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* BolivianArmyEnding: One of the one-shots is a WhatIf story where Haymitch went into the Quell instead of Peeta. While initial somewhat more positive (more tributes apparently survive the opening bloodbath) the ending has Katniss wandering into the sector of the arena that the tidal wave strikes, right as the wave aims back and prepares to launch, with her ultimate fate being unrevealed.

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* BolivianArmyEnding: One of the one-shots is a WhatIf story where Haymitch went into the Quell instead of Peeta. While initial initially somewhat more positive (more tributes apparently survive the opening bloodbath) the ending has Katniss wandering into the sector of the arena that the tidal wave strikes, right as the wave aims back and prepares to launch, with her ultimate fate being unrevealed.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: While Plutarch Heavensbee remains a heroic character into adulthood, he is introduced as a determined dreamer who doesn't display the same proneness to being InnocentlyInsensitive or justifying morally dubious actions with arguments about TheNeedsOfTheMany as he does as an adult.

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* UsedToBeASweetKid: While Plutarch Heavensbee remains a heroic character into adulthood, he is introduced as a determined dreamer who doesn't display the same proneness to towards being InnocentlyInsensitive or justifying morally dubious actions with arguments about TheNeedsOfTheMany as he does as an adult.

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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: When Haymitch wonders if he can pull off a WinsByDoingAbsolutelyNothing victory and hide until everyone else is dead, Drake tells him that a few tributes try that every year. It never works because the violence-craving Gamemakers use the arena technology to either kill those tributes or herd them toward people who will attack them on sight. While it's possible for tributes to survive a long time without pursuing aggressive strategies, they have to do ''something'' interesting that will make the Gamemakers lay off them (stealing food in Foxface's case, bonding with alliance members, etc.).



* SpeakIllOfTheDead: Philo killed his surviving allies for mocking his District partner after she died saving his life.
* StealingTheCredit: During Wiress's Games, a boy back in District 3 talks about how she "helped" him with a patent in a way that makes Haymitch realize it was her invention and he stole it. He tells Beetee and they send a model of that invention as a sponsor gift to Wiress as a PublicSecretMessage to tell her not to trust one of her allies.

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* SpeakIllOfTheDead: Philo killed his surviving allies for mocking his District partner after she died saving his life.
life.* StealingTheCredit: During Wiress's Games, a boy back in District 3 talks about how she "helped" him with a patent in a way that makes Haymitch realize it was her invention and he stole it. He tells Beetee and they send a model of that invention as a sponsor gift to Wiress as a PublicSecretMessage to tell her not to trust one of her allies.



* UsedToBeASweetKid: Katniss was a CheerfulChild before becoming the broken cynic that she is in the main trilogy.

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* UsedToBeASweetKid: UpThroughTheRanks: Plutarch starts out as a waiter for the Gamemakers (which is how he meets Haymitch) but then becomes one of their number and gradually increases in rank over the next quarter-century as more jobs open up.
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Katniss was a CheerfulChild before becoming the broken cynic that she is in the main trilogy.


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* UsedToBeASweetKid: While Plutarch Heavensbee remains a heroic character into adulthood, he is introduced as a determined dreamer who doesn't display the same proneness to being InnocentlyInsensitive or justifying morally dubious actions with arguments about TheNeedsOfTheMany as he does as an adult.
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* ButWhatAboutTheAstronauts'': In-Universe, ''The Final Eight'' mentions that one of Finch's favorite books is about four astronauts who return from a space mission after the disaster that killed 99% of humanity and experience CultureShock while adjusting to the new Panem.
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** There have been attempts to rename at least the towns and villages: Four apparently has continuous and periodic arguments about names, Nine has villages named after elders, Ten's main town is apparently [[FutureImperfect named 'Dalla' after what it used to be called before the Catastrophes]], and Twelve's town is nicknamed "Resurrection City" (by people not from there, who just refer to "the Seam" as per canon).

