Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
** Specifically, we're shown only of the first paragraph or so, and while it is a fairly accurate depiction of books written with young children in mind, and Megan does outright say that ''My Little Horsey'' is a series of children's books; books that target audiences that young are rarely bestsellers, a status that Megan also claims the series holds.
to:
** Specifically, we're shown only of the first paragraph or so, and while it is a fairly accurate depiction of books written with young children in mind, and Megan does outright say that ''My Little Horsey'' is a series of children's books; books that target audiences that young are rarely bestsellers, a status that Megan also claims the series holds. This is not necessarily a contradiction; her books could well be a best-selling children's series, rather than a general best-selling series.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Just a minor typo correction.
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
* InformedAbility: Megan Richards is described as a sucessful author. Then we get a brief look at ''My Little Horsey'' in chapter 16.
to:
* InformedAbility: Megan Richards is described as a sucessful successful author. Then we get a brief look at ''My Little Horsey'' in chapter 16.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* AlternateContinuity: The plot diverges from canon sometime during [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E24OwlsWellThatEndsWell "Owl's Well That Ends Well"]].
to:
* AlternateContinuity: The plot diverges from canon sometime during shortly after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E24OwlsWellThatEndsWell "Owl's Well That Ends Well"]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AlternateContinuity: The plot diverges from canon sometime during [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E24OwlsWellThatEndsWell "Owl's Well That Ends Well"]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
Originally posted at [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=196663 SpaceBattles]]. Can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7222615/1/The_Elements_of_Harmony_and_the_Savior_of_Worlds Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3072/The-Elements-of-Harmony-and-the-Savior-of-Worlds Fimfiction]].
to:
Originally posted at [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=196663 SpaceBattles]]. Can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7222615/1/The_Elements_of_Harmony_and_the_Savior_of_Worlds Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3072/The-Elements-of-Harmony-and-the-Savior-of-Worlds Fimfiction]].
FiMFiction]].
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
* NoIndoorVoice: Princess Luna's traditional royal Canterlot voice is in full effect. Luckily, she tends to only use it to get ponies' attention and to announce things to groups of ponies. Otherwise, she speaks using her normal voice. She will however switch between the two without warning which catches ponies and humans alike off guard.
to:
* NoIndoorVoice: Princess Luna's traditional royal Canterlot voice is in full effect. Luckily, she tends to only use it to get ponies' attention and to announce things to groups of ponies. Otherwise, she speaks using her normal voice. She will however switch between the two without warning warning, which catches ponies and humans alike off guard.
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: Applejack goes on one when she thinks the green dragon has murdered Twilight, Spike and Rainbow Dash. Thankfully she is stopped before she gets herself killed.]]
to:
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: Applejack goes on one when she thinks the green dragon has murdered Twilight, Spike and Rainbow Dash. Thankfully she is stopped -- by Stephen Magnet, of all people -- before she gets herself killed.]]
Changed line(s) 43 (click to see context) from:
* ShroudedInMyth: Megan became, in Pony Mythology, the messianic Mag'Ne, and we humans became the divine Herd.
to:
* ShroudedInMyth: Megan became, in Pony Mythology, the messianic Mag'Ne, Mag'ne, and we humans became the divine Herd.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* MythologyGag: In chapter 19, two agents discuss how Admiral Hector Delgado (better known as "Shipwreck" from ''GIJoe'') claimed to have seen a pegasus, a nod to a [[WhatCouldHaveBeen never-animated scene]] from ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* InformedAbility: Megan Richards is described as a sucessful author. Then we get a brief look at *My Little Horsey* in chapter 16.
to:
* InformedAbility: Megan Richards is described as a sucessful author. Then we get a brief look at *My ''My Little Horsey* Horsey'' in chapter 16.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FantasticRacism: Spykoran's hatred of the Ursas borders on this, though it's justified by them having apparently killed his family [[spoiler: excluding his grandson's (Spike) egg]] in a previous raid on dragon lands.
