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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 4. [[spoiler: Upon regaining her horn, Sweetie regains the memories from her life as a pony and discovers she can do the same for others by being in contact with them. She then does this for the other Cutie Mark Crusaders.]]
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--> [[spoiler: They also later add a {{Sixth Ranger}} in the form of Daring Do.]]
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--> ''Sweetie: "All you need to know is that we were each grounded for three months, no charges were filed, and we made the front page of the local paper."''
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--> ''Sweetie: '''Sweetie''': "All you need to know is that we were each grounded for three months, no charges were filed, and we made the front page of the local paper."''"
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade The Last Crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four Five Score, Divided by Four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade The Last Crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four Five Score, Divided by Four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It TLC follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
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* FourTempermentEnsemble: The Cutie Mark Crusaders start out as this, but then later become a {{Five Man Band}} upon going to Angie for help.
--> [[spoiler: They also later add a {{Sixth Ranger}} in the form of Daring Do.]]
--> [[spoiler: They also later add a {{Sixth Ranger}} in the form of Daring Do.]]
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* Hypocrite: Dash. One of the first things she tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders is that they shouldn't tell Twilight about Sweetie's memory restoring ability. [[spoiler: She then proceeds to go and talk about it right in front of her later on.]]
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: Dash. One of the first things she tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders is that they shouldn't tell Twilight about Sweetie's memory restoring ability. [[spoiler: She then proceeds to go and talk about it right in front of her later on.]]
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* RaceAgainstTheClock: A minor example. With hundreds of ponies coming to the farm, it's only a matter of time before their supplies run out. Sweetie and the others have to quickly come up with a plan before that happens.
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* EldritchLocation: Ponyville, and possibly all of Equestria, become this after Discord moves in.
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* EldritchLocation: Ponyville, and (and possibly all of Equestria, become this Equestria) after Discord moves in.
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* Everyone thinks Twilight is this. [[spoiler: She isn't.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Everyone thinks Twilight is this. [[spoiler: She isn't.]]
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* PreetyFlyForAWhiteGuy: Scootaloo occasionally does this in jest.
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* PreetyFlyForAWhiteGuy: PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy: Scootaloo occasionally does this in jest.
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* Everyone thinks Twilight is this. [[spoiler: She isn't.]]
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* PreetyFlyForAWhiteGuy: Scootaloo occasionally does this in jest.
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* InSpiteofaNail: Sweetie and the other Crusaders may have lived for twenty-five years as clueless humans, but many of their personality traits, interests, and life choices have remained the same.
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* InSpiteofaNail: InSpiteOfANail: Sweetie and the other Crusaders may have lived for twenty-five years as clueless humans, but many of their personality traits, interests, and life choices have remained the same.
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* InSpiteofaNail: Sweetie and the other Crusaders may have lived for twenty-five years as clueless humans, but many of their personality traits, interests, and life choices have remained the same.
* TheMigration: All of the banished ponies undergo one upon seeing Dash's Sonic Rainboom.
* TheMigration: All of the banished ponies undergo one upon seeing Dash's Sonic Rainboom.
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* TheMigration: All of the banished ponies undergo one upon seeing Dash's Sonic Rainboom.
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* CoolBigSis: In spades. Applejack for Apple Bloom, Rainbow Dash for Scootaloo, Angie and Rarity for Sweetie Belle. Babs gets screwed.
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* ChildhoodFriends: Doubly so. Miraculously, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were all banished to the same local area (save for Dylan/Scootaloo, who later moved there) and became instant friends upon meeting in grade school.
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* ChildhoodFriends: Doubly so. Miraculously, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were all banished to the same local area (save for Dylan/Scootaloo, who later moved there) and became instant friends upon meeting in grade school.
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* CoolBigSis: In spades. Applejack for Apple Bloom, Rainbow Dash for Scootaloo, Angie and Rarity for Sweetie Belle. Babs gets screwed.
