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* FixFic: Like most stories in the category this one is also a fix fic. Instead of just Japan going through the Gate a 1985 United States joins them.

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Like most stories in the category this one is also a fix fic. Instead of just Japan going through the Gate a 1985 United States joins them.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Something is going on with Christianity on Falmart. Rayland notes that the ruined church they stay in resembles an old Christian church, including a lot of the holy symbols, and that it's odd that something they obviously put a lot of resources into building would just be abandoned, Rory leaves the motor pool after noticing the cross Rayland is wearing, and later on she tries to kill him after the Battle of Italica]].

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[[spoiler: Something is going on with Christianity on Falmart. Rayland notes that the ruined church they stay in resembles an old Christian church, including a lot of the holy symbols, and that it's odd that something they obviously put a lot of resources into building would just be abandoned, Rory leaves the motor pool after noticing the cross Rayland is wearing, and later on she tries to kill him after the Battle of Italica]].



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation.

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Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation.
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* SergeantRock: This role if filled by Sergeant First Class Richard Kaiser who is the Platoon Sergeant. He is a combat veteran of Vietnam, Grenada, and Honduras. He his first seen giving advice to Lieutenant Wheeler.

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* SergeantRock: This role if is filled by Sergeant First Class Richard Kaiser who is the Platoon Sergeant. He is a combat veteran of Vietnam, Grenada, and Honduras. He his is first seen giving advice to Lieutenant Wheeler.
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** When going through the gate tunnel, and finding out both about objects looping around if thrown at the sides and the radios playing broadcasts from the 40's, one of the soldiers comments that they must be in Series/TheTwilightZone.

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** When going through the gate tunnel, and finding out both about objects looping around if thrown at the sides and the radios playing broadcasts from the 40's, one of the soldiers comments that they must be in Series/TheTwilightZone.Series/{{The Twilight Zone|1959}}.

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Ride Of The Valkyries isn't a trope.


The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We]] [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build. Karaya also uses the story as a medium to give the reader a glimpse into Cavalry Formations, the army, and the military as a whole.

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The Author author of The ''The Boys of '85, '85'', [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate ''Gate'' Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We]] [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build. Karaya also uses the story as a medium to give the reader a glimpse into Cavalry Formations, the army, and the military as a whole.



* AuthorAppeal: The Author of The Boys of 85, Karaya, is a Soldier in the United States Army, as such many scenes between characters are based off of interactions he had with others while serving. The Battalion featured in the story, First Battalion Eighth Cavalry Regiment, is the unit he is currently assigned to.

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* AuthorAppeal: The Author author of The ''The Boys of 85, 85'', Karaya, is a Soldier in the United States Army, as such many scenes between characters are based off of interactions he had with others while serving. The Battalion featured in the story, First Battalion Eighth Cavalry Regiment, is the unit he is currently assigned to.



* RideOfTheValkyries: Like in Canon, the Japanese decide to play this while coming to the relief of Italica. Unlike in Canon, the Americans [[TakeThat refuse to play it]], and instead play [[Music/DuranDuran "Hungry Like The Wolf"]]



*** Later on, while en route to Italica, Higgens of the ODA starts saying the famous "There is a fifth dimension" opening after someone notes that they technically just made a crop circle, only to be told to shut up.

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*** ** Later on, while en route to Italica, Higgens of the ODA starts saying the famous "There is a fifth dimension" opening after someone notes that they technically just made a crop circle, only to be told to shut up.up.
** Like in Canon, the Japanese decide to play "Music/RideOfTheValkyries" while coming to the relief of Italica. Unlike in Canon, the Americans [[TakeThat refuse to play it]], and instead play [[Music/DuranDuran "Hungry Like The Wolf"]]



--> '''Lisa:''' You know the buildup of Russian and Chinese troops on the Chinese border?\\

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--> ---> '''Lisa:''' You know the buildup of Russian and Chinese troops on the Chinese border?\\



--> ''[[spoiler: The taskforce had stumbled upon an abandoned Soviet T-34]]''

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--> ---> ''[[spoiler: The taskforce had stumbled upon an abandoned Soviet T-34]]''
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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We]] [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.

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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We]] [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.
build. Karaya also uses the story as a medium to give the reader a glimpse into Cavalry Formations, the army, and the military as a whole.
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Since we're apparently keeping the presence of the M1s spoilered.


** Sergeant First Class Taylor Cain, Tank Commander of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.
** Private Lance Dupont, Driver of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.

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** Sergeant First Class Taylor Cain, Tank Commander of the Abrams [[spoiler:Abrams]] Bravo 1-4.
** Private Lance Dupont, Driver of the Abrams [[spoiler:Abrams]] Bravo 1-4.
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* AuthorAppeal: The Author of The Boys of 85, Karaya, is a Soldier in the United States Army, as such many scenes between characters are based off of interactions he had with other while serving. The Battalion featured in the story, First Battalion Eighth Cavalry Regiment, is the unit he is currently assigned to.