Added DiffLines:
* StartOfDarkness: When Luna is explaining her transformation into Nightmare Moon, we get a flashback showing how it happened.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
** Specifically, we're shown only of the first paragraph or so, and while it is a fairly accurate depiction of books written with young children in mind, those kinds of books are rarely bestsellers.
to:
** Specifically, we're shown only of the first paragraph or so, and while it is a fairly accurate depiction of books written with young children in mind, those kinds and Megan does outright say that ''My Little Horsey'' is a series of children's books; books that target audiences that young are rarely bestsellers.bestsellers, a status that Megan also claims the series holds.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
**Specifically, we're shown only of the first paragraph or so, and while it is a fairly accurate depiction of books written with young children in mind, those kinds of books are rarely bestsellers.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NoIndoorVoice: Princess Luna's traditional royal Canterlot voice is in full effect. Luckily, she tends to only use it to get ponies' attention and to announce things to groups of ponies. Otherwise, she speaks using her normal voice. She will however switch between the two without warning which catches ponies and humans alike off guard.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Spike's case is [[JustifiedTrope justified]] by [[spoiler: being G1 Spike's grandson]].
Added DiffLines:
* HasTwoMommies: The Princess Ponies created Celestia and Luna, and as such, the latter two view all six as their mothers.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ShipperOnDeck: Mike (Megan's husband) and Applejack are trying to hook up Big Macintosh and Fluttershy. AJ claims she's actually been trying to do this for awhile, but has been hampered by Fluttershy's shyness and Big Mac not feeling that he's good enough for her.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*** How badass is he? When his dramatic entrance scares a bunch of ponies, Fluttershy gets mad and tries to use [[DeathGlare The Stare]] on him... and it ''doesn't work.''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ParentalSubstitute: Megan and her siblings, to Celestia and Luna (having raised them as fillies at the behest of the Princess Ponies).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
Added DiffLines:
* HeelRealization: Trixie had one in a flashback -- after she was run out of town following the Ursa Minor incident, she initially swore revenge on Twilight for upstaging her. Then she caught a reflection of herself in a puddle and saw how twisted by anger she was. This scared her straight.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
* DropWhatYouAreDoing: In Chapter 4, Celestia drops a teacup out of shock when she gets Twilight's letter about Megan. She also does a SpitTake right in the face of her minister of economics.
to:
Added DiffLines:
* SpitTake: Celestia's reaction to receiving Twilight's letter about Megan. Luna has almost the exact same reaction.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: Megan and Morning Glory's family perform this on her with Twilight's help.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
* DropWhatYoureDoing: In Chapter 4, Celestia drops a teacup out of shock when she gets Twilight's letter about Megan. She also does a SpitTake right in the face of her minister of economics.
to:
* DropWhatYoureDoing: DropWhatYouAreDoing: In Chapter 4, Celestia drops a teacup out of shock when she gets Twilight's letter about Megan. She also does a SpitTake right in the face of her minister of economics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* DropWhatYoureDoing: In Chapter 4, Celestia drops a teacup out of shock when she gets Twilight's letter about Megan. She also does a SpitTake right in the face of her minister of economics.
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* MegaCrossover: Not ''as such'', but there are a few moments that show the Earth Megan comes from, besides being the one of the 80s' MyLittlePony, is also the Earth of that era's {{Transformers}} and GIJoe - WordOfGod has called it "Hasbro Earth".
to:
* MegaCrossover: Not ''as such'', but there are a few moments that show the Earth Megan comes from, besides being the one of the 80s' MyLittlePony, is also the Earth of {{Jem}} and that era's {{Transformers}} and GIJoe - WordOfGod has called it "Hasbro Earth".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* MindRape: During his original rampage, Discord performed a particularly brutal one on Morning Glory that left her almost completely unresponsive to those around her. And due to Rosedust isolating the Flutter Ponies after what happened she's been that way for ''thirteen centuries''. [[spoiler: Fortunately, with Twilight Sparkle's help, Megan, Sparkling Dawn (Morning Glory's husband), and Blazing Day (her son), were able to break her out of it.]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[HumanPopsicle Pony Popsicle]]: [[spoiler: In this fic's 'verse, Princess Platinum did not unthaw and is still bound in ice.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Informed Ability. Unlike the rest of the story, My Little Horsey has terrible writing. )
Added DiffLines:
* InformedAbility: Megan Richards is described as a sucessful author. Then we get a brief look at *My Little Horsey* in chapter 16.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Corrected a typo.