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** There have been attempts to rename at least the towns and villages: Four apparently has continuous and periodic arguments about names, Seven has mobile logging camps and thus find the discussion hopeless, Nine has villages named after elders, Ten's main town is apparently [[FutureImperfect named 'Dalla' after what it used to be called before the Catastrophes]], and Twelve's town is nicknamed "Resurrection City" (by people not from there, who just refer to "the Seam" as per canon).
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* MeaningfulRename: According to Chapter 6 of the collection ''Stops on the Way to the End of the World'', after the Second Rebellion, there have been discussions to rename the Districts because "[n]o one is really attached to [[AirstripOne the numbers]], and all they really do is remind people of life in the Before Time, with everyone identifying themselves by how long it took the Capitol to build them."
** There have been attempts to rename at least the towns and villages: Four apparently has continuous and periodic arguments about names, Nine has villages named after elders, Ten's main town is apparently [[FutureImperfect named 'Dalla' after what it used to be called before the Catastrophes]], and Twelve's town is nicknamed "Resurrection City" (by people not from there, who just refer to "the Seam" as per canon).
** District Thirteen intends to take on the name 'Lakeland', but no one likes it. Meanwhile, the Capitol has considered reverting back to 'Salt Lake City', which Enobaria doesn't like either. The new District Fourteen, split from Eleven, is unanimously nicknamed "[[TitleDrop Hell]]" by its residents for its climate and wildlife.
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--> '' "I used to hate the Games because they could take me. But I'm nothing compared to him." He kisses the baby's head. "I don't just want to hope he doesn't get picked. I want to do everything that I can do to make sure no one's baby gets picked again."''

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--> '' "I --->"I used to hate the Games because they could take me. But I'm nothing compared to him." He kisses the baby's head. "I don't just want to hope he doesn't get picked. I want to do everything that I can do to make sure no one's baby gets picked again."''"



-->'''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.

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-->'''Ed:''' --->'''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.

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* AcquiredPoisonImmunity: Twenty-five years of hard drinking's effect on Haymitch's liver (plus the regular detox pills he takes to try to counter that) make it hard to poison him in a way that will look like a natural death from drinking too much, as both Snow and Coin discover.



* AnachronicOrder: The ''Tesserare Coalition'' and ''The Final Eight'' were the first two stories written and are both set during the first book. ''The Narrow Path'' and ''House of Cards'' ({{Perspective Flip}}s of ''Literature/{{Mockingjay}}'') came out next despite being the last chronologically besides a few oneshots (with the series sometimes being called ''The Narrow Path'' series as a result of it being longer than any of the earlier stories). ''The Golden Mean'' (retelling ''Literature/CatchingFire'') came next, followed by ''The End of the World'', ''The Rites of Fall'', ''The Hanging Tree'', and ''These are the Names'' to flesh out Haymitch's backstory before ''The Last Tribute'' became the final feature-length story completed to date, retelling ''Literature/TheHungerGames''. The author then revised the earlier-written stories to mention more events and characters from stories written later but set earlier.



* HeroismMotiveSpeech: When Haymitch asks Ed Mellark about his newfound involvement in the Rebellion, he has an excellent BigBrotherInstinct-based speech about why he is taking these chances.

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* HeroismMotiveSpeech: HeroismMotiveSpeech:
** When Haymitch asks his friend Danny Mellark if he wants to keep smuggling rebel messages after starting a family, Danny replies affirmatively.
--> '' "I used to hate the Games because they could take me. But I'm nothing compared to him." He kisses the baby's head. "I don't just want to hope he doesn't get picked. I want to do everything that I can do to make sure no one's baby gets picked again."''
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When Haymitch asks Ed Mellark about his newfound involvement in the Rebellion, he has an excellent BigBrotherInstinct-based speech about why he is taking these chances.


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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil:
** A special degree of hatred and disgust from both the readers and characters is reserved for the Capitol citizens who buy victors as {{Sex Slave}}s, Ausonius Glass (who Haymitch catches trying to force himself on a sixteen-year-old tribute and who also abused District 12's first victor for an implied period of years), and Head Peacekeeper Beckett (who preys on teenaged boys and has them executed if they refuse her so-called affections).
** [[spoiler:Simon Drear]], who is already a murderous FalseFriend and longtime bully, is implied to have tried to assault his district partner sexually and then scared her into telling their mentor it was consensual.