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* YouAreTooLate: Version 5. Rarity attempts to save Sweetie from being cursed and banished by Discord, but also winds up being cursed and banished. However, her efforts [[spoiler: weakened the curse on Sweetie so that she was later able to break it by herself.]]
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* YouAreTooLate: Version 5. Rarity attempts to save Sweetie from being cursed and banished by Discord, but also winds up being cursed and banished. However, her efforts [[spoiler: weakened weaken the curse on Sweetie so that she was she's later able to break it by herself.]]
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* ChildhoodFriends: Doubly so. Miraculously, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were all banished to the same local area (save for Dylan/Scootaloo, who later moved there) and became instant friends when they met in grade school.
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* ChildhoodFriends: Doubly so. Miraculously, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were all banished to the same local area (save for Dylan/Scootaloo, who later moved there) and became instant friends when they met upon meeting in grade school.
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* ChildhoodFriends: Doubly so. Miraculously, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were all banished to the same local area (save for Dylan/Scootaloo, who later moved there) and became instant friends when they met in grade school.
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* YouAreTooLate: Version 5. Rarity attempts to save Sweetie from being cursed and banished by Discord, but also winds up being cursed and banished. However, her efforts [[spoiler: weakened the curse on Sweetie just enough so that she was later able to break it by herself.]]
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* YouAreTooLate: Version 5. Rarity attempts to save Sweetie from being cursed and banished by Discord, but also winds up being cursed and banished. However, her efforts [[spoiler: weakened the curse on Sweetie just enough that she was later able to break it by herself.]]]
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* YouAreTooLate: Version 5. Rarity attempts to save Sweetie from being cursed and banished by Discord, but also winds up being cursed and banished. However, her efforts [[spoiler: weakened the curse on Sweetie just enough that she was later able to break it by herself.]
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* EmotionalRegression: Played with. As the story goes on, Sweetie notices that she's become more spontaneous and prone to emotional outburst, which were both qualities she had when she was younger.
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* NoodleIncident: An incident involving an energy drink binge is referenced multiple times, but the details are never revealed.
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* NoodleIncident: An incident involving an energy drink binge binge, duct tape, and a water tower is referenced multiple times, but the details are never revealed.
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!!The following are examples of tropes from this story:
* NoodleIncident: An incident involving an energy drink binge is referenced multiple times, but the details are never revealed.
--> ''Sweetie: "All you need to know is that we were each grounded for three months, no charges were filed, and we made the front page of the local paper."''
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[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/FiveScoreDividedByFour Five Score's TV Tropes page can be found here.]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade]]'' net/story/110343/the-last-crusade The Last Crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four]]'', net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four Five Score, Divided by Four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
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I consider myself a lucky guy. Good job, good family, and best of all, really, really good friends. We call ourselves MMPD, and together we've had tons of crazy adventures, helped one another discover ourselves, and always have had a good time. It's a shame we've drifted apart since high school, but at least we get to see each other once a year on our shared birthdays.
That tradition turned out to be a lifesaver, because as my friends and I just found out… well, let’s just say we’ve known each other a lot longer than we thought. Now we’ve gotta find a way back home, and hopefully we won't drive each other nuts along the way. We know we’re not the big heroes, and we’re all in WAY over our heads, but hopefully we can do enough to make a difference in the end. If we can do that, then I know we’ll have made our families proud.
I just wish we still had our capes.
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
That tradition turned out to be a lifesaver, because as my friends and I just found out… well, let’s just say we’ve known each other a lot longer than we thought. Now we’ve gotta find a way back home, and hopefully we won't drive each other nuts along the way. We know we’re not the big heroes, and we’re all in WAY over our heads, but hopefully we can do enough to make a difference in the end. If we can do that, then I know we’ll have made our families proud.
I just wish we still had our capes.
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110343/the-last-crusade]]'' is a side-story to ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/93383/five-score-divided-by-four]]'', a My Little Pony fan-fiction written by [=TwistedSpectrum=]. It follows the Cutie Mark Crusaders (from Sweetie Belle's perspective) as they come to terms with their transformation back into ponies and efforts to reunite with their families.
