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* ACMEProducts: Wile E. Coyote uses several of these throughout the story -- a drivable rocket and tranquilizers among others. HilarityEnsues when, as is typical for him, they don't work right because of various bugs and bad timing.
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* ACMEProducts: Wile E. Coyote uses several of these throughout the story -- a drivable rocket and tranquilizers among others. HilarityEnsues when, as As is typical for him, they don't work right because of various bugs and bad timing.
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And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of [[Fanfic/SOEAmericanDream Mari "Captain America" Makinami]]: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
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And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of [[Fanfic/SOEAmericanDream [[Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEvaAmericanDream Mari "Captain America" Makinami]]: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The Coyote destroys a section of train tracks in order to get Mari into a position where he can keep her from moving long enough to trap her and steal the shield, but he honestly hoped that no one would be hurt. In addition, while he ''is'' a hunter, he hunts for food, and finds the idea of Craig Jones and Tex Blanc scamming toons and recording them in order to sell the footage to people sick enough to find the idea of people getting hurt entertaining is horrific.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The Coyote destroys a section of train tracks in order to get Mari into a position where he can keep her from moving long enough to trap her and steal the shield, but he honestly hoped that no one would be hurt. In addition, while he ''is'' a hunter, he hunts for food, and finds the idea of Craig Jones and Tex Blanc scamming toons and recording them in order to sell the footage to people sick enough to find the idea of people getting hurt entertaining is horrific.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Craig Jones and Tex Blanc, a pair of guys that hire desperate Toon Fictions to perform assignments that ''will'' get them hurt and film the resulting mess as SnuffFilm material through drones. [[spoiler:They never appear on-screen but the story ends with them being arrested.]]
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* ShoutOut: The GreaterScopeVillain duo, Craig Jones and Tex Blanc, are named after some major names in the western animation industry: Charles "Chuck" Jones and Mel Blanc.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The Coyote destroys a section of train tracks in order to get Mari into a position where he can keep her from moving long enough to trap her and steal the shield, but he honestly hoped that no one would be hurt. In addition, while he ''is'' a hunter, he hunts for food, and finds the idea of Craig Jones and Tex Blanc scamming toons and recording them in order to sell the footage to people sick enough to find the idea of people getting hurt entertaining is horrific.
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* UnknownRival: For most of the story, Mari doesn't even knows that the Coyote is out to get her.
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* UnknownRival: For most of the story, Mari doesn't even knows that the Coyote is out to get her.her.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/orionpax09/art/The-Flighty-Shield-WIP-782449591 The Flighty Shield]]'' is a short story that occurs in the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/orionpax09/art/The-Flighty-Shield-WIP-782449591 com/orionpax09/art/The-Flighty-Shield-782449591 The Flighty Shield]]'' is a short story that occurs in the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse.
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And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of Mari "Captain America" Makinami: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
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And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of [[Fanfic/SOEAmericanDream Mari "Captain America" Makinami: Makinami]]: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: [[spoiler:After learning why the Coyote was trying to steal her shield and that he was being manipulated, Mari takes him back to the Mansion and has Hayate cook him a huge feast including barbecued road runner. He's eventually sent off to a Toon support group to get help finding a home, build a career, and is given some money to help him make a place for himself in the Core Timeline.]]
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** After one particular failure, the Coyote gets fed up and decides to buy stuff off of the black market and makes sure that he doesn't use ''anything'' made by ACME. It does absolutely ''nothing'' to improve his atrocious luck.
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* OhCrap: The Coyote's default reaction to his various plans going awry.
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:While someone trying to steal her shield is one of Mari's biggest Berserk Buttons, she decided to help the Coyote because, having seen the cartoons as a kid, she felt nothing but pity for the poor unlucky fella.]]
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* ReadTheFinePrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely tiny print in the bottle of tranquilizer that he dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
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* ReadTheFinePrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely tiny print in the bottle of ACME-made tranquilizer that he the Coyote dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
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* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends most of the story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times).
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* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends most of the story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times). [[spoiler:Turns out that it's because he literally ''can't'' speak. Max Pegasus gives him the capacity to speak in the epilogue.]]
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* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends the whole story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times).
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* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends most of the whole story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times).
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* ReadTheFinePrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely very tiny print in the bottle of tranquilizer that he dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
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* ReadTheSmallPrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely very tiny print in the bottle of tranquilizer that he dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
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* ReadTheSmallPrint: ReadTheFinePrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely very tiny print in the bottle of tranquilizer that he dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
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* HarmlessVillain: The Coyote only wishes to steal the shield so he will be able to afford the best he's had in years. And even then, he's not really that much of a threat.
