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* ActionGirl: Lily doesn't have Severus' lifetime of experience, nor does she have serious combat instincts, but she can take care of herself. The first time she's seen clashing with Slytherin bullies, she humiliates Mulciber badly enough to cement his loss of status in the house. She tries to keep herself safe [[spoiler:during the Battle of Hogwarts]], but can't resist going out to make a difference, [[spoiler:such as distracting Bellatrix Lestrange from attacking the wounded in the Great Hall, thus saving many lives. She's eventually the one to kill Tom Riddle, stabbing him with the Sword of Gryffindor after his Horcruxes are destroyed.]]

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* ActionGirl: Lily doesn't have Severus' lifetime of experience, nor does she have serious combat instincts, but she can take care of herself. The first time she's seen clashing with Slytherin bullies, she humiliates Mulciber badly enough to cement his loss of status in the house. She tries to keep herself safe [[spoiler:during the Battle of Hogwarts]], safe, but can't resist going out to make a difference, [[spoiler:such difference [[spoiler:during the Battle of Hogwarts, such as distracting Bellatrix Lestrange from attacking the wounded in the Great Hall, thus saving many lives. She's eventually the one to kill Tom Riddle, stabbing him with the Sword of Gryffindor after his Horcruxes are destroyed.]]
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* MistakenForPregnant: Hagrid completely misinterprets a breakfast conversation between Severus and Lily, then spreads his mistaken conclusions to all the staff, who proceed to keep alcohol away from Lily, flip out about her helping to brew potions that might affect a fetus' development, etc, ''all without actually discussing it with her''. It takes days before either of them realises what's going on so they can clear things up.

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* MistakenForPregnant: Hagrid completely misinterprets a breakfast conversation between Severus and Lily, then spreads his mistaken conclusions to all the staff, who proceed to keep alcohol away from Lily, flip out about her helping to brew potions that might affect a fetus' development, etc, ''all without actually discussing it with her''. It takes days before either of them realises what's going on so they can clear things up.up -- and Severus hears the rumour before Lily does, and assumes it's true.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly. As of October 2021, it is complete apart from the epilogue. Also published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608/chapters/87019792 here]].

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly. As of October 2021, it and is complete apart from the epilogue.completed on Website/FanfictionDotNet. Also published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608/chapters/87019792 here]].
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* ExactWords: When James gently chides Severus about the scar on his chin, Severus replies that he "wasn't exactly afforded an opportunity to block," letting James believe that it came at the hands of Death Eaters. In actuality, [[spoiler:he was trying to shave one-handed with a straight razor]].
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** [[spoiler:The Bloody Baron tests Lily's enchantment on the Sword of Gryffindor, infusing it with the power of a Patronus, and reports that it felt like hearth and home, that he could sense a peaceful realm beyond. Snape persuades him to test it in full, and when he does, he vanishes in light.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Bloody Baron tests Lily's enchantment on the Sword of Gryffindor, infusing which infused it with the power of a Patronus, and reports that it felt like hearth and home, that he could sense a peaceful realm beyond. Snape persuades him to test it in full, as a final act of service, and when he does, he vanishes in light.]]



* EnergyAbsorption: Canonically, goblin silver - such as the Sword of Gryffindor - absorbs only that which makes it stronger, such as basilisk venom. This time, the sword is exposed to [[spoiler:dragon fire]] and absorbs ''that'', manifesting when the sword is swung.
* EngineeredPublicConfession: When Severus catches Rita Skeeter spying on his home, he calls her out on her illegal Animagus form and invites her to defend herself. He can't actually prove she's an Animagus without revealing his future knowledge, but rather than challenge him, she offers to make a deal to use it to spy for his benefit. And then Dumbledore steps out of the next room.

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* EnergyAbsorption: Canonically, goblin silver - -- such as the Sword of Gryffindor - -- absorbs only that which makes it stronger, such as basilisk venom. This time, the sword is exposed to [[spoiler:dragon fire]] and absorbs ''that'', manifesting when the sword is swung.
* EngineeredPublicConfession: When Severus catches Rita Skeeter spying on his home, he calls her out on her illegal Animagus form and invites her to defend herself. He can't actually prove she's an Animagus without revealing his future knowledge, Legilimency skills, but rather than challenge him, she offers to make a deal to use it to spy for his benefit. And then Dumbledore steps out of the next room.