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* AuthorAppeal: The Author of The Boys of 85, Karaya, is a Soldier in the United States Army, as such many scenes between characters are based off of interactions he had with other others while serving. The Battalion featured in the story, First Battalion Eighth Cavalry Regiment, is the unit he is currently assigned to.
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* AuthorAppeal: The Author of The Boys of 85, Karaya, is a Soldier in the United States Army, as such many scenes between characters are based off of interactions he had with other while serving. The Battalion featured in the story, First Battalion Eighth Cavalry Regiment, is the unit he is currently assigned to.
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** Private Lance DuPont, Driver of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.

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** Private Lance DuPont, Dupont, Driver of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.
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** Sergeant First Class Taylor Cain, Tank Commander of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.
** Private Lance DuPont, Driver of the Abrams Bravo 1-4.

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* IntrepidReporter: Lisa Patterson, a war correspondent for United Press International covering the task force's operations. Before coming to the Special Region, she was [[spoiler: in China, specifically Xinjiang province, covering the opening days of the Soviet invasion of Xinjiang]].



* OhCrap: The general reaction of the squad when Lisa tells them that [[spoiler: the Soviets invaded China shortly after they deployed]].



* WhamLine: From Chapter 9:

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* WhamLine: WhamLine:
** From Chapter 3:
--> '''Lisa:''' You know the buildup of Russian and Chinese troops on the Chinese border?\\
'''Connor:''' Yeah, Rayland wouldn't shut up about it when we were training on Okinawa.\\
'''Rayland:''' Haha fuck you asswipe, anyways everybody thought it would blow over like it did back in '62\\
'''Lisa:''' That's right. [[spoiler: but this time it didn't. A few days after you guys deployed, the Russians came pouring into Xinjiang province. I was there covering the initial Soviet attack.]]
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Several characters fit this role. Stephen Pershing a Bradley Commander, Robert Masson a Fighter Pilot, and Donavan Sinclair a Green Beret.

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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Several characters fit this role. role:
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Stephen Pershing a Pershing, commander of ''This Machine'', the M2 Bradley Commander, attached to Third Platoon.
** Captain
Robert Masson Masson, a Fighter Pilot, and US Airforce fighter pilot
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Donavan Sinclair a Sinclair, commander of the task force's Green Beret.Beret ODA[[note]]Operational Detachment-A, the basic 12-man unit of the Army Special Forces[[/note]].



* ElitesAreMoreGlamorous: United States Green Beret Lieutenant Donavan Sinclair and his ODA get a significant amount of focus.

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* ElitesAreMoreGlamorous: United States Green Beret Lieutenant Captain Donavan Sinclair and his ODA get a significant amount of focus.



* EquipmentUpgrade: The U.S Army contingent of the Task force is getting [[spoiler: [=M1IP=] Abrams main battle tanks to replace their M60s]]. The Marines are still using their M60A1 [=RISE's=].

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* EquipmentUpgrade: The U.S Army contingent of the Task force is getting [[spoiler: [=M1IP=] Abrams main battle tanks to replace their M60s]]. The Marines are still using their M60A1 [=M60A1=] [=RISE's=].



** Fittingly for the commander of an armoured vehicle, Stephen Pershing shares a last name with General John J. Pershing, the man that the M26 Pershing tank was named for.



* ReassignedToAntarctica: Played with. Italica is an important trade city, and being in charge of its garrison is an important job, but Casner and Arnett know that the real reason Hazama has put Casner in charge is because he criticized the General and now the he wants Casner out of the way.

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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Played with. Italica is an important trade city, and being in charge of its garrison is an important job, but Casner and Arnett know that the real reason Hazama has put Casner Arnett in charge is because he criticized the General and now the he wants Casner Arnett out of the way.



* SemperFi: The US forces include personnel from the Marines.

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* SemperFi: The US forces include includes personnel from the Marines.



** Chapter 9 sees General Hazama send Marine Lieutenant Colonel Casner to take over the Italica garrison, obsentibly because he has combat experience from Grenada, but more likely it's because Casner criticized several of Hazama's actions, and Hazama wants him out of the way.

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** Chapter 9 sees General Hazama send Marine Lieutenant Colonel Casner Arnett to take over the Italica garrison, obsentibly because he has combat experience from Grenada, but more most likely it's because Casner Arnett criticized several of Hazama's actions, and Hazama wants him out of the way.
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* EquipmentUpgrade: The U.S Task force is getting [[spoiler: [=M1IP=] Abrams main battle tanks to replace their M60s]].