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* TheDeterminator: Poor fella gets pummeled, blown up, stepped on by a giant, literally dragged through half of Chicago and hit by a freaking train and ''still'' doesn't gives up.
* HarmlessVillain: The Coyote only wishes to steal the shield so he will be able to afford the best meal he's had in years. And even then, he's not really that much of a threat.
* HarmlessVillain: The Coyote only wishes to steal the shield so he will be able to afford the best meal he's had in years. And even then, he's not really that much of a threat.
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* MysteriousMercenaryPursuer: His assignment is to steal Mari's shield. It ends up being PlayedForLaughs, though, with his EpicFail levels of effectiveness.
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* MysteriousMercenaryPursuer: His The Coyote's assignment is to steal Mari's shield. It ends up being PlayedForLaughs, though, with his EpicFail levels of effectiveness.
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* RoadRunnerVsCoyote: Or rather "Super-Soldier vs. Coyote". The result remains the same.
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* ReadTheSmallPrint: "WARNING - NOT EFFECTIVE ON SUPER SOLDIERS", reads in an obscenely very tiny print in the bottle of tranquilizer that he dumped on Mari's ordered food. As is typical of him, the reaction is "NowYouTellMe!".
* RoadRunnerVsCoyote: Or rather"Super-Soldier "SuperSoldier vs. Coyote". The result remains the same.
* RoadRunnerVsCoyote: Or rather
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* PunBasedTitle: "The Mighty Shield" being how Captain America's shield is called in the opening song of his ''WesternAnimation/TheMarvelSuperHeroes'' shorts.
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The Core Timeline is an insane world. All kinds of Fiction collide, struggle for some degree of supremacy.
And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of Mari "Captain America" Makinami: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
His name? [[WesternAnimation/WileECoyoteAndTheRoadRunner Wile E. Coyote]].
''[[https://www.deviantart.com/orionpax09/art/The-Flighty-Shield-WIP-782449591 The Flighty Shield]]'' is a short story that occurs in the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse.
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* ACMEProducts: Wile E. Coyote uses several of these throughout the story -- a drivable rocket and tranquilizers among others. HilarityEnsues when, as is typical for him, they don't work right because of various bugs and bad timing.
* HarmlessVillain: The Coyote only wishes to steal the shield so he will be able to afford the best he's had in years. And even then, he's not really that much of a threat.
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: The Coyote. As is typical of him, his luck craps out so hard that he suffers all kinds of hell.
* MysteriousMercenaryPursuer: His assignment is to steal Mari's shield. It ends up being PlayedForLaughs, though, with his EpicFail levels of effectiveness.
* PaperThinDisguise: In order to slip the tranquilizers in Mari's requested takeout food, the Coyote steals the uniform of the restaurant she ordered at and sneaks into the kitchen. The narration makes clear that he's an UnusuallyUninterestingSight.
* RoadRunnerVsCoyote: Or rather "Super-Soldier vs. Coyote". The result remains the same.
* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends the whole story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times).
* UnknownRival: For most of the story, Mari doesn't even knows that the Coyote is out to get her.
And in Chicago, one more foe comes out of the shadows to attempt to steal the IconicItem of Mari "Captain America" Makinami: the famous shield that belonged to her grandfather and predecessor.
His name? [[WesternAnimation/WileECoyoteAndTheRoadRunner Wile E. Coyote]].
''[[https://www.deviantart.com/orionpax09/art/The-Flighty-Shield-WIP-782449591 The Flighty Shield]]'' is a short story that occurs in the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse.
Currently under construction. Please add tropes as you see them!
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* ACMEProducts: Wile E. Coyote uses several of these throughout the story -- a drivable rocket and tranquilizers among others. HilarityEnsues when, as is typical for him, they don't work right because of various bugs and bad timing.
* HarmlessVillain: The Coyote only wishes to steal the shield so he will be able to afford the best he's had in years. And even then, he's not really that much of a threat.
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: The Coyote. As is typical of him, his luck craps out so hard that he suffers all kinds of hell.
* MysteriousMercenaryPursuer: His assignment is to steal Mari's shield. It ends up being PlayedForLaughs, though, with his EpicFail levels of effectiveness.
* PaperThinDisguise: In order to slip the tranquilizers in Mari's requested takeout food, the Coyote steals the uniform of the restaurant she ordered at and sneaks into the kitchen. The narration makes clear that he's an UnusuallyUninterestingSight.
* RoadRunnerVsCoyote: Or rather "Super-Soldier vs. Coyote". The result remains the same.
* TheSilentBob: Wile E. Coyote spends the whole story not saying an actual word (except for some TalkingWithSigns and the narration mentioning him screaming a couple of times).
* UnknownRival: For most of the story, Mari doesn't even knows that the Coyote is out to get her.
