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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25966573/chapters/63123259 The New Spider of Tokyo]]'' is a Franchise/SpiderMan ComicBook/SpiderMan AU, VideoGame/Persona5 fan fiction by asdfo789.
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** Justified with Rise. Due to growing out of her TeenIdol image, she’s now an actress.
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** ShoutOut: Haru’s maid is named [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony Kirumi]].
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* ABirthdayNotABreak: Yu’s final battle took place on his birthday.
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** Sho Minazuki is Scorpion.
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** ShoutOut: Haru’s maid is named [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony Kirumi]].
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Madarame, while still a villain, considerably more noble intentioned than in canon: working as the joker in order to care for his protégés.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Madarame, while still a villain, considerably more noble intentioned than in canon: working as the joker Vulture in order to care for his protégés.
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** Mitsuru Kirijo is Black Cat.
** Takuto Maruki is The Lizard.
** [[spoiler: Makoto Niijima]] is Silk, with her costume bearing more of a resemblance to Spider-Gwen’s.
** [[spoiler: Ryuji Sakamoto]] becomes Agent Venom. [[spoiler: Akechi]], meanwhile, ends up becoming Carnage.
** Takuto Maruki is The Lizard.
** [[spoiler: Makoto Niijima]] is Silk, with her costume bearing more of a resemblance to Spider-Gwen’s.
** [[spoiler: Ryuji Sakamoto]] becomes Agent Venom. [[spoiler: Akechi]], meanwhile, ends up becoming Carnage.
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* LovesMyAlterEgo: Kasumi despises Ren, and tries to keep Sumire away from him as much as possible. She later ends up developing a crush on Spider-Man. Ren actually considers it funny.
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** Akihiko and Minako are Makoto and Sae’s parents.
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** Kasumi Yoshizawa is also alive and well in this story.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Each of the super villains that Ren faces as Spider-Man were Palace Rulers in the game are are faced in the same order.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Each of the super villains that Ren faces as Spider-Man were Palace Rulers in the game are and are faced in the same order.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism:
** Spider-Man, Tombstone and a giant lava monster? Totally believable. Mysterio being an actual sorcerer? Nonsense. Granted, Ann does get proven to be correct in this case.
** The police investigating [[spoiler: Kunikazu Okumura's murder]]: Spider-Man, Electro, Ms. Negative? Perfectly normal. The killer using a suit that lets him shape shift? The witness must have hysteria.
** Spider-Man, Tombstone and a giant lava monster? Totally believable. Mysterio being an actual sorcerer? Nonsense. Granted, Ann does get proven to be correct in this case.
** The police investigating [[spoiler: Kunikazu Okumura's murder]]: Spider-Man, Electro, Ms. Negative? Perfectly normal. The killer using a suit that lets him shape shift? The witness must have hysteria.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Madarame, while still a villain, considerably more noble intentioned than in canon: working as the joker in order to care for his protégés.
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** Maruki is missing an arm.
** Madarame lost both of his legs in a car crash before the story began.
** Maruki is missing an arm.
** Madarame lost both of his legs in a car crash before the story began.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Morgana and Teddie in the games were a magical talking cat and a sentient mascot costume, here they're both human (although that doesn't stop Teddie from making his bear puns).
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Morgana and Teddie in the games were a magical talking cat and a sentient mascot costume, here they're both human (although that doesn't stop Teddie from making his bear puns).
* AdaptationalVillainy: Minato Arisato, who in this universe is [[spoiler: the Prowler]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: Minato Arisato, who in this universe is [[spoiler: the Prowler]].
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** Minato Arisato is Ren's uncle.
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* FalseFlagOpperation: In classic Mysterio fashion his scheme revolves around EngineeredHeroics. [[spoiler: But this time, instead of of making himself look like a hero, it's to restore the public faith in Spider-Man]].
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* FalseFlagOpperation: FalseFlagOperation: In classic Mysterio fashion his scheme revolves around EngineeredHeroics. [[spoiler: But this time, instead of of making himself look like a hero, it's to restore the public faith in Spider-Man]].
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*** In addition, this Mysterio poses as a wizard preaching Luddite rhetoric like the version from Spectacular Spider-Man, while his illusions are created through holograms and weaponized drones like the MCU version of the character.
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* FalseFlagOpperation: In classic Mysterio fashion his scheme revolves around EngineeredHeroics. [[spoiler: But this time, instead of of making himself look like a hero, it's to restore the public faith in Spider-Man]].