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* EquipmentUpgrade: The U.S Army contingent of the Task force is getting [[spoiler: [=M1IP=] Abrams main battle tanks to replace their M60s]].M60s]]. The Marines are still using their M60A1 [=RISE's=].

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* MultinationalTeam: In addition to the JSDF and US military, the taskforce also has UN Peacekeepers from various nations (so far, Ireland has been confirmed as one of them).

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* MultinationalTeam: In addition to the JSDF and US military, the taskforce also has UN Peacekeepers from various nations (so far, Ireland has been confirmed as one of them).them), and UsefulNotes/{{NATO}} is also planning on sending troops, primarily from Britain and the Netherlands.



** O'Hare responding to an order from Sergeant Smith with some variation of "Okay, [[TeamDad dad]]", only for Smith to ask him if he wants to repeat that, leading to him replying "[[VerbalBackspace Yes, sir]]". Usually while the squad is travelling in a Humvee and O'Hare is on the turret.



* SemperFi: The US forces include personnel from the Marines.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation. As well, most of the Americans dislike or hate Rory, [[spoiler: and are royally pissed when Itami refuses to send her away after she tries to kill Rayland, especially since his immediate reaction was to get angry at Rayland for shooting her in self defence]].

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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation. As well, most nation.
** Most
of the Americans dislike or hate Rory, and several of the Japanese also dislike her.
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[[spoiler: and The Americans are royally pissed when Itami refuses to send her away after she tries to kill Rayland, especially since his immediate reaction was to get angry at Rayland for shooting her in self defence]].

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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.

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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We We]] [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.



* {{Crossover}}: [[spoiler: The 1985 versions of [[Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain Jasper Kincaid and company]] appear at the end of Chapter 9]]



** [[spoiler: The crew of Horseman Four have the same nicknames as they do in ''Fanfic/HereWeGoAgain'']]



** Thrid Platoon finds a young Wolf girl[[note]]Though many of the soldiers also call her a dog person[[/note]] named Lia hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three [[spoiler: being the only survivor of the Imperial attack on Kester]], who ends up in their care. They're not quite certain whether or not it's safe to feed her chocolate.

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** Thrid Third Platoon finds a young Wolf girl[[note]]Though many of the soldiers also call her a dog person[[/note]] named Lia hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three [[spoiler: being the only survivor of the Imperial attack on Kester]], who ends up in their care. They're not quite certain whether or not it's safe to feed her chocolate.



** Lisa the War Correspondent gives the men the nickname of "The Boys of '85", by making it the headline of her story in the newspaper. Not only is it the [[TitleDrop title of the story], but it's significant to the men of Third Platoon, most of whom are young men aged 18 to 24.

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** Lisa the War Correspondent gives the men the nickname of "The Boys of '85", by making it the headline of her story in the newspaper. Not only is it the [[TitleDrop title of the story], story]], but it's significant to the men of Third Platoon, most of whom are young men aged 18 to 24.24.
* MultinationalTeam: In addition to the JSDF and US military, the taskforce also has UN Peacekeepers from various nations (so far, Ireland has been confirmed as one of them).



* ReligiousBruiser: Downplayed with Rayland. He's notes that the abandoned church they stay in resembles the Catholic one he went to back home, [[spoiler: including the holy symbols]], and it's noted that he wears a cross around his neck.

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* ReligiousBruiser: Downplayed with Rayland. He's notes that the abandoned church they stay in resembles the Catholic one he went to back home, [[spoiler: including the holy symbols]], and it's noted that he wears a cross around his neck. He's also the son of a chaplain[[note]]Presumably a deacon, if he is Catholic[[/note]].


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* RideOfTheValkyries: Like in Canon, the Japanese decide to play this while coming to the relief of Italica. Unlike in Canon, the Americans [[TakeThat refuse to play it]], and instead play [[Music/DuranDuran "Hungry Like The Wolf"]]

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** During the journey to the Special Region, the task force picks up radio broadcasts of speeches made during World War Two by Hitler, FDR, and Churchill. [[spoiler: In Chapter 9, a UN scientist discovers the remains of an abandoned Soviet T-34 in the Special Region]].



* ReassignedToAntarctica: Played with. Italica is an important trade city, and being in charge of its garrison is an important job, but Casner and Arnett know that the real reason Hazama has put Casner in charge is because he criticized the General and now the he wants Casner out of the way.



* SchizoTech: TruthInTelevision. Due to the time period its set in, the Task Force has an interesting mix of new and old equipment, leading to things like the crew members of an Army M1 Abrams being armed with M3 Grease Guns and serving alongside Marine tankers who are still using the M60 Patton.



