from his home for him whenever he was asked.”
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, AronSantagar’s Santagar's relationship to Ser Symon Santagar isn’t isn't mentioned. Here, he is Symon’s Symon's younger brother.
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises thathe’ll he'll force her to wed a DirtyOldMan, forcing the servants to do weird tasks and threatening to whip them if they refuse.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, Aron
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises that
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea. [[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of the Tourney at Harrenhal and Elia Martell’s death, which both occurred more than 15 years before the books began.
* YouRemindMeOfX: Sansa’s disgust about Arya getting herself dirty reminds Lewyn of Arianne getting embarrassed at him.
* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of the Tourney at Harrenhal and Elia Martell’s death, which both occurred more than 15 years before the books began.
* YouRemindMeOfX: Sansa’s disgust about Arya getting herself dirty reminds Lewyn of Arianne getting embarrassed at him.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s King's Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea. [[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
* VagueAge: Itisn’t isn't stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of the Tourney at Harrenhal and Elia Martell’s Martell's death, which both occurred more than 15 fifteen years before the books began.
* YouRemindMeOfX:Sansa’s Sansa's disgust about Arya getting herself dirty reminds Lewyn of Arianne getting embarrassed at him.him.
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* HeirClubForMen: Played with. Sylva Santagar can inherit the lands held by her father Ser Symon, but she cannot inherit his title because the Faith of the Seven does not allow women to become knights.
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* HeirClubForMen: Played with. Sylva Santagar can inherit the lands held by her father Ser Symon, but she cannot inherit his title ''title'' because the Faith of the Seven does not allow women to become knights.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria has a chance to maul Joffrey, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads Inn.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria has a chance to maul Joffrey, Lady survives the incident at the CrossroadsInn.Inn.
** When Lewyn escapes King's Landing, Syrio Forel has already knocked out Boros Blount and he and Arya flee as well.
** Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria has a chance to maul Joffrey, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads
** When Lewyn escapes King's Landing, Syrio Forel has already knocked out Boros Blount and he and Arya flee as well.
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* HistoryRepeats: Like Rhaegar Targaryen, Lewyn wins a tournament and crowns a Stark Queen of Love and Beauty. However, Lewyn is a little smarter with his words.
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* HistoryRepeats: Like Rhaegar Targaryen, Lewyn Martell wins a tournament and crowns a Stark Queen of Love and Beauty. However, Lewyn is a little smarter with his words.
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* ProfessionalButtkisser: Lewyn’s opinion of Ned Stark, the “Usurper’s dog, who had obeyed him in all things and came running from his home for him whenever he was asked.”
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* ProfessionalButtkisser: ProfessionalButtKisser: Lewyn’s opinion of Ned Stark, the “Usurper’s dog, who had obeyed him in all things and came running from his home for him whenever he was asked.””
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, Aron Santagar’s relationship to Ser Symon Santagar isn’t mentioned. Here, he is Symon’s younger brother.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In the books, Aron Santagar’s relationship to Ser Symon Santagar isn’t mentioned. Here, he is Symon’s younger brother.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea.[[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea. [[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
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* AscendedExtra: Doran Martell is the POV for the first chapter.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
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* AscendedExtra: AscendedExtra:
** Doran Martell is the POV for the first chapter.
** Aron Santagar becomes a POV for Chapter 12.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara Sand shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
** Doran Martell is the POV for the first chapter.
** Aron Santagar becomes a POV for Chapter 12.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara Sand shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
* DeathByChildbirth: Symon Santagar’s wife died giving birth to her 12th daughter.
* HeirClubForMen: Played with. Sylva Santagar can inherit the lands held by her father Ser Symon, but she cannot inherit his title because the Faith of the Seven does not allow women to become knights.
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Symon Santagar has 12 daughters.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was named Darius.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: NamedByTheAdaptation:
** Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was namedDarius.Darius.
** Doran’s mother, the ruling Princess of Dorne, was named Loreza.
** Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was named
** Doran’s mother, the ruling Princess of Dorne, was named Loreza.
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Aron Santagar recalls the last time he had been in Dorne, and all those he knew glared at him as if he were a stranger. At that point he realized that Dorne was no longer his home.
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* AffectionateNickname: Lewyn refers to Arianne as Ari.
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* AffectionateNickname: AffectionateNickname:
** Lewyn refers to Arianne asAri.Ari.
** Doran calls his wife Mellario Mel.
** Lewyn refers to Arianne as
** Doran calls his wife Mellario Mel.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Lewyn is named for his great-uncle, Ser Lewyn Martell.
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* DeadGuyJunior: AscendedExtra: Doran Martell is the POV for the first chapter.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
* DeadGuyJunior:
** Lewyn is named for his great-uncle, Ser LewynMartell.Martell.
** Trystane Martell is named for Doran’s father.
* CombatPragmatist: Obara shows this from an early age when she spits in Lewyn’s eye while sparring.
* DeadGuyJunior:
** Lewyn is named for his great-uncle, Ser Lewyn
** Trystane Martell is named for Doran’s father.
* AHeroIsBorn: The story begins with Lewyn’s birth.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Doran’s father was named Trystane, while Mellario’s was named Darius.
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* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of Elia Martell’s death, which occurred 15 years before the books began.