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** The Venom Symbiote combines elements of the Ultimate and 2018 versions of the character, being an artificial organism and lacking Spider-Man's powers.
** [[spoiler: Yuuki Mishima]] is Mysterio.
** [[spoiler: Yuuki Mishima]] is Mysterio.
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* HaremGenre: Though it takes over fifty chapters to get anywhere beyond ShipTease.
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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Subverted, after examining Ren's blood, Takemi determines that he's become too mutated to receive a blood transfusion, and later too mutated to have kids.
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** Rise is borrows form the Mary Jane of Miles' world from Into The Spider-Verse.
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** Goro Akechi [[spoiler: bonds with the Venom Symbiote]].
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Shido]] is Futaba's biological father.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Wakaba Isshiki, she's still mostly absent from Futaba's life because [[spoiler: she's Miss Negative]].
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* AscendedExtra: Yohei Kiritani, in the game proper he was a minor boss in Mementos, here he's the Molten Man and the secondary villain of the Tombstone arc.
* EyeScream: Kaneshiro suffers this at the Claws of Black Cat.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: A metal pipe through the lung is ultimately what does Yu in.
* IHaveYourWife: The Kingpin has been forcing the Tinkerer to work for him by holding his son hostage.
* IHaveYourWife: The Kingpin has been forcing the Tinkerer to work for him by holding his son hostage.
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** Kamoshida was deep fried by his own suit thanks to Iwai's sabotage, but a cut away to him in his cell indicates that he might not need thelung is ultimately what does Yu in.
* IHaveYourWife: The Kingpin has been forcingsuit anymore.
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** when Kaneshiro (aka. Tombstone) is broken out of prison one of his goons refers to him as "Big Man" a reference to the characters additional alias in WesternAnimation/TheSpectacularSpiderman.WesternAnimation/TheSpectacularSpiderMan.
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* StationsInCanon: Each of the super villains that Ren faces as Spider-Man were Palace Rulers in the game are are faced in the same order.
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** When Takuto Maruki is introduced, attention is drawn to his missing arm.
** After Spider-Man and Electro's second battle Kamoshida's equipment spontaneously combusts. Forensics places the blame on faulty wiring, an odd oversight on someone like the Tinkerer's part.
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* StationsInCanon: Each of the super villains that Ren faces as Spider-Man were Palace Rulers in the game are are faced in the same order.
* StationsInCanon: Each of the super villains that Ren faces as Spider-Man were Palace Rulers in the game are are faced in the same order.
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AdaptationalJerkass: Toranosuke Yoshida, this is a side effect of being combined with J. Jonah Jameson.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Several.
** Kobayakawa instead of being the school principal is a mob boss, or rather '''the''' Mob Boss.
** In response Mr. Ushimaru is the principal instead of the school counselor.
** Sae Nijima instead of being a police detective is a security guard at Shido Science.
** Speaking of Shido instead of being a politician is the CEO of Shido Science.
** Downplayed with Iwai, while he appears to still run his military surplus store, he also works for the Kingpin as the Tinkerer.
** Kobayakawa instead of being the school principal is a mob boss, or rather '''the''' Mob Boss.
** In response Mr. Ushimaru is the principal instead of the school counselor.
** Sae Nijima instead of being a police detective is a security guard at Shido Science.
** Speaking of Shido instead of being a politician is the CEO of Shido Science.
** Downplayed with Iwai, while he appears to still run his military surplus store, he also works for the Kingpin as the Tinkerer.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25966573/chapters/63123259 The New Spider of Tokyo]]'' is a Franchise/SpiderMan AU, VideoGame/Persona 5 VideoGame/Persona5 fan fiction by asdfo789.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25966573/chapters/63123259 The New Spider of Tokyo]]'' is a Franchise/SpiderMan AU, VideoGame/Persona 5 fan fiction by asdfo789.
After Spider-Man (Yu Narukami) dies in battle against his ArchEnemy the Goblin (Tohru Adachi), the criminals of Tokyo prepare to have their field day. Fortunately a new Spider-Man has taken the stage in the form of Ren Amamiya. With guidance form Naoto Shirogane and help form his friends, can Ren live up to the name of his predecessor and unravel the conspiracy surrounding his death?
This story was first published on August 18, 2020 and currently has over 100 chapters while still updating regularly.