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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: A rather one-sided example when Lily and Severus meet Vernon and Petunia for dinner. Vernon observes that Severus' callused hands indicate that he's a working man, and probably doesn't own a decent car, so their lateness is understandable. Petunia makes a point of having ordered wine for herself and Vernon, but soft drink for Lily and Severus since they're underage. After several minutes of continuing rudeness in this vein, Lily has had enough and storms out. Severus largely restrained himself while in the restaurant, but does note afterward that with the size of Vernon, their untouched meals will at least not go to waste.

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A rather one-sided example when Lily and Severus meet Vernon and Petunia for dinner. Vernon observes that Severus' callused hands indicate that he's a working man, and probably doesn't own a decent car, so their lateness is understandable. Petunia makes a point of having ordered wine for herself and Vernon, but soft drink for Lily and Severus since they're underage. After several minutes of continuing rudeness in this vein, Lily has had enough and storms out. Severus largely restrained himself while in the restaurant, but does note afterward that with the size of Vernon, their untouched meals will at least not go to waste.waste.
** Petunia later sends Lily a letter, congratulating her on [[spoiler:baby Albus not looking as "hideous" as his father]].
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** Justified in that it's much easier and quite different to be merciful with misbehaving students who break the rules compared to criminals and Death Eaters who break the laws. ''Prefect'' Amelia Bones being merciful with misbehaving students isn't contradictory with ''Auror'' Amelia Bones being relentless in pursuing criminals and Death Eaters, which Severus was in his first life. It's not so much hypocrisy as different standards for different situations in different contexts.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly. As of October 2021, it is complete apart from the epilogue.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly. As of October 2021, it is complete apart from the epilogue.
epilogue. Also published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34943608/chapters/87019792 here]].
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* DeaderThanDead: Multiple ghosts pass on to the afterlife, which normally is not possible because they cannot grow and therefore cannot let go of regret.
** [[spoiler:The Grey Lady finds peace by using the Resurrection Stone to reconcile with her mother, and vanishes.]]
** [[spoiler:The Bloody Baron tests Lily's enchantment on the Sword of Gryffindor, infusing it with the power of a Patronus, and reports that it felt like hearth and home, that he could sense a peaceful realm beyond. Snape persuades him to test it in full, and when he does, he vanishes in light.]]
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* InsatiableNewlyweds: Subverted; [[spoiler:Lily would have ''liked'' to, but they can't afford enough contraceptives, nor can they afford an immediate pregnancy. Severus doesn't admit that he would also feel guilty about it due to their mental age gap; he already feels guilty about their wedding night. Chances are that she could have persuaded him, though, if it weren't for the pragmatic concerns.]]

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* CryIntoChest: Lily breaks down on Severus' chest in relief when [[spoiler:he confirms that he was serious about rejecting Voldemort and never becoming a Death Eater]].

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Lily breaks down on Severus' chest in relief when [[spoiler:he confirms that he was serious about rejecting Voldemort and never becoming a Death Eater]].Eater]].
** And later for different reasons, when [[spoiler:her father has suddenly passed away]].
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* LetsWaitAWhile: Lily's father requests that they wait for the wedding night, and while Lily would gladly assert her independence and adulthood and dismiss it, Severus is keen to gain his approval and agrees. It also helps that he feels guilty about their age gap; she's young enough to have been his student.

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* LetsWaitAWhile: Lily's father requests that they wait for the wedding night, and while Lily would gladly assert her independence and adulthood and dismiss it, Severus is keen to gain his approval and agrees. It also helps that he feels guilty about their age gap; she's young enough to have been his student. [[spoiler:He later uses the memory of his choice not to sleep with Lily, to create a "purity" Focus Stone for silver; discussion with Nicolas Flamel reveals that it was successful, not precisely because of the moral purity, but because he ''acted against his own interests to protect someone who touched his soul''.]]

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* {{Forgiveness}}:{{Forgiveness}}: This is a major theme of the story.