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* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of the Tourney at Harrenhal and Elia Martell’s death, which both occurred more than 15 years before the books began.
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* AffectionateNickname: Lewyn refers to Arianne as Ari.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:The Mountain killed Ser Hugh in a tourney and made it look like an accident. Lewyn, the nephew of the woman the Mountain raped and murdered kills him the same way: in a tourney and makes it look like an accident.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:The Mountain killed Ser Hugh in a tourney and made it look like an accident. Lewyn, the nephew of the woman the Mountain raped and murdered murdered, kills him the same way: in a tourney and makes it look like an accident.accident]].
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* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of Elia Martell’s death, which occurred 15 years before the books began.
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* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of Elia Martell’s death, which occurred 15 years before the books began.began.
* YouRemindMeOfX: Sansa’s disgust about Arya getting herself dirty reminds Lewyn of Arianne getting embarrassed at him.
* YouRemindMeOfX: Sansa’s disgust about Arya getting herself dirty reminds Lewyn of Arianne getting embarrassed at him.
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* AgeLift: Arianne Martell is younger than she was in canon to accommodate for Lewyn being the eldest of Prince Doran’s children.
* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:The Mountain killed Ser Hugh in a tourney and made it look like an accident. Lewyn, the nephew of the woman the Mountain raped and murdered kills him the same way: in a tourney and makes it look like an accident.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords, [[BladeOnAStick spears]] and [[KnifeNut daggers]]. Not so much the whip, but since that’s what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords, swords and [[BladeOnAStick spears]] and [[KnifeNut daggers]].spears]]. Not so much the whip, but since that’s what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea.[[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea.[[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].Robert]].
* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of Elia Martell’s death, which occurred 15 years before the books began.
* VagueAge: It isn’t stated how old Lewyn is, except that he was old enough to remember hearing the news of Elia Martell’s death, which occurred 15 years before the books began.
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* TheMole: Lewyn is one for his father Doran.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the Royal Court at King’s Landing.Landing, the public reason for him being there is because Dorne wishes to rejoin the fold at court, according to Robert it was Jon Arryn's idea.[[spoiler:The truth of it being that Lewyn had been sent to court by Doran to friend any friends for Dorne in the court and to spy on Robert]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads Inn.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria, Nymeria has a chance to maul Joffrey, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads Inn.
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* AloofOlderBrother: Lewyn isn’t very close with his younger brothers Quentyn and Trystane; Quentyn because he was fostered with the Yronwoods and Trystane because they are far apart in age.
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* FreudianExcuse: Discussed; Lewyn thinks that while Queen Cersei is unpleasant, he doesn’t blame her; anyone wouldn’t be nice if they married Robert Baratheon and watched him sire bastards all around the Seven Kingdoms. Joffrey on the other hand has no excuse.
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* ProfessionalButtkisser: Lewyn’s opinion of Ned Stark, the “Usurper’s dog, who had obeyed him in all things and came running from his home for him whenever he was asked.”
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises that he’ll force her to wed a DirtyOldMan, forcing the servants to do weird tasks and threatening to whip them if they refuse.
* RoyalBrat: Joffrey, natch. Lewyn is surprised nobody tried to kill him beforehand. The various things he does include terrorizing Tommen and killing his pets, mocking Myrcella with promises that he’ll force her to wed a DirtyOldMan, forcing the servants to do weird tasks and threatening to whip them if they refuse.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Lewyn kills the Mountain in the Hand’s Tourney]].
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:The Mountain receives a lance right in the eye]].
* HistoryRepeats: Like Rhaegar Targaryen, Lewyn wins a tournament and crowns a Stark Queen of Love and Beauty. However, Lewyn is a little smarter with his words.
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:The Mountain receives a lance right in the eye]].
* HistoryRepeats: Like Rhaegar Targaryen, Lewyn wins a tournament and crowns a Stark Queen of Love and Beauty. However, Lewyn is a little smarter with his words.
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* MultiMeleeMaster: Lewyn is fairly skilled with swords, [[BladeOnAStick spears]] and [[KnifeNut daggers]]. Not so much the whip, but since that’s what he has on hand to stop Joffrey hurting Mycah, he uses that.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the RoyalCourt at King’s Landing.
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* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the RoyalCourt Royal Court at King’s Landing.
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“[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12750609/1/The-Prince-of-Dorne The Prince of Dorne]] is a ‘’Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire’’ fanfic that follows [[OriginalCharacter Prince Lewyn Martell]], son of Doran Martell and his part in his father’s schemes to avenge his family.
!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* DeadGuyJunior: Lewyn is named for his great-uncle, Ser Lewyn Martell.
* LickedByTheDog: Lady takes a liking to Lewyn.
* OriginalCharacter: Prince Lewyn Martell, eldest son and heir of Doran Martell.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads Inn.
* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the RoyalCourt at King’s Landing.
!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* DeadGuyJunior: Lewyn is named for his great-uncle, Ser Lewyn Martell.
* LickedByTheDog: Lady takes a liking to Lewyn.
* OriginalCharacter: Prince Lewyn Martell, eldest son and heir of Doran Martell.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Lewyn intervenes before Nymeria, Lady survives the incident at the Crossroads Inn.
* TokenMinority: Lewyn is the only Dornishman in the RoyalCourt at King’s Landing.