Changed line(s) 21 (click to see context) from:
* KlingonPromotion: How one becomes king of the dragons. One must also give up ones hoard, however, resulting in more selflessness than this trope usually involves.
to:
* KlingonPromotion: How one becomes king of the dragons. One must also give up ones one's hoard, however, resulting in more selflessness than this trope usually involves.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Becoming king of the dragon clans requires, among other things, a KlingonPromotion.
Changed line(s) 19 (click to see context) from:
* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In the original show, Megan was TheHero. Fifteen centuries of myths have spun her into the "Mag'ne", a quasi-divine figure.
to:
* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In-universe example. In the original show, Megan was TheHero. Fifteen centuries of myths have spun her into the "Mag'ne", a quasi-divine figure.figure.
* KlingonPromotion: How one becomes king of the dragons. One must also give up ones hoard, however, resulting in more selflessness than this trope usually involves.
* KlingonPromotion: How one becomes king of the dragons. One must also give up ones hoard, however, resulting in more selflessness than this trope usually involves.
Added DiffLines:
* TookALevelInBadass: He was already showing signs of this in the original show, but [[spoiler: G1 Spike has apparently come a long way indeed.]]
* YearInsideHourOutside: Megan's spent twenty years on Earth. When she returns to Equestria, it's been fifteen centuries from the ponies' perspective.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Megan's spent twenty years on Earth. When she returns to Equestria, it's been fifteen centuries from the ponies' perspective.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
to:
* ShroudedInMyth: Megan became, in Pony Mythology, the messianic Mag'Ne, and we humans became the divine Herd.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
''The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds'' is an ongoing crossover between MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and the original, G1 MyLittlePony. It interprets the new series as being set in the distant future of the original, and examines how "Dream Valley" could eventually become "Equestria".
to:
''The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds'' is an ongoing crossover between MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and the original, G1 MyLittlePony.''MyLittlePony''. It interprets the new series as being set in the distant future of the original, and examines how "Dream Valley" could eventually become "Equestria".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
->''Twilight bit her lip and sighed. "Megan... you've been to Equestria before, haven't you." She chuckled nervously and looked away. "It was your reactions to everything around you, as if you've seen them before, and they changed."''
When unusual circumstances breach a hole through space, the Mane Six accidentally reach into a different world. This leads them to encounter a "human" called Megan, along with her family - but as the story progresses, it becomes clear that Megan's not only been to Equestria before, but may well have played a central role in its History. And her role might not be over yet...
''The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds'' is an ongoing crossover between MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and the original, G1 MyLittlePony. It interprets the new series as being set in the distant future of the original, and examines how "Dream Valley" could eventually become "Equestria".
Originally posted at [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=196663 SpaceBattles]]. Can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7222615/1/The_Elements_of_Harmony_and_the_Savior_of_Worlds Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3072/The-Elements-of-Harmony-and-the-Savior-of-Worlds Fimfiction]].
----
!!''FanFic/TheElementsOfHarmonyAndTheSaviorOfWorlds'' contains examples of:
* {{Badass}}: As the story likes to remind us, Megan's [[MyLittlePony first visit to the ponies' world]] involved her [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome standing up to, and defeating]], [[DemonLordsAndArchdevils Tirac himself]].
** King Spykoran the Old is also very much this. Being a dragon helps.
* CanonWelding: Places the original MLP show in the new one's ancient past.
* CutenessProximity: Megan has two daughters. Twilight is a talking pony. Megan warns her to expect this.
