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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Downplayed. Chapter 36 reveals [[spoiler: that Byleth comes from the Silver Snow route and she overcame the limits of her Divine Pulse. While she doesn't remember anything from the old timeline, there was one thing she does know: she has to stay by Edelgard's side, no matter]]
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Downplayed. Chapter 36 reveals [[spoiler: that Byleth comes from the Silver Snow route and she overcame the limits of her Divine Pulse. While she doesn't remember anything from the old timeline, there was one thing she does know: she has to stay by Edelgard's side, no matter]] matter what.]]
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Downplayed. Chapter 36 reveals [[spoiler: that Byleth comes from the Silver Snow timeline route and she overcame the limits of her Divine Pulse just Pulse. While she doesn't remember anything from the old timeline, there was one thing she does know: she has to be with Edelgard.]] stay by Edelgard's side, no matter]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 36 reveals a lot of things that change the story on its head. [[spoiler: Turns out the events of Silver Snow happened, but in the aftermath things fell apart. The Black Eagles grew distant, some of the other students lost it when they learned the truth behind crests, and Byleth was ultimately unable to reform Fodlan due to corruption among the nobles. She ultimately went into isolation after realizing she was becoming Rhea in trying to find a way to resurrect Edelgard. Centuries later, when Edelgard had gone down in history as a mad emperor struck down ]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 36 reveals a lot of things that change the story on its head. 36: [[spoiler: Turns out the events of Silver Snow happened, but in the aftermath things fell apart. The Black Eagles grew distant, some of the other students lost it when they learned the truth behind crests, and Byleth was ultimately unable to reform Fodlan due to corruption among the nobles. She ultimately went into isolation after realizing she was becoming Rhea in trying to find a way to resurrect Edelgard. Centuries later, when Edelgard had gone down in history as a mad emperor struck down by the second coming of the Goddess, Byleth receives a visit from Rhea who encourages her to be with Edelgard. Byleth then manages to reset time to the beginning of her journey, with only vague memories of Edelgard and that she must protect her no matter the cost.]]
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* ICannotSelfTerminate: [[spoiler: Byleth was a mess in old timeline wishing for death that can never come thanks to her Divine Pulse.]]
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It's not cheating. Nothing happens between Ingrid and Edelgard aside from them getting drunk together one night. And this was before Ingrid and Sylvain even got together, to boot.
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* AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder: During the five years Byleth was missing, Edelgard and Ingrid get together romantically until Byleth returns.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Edelgard and Byleth love each other, and so do Ingrid and Sylvain. Edelgard and Ingrid also have deep feelings for each other and cheat on their respective partners during the time skip years.
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Of the ''Pay Cheating Unto Absence'' variety. Byleth and Sylvain hurt a little over [[LoveDodecahedron Edelgard and Ingrid's infidelity with each other]], but they forgive both with no permanent hard feelings.
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** In Edelgard's flash-sideways, [[spoiler:Ingrid attacks Edelgard and forces Felix to kill her in order to uphold her duty as a knight of Faerghus]].
** [[spoiler:Gilbert attacks Edelgard and forces Byleth to kill him in order to uphold his duty as a knight of Faerghus.]]
** In Edelgard's flash-sideways, [[spoiler:Ingrid attacks Edelgard and forces Felix to kill her in order to uphold her duty as a knight of Faerghus]].
** [[spoiler:Gilbert attacks Edelgard and forces Byleth to kill him in order to uphold his duty as a knight of Faerghus.]]
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** In Edelgard's flash-sideways, [[spoiler:IngridSuicideByCop: [[spoiler:On two separate occasions, a knight of Faerghus attacks Edelgard and forces Felix to kill her in order to uphold fulfill their knightly duty, and is killed for their trouble. First is an alternate Ingrid in the FlashSideways who is killed by her duty as a knight of Faerghus]].
** [[spoiler:Gilbert attacks Edelgard and forces Byleth to kill him in order to uphold his duty as a knight of Faerghus.Felix, second is Gilbert who is killed by Byleth.]]
** In Edelgard's flash-sideways, [[spoiler:Ingrid
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Of the ''Pay Cheating Unto Absence'' variety. Byleth and Sylvain hurt a little over [[LoveDodecahedron Edelgard and Ingrid's infidelity with each other]], but they forgive both with no permanent hard feelings.
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* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with [[spoiler: Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital]]. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]
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* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]
* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]
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* YourHeadASplode: How Gwendal goes out; he wastes time monologuing about how he's going to kill Hubert, giving the latter time to grab his head and blow it off with a powerful dark magic spell.
* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]spell.
* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]
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*AdaptationalAlternateEnding: In the Crimson Flower route in the game, the story ends with Rhea's death at the Kingdom Capital. In here [[spoiler: Rhea survives the Kingdom Capital battle thanks to Flayn healing her, Byleth, and Edelgard. Additionally Nemesis has been released by Cornelia, which follows the Verdant Wind ending.]]
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** [[spoiler:During the battle of Firdhiad, Edelgard saves Annette from a burning building and (after initially failing) convinces her to stand down.]]
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** [[spoiler:Mercedes joins her brother midway through the battle of the Taltiean Plains, and remains with the Empire afterwards.]]
** [[spoiler:After surviving the same battle, Dedue is convinced to stay by Ingrid.]]
** [[spoiler:During the battle of Firdhiad, Edelgard saves Annette from a burning building and (after initially failing) convinces her to stand down.]]
** [[spoiler:After surviving the same battle, Dedue is convinced to stay by Ingrid.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In canon, Jeralt was stabbed in the back by Kronya. Here, [[spoiler:he takes a magical attack for her at the cost of his own life.]]
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** In canon, Jeralt was stabbed in the back by Kronya. Here, [[spoiler:he takes a magical attack for her at the cost of his own life.]]
** In canon, Jeralt was stabbed in the back by Kronya. Here, [[spoiler:he takes a magical attack for her at the cost of his own life.]]
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* IRegretNothing: [[spoiler:The last thing Gilbert tells Annette before committing SuicideByCop is that [[KickTheDog he doesn't regret abandoning his family after the Tragedy of Duscur]].]]
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** Downplayed by [[spoiler: Cornelia, who perishes on the Tailtean Plains after barely escaping death at Arianrhod.]]
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** In canon, Edelgard executed Dimitri after the Battle of the Taltean Plains. In this fic, [[spoiler: wounds from battle do him in after he performs a HeroicSacrifice to ensure Cornelia doesn’t get his Hero’s Relic and he goes out peacefully.]]
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** [[spoiler:Cornelia escapes the siege of Arianrhod.]]
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** [[spoiler:Cornelia escapes the siege of Arianrhod.Arianrhod, though her luck runs out at the Battle of the Taltiean Plains.]]
** [[spoiler:Dedue is prevented from becoming a Demonic Beast like he did in canon, and outlives Dimitri.]]
** [[spoiler:Dedue is prevented from becoming a Demonic Beast like he did in canon, and outlives Dimitri.]]
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Description changes were upon request to remove plagarism and also to punch up the description a bit.