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** Chaff is Seeder's brother-in-law.
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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]], Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here (deleted and purged)]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate reading order):

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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]], Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here (deleted and purged)]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, {{Perspective Flip}}s, {{Prequel}}s, and the occasional sequel one-shot, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate recommended reading order):



# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected [=LiveJournal=] and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive and has since been deleted and purged.

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# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected [=LiveJournal=] and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, lost, though (although some remain on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn) as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive and has since been deleted and purged.
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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]], Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate reading order):

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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]], Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]], here (deleted and purged)]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate reading order):



# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected [=LiveJournal=] and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive.

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# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected [=LiveJournal=] and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive.
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I didn't mean to. But Gia -- Carolyn -- talked me into trying my hand at writing the kind of brainless mystery that I've always read, and my heroine (an absurdly plucky girl from District Twelve who's moved to the Capitol to work for a forensic investigation team) needed a support system. I wrote her an older brother from home who was always there for her, no matter what nonsensical trouble she got herself into. I didn't make him a baker, or even a merchant, but Peeta spotted Danny on his first glance, and when he pointed it out, I saw him, too. At first, I tried to "fix" it, but I couldn't. Instead, I brought him into the main action, and now when I sit down to write, it's like having an old friend at my side.

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I didn't mean to. But Gia -- Carolyn [[spoiler:Carolyn]] -- talked me into trying my hand at writing the kind of brainless mystery that I've always read, and my heroine (an absurdly plucky girl from District Twelve who's moved to the Capitol to work for a forensic investigation team) needed a support system. I wrote her an older brother from home who was always there for her, no matter what nonsensical trouble she got herself into. I didn't make him a baker, or even a merchant, but Peeta spotted Danny on his first glance, and when he pointed it out, I saw him, too. At first, I tried to "fix" it, but I couldn't. Instead, I brought him into the main action, and now when I sit down to write, it's like having an old friend at my side.
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-->''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.

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-->''Ed:''' -->'''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When Caesar first appears, an assistant of his is double checking the tribute names to make sure he doesn't get any of them wrong, stating he cares about those details.

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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: When Caesar first appears, an assistant of his is double checking the tribute names to make sure he doesn't get any of them wrong, stating he cares about those details. It hints at his status as a MysteriousBacker for the tributes.
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--> '''Jack Anderson:''' Me and Haymitch just got through about a million Peacekeepers, using a tie and a piece of broken plastic.

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--> '''Jack --->'''Jack Anderson:''' Me and Haymitch just got through about a million Peacekeepers, using a tie and a piece of broken plastic.
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* ReformedBully: Gale's mother Hazelle Hawthorne (née Purdy) used to be an AlphaBitch who made fun of Haymitch during their school days, but TookALevelInKindness in the years afterward.

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* ReformedBully: Gale's mother Hazelle Hawthorne (née Purdy) ([[NamedByTheAdaptation née Purdy]]) used to be an AlphaBitch who made fun of Haymitch during their school days, but TookALevelInKindness in the years afterward.
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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]] as well as Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]] and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate reading order):

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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]] as well as here]], Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]] here]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of (in approximate reading order):



# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected live journal and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive.

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# ''Challenges/Stops on the Way to the End of the World'': A series of mostly uncollected live journal [=LiveJournal=] and Archive of Our Own vignettes, mostly prompted by requests from the reviewers. They cover a variety of topics ranging from the backgrounds of characters like Lyme and Coin, to alternate universe scenarios like Haymitch going into the 3rd Quarter Quell instead of Peeta or an alternate 3rd Quarter Quell twist denying the Rebellion its spark, or at least delaying it (where District partners are forced to kill each other at the start of the Games), to the perspectives of people like Enobaria throughout the Rebellion. Most of these stories may be lost though, as the author's [=LiveJournal=] account is inactive.

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* SpannerInTheWorks: In ''The Golden Mean'', Finnick sadly laments that many of the victor-tributes who died in the arena, the mentors who died when Peacekeepers came to arrest the rebels, and many people killed in Districts 4 and 12 when the Rebellion broke out might have survived if not for an oblivious Capitol worker spotting the hovercraft meant for the escape and kicking things off early in a desperate scramble,
-->'''Finnick:''' We had everything so well planned. We were so clever. Secret messages. Bread codes. And we got tripped up by a malfunctioning shield and a worker on a coffee break.