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* GentleTouchVsFirmHand: Lily and Severus have rather different approaches as Head Girl and Boy.
--> '''Lily''': Welcome, student leaders. My name is Lily Evans, your Head Girl for this year. For those of you who don't know me, I take a far less strict approach to managing student life than my predecessor had. And hope this year for us to focus on actual issues, rather than minutiae.\\
'''Severus''': I am Severus Snape. And you don't have to know anything about me to do as I say.\\
'''Lily''': What this prickly bundle of sunshine means to say is, he looks forward to working with you.
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--> To Snape this did not feel like drifting further away, this felt like things taking a turn for the serious. It was getting over his disbelief that he had been so lucky as to be granted a chance and his adult mind finally triumphing over his stupid teenage urges to set up respectable guidelines over how he should be taking this. That there was going to be a future involving Lily and her family. A future free of solitude.\\
It honestly frightened him.
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* ExplosiveResults: Lily visits Severus' lab and they share an AlmostKiss -- until he realises that he's lost track of the time, and pushes her to the ground just before the cauldron explodes.
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* WhamEpisode: Severus and Lily's journey is substantially altered by [[spoiler:Voldemort kidnapping her. Not only does Severus lose his right hand rescuing her, which cripples his ability to use magic and earn a living, but also Voldemort learns that Severus has future knowledge, so they have to hide away in Hogwarts for safety. And with Voldemort already knowing that much, Severus restores Lily's memories of learning about the first timeline. Their life together is quite different in the aftermath.]]
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* EtTuBrute: This is Lily's internal reaction when she's looking for someone to agree that she and Severus are JustFriends, but Marlene's comment is instead that, "Well...You do spend a lot of time with him lately."

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* EtTuBrute: This is Lily's internal reaction when she's looking for someone to agree that she and Severus are JustFriends, but Marlene's comment is instead that, "Well...You do spend a lot of time with him lately."" And again when Pandora [=McGonagall=] raises the idea of participating in Lily's Patronus lessons, but Marlene suggests that Pandora would be the third wheel.
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* EtTuBrute: This is Lily's internal reaction when she's looking for someone to agree that she and Severus are JustFriends, but Marlene's comment is instead that, "Well...You do spend a lot of time with him lately."
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* NoodleIncident: At some point in third year, Severus and Lily snuck into Petunia's bedroom and--at this point one of them always cuts the other off, not wanting them to finish the sentence.
--> '''Lily''': Alright, alright! Okay fine, your memory was never your weakness. I don't know why I doubted it.
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* PrehensileHair: During a transfiguration lesson, where the students are practising changing their hair colour, one accidentally makes his hair sentient, and has to be promptly rescued by the teacher "before it scalped the boy and mauled his neighbour."
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* {{Transmutation}}: The major use of alchemy is to truly and permanently change one substance into another, drawing on principles from transfiguration and potions; essentially, the substance is broken down and rearranged at the atomic level with the help of a catalyst Focus Stone. The process is much more complex and difficult than regular transfiguration, and the yield is dependent on the skill of the alchemist but will invariably be less than the input; however, unlike transfigured items that merely have an altered appearance, alchemically produced materials have all the properties of the true material.
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* {{Forgiveness}}:
** Severus is shocked to realise that Lily was never hung up on the slur he used; what she wanted all along was simply for him to ''not join Voldemort''. That was the reason she [[RejectedApology pushed him away]] in the first timeline. [[spoiler:When he makes it clear that he won't, that he has turned his back on Voldemort and his promises, she readily forgives and embraces him in tears.]]
** Severus is very reluctant to extend his own forgiveness to the Marauders. [[spoiler:He is eventually able to be cordial with James and Remus.]]
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* CryIntoChest: Lily breaks down on Severus' chest in relief when [[spoiler:he confirms that he was serious about rejecting Voldemort and never becoming a Death Eater]].
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* LoveTriangle: Owen Mulciber has fallen for Susan Bones, who is attracted to Sebastian Urquart, who [[spoiler:is biologically female and not interested in her]]. Shenanigans ensue when Owen goes to unusual lengths to get Susan's attention; [[spoiler:he tries to have a friend impersonate Sebastian in order to push Susan toward Owen, but the Polyjuice potion, naturally, gives the friend a female body, causing consternation and chaos]].
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** After Mulciber sends Susan a ForgedMessage, hoping to have a friend use Polyjuice potion to impersonate Urquart at a private rendezvous, Snape learns that [[spoiler: Urquart is biologically female, and concealing the fact. Snape is ambivalent in his support, but does provide a convenient lie to help Urquart explain away the fact that the Polyjuice gave Lester a clearly female body]].