** TheLeader: Staff Sergeant James Smith, aka "Sarge" or "Dad" is the squad leader.
** TheBigGuy: Specialist Connor Mulligan, aka "Mul" the squad rifleman.
** TheSmartGuy: Private First Class Rayland Monroe, aka "Ray" the Squad Gunner, linguist, and historian.
** NewMeat: Specialist Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation. As well, most of the Americans dislike or hate Rory, [[spoiler: and are royally pissed when Itami refuses to send her away after she tries to kill Rayland, especially since his immediate reaction was to get angry at Rayland for shooting her in self defence]].

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** TheLeader: Staff Sergeant James Smith, aka "Sarge" or "Dad" "Dad", is the squad leader.
** TheBigGuy: Specialist Connor Mulligan, aka "Mul" "Mul", is the squad rifleman.
** TheSmartGuy: Private First Class Rayland Monroe, aka "Ray" "Ray", is the Squad Gunner, linguist, and historian.
** NewMeat: Specialist Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" "Al", is the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation. As well, most of the Americans dislike or hate Rory, [[spoiler: and are royally pissed when Itami refuses to send her away after she tries to kill Rayland, especially since his immediate reaction was to get angry at Rayland for shooting her in self defence]].defence]].
** Chapter 9 sees General Hazama send Marine Lieutenant Colonel Casner to take over the Italica garrison, obsentibly because he has combat experience from Grenada, but more likely it's because Casner criticized several of Hazama's actions, and Hazama wants him out of the way.
* WhamLine: From Chapter 9:
--> ''[[spoiler: The taskforce had stumbled upon an abandoned Soviet T-34]]''
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* BandOfBrothers: The men of Charlie Platoon, the Green Beret ODA, and the crew of Gypsy Wagon.

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* BandOfBrothers: The men of Charlie Third Platoon, the Green Beret ODA, and the crew of Gypsy Wagon.



* BigBrotherInstinct: Charlie Platoon, especially Rayland, have this towards Lia, the wolf girl they found in [[spoiler:Kester]]. Rayland steps in between her and Rory when the latter is scaring her, and later refers to her as "little sis"

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Charlie Third Platoon, especially Rayland, have this towards Lia, the wolf girl they found in [[spoiler:Kester]]. Rayland steps in between her and Rory when the latter is scaring her, and later refers to her as "little sis"



** Lia is nicknamed "little sis" and "pup" by Charlie Platoon.

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** Lia is nicknamed "little sis" and "pup" by Charlie Third Platoon.



** Lisa the War Correspondent gives the men the nickname of "The Boys of '85", by making it the headline of her story in the newspaper. Not only is it the [[TitleDrop title of the story], but it's significant to the men of Charlie Platoon, most of whom are young men aged 18 to 24.

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** Lisa the War Correspondent gives the men the nickname of "The Boys of '85", by making it the headline of her story in the newspaper. Not only is it the [[TitleDrop title of the story], but it's significant to the men of Charlie Third Platoon, most of whom are young men aged 18 to 24.
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The story takes place in late 1985. Corporal Allen O'Hare is on leave and visiting his family in Montana when Gate opens in Ginza Tokyo. The army that comes through slaughters innocents in the city and even attack the United States Embassy. The invasion is repulsed by the Japanese Self Defense Force and a quick reaction team sent by the United States Marines. In response the United States Military upholds their end of the Mutual Defense Treaty and sends a task force of Army, Marines, and Navy to assist the Japanese with combat operations beyond the gate. [[NewMeat Corporal Allen O'Hare]] is one of the first Americans to set foot beyond the Gate. Accompanying him are his [[TrueCompanions comrades]], [[BookWorm Private First Class Rayland Monroe]], Corporal Connor Mulligan, and [[AFatherToHisMen Sergeant James Smith]].

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The story takes place in late 1985. Corporal Specialist Allen O'Hare is on leave and visiting his family in Montana when Gate opens in Ginza Tokyo. The army that comes through slaughters innocents in the city and even attack the United States Embassy. The invasion is repulsed by the Japanese Self Defense Force and a quick reaction team sent by the United States Marines. In response the United States Military upholds their end of the Mutual Defense Treaty and sends a task force of Army, Marines, and Navy to assist the Japanese with combat operations beyond the gate. [[NewMeat Corporal Specialist Allen O'Hare]] is one of the first Americans to set foot beyond the Gate. Accompanying him are his [[TrueCompanions comrades]], [[BookWorm Private First Class Rayland Monroe]], Corporal Specialist Connor Mulligan, and [[AFatherToHisMen Staff Sergeant James Smith]].



* BiggerStick: Recon Team One gets this in the form of a [[spoiler: M2 Bradley Fighting Vehicle]]. Recon Team Three also gets this [[spoiler: when a flight of F-16s are sent to provide air support after the dragon attack]].