* FirstContact: Technically not the first, but there are hints that Equestria and Earth are headed this way. Though in Earth's case, they already had a first contact [[{{Transformers}} of a different kind]]...
* GenerationXerox: Not identical, but Megan is nevertheless stunned by Spike and Applejack.
* HappilyMarried: Megan and her husband.
* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In the original show, Megan was TheHero. Fifteen centuries of myths have spun her into the "Mag'ne", a quasi-divine figure.
* TheMasquerade: Quickly defied. [[spoiler: Megan briefly panics when she realizes Equestria's radio stations are unwittingly broadcasting through the portal, but Twilight doesn't really see the problem with mankind discovering the ponies' existence.]]
* MegaCrossover: Not ''as such'', but there are a few moments that show the Earth Megan comes from, besides being the one of the 80s' MyLittlePony, is also the Earth of that era's {{Transformers}} and GIJoe - WordOfGod has called it "Hasbro Earth".
* NarniaTime: For Megan and her siblings, it's been about two decades since the events of the old show. For Celestia, Luna, and any G1 character who's still alive, it's been around fifteen centuries.
* NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Megan and the original G1 ponies.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: Applejack goes on one when she thinks the green dragon has murdered Twilight, Spike and Rainbow Dash. Thankfully she is stopped before she gets herself killed.]]
----
When unusual circumstances breach a hole through space, the Mane Six accidentally reach into a different world. This leads them to encounter a "human" called Megan, along with her family - but as the story progresses, it becomes clear that Megan's not only been to Equestria before, but may well have played a central role in its History. And her role might not be over yet...
''The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds'' is an ongoing crossover between MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and the original, G1 MyLittlePony. It interprets the new series as being set in the distant future of the original, and examines how "Dream Valley" could eventually become "Equestria".
Originally posted at [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=196663 SpaceBattles]]. Can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7222615/1/The_Elements_of_Harmony_and_the_Savior_of_Worlds Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3072/The-Elements-of-Harmony-and-the-Savior-of-Worlds Fimfiction]].
----
!!''FanFic/TheElementsOfHarmonyAndTheSaviorOfWorlds'' contains examples of:
* {{Badass}}: As the story likes to remind us, Megan's [[MyLittlePony first visit to the ponies' world]] involved her [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome standing up to, and defeating]], [[DemonLordsAndArchdevils Tirac himself]].
** King Spykoran the Old is also very much this. Being a dragon helps.
* CanonWelding: Places the original MLP show in the new one's ancient past.
* CutenessProximity: Megan has two daughters. Twilight is a talking pony. Megan warns her to expect this.
* FirstContact: Technically not the first, but there are hints that Equestria and Earth are headed this way. Though in Earth's case, they already had a first contact [[{{Transformers}} of a different kind]]...
* GenerationXerox: Not identical, but Megan is nevertheless stunned by Spike and Applejack.
* HappilyMarried: Megan and her husband.
* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In the original show, Megan was TheHero. Fifteen centuries of myths have spun her into the "Mag'ne", a quasi-divine figure.
* TheMasquerade: Quickly defied. [[spoiler: Megan briefly panics when she realizes Equestria's radio stations are unwittingly broadcasting through the portal, but Twilight doesn't really see the problem with mankind discovering the ponies' existence.]]
* MegaCrossover: Not ''as such'', but there are a few moments that show the Earth Megan comes from, besides being the one of the 80s' MyLittlePony, is also the Earth of that era's {{Transformers}} and GIJoe - WordOfGod has called it "Hasbro Earth".
* NarniaTime: For Megan and her siblings, it's been about two decades since the events of the old show. For Celestia, Luna, and any G1 character who's still alive, it's been around fifteen centuries.
* NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Megan and the original G1 ponies.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: Applejack goes on one when she thinks the green dragon has murdered Twilight, Spike and Rainbow Dash. Thankfully she is stopped before she gets herself killed.]]
----