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** After Mulciber sends his crush Susan a ForgedMessage, hoping to have a his friend Lester use Polyjuice potion to impersonate ''her'' crush Urquart at a private rendezvous, Snape learns that [[spoiler: Urquart [[spoiler:Urquart is biologically female, and concealing the fact. Snape is ambivalent in his support, but does provide a convenient lie to help Urquart explain away the fact that the Polyjuice gave Lester a clearly female body]].



* KangarooCourt: When Severus is brought up on charges [[spoiler: of poaching]], the court seems to be stacked against him, and he doesn't understand why. He's not given a copy of the prosecution's brief in advance, not until he insists on it while actually standing in court, and then he's denied a recess to study it and prepare his defence. The investigating Auror's account of interviewing him conveniently omits any mention of his defence, and the judge doesn't allow him to grill the Auror on the contents of it. And it's pretty clear that there is not a presumption of innocence until proven beyond reasonable doubt.

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* KangarooCourt: When Severus is brought up on charges [[spoiler: of poaching]], the court seems to be stacked against him, and he doesn't understand why. He's not given a copy of the prosecution's brief in advance, not until he insists on it while actually standing in court, and then he's denied a recess to study it and prepare his defence. The investigating Auror's account of interviewing him conveniently omits any mention of his defence, defence (namely, [[spoiler:they didn't set out to poach it, just defended themselves]]), and the judge doesn't allow him to grill the Auror on the contents of it. And it's pretty clear that there is not a presumption of innocence "innocence until guilt is proven beyond reasonable doubt."
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* TheAtoner: Severus begins as this, with his whole focus on preventing Lily's death, after his mistakes killed her the first time. He eventually comes to accept that not just her life, but her friendship and love, are within reach.

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* TheAtoner: Severus begins as this, with his whole focus on preventing Lily's death, after his mistakes killed her the first time. He eventually comes to accept that not just her life, but her friendship and love, are within reach. [[spoiler:When he enters the afterlife a second time, he discovers that the Dark Mark is no longer on his soul.]]
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* ActionGirl: Lily doesn't have Severus' lifetime of experience, nor does she have serious combat instincts, but she can take care of herself. The first time she's seen clashing with Slytherin bullies, she humiliates Mulciber badly enough to cement his loss of status in the house. She tries to keep herself safe [[spoiler:during the Battle of Hogwarts]], but can't resist going out to make a difference, [[spoiler:such as distracting Bellatrix Lestrange from attacking the wounded in the Great Hall, thus saving many lives. She's eventually the one to kill Tom Riddle, stabbing him with the Sword of Gryffindor after his Horcruxes are destroyed.]]
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* IronicEcho: When Severus starts showing more spine and less compliance, Mulciber tries to shove him around and tells him to "Remember your place." A minute later, with Mulciber on the floor and Severus' wand at his throat in front of a crowd of witnesses, Severus repeats it back to him.

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** After reviewing Severus' memories, Dumbledore is particularly interested in some of the magical enhancements that Voldemort invented, such as Wormtail's silver prosthetic hand, and the power of unsupported flight. Later, [[spoiler:after Severus loses his hand, Dumbledore finds a way to create a silver prosthetic, allowing him to regain most of his magical skill.]]


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** After reviewing Severus' memories, Dumbledore is particularly interested in some of the magical enhancements that Voldemort invented, such as Wormtail's silver prosthetic hand, and the power of unsupported flight. Later, [[spoiler:after Severus loses his hand, Dumbledore finds a way to create a silver prosthetic, allowing him to regain most of his magical skill.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12369512 The Peace Not Promised]]'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro, updating monthly.
monthly. As of October 2021, it is complete apart from the epilogue.

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