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* MutagenicGoo: According to Eda, Bug and Beast-type Demons were originally just wild animals and parasites living in the Titan. After it had died, its five-humors would mix in Primordial Pools that mutated anything that didn't have its own reserve of magic, begatting Demonkind. Biped Demons are [[TrueBreedingHybrid the result of those demons then mating with Witches]], making them second-generation mutants.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: The last time Bump had met an angel (Cassiel) was when she had helped stage an uprising among Hexside's student-body, ending with Bump being made Principle and his tyrannical predecessor Faust being fed to the Kindergartners.
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--> '''Bump:''' That's what happens when you turn a non-violent protest into a fight... and also ban the Kindergarteners' snack time...
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* MarkOfTheSupernatural: Every time Luz learns a new glyph, it becomes marked in her mind and they manifest as tattoos that appear on her body. While {{Power Tattoo}}s are a thing in the Divine Realm, Luz has no idea why this is happening.
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* MarkOfTheSupernatural: Every time Luz learns a new glyph, it becomes it's marked in her mind and they manifest as tattoos that appear on her body. While {{Power Tattoo}}s are a thing in the Divine Realm, Luz has no idea why this is happening.
* ObliviousToLove: Luz tends to mistake Amity's CrushBlush for her getting red with anger.
* ObliviousToLove: Luz tends to mistake Amity's CrushBlush for her getting red with anger.
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* TheExile: It's implied that Camila is living on Earth out of contempt for the Divine Realm's FantasticCasteSystem.
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* SevenHeavenlyVirtues: The Divine Realm is divided into a FantasticCasteSystem in the form of "Crests"; Crest Kindness (the crest Camilla and Luz belong to) are medical professionals, Crest Chasity rear children, Crest Charity runs the economy, Crest Diligence are law enforcement and the military, Crest Temperance are food production, Crest Patience are the courts and Crest Humility are administrators and organizers.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Lilith presumes that not only is Luz Eda's half-human child, but that she inherited her curse. Since angels are considered mythical creatures on the Boiling Isles and it would put a target on Luz's back if the Emperor's Coven found out, Eda has to play along.
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* VictoryByEndurance: Luz and Amity manage to worm their way out of the duel their mentors puched them into by making their fight not a WizardDuel, but a game of rock-paper-scissors. The first person who makes 100 ''consecutive'' wins is declared the winner. The point of course wasn't to best each other, but to annoy Eda and Lilith long enough to agree to undo their unbreakable vow.
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* VictoryByEndurance: TakingAThirdOption: Luz and Amity manage to worm their way out of the duel their mentors puched pushed them into by making their fight not a WizardDuel, but a game of rock-paper-scissors. The first person who makes 100 ''consecutive'' wins is declared the winner. The point of course wasn't to best each other, [[VictoryByEndurance but to annoy Eda and Lilith long enough to agree into agreeing to undo their unbreakable vow.vow]].
--> '''Amity:''' You're pretty good at helping people in unconventional ways.
--> '''Amity:''' You're pretty good at helping people in unconventional ways.
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* AbileneParadox: When Eda and Lilith bet their and their apprentices' futures in a duel (Eda and Luz joining the Emperor's Coven if they lose, Lilith and Amity become Wild Witches if they win) with an everlasting oath, it takes a scolding from their irate apprentices for Eda and Lilith both to admit that it was a bad idea. The only problem is that they both think that the other is too stubborn to agree to nullifying the oath before the duel is set to end.
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* AbileneParadox: When Eda and Lilith bet their and their apprentices' futures in a duel (Eda and Luz joining the Emperor's Coven if they lose, Amity wins, Lilith and Amity become Wild Witches if they win) Luz wins) with an everlasting oath, it takes a scolding from their irate apprentices for Eda and Lilith both to admit that it was a bad idea. The only problem is that they both think that the other is too stubborn to agree to nullifying the oath before the duel is set to end.
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* AbileneParadox: When Eda and Lilith bet their and their apprentices' futures in a duel (Eda and Luz joining the Emperor's Coven if they lose, Lilith and Amity become Wild Witches if they win) with an everlasting oath, it takes a scolding from their irate apprentices for Eda and Lilith both to admit that it was a bad idea. The only problem is that they both think that the other is too stubborn to agree to nullifying the oath before the duel is set to end.
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* MarkOfTheSupernatural: Every time Luz learns a new glyph, it becomes marked in her mind and they manifest as tattoos that appear on her body. While {{Power Tattoo}}s are a thing in the Divine Realm, Luz has no idea why this is happening.
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* FawltyTowersPlot: Chapter 2 has Eda and King try and fail to spike Luz with Tearful Tonic various times throughout the day, thinking that they can use her tears to cure their respective ailments. Instead the tonic ends up hitting various people Luz interacts with, making her think that she is somehow upsetting people. While Luz is understandably crushed that they were trying to emotionally manipulate her, not to mention not wanting to have her bodily fluids monetized, she tells them that [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot they should have told her the real reason why they needed her tears]], [[HonestyIsTheBestPolicy seeing curing their ailments as a good enough reason]].
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* WhiteMagic: Angels are able to wield magic like Witches and Bipedal Demons and there is a lot of overlap between disciplines, but [[MutuallyExclusiveMagic they're still distinct enough where Luz can't do everything Witches can do]].
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Bile Overload is when a witch's magic bile-sac produces more magic than their bodies can process, causing PowerIncontinence and temporary emotional instability. While it's common for children still learning how to use magic, some can have Bile Overload under intense emotional stress, Willow going berserk and turning Hexside into a jungle when Luz gets hurt defending her. [[spoiler:An overdose of angel tears have a similar effect, turning Eda's Owl Beast form into more of an AnimalisticAbomination temporarily when Luz adds too much of her tears into her elixir.]]
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Angels in this AU originate from a realm called the Divine Realm, separate from Earth and the Demon Realm, which are capable of interbreeding with humans to produce hybrids like Luz. Angel society is focused on being orderly (on a related note, [[CannotTellALie angels cannot knowingly speak a lie without it feeling like their throats are on fire]]), with angels divided into seven Crest Orders based on the Virtues, determining their roles, with angels from each Crest tending to resemble each other strongly (it specifically being compared to a StrongFamilyResemblance, with switching being rare but possible), each Crest headed by a Seraphim. Angels start as Cherubs with [[WingsDoNothing useless wings]] and limited powers, with pure-blooded angels usually growing full wings and coming into their powers around puberty. This is connected because Angel wings passively absorb energy from ambient sources to fuel their magical abilities, and their feathers have potent mystical properties, along with their tears, especially in regards to healing. Finally, ''something'' about them freaks out the spirits used in Oracle magic to the point that they're too scared to even acknowledge that they ''exist'', which means that while angels cannot use Oracle magic, it