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* BiggerStick: Recon Team One gets this in the form of a [[spoiler: M2 Bradley Fighting Vehicle]]. Recon Team Three also gets this [[spoiler: when a flight of F-16s F-15s are sent to provide air support after the dragon attack]].



* {{Deuteragonist}}: Several characters fit this role. Stephen Pershing, Robert Masson, and Donavan Sinclair.

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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Several characters fit this role. Stephen Pershing, Pershing a Bradley Commander, Robert Masson, Masson a Fighter Pilot, and Donavan Sinclair.Sinclair a Green Beret.



** Charlie Platoon finds a young Wolf girl[[note]]Though many of the soldiers also call her a dog person[[/note]] named Lia hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three [[spoiler: being the only survivor of the Imperial attack on Kester]], who ends up in their care. They're not quite certain whether or not it's safe to feed her chocolate.

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** Charlie Thrid Platoon finds a young Wolf girl[[note]]Though many of the soldiers also call her a dog person[[/note]] named Lia hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three [[spoiler: being the only survivor of the Imperial attack on Kester]], who ends up in their care. They're not quite certain whether or not it's safe to feed her chocolate.



* TheNeidermeyer: Captain Swanky, the commander of C Troop. He's a stuck up, well off, Westpoint graduate, who views himself as being better than the men he is in charge of, and stays at base camp while his men are sent out on recon.

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* TheNeidermeyer: Captain Swanky, the commander of C Troop.Company. He's a stuck up, well off, Westpoint graduate, who views himself as being better than the men he is in charge of, and stays at base camp while his men are sent out on recon.



* TheSquad: One of the squads in Charlie Platoon are the main focus in the story.
** TheLeader: Sergeant James Smith, aka "Sarge" or "Dad" is the squad leader.
** TheBigGuy: Corporal Connor Mulligan, aka "Mul" the squad rifleman.

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* TheSquad: One of the squads in Charlie Third Platoon are the main focus in the story.
** TheLeader: Staff Sergeant James Smith, aka "Sarge" or "Dad" is the squad leader.
** TheBigGuy: Corporal Specialist Connor Mulligan, aka "Mul" the squad rifleman.



** NewMeat: Corporal Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.

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** NewMeat: Corporal Specialist Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.
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* {{Retcon}}: The fanfic was originally set in 1960 with Pre-Vietnam War military equipment before the author retconned to be set in 1985. Daisuke Kita's rank was retconned from Captain to Lieutenant. The F-16s were originally F-18s, and were later changed to F-15s.

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* {{Retcon}}: The fanfic was originally set in 1960 with Pre-Vietnam War military equipment before the author retconned to be set in 1985. Daisuke Kita's rank was retconned from Captain to Lieutenant. The F-16s were originally F-18s, and were later changed to F-15s. In July 2018 update of Boys of '85 Karaya retconned a decent bit of the story. The 14th Cavalry Regiment was changed to First Battalion of the Eighth Cavalry Regiment, Charlie Platoon was changed to Third Platoon, Comanche Troop was changed to Charlie Company [[note]] Nicknamed Combat Company [[/note]], The Second Armored Cavalry was retconned and their tanks rolled into Bravo Company of 1-8 Cavalry, Allen's rank was changed from Corporal to Specialist.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Charlie Platoon, especially Rayland, have this towards Lia, the wolf girl they found in [[spoiler:Kester]]. Rayland steps in between her and Rory when the latter is scaring her, and later refers to her as "little sis"



* InSeriesNickname: Green Beret Sergeant Janek Láska is given the nickname "Russian" by his comrades. Ironically, Janek is from Czechoslovakia.

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** [[TheNeidermeyer Captain Swanky]] is nicknamed "Spanky" by the men under his command, though they never call him that to his face.
** Sergeant Smith is nicknamed [[AFatherToHisMen "Dad"]].
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Green Beret Sergeant Janek Láska is given the nickname "Russian" by his comrades. Ironically, Janek is from Czechoslovakia.Czechoslovakia.
** Lisa the war correspondent is nicknamed Paperboy by the soldiers.
** Lia is nicknamed "little sis" and "pup" by Charlie Platoon.



** Captain William ''Swanky'' is quite well off and upper crust.



* TheNeidermeyer: Captain William Swanky, the commander of C Troop. He's a stuck up, well off, Westpoint graduate, who views himself as being better than the men he is in charge of, and stays at base camp while his men are sent out on recon.

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* TheNeidermeyer: Captain William Swanky, the commander of C Troop. He's a stuck up, well off, Westpoint graduate, who views himself as being better than the men he is in charge of, and stays at base camp while his men are sent out on recon.