Needs Magic Wiki Love.
!! Contains examples of…
* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Morgana and Teddie in the games were a magical talking cat and a sentient mascot costume, here they're both human (although that doesn't stop Teddie from making his bear puns).
* BetaOutfit: Ren makes his official debut as Spider-Man in a hoodie over street clothes, a costume store Spider-Man mask, a pair of red gloves and a, surprisingly high quality, pair of red shoes.
** And before that he fought Electro in his street clothes and a discarded surgical mask.
* CompositeCharacter: The nature of the fanfic means that a number of Persona characters are given qualities of Spider-Man Characters:
** Yu Narukami is mixed with Peter Parker.
** Ren Amamiya is mixed with Miles Morales.
** Kamoshida becomes Electro.
** Madarame is the Vulture. Specifically, his description and motivations are derived from the MCU version of the character.
** Rise is borrows form the Mary Jane of Miles' world from Into The Spider-Verse.
** Kaneshiro is Tombstone.
** Kobayakawa is the Kingpin.
** Munehise Iwai is the Tinkerer.
** Adachi is the Green Goblin, or at least ''a'' Goblin and his description invokes the Goblin seen towards the beginning of Into The Spider-Verse.
** While Adachi is the heir apparent Goblin Masayoshi Shido is taking cues from Norman Osborn.
* MythologyGag: Plenty of references to past Spider-Man media.
** Yu's Spidersuit is described as having a white spider on the chest like the Advanced Suit in VideoGame/SpiderManPS4
** The Circumstances of Yu's Death are similar to those of Peter Parker's Death in WesternAnimation/SpiderManIntoTheSpiderVerse.
** During his first fight with Electro, the following exchange paraphrases a line of dialogue from WesternAnimation/SpiderManTheAnimatedSeries:
--> '''Kamoshida:''' Come down here and fight like a man\\
'''Red:''' Why don't you come up here and fight like a spider?
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: A metal pipe through the lung is ultimately what does Yu in.
After Spider-Man (Yu Narukami) dies in battle against his ArchEnemy the Goblin (Tohru Adachi), the criminals of Tokyo prepare to have their field day. Fortunately a new Spider-Man has taken the stage in the form of Ren Amamiya. With guidance form Naoto Shirogane and help form his friends, can Ren live up to the name of his predecessor and unravel the conspiracy surrounding his death?
This story was first published on August 18, 2020 and currently has over 100 chapters while still updating regularly.
Needs Magic Wiki Love.
!! Contains examples of…
* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Morgana and Teddie in the games were a magical talking cat and a sentient mascot costume, here they're both human (although that doesn't stop Teddie from making his bear puns).
* BetaOutfit: Ren makes his official debut as Spider-Man in a hoodie over street clothes, a costume store Spider-Man mask, a pair of red gloves and a, surprisingly high quality, pair of red shoes.
** And before that he fought Electro in his street clothes and a discarded surgical mask.
* CompositeCharacter: The nature of the fanfic means that a number of Persona characters are given qualities of Spider-Man Characters:
** Yu Narukami is mixed with Peter Parker.
** Ren Amamiya is mixed with Miles Morales.
** Kamoshida becomes Electro.
** Madarame is the Vulture. Specifically, his description and motivations are derived from the MCU version of the character.
** Rise is borrows form the Mary Jane of Miles' world from Into The Spider-Verse.
** Kaneshiro is Tombstone.
** Kobayakawa is the Kingpin.
** Munehise Iwai is the Tinkerer.
** Adachi is the Green Goblin, or at least ''a'' Goblin and his description invokes the Goblin seen towards the beginning of Into The Spider-Verse.
** While Adachi is the heir apparent Goblin Masayoshi Shido is taking cues from Norman Osborn.
* MythologyGag: Plenty of references to past Spider-Man media.
** Yu's Spidersuit is described as having a white spider on the chest like the Advanced Suit in VideoGame/SpiderManPS4
** The Circumstances of Yu's Death are similar to those of Peter Parker's Death in WesternAnimation/SpiderManIntoTheSpiderVerse.
** During his first fight with Electro, the following exchange paraphrases a line of dialogue from WesternAnimation/SpiderManTheAnimatedSeries:
--> '''Kamoshida:''' Come down here and fight like a man\\
'''Red:''' Why don't you come up here and fight like a spider?
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: A metal pipe through the lung is ultimately what does Yu in.
