Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
** Johnny is envious of Peter's [[ChickMagnet luck with women]], dubbing it his 'Parker Luck'.
Added DiffLines:
** Peter later makes one for Silver so that she can also follow him when he's out on patrol.
Added DiffLines:
** Tessa is a more subdued example, but when given the opportunity to both tease Peter and mess with Johnny's head, she takes it.
---> He coughed. "Um, Tessa. I'm feeling better now. You can let go." He was immensely grateful for the hug, but he was in a relationship... with multiple women, he shouldn't put himself into situations that might be misconstrued in respect to them.\\
With one last squeeze Tessa released Peter, but stayed close enough to him that her breath flitted across his face.\\
He blushed, this was still in his personal space. Tessa's face grew hard before she let out a huff and gazed at him softly. "I'm always here for you Peter... and I'm sure I'm not the only one." With that she walked away, and he reprimanded himself for watching her hips start to sway.\\
''Snkt''\\
"Hey Pete you'll never guess what ha–" Johnny cut himself off as Tessa smoothly walked past him and, curse her, she let out a sly wave and a wink toward Peter.
---> He coughed. "Um, Tessa. I'm feeling better now. You can let go." He was immensely grateful for the hug, but he was in a relationship... with multiple women, he shouldn't put himself into situations that might be misconstrued in respect to them.\\
With one last squeeze Tessa released Peter, but stayed close enough to him that her breath flitted across his face.\\
He blushed, this was still in his personal space. Tessa's face grew hard before she let out a huff and gazed at him softly. "I'm always here for you Peter... and I'm sure I'm not the only one." With that she walked away, and he reprimanded himself for watching her hips start to sway.\\
''Snkt''\\
"Hey Pete you'll never guess what ha–" Johnny cut himself off as Tessa smoothly walked past him and, curse her, she let out a sly wave and a wink toward Peter.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Changed line(s) 101 (click to see context) from:
* BigManOnCampus: Peter is this for Midtown High School despite the fact that he isn't actually a student attending classes there; he's a tutor for some of the school's students.
to:
* BigManOnCampus: Peter is this for Midtown High School despite the fact that he isn't actually a student attending classes there; he's [[PeerAsTeacher a tutor for some of the school's students.students]].
Added DiffLines:
* PeerAsTeacher: Peter works as a tutor for some of the students in Midtown High School. He took this job as a way to socialize with his old classmates in the new timeline.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
** Madame Web reaches out to Peter much earlier in this timeline due to [[spoiler:Death telling her to warn Peter about Dormammu's EvilPlan]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 87 (click to see context) from:
--> (''after seeing Peter's memories'') "I love you, Peter! You stupid fool! I'll follow you anywhere. To the Ends of the Earth or to a home full of love for you. I love you. I love you. [=IloveyouIloveyou=]..."
to:
--> (''after ''[after seeing Peter's memories'') memories]'' "I love you, Peter! You stupid fool! I'll follow you anywhere. To the Ends of the Earth or to a home full of love for you. I love you. I love you. [=IloveyouIloveyou=]..."
Changed line(s) 602,603 (click to see context) from:
--> (''about Thanos'') "He is, a Mad. Man. He's already started on his path in this time as well. Imagining a young bodied me pushing him to kill."\\
(''about Deadpool'') "Your memories show that Wade Wilson was an insane, broken man that was known to hear other voices in his head. While I do not doubt that he tried to tell the truth when possible I don't think he would have a good judge of my character with how he behaved."
(''about Deadpool'') "Your memories show that Wade Wilson was an insane, broken man that was known to hear other voices in his head. While I do not doubt that he tried to tell the truth when possible I don't think he would have a good judge of my character with how he behaved."
to:
--> (''about Thanos'') ''[about Thanos]'' "He is, a Mad. Man. He's already started on his path in this time as well. Imagining a young bodied me pushing him to kill."\\
(''about Deadpool'') ''[about Deadpool]'' "Your memories show that Wade Wilson was an insane, broken man that was known to hear other voices in his head. While I do not doubt that he tried to tell the truth when possible I don't think he would have a good judge of my character with how he behaved."
Changed line(s) 615 (click to see context) from:
'''Peter:''' (''confused and concerned'') Uh, what do you mean?\\
to:
'''Peter:''' (''confused ''[confused and concerned'') concerned]'' Uh, what do you mean?\\
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Examples are under the new trope Adaptational Friendship.
Deleted line(s) 69 (click to see context) :
*** Peter is ChildhoodFriends with MJ, Susan, and Johnny, and has been close to Felicia and Silver since he was at least a tween. In the comics, he doesn't meet any of them until much later in life.
Deleted line(s) 73 (click to see context) :
** Jessica is friends with Liz and Sally rather than being a social outcast who never interacted with them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalFriendship:
** Peter is ChildhoodFriends with MJ, Susan, and Johnny, and has been close to Felicia and Silver since he was at least a tween. In the comics, he doesn't meet any of them until much later in life.
** Jessica is friends with Liz and Sally rather than being a social outcast who never interacted with them.
** Peter is ChildhoodFriends with MJ, Susan, and Johnny, and has been close to Felicia and Silver since he was at least a tween. In the comics, he doesn't meet any of them until much later in life.
** Jessica is friends with Liz and Sally rather than being a social outcast who never interacted with them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
** There's also a rare case of this being [[InvokedTrope invoked]], as Peter tells SHIELD where to find Captain America, resulting in the Steve being unfrozen before Tony Stark even becomes Iron Man.
to:
** There's also a rare case of this being [[InvokedTrope invoked]], as Also invoked when Peter tells SHIELD where to find Captain America, resulting in the Steve being unfrozen early, even before Tony Stark even becomes Iron Man.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Working towards her second means she has one. If, in comics, she has one, then that's the same amount.
Deleted line(s) 44 (click to see context) :
** According to Peter, Sue Storm is aiming for a second doctorate; her comics counterpart only has one.
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalSexuality: Iceman [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/577422147 will be straight in this story]] due to the author disliking how he seems to have been made gay in contrast to how he was portrayed for over 50 years.
to:
* AdaptationalSexuality: Iceman [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/577422147 will be straight in this story]] due to the author disliking how he seems to have been made gay in contrast to how he was not portrayed as gay for over 50 years.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
This is a link to the author saying that canon Spider-Man already can do that.
Deleted line(s) 31 (click to see context) :
** Peter could [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/575396895 defeat Shang-Chi in a one-on-one fight]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
** With just the base increase, Peter can [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/557446170 injure average Asgardians]].
to:
** With just Even before the base increase, WordOfGod is that the author thinks Peter can [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/557446170 injure average Asgardians]].