** NewMeat: Corporal Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.

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** NewMeat: Corporal Allen O'Hare, aka "Al" the squad grenadier and the protagonist of the story.story.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Many of the American and Japanese personnel don't like the other nation being there, or at least specific personnel from the other nation. As well, most of the Americans dislike or hate Rory, [[spoiler: and are royally pissed when Itami refuses to send her away after she tries to kill Rayland, especially since his immediate reaction was to get angry at Rayland for shooting her in self defence]].
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: Sergeant Kaiser is completely unphased when Rory tells him that she's a 900-year-old apostle of the god of war and death, simply replying that he's a sergeant in the US Army that served 4 years in Vietnam, ending with telling her to [[BringIt "Try me, kid"]].

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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Sergeant Kaiser is completely unphased when Rory tells him that she's a 900-year-old apostle of the god of war and death, simply replying that he's a sergeant in the US Army that served 4 years in Vietnam, ending with telling her to [[BringIt "Try me, kid"]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Something is going on with Christianity on Falmart. Rayland notes that the ruined church they stay in resembles an old Christian church, including a lot of the holy symbols, and that it's odd that something they obviously put a lot of resources into building would just be abandoned, and Rory leaves the motor pool after noticing the cross Rayland is wearing]].

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Something is going on with Christianity on Falmart. Rayland notes that the ruined church they stay in resembles an old Christian church, including a lot of the holy symbols, and that it's odd that something they obviously put a lot of resources into building would just be abandoned, and Rory leaves the motor pool after noticing the cross Rayland is wearing]].wearing, and later on she tries to kill him after the Battle of Italica]].

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Allen's younger brother, Adam, who is deep in the anti-war, anti-military movement, and as such hates both Allen and their father, calling Allen a "baby-killer" when Anna tries to get him to come down to talk. Despite the sum total of Allen's military career at that point being, in his words, "to stare at the Russians in the Fulda Gap".

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Allen's younger brother, Adam, who is deep in the anti-war, anti-military movement, and as such hates both Allen and their father, calling Allen a "baby-killer" when Anna tries to get him to come down to talk. Despite the sum total of Allen's military career at that point being, in his words, "to stare at the Russians in the Fulda Gap". [[spoiler: He starts to get better after reading about what the Army is doing in Falmart]].



* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: Sergeant Kaiser is completely unphased when Rory tells him that she's a 900-year-old apostle of the god of war and death, simply replying that he's a sergeant in the US Army that served 4 years in Vietnam, ending with telling her to [[BringIt "Try me, kid"]].
* EldritchLocation: The tunnel between the two gates. Anything thrown far enough at the right side of the tunnel will loop back and come out the left side, and vice versa, and various radio channels play famous broadcasts from the past[[note]]The three played are from UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler, UsefulNotes/FranklinDelanoRoosevelt (specifically the "Date of Infamy" speech), and UsefulNotes/WinstonChurchill (specifically the "We shall fight on the beaches" speech)[[/note]].



* GetOut: Sergeant Kaiser yells this when Rory refuses to leave the Motor pool.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Something is going on with Christianity on Falmart. Rayland notes that the ruined church they stay in resembles an old Christian church, including a lot of the holy symbols, and that it's odd that something they obviously put a lot of resources into building would just be abandoned, and Rory leaves the motor pool after noticing the cross Rayland is wearing]].
* GetOut: Sergeant Kaiser yells this when Rory refuses to leave the Motor pool.pool, especially after she reminds Lia about her parents death.



* HiddenDepths: Despite being a bit obnoxious and purposefully playing up certain southern stereotypes, Rayland is extremely intelligent, plans to become a history teacher when he gets out, and has a two-year history degree. He's able to note that a ruined church they come across resembles a Christian Church in the Roman Empire from around 450 [=AD=].



* LittleBitBeastly: Charlie Platoon finds a young Wolf girl hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three. Chapter four the Green Beret ODA [[spoiler: makes a deal with a Fox Girl merchant in order to get information]].

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* LittleBitBeastly: LittleBitBeastly:
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Charlie Platoon finds a young Wolf girl girl[[note]]Though many of the soldiers also call her a dog person[[/note]] named Lia hiding in an alleyway in Chapter Three. Three [[spoiler: being the only survivor of the Imperial attack on Kester]], who ends up in their care. They're not quite certain whether or not it's safe to feed her chocolate.
** In
Chapter four Four, the Green Beret ODA [[spoiler: makes a deal with a Fox Girl merchant in order to get information]].



** The name of the Bradley "This Machine" is a reference to This Machine (short for "WELL THIS MACHINE KILLS COMMIES"), a M1 Garand found in ''VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas'', which in turn was a reference to Music/WoodyGuthrie, who had a sticker on his guitar that said "This machine kills fascists".

