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* UnbuiltTrope: Voldemort putting a PowerLimiter on Snape as a child, along with compulsion charms for loyalty, may look like an inversion of all the RonTheDeathEater fics where Dumbledore does the same to Harry. However, the fic dates from 2002, years before that plot became popular.
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* StumblingInTheNewForm: It is implied [[CuteClumsyGirl Tonks']] clumsiness is because she is normally using an appearance different from her real one, and the difference in the build makes her balance wrong.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* InbredAndEvil: Demetrius, the child of two twin Klaatu-shah, who had a serpentine UncannyValley appearance from birth. He manipulated his parents into a MutualKill at the age of sixteen, and still survives now, as the controlling mind and progenitor of the Dementors.
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* InbredAndEvil: Demetrius, the child of two twin Klaatu-shah, who had a serpentine UncannyValley appearance from birth. He manipulated his parents into a MutualKill at the age of sixteen, and still survives now, as the controlling mind and progenitor of the Dementors.
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* AngstySurvivingTwin: [[spoiler:Percy is revealed to be one]], due to a powerful twin bond breaking when his brother died the day after they were born.
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* AngstySurvivingTwin: [[spoiler:Percy is revealed to be one]], due to a powerful twin bond breaking when one]]. Even though his brother died the day after they were born.born, so there was no conscious memory, the unhealed magical damage from a broken twin bond affected [[spoiler: Percy]] on a subconscious level, leaving a hole in his heart that he tried to fill with achievements until discovering the truth.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* ChickMagnet: Harry is that UpToEleven, thanks to both his new appearance and the changes in personality. He also has a Veela-like aura, although of course that one is suppressed to the best of his ability.
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* ChickMagnet: Harry is that UpToEleven, Harry, thanks to both his new appearance and the changes in personality. He also has a Veela-like aura, although of course that one is suppressed to the best of his ability.
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* UpToEleven: Draco's Scanner talent allows for such detail that the letter attached to his official certificate apologizes about the current scale not having an appropriate level.