** Otho Magro is a Rebel (albeit one who never advertised the fact to Haymitch) who slashes his way through the Peacekeepers trying to arrest the Rebel Victors, goes into hiding within the Capitol, and according to one of the one-shot stories, almost made it to District 3 before the Peacekeepers caught up with him, entirely off-screen (with Haymitch not even noticing him during that fight and only learning Otho is at large as Plutarch describes the statuses of the Victors a bit later).

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** Otho Magro is a Rebel (albeit one who never advertised the fact to Haymitch) who slashes his way through the Peacekeepers trying to arrest the Rebel Victors, goes into hiding within the Capitol, and according to one of the since-deleted one-shot stories, almost made it to District 3 before the Peacekeepers caught up with him, entirely off-screen (with Haymitch not even noticing him during that fight and only learning Otho is at large as Plutarch describes the statuses of the Victors a bit later).later).
* HeroismMotiveSpeech: When Haymitch asks Ed Mellark about his newfound involvement in the Rebellion, he has an excellent BigBrotherInstinct-based speech about why he is taking these chances.
-->''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.



* MotiveRant: When Haymitch asks Ed Mallark about his newfound involvement in the Rebellion, he has an excellent BigBrotherInstinct-based speech about why he is taking these chances.
-->''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.



* SpannerInTheWorks: In ''The Golden Mean'', Finnick sadly laments that many of the victor-tributes who died in the arena, the mentors who died when Peacekeepers came to arrest the rebels, and many people killed in Districts 4 and 12 when the Rebellion broke out might have survived if not for an oblivious Capitol worker spotting the hovercraft meant for the escape and kicking things off early in a desperate scramble,

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* SpannerInTheWorks: In ''The Golden Mean'', Finnick sadly laments that many of the victor-tributes who died in the arena, the mentors who died when Peacekeepers came to arrest the rebels, and many people killed in Districts 4 and 12 when the Rebellion broke out might have survived if not for an oblivious Capitol worker spotting the hovercraft meant for the escape and kicking things off early in a desperate scramble,scramble.
-->'''Finnick:''' We had everything so well planned. We were so clever. Secret messages. Bread codes. And we got tripped up by a malfunctioning shield and a worker on a coffee break.

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* ScarsAreForever: District 2 Victor Philo Anderson takes several disfiguring stab wounds to the face during his final battle, and chooses to keep the scars, because [[UnluckilyLucky they make him too ugly to be sold as a]] SexSlave.

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* ScarsAreForever: District 2 Victor Philo Anderson takes several disfiguring stab wounds to the face during his final battle, and chooses to keep the scars, because [[UnluckilyLucky they make him too ugly to be sold as a]] SexSlave.
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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]] as well as Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]] and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of:

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''The End of the World'' series (alternately referred to as ''The Narrow Path'' series) by the author [=FernWithy=] is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' series scattered across Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5615/FernWithy here]] as well as Website/LiveJournal [[https://fernwithy.livejournal.com here]] and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/61184 here]]. The series follows the author's version of the Hunger Games through a series of stories, most of which revolve around Haymitch. The stories in the series (all of them told in the first person besides a few one-shots) consist of:
of (in approximate reading order):
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* RewatchBonus: Happens with lots of the major subplots. A notable example is the SanitySlippage and DrivenToSuicide behavior of Haymitch's Capitol girlfriend Mimi Meadowbrook (although the poor mental health treatment of her brother didn't help) after their last phone call when she calls and asks if he loves her. According to one of the ''Challenges'' one-shots (a FixFic where he says yes and goes to see her), she'd just found out she was pregnant (and with a child who, with a District parent, would be subject to the reapings) and is implied to have had an abortion in the main story.
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** Three of the six District 5 victors (the ones besides Faraday Sykes, Charlie Flynn, and, to a lesser extent, Thalis Dorgan), are never shown interacting with a [=POV=] character. Their final victor, Tanager Lowe, wins during the TimeSkip between ''The Hanging Tree'' and ''These are the Names'', and is only shown or mentioned two or three times afterward. It isn't even clear whether any of them besides Tanager are still alive during the 3rd Quarter Quell[[note]] Tesla Corven is already very old during the 2nd Quarter Quell, and Gia says that one District 5 died before Haymitch's victory tour, but later on, no one from District 5 is mentioned when Haymitch goes over all of the victors who predeceased Albinus Drake[[/note]], where the only direct mention of the District 5 mentor or mentors is Haymitch mentions seeing the District 5 and 9 mentors playing cards together as he glances across the room.