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** The name of * TheNeidermeyer: Captain William Swanky, the Bradley "This Machine" is commander of C Troop. He's a reference to This Machine (short for "WELL THIS MACHINE KILLS COMMIES"), a M1 Garand found in ''VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas'', which in turn was a reference to Music/WoodyGuthrie, stuck up, well off, Westpoint graduate, who had a sticker on views himself as being better than the men he is in charge of, and stays at base camp while his guitar men are sent out on recon.
* ReligiousBruiser: Downplayed with Rayland. He's notes
that said "This machine kills fascists".the abandoned church they stay in resembles the Catholic one he went to back home, [[spoiler: including the holy symbols]], and it's noted that he wears a cross around his neck.



* RunningGag:
** Whenever Rayland or anyone else plays music, Connor will complain about how he doesn't like the song they chose.



* ShoutOut: Quite a number
** The name of the Bradley "This Machine" is a reference to This Machine (short for "WELL THIS MACHINE KILLS COMMIES"), a M1 Garand found in ''VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas'', which in turn was a reference to Music/WoodyGuthrie, who had a sticker on his guitar that said "This machine kills fascists".
** When going through the gate tunnel, and finding out both about objects looping around if thrown at the sides and the radios playing broadcasts from the 40's, one of the soldiers comments that they must be in Series/TheTwilightZone.
*** Later on, while en route to Italica, Higgens of the ODA starts saying the famous "There is a fifth dimension" opening after someone notes that they technically just made a crop circle, only to be told to shut up.



** TheSmartGuy: Private First Class Rayland Monroe, aka "Ray" the Squad Gunner and linguist.

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** TheSmartGuy: Private First Class Rayland Monroe, aka "Ray" the Squad Gunner Gunner, linguist, and linguist.historian.

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Break Out The Museum Piece doesn't really apply, since much of the equipment was still standard issue back then. If the story was set in 2010 or 2018 and the US started sending in Pattons and such, then it would be an example.


* AFatherToHisMen: This is portrayed through Sergeant James Smith on several occasions.
-->'''James''': Do you kids ever stop arguing? I got to deal with kids back home, don't want to deal with them here.
-->'''Allen''': Alright dad we'll stop, just don't turn the car around.
* AntiAir: M163 PIVADS, MIM-72 Chaparrals, and M42 Dusters make up the Task Forces Air Defenses.

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* AFatherToHisMen: This is portrayed through Sergeant James Smith on several occasions.
-->'''James''': Do you kids ever stop arguing? I got to deal with kids back home,
AlliterativeFamily: While their parents don't want to deal with them here.
-->'''Allen''': Alright dad we'll stop, just don't turn
fit this, the car around.
three O'Hare children do: Allen, Anna, and Adam.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Allen's younger brother, Adam, who is deep in the anti-war, anti-military movement, and as such hates both Allen and their father, calling Allen a "baby-killer" when Anna tries to get him to come down to talk. Despite the sum total of Allen's military career at that point being, in his words, "to stare at the Russians in the Fulda Gap".
* AntiAir: M163 PIVADS, MIM-72 Chaparrals, and M42 Dusters make up the Task Forces Air Defenses.air defenses.



* BandOfBrothers: The men of Charlie Platoon, Green Beret ODA, and the crew of Gypsy Wagon.

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* BandOfBrothers: The men of Charlie Platoon, the Green Beret ODA, and the crew of Gypsy Wagon.



* BigBrotherWorship: In contrast to his younger brother, Anna, Allen's younger sister, idolizes him and the military, has been wanting to become the first female fighter pilot ever since Allen joined up, and has been repeatedly sent home from school for getting into fights with anyone who says something bad about the military.



* BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Pretty much the entire story. Compared to modern day much of the equipment used in the story is outdated. This also can be applied to the JSDF.



* CoolVsAwesome: [[spoiler: Flame Dragon fighting F-15s]].

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* CoolVsAwesome: [[spoiler: The Flame Dragon fighting F-15s]].



* ConvenientMisfire: Chapter Four [[spoiler: Allen's M2 jams during a skirmish with the Imperial army forcing the Americans to rely on Rayland and his M60 GPM]].
* CurbStompBattle: The battle of Alnus is an example of this.
* DeathFromAbove: The Flight of F-15s from the United States Air Force and presumed other aircraft coming in the near future. Japanese F-4 Phantom IIs arrived in the special region in chapter Four.

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* ConvenientMisfire: In Chapter Four Four, [[spoiler: Allen's M2 jams during a skirmish with the Imperial army army, forcing the Americans to rely on Rayland and his M60 GPM]].
* CurbStompBattle: The battle of Alnus is an example of this.
Alnus, just like in canon.
* DeathFromAbove: The Flight flight of F-15s from the United States Air Force and presumed other aircraft coming in the near future. Japanese F-4 Phantom IIs [=IIs=] arrived in the special region in chapter Four.



