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* AdaptationalVillainy: In the show, Lui was at his worst was an arrogant jerk whose only real bad deed was scarring Shu. Here, he's portrayed as an outright sadistic monster who brutally tortures and kills his victims when they fail to make the cut for joining the Supreme Four
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In the show, Lui was at his worst was an arrogant jerk whose only real bad deed was scarring Shu. Here, he's portrayed as an outright sadistic monster who brutally tortures and kills his victims when they fail to make the cut for joining the Supreme Four Four.
* DarkerAndEdgier: A fanfic that focuses on topics such as death & murder in a kid-friendly anime show.
* DarkerAndEdgier: A fanfic that focuses on topics such as death & murder in a kid-friendly anime show.
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** In a way, Xander is one too, since on the surface he appears as his usual laughing self, but is always forced to bend to Lui's will.
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** In a way, Xander is one too, since on the surface he appears as his usual laughing self, but due to having given up his freedom, is always forced to bend to Lui's will.
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* EasilyForgiven: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspite of all the horrible things he's done.
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* EasilyForgiven: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspite in spite of all the horrible things he's done. done.
* TheHiddenHour: 3:00 AM, aka the "Blading Hour", which is when Bladers are able to activate their Bey powers.
* TheHiddenHour: 3:00 AM, aka the "Blading Hour", which is when Bladers are able to activate their Bey powers.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In the show, Lui was at his worst was an arrogant jerk whose only real bad deed was scarring Shu. Here, he's portrayed as an outright sadistic monster who brutally tortures and kills his victims when they fail to make the cut for joining the Supreme Four
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* StepfordSmiler: This fic paints Zac as one. He seems to be living the high life as a pop star, but he’s constantly worrying about his team, given that Lui is always looking to hurt and torture them.
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** This fic paints Zac as one. He seems to be living the high life as a pop star, but he’s constantly worrying about his team, given that Lui is always looking to hurt and torturethem.them.
** In a way, Xander is one too, since on the surface he appears as his usual laughing self, but is always forced to bend to Lui's will.
** This fic paints Zac as one. He seems to be living the high life as a pop star, but he’s constantly worrying about his team, given that Lui is always looking to hurt and torture
** In a way, Xander is one too, since on the surface he appears as his usual laughing self, but is always forced to bend to Lui's will.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Shu briefly goes mad with power just from touching [[spoiler:Luinor's]] Nine disc, since its spirit is sealed inside.
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* StepfordSmiler: This fic paints Zac as one. He seems to be living the high life as a pop star, but he’s constantly worrying about his team, given that Lui is always looking to hurt and torture them.
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* WreckedWeapon: The only way a Blader can take back what they gave up for power is to destroy the Beyblade. The latter act of the story involves the gang resolving to break the Supreme Four's Beys in order
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* WreckedWeapon: The only way a Blader can take back what they gave up for power is to destroy the Beyblade. The latter act of the story involves the gang resolving to break the Supreme Four's Beys in orderorder to give back what they lost.
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* EasilyForgiven: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspire of all the horrible things he's done.
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* EasilyForgiven: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspire inspite of all the horrible things he's done.
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* EasilyForgen: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspire of all the horrible things he's done.
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* EasilyForgen: EasilyForgiven: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspire of all the horrible things he's done.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to join the Supreme Four, as they feel that the only to prevent them from ever telling anybody else is to kill them.
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* EasilyForgen: As per [[AllLovingHero Valt's character]], he immediately forgives [[spoiler:Lui]] after he is freed from [[spoiler:Luinor's]] power inspire of all the horrible things he's done.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to join the Supreme Four, as they feel that the only to prevent them from ever telling anybody else is to killthem.them.
* WreckedWeapon: The only way a Blader can take back what they gave up for power is to destroy the Beyblade. The latter act of the story involves the gang resolving to break the Supreme Four's Beys in order
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to join the Supreme Four, as they feel that the only to prevent them from ever telling anybody else is to kill
* WreckedWeapon: The only way a Blader can take back what they gave up for power is to destroy the Beyblade. The latter act of the story involves the gang resolving to break the Supreme Four's Beys in order
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to joinjoin the Supreme Four, as they feel that the only to prevent them from ever telling anybody else is to kill them.
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* DealWithTheDevil: More like, "Deal with the Bey". In order to achieve ultimate power and therefore immortality, the Blader can perform a "Blader's Deal", in which they give up a part of themself (like a personality trait).
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to join
* DealWithTheDevil: More like, "Deal with the Bey". In order to achieve ultimate power and therefore immortality, the Blader can perform a "Blader's Deal", in which they give up a part of themself (like a personality trait).
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The Supreme Four (especially Lui) have this mentality regarding anybody who tries and fails to join
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11593200/chapters/26057001 The Price For Immortality]]'' is a Beyblade Burst fanfic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/NekoVi/pseuds/NekoVi NekoVi]].
In the eponymous world of magic spinning tops, everybody knows that the Supreme Four are a group consisting of the four strongest Bladers in Japan. But, what if there was more to that than just winning Beybattles? What if, in order to join this elite group, you had to give up something in exchange for untold godlike powers? What if that something was a part of you? And is that price you pay to achieve that power truly worth it?
This story puts a much darker and more mature spin on the otherwise lighthearted and kid-friendly Beyblade Burst series and explores the idea of Beys possessing powers beyond the human imagination. It also delves into [=NekoVi=]'s headcanon that the Supreme Four are not who they seem, and how Lui became the menacing Blader he is now. The story mainly centers around Valt Aoi as he attempts to join the Supreme Four, and soon learns a dark side to the world of Beyblade. Contains mentions of violence, swearing, blood, gore, killing, and death.
As per usual, [=NekoVi=] incoporates head canons and higher thinking in most of her stories, and is an incredible author. She portrays the characters in her stories very close to their originals, while at the same time adding a little bit of her own spin to their character.
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In the eponymous world of magic spinning tops, everybody knows that the Supreme Four are a group consisting of the four strongest Bladers in Japan. But, what if there was more to that than just winning Beybattles? What if, in order to join this elite group, you had to give up something in exchange for untold godlike powers? What if that something was a part of you? And is that price you pay to achieve that power truly worth it?
This story puts a much darker and more mature spin on the otherwise lighthearted and kid-friendly Beyblade Burst series and explores the idea of Beys possessing powers beyond the human imagination. It also delves into [=NekoVi=]'s headcanon that the Supreme Four are not who they seem, and how Lui became the menacing Blader he is now. The story mainly centers around Valt Aoi as he attempts to join the Supreme Four, and soon learns a dark side to the world of Beyblade. Contains mentions of violence, swearing, blood, gore, killing, and death.
As per usual, [=NekoVi=] incoporates head canons and higher thinking in most of her stories, and is an incredible author. She portrays the characters in her stories very close to their originals, while at the same time adding a little bit of her own spin to their character.
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