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** Three of the six District 5 victors (the ones besides Faraday Sykes, Charlie Flynn, and, to a lesser extent, Thalis Dorgan), are never shown interacting with a [=POV=] character. Their final victor, Tanager Lowe, wins during the TimeSkip between ''The Hanging Tree'' and ''These are the Names'', and is only shown or mentioned two or three times afterward. It isn't even clear whether any of them besides Tanager are still alive during the 3rd Quarter Quell[[note]] Tesla Quell[[note]]Tesla Corven is already very old during the 2nd Quarter Quell, and Gia says that one District 5 died before Haymitch's victory tour, but later on, no one from District 5 is mentioned when Haymitch goes over all of the victors who predeceased Albinus Drake[[/note]], where the only direct mention of the District 5 mentor or mentors is Haymitch mentions seeing the District 5 and 9 mentors playing cards together as he glances across the room.
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** Three of the six District 5 victors (the ones besides Faraday Sykes, Charlie Flynn, and, to a lesser extent, Thalis Dorgan), are never shown interacting with a [=POV=] character. Their final victor, Tanager Lowe, wins during the TimeSkip between ''The Hanging Tree'' and ''These are the Names'', and is only shown or mentioned two or three times afterward. It isn't even clear whether any of them besides Tanager are still alive during the 3rd Quarter Quell[[note]] Tesla Corven is already very old during the 2nd Quarter Quell, and Gia says that one District 5 died before Haymitch's victory tour, but later on, no one from District 5 is mentioned when Haymitch goes over all of the victors who predeceased Albinus Drake[[/note]], where the only direct mention of the District 5 mentor or mentors is Haymitch mentions seeing the District 5 and 9 mentors playing cards together as he glances across the room.
** Mindwell Larue, District 10's last victor (near the end of ''The Hanging Tree''), has a background scene or two in ''The Narrow Path'', and some background moments in ''The Golden Mean'' where Haymitch observes her reaction to the death of District 10's male victor-tribute, but she only ever gets one line of dialogue, right before her last and most prominent scene of getting involved in a fight with some Peacekeepers.
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* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: District 4 victor Benit supposedly died in a heroic battle against marauders living outside the districts, but Mags confides in Haymitch that he really had a stroke from the strain of staying awake for three straight weeks (while also hunting mutts) due to some overly potent drugs he took.
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--> ''Ed''': They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.

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--> ''Ed''': -->''Ed:''' They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: In ''The Hanging Tree'', Glass talks about how he and Snow were both inside a school that District 13 bombed at the end of the Dark Days Rebellion and crawled out over the bodies of kids younger than the tributes in the Hunger Games. Haymitch isn't particularly moved, since Glass and Snow are both obvious sadists who relish tormenting and destroying people on an individual level and can't even claim proper SinsOfOurFathers given how District 13 was acting, [[MisplacedRetribution without much if any help from the districts actually being subjected to the Hunger Games]]. ''Stops on the Way to the End of the World'' also reveals that Snow [[EnfantTerrible nearly smothered a classmate at the age of six and Glass enjoyed torturing and killing animals]] since what is implied to be a long time before the bombing.


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* MotiveRant: When Haymitch asks Ed Mallark about his newfound involvement in the Rebellion, he has an excellent BigBrotherInstinct-based speech about why he is taking these chances.
--> ''Ed''': They hurt my baby brother. They left him in a pile of mud for days, then made Katniss gamble with his life. Then they tried to get her to murder him because they thought it would be great entertainment to watch two kids who love each other fight to the death. They're rabid and they need to be put down.
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** In ''The Golden Mean'', after meeting the crowds of District 12 survivors, Haymitch comments that he doesn't see any of the families of his past tributes except for [[spoiler:the Everdeens and River Bloodwood's sister]], indicating that most to all of them died in the bombing of District 12. However, he could have easily missed several faces in a crowd of nine hundred people (some in injured or disheveled states), and it's mentioned that Haymitch avoids at least some of the families of kids he can't save (many of whom have kids who might look different all grown up), so his not spotting the relatives of any other tributes doesn't mean that none survived.