* ElitesAreMoreGlamorous: United States Green Beret Lieutenant Donavan Sinclair and his ODA get a significant amount of page time in the story.

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* ElitesAreMoreGlamorous: United States Green Beret Lieutenant Donavan Sinclair and his ODA get a significant amount of page time in the story.focus.



* AFatherToHisMen: This is portrayed through Sergeant James Smith on several occasions.
-->'''James''': Do you kids ever stop arguing? I got to deal with kids back home, don't want to deal with them here.
-->'''Allen''': Alright dad we'll stop, just don't turn the car around.



* ICallItVera: In Chapter Two, Allen sees an M2 Bradley named "This Machine". The same Bradley is assigned to Recon Team One. In Chapter Five there is an Abrams tank named "Gypsy Wagon".
* InSeriesNickname: Green Beret Sergeant Janek Láska is given the nickname "Russian" by his comrades. Ironically Janek is from Czechoslovakia.

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* HeroicLineage: Of a sort. Allen's father was a fighter pilot and UsefulNotes/WildWeasel in Vietnam, his grandfather was a [[SemperFi marine]] who fought at [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII Iwo Jima]] and [[UsefulNotes/TheKoreanWar Chosin]], and his great-grandfather fought in [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI the Argonne]]. Allen is the latest generation, and his sister Anna also wants to serve when she grows up.
* ICallItVera: In Chapter Two, Allen sees an a M2 Bradley named "This Machine". The same Bradley is assigned to Recon Team One. In Chapter Five there is an Abrams [[spoiler:Abrams]] tank named "Gypsy Wagon".
* InSeriesNickname: Green Beret Sergeant Janek Láska is given the nickname "Russian" by his comrades. Ironically Ironically, Janek is from Czechoslovakia.



** War Correspondent Lisa gives the men and newspaper with the headline "The Boys of '85". Not only is it the title of the story but it's significant to the men of Charlie Platoon most of whom 18 to 24 years old.

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** Lisa the War Correspondent Lisa gives the men and newspaper with the headline nickname of "The Boys of '85". '85", by making it the headline of her story in the newspaper. Not only is it the [[TitleDrop title of the story story], but it's significant to the men of Charlie Platoon Platoon, most of whom are young men aged 18 to 24 years old.24.



* {{Retcon}}: The fanfic was originally set in 1960 with Pre-Vietnam War military equipment before the author retconned to be set in 1985. Captain Daisuke Kita rank was retconned and was changed to a Lieutenant. The F-16s were originally F-18s. The F-16s were later changed to F-15s.

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* {{Retcon}}: The fanfic was originally set in 1960 with Pre-Vietnam War military equipment before the author retconned to be set in 1985. Captain Daisuke Kita Kita's rank was retconned and was changed from Captain to a Lieutenant. The F-16s were originally F-18s. The F-16s F-18s, and were later changed to F-15s.
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** The name of the Bradley "This Machine" is a reference to This Machine Kills Commies an M1 Garand found in Fallout New Vegas. Not only is it a reference but it fits the 1980s Cold War Atmosphere.

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** The name of the Bradley "This Machine" is a reference to This Machine Kills Commies an (short for "WELL THIS MACHINE KILLS COMMIES"), a M1 Garand found in Fallout New Vegas. Not only is it ''VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas'', which in turn was a reference but it fits the 1980s Cold War Atmosphere. to Music/WoodyGuthrie, who had a sticker on his guitar that said "This machine kills fascists".
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*MeaningfulName: Most of the names in the story have some sort of meaning.
**War Correspondent Lisa gives the men and newspaper with the headline "The Boys of '85". Not only is it the title of the story but it's significant to the men of Charlie Platoon most of whom 18 to 24 years old.
** The name of the Bradley "This Machine" is a reference to This Machine Kills Commies an M1 Garand found in Fallout New Vegas. Not only is it a reference but it fits the 1980s Cold War Atmosphere.
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*FixFic: Like most stories in the category this one is also a fix fic. Instead of just Japan going through the Gate a 1985 United States joins them.
** Karaya also decided to "Fix" the Italica scene. Instead of "Ride of the Valkyries" the air assault group plays "Hungry Like The Wolf" by Duran Duran.
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*CoolPlane: The F-15C. During the Cold War and even now the F-15 remains one of the best fighter aircraft in the world.
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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Amry Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.

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The Author of The Boys of '85, [=Karaya2=], is a United States Amry Army Tanker. He is a colleague of another Gate Author [=Shmack1812=], a former Marine Tanker and author of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11661356/1/Here-We-Go-Again Here We Go Again]]''. [=Karaya2=] was displeased with the lack of world building in the story and began writing his or her story. The story parallels canon in several aspects but diverges in several major areas, claiming that breaking canon is one of the best ways to world build.

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