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** In ''The Golden Mean'', after meeting the crowds of District 12 survivors, Haymitch comments that he doesn't see any of the families of his past tributes except for [[spoiler:the Everdeens and River Bloodwood's sister]], indicating that most to all of them died in the bombing of District 12. However, he could have easily missed several faces in a crowd of nine hundred people (some in injured or disheveled states), and it's mentioned that Haymitch avoids at least some of the families of kids he can't save (many of whom have kids who might look different all grown up), so his not spotting the relatives of any other tributes doesn't mean that none survived. Further supporting this is how a recently deceased tribute is named Plonia Fisher, and one of the rare merchant survivors of the District survived because she was making a delivery to a family named Fisher which lives away from where the bombs hit.
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** Many of Peeta and Delly's friends are confirmed dead when Delly says that none of the other merchant kids her and Peeta's age survived the District 12 bombing and few of the merchant survivors of other ages really know Peeta. However, that does leave the fates of a few {{Bit Character}}s slightly ambiguous due to them either being several years younger than Delly and Peeta and not super close with Peeta (such as Suza Pike), not explicitly being stated to be merchant kids despite that class status being implied (like Jemina Kimberly), or both (like Dianner Teets).

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** Many of Peeta and Delly's friends are confirmed dead when Delly says that none of the other merchant kids her and Peeta's age survived the District 12 bombing and few of the merchant survivors of other ages really know Peeta. However, that does leave the fates of a few {{Bit Character}}s slightly ambiguous due to them either being several a few years older or younger than Delly and Peeta and not super close with Peeta (such as Elly Breen and Suza Pike), not explicitly being stated to be merchant kids despite that class status being implied (like Jemina Kimberly), or both (like Dianner Teets).

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* UncertainDoom: In ''The Golden Mean'', after meeting the crowds of District 12 survivors, Haymitch comments that he doesn't see any of the families of his past tributes except for [[spoiler:the Everdeens and River Bloodwood's sister]], indicating that most to all of them died in the bombing of District 12. However, he could have easily missed several faces in a crowd of nine hundred people (some in injured or disheveled states), and it's mentioned that Haymitch avoids at least some of the families of kids he can't save (many of whom have kids who might look different all grown up), so his not spotting the relatives of any other tributes doesn't mean that none survived.

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* UncertainDoom: UncertainDoom:
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In ''The Golden Mean'', after meeting the crowds of District 12 survivors, Haymitch comments that he doesn't see any of the families of his past tributes except for [[spoiler:the Everdeens and River Bloodwood's sister]], indicating that most to all of them died in the bombing of District 12. However, he could have easily missed several faces in a crowd of nine hundred people (some in injured or disheveled states), and it's mentioned that Haymitch avoids at least some of the families of kids he can't save (many of whom have kids who might look different all grown up), so his not spotting the relatives of any other tributes doesn't mean that none survived.
** Many of Peeta and Delly's friends are confirmed dead when Delly says that none of the other merchant kids her and Peeta's age survived the District 12 bombing and few of the merchant survivors of other ages really know Peeta. However, that does leave the fates of a few {{Bit Character}}s slightly ambiguous due to them either being several years younger than Delly and Peeta and not super close with Peeta (such as Suza Pike), not explicitly being stated to be merchant kids despite that class status being implied (like Jemina Kimberly), or both (like Dianner Teets).
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--> '''Finnick''': We had everything so well planned. We were so clever. Secret messages. Bread codes. And we got tripped up by a malfunctioning shield and a worker on a coffee break.

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--> '''Finnick''': -->'''Finnick:''' We had everything so well planned. We were so clever. Secret messages. Bread codes. And we got tripped up by a malfunctioning shield and a worker on a coffee break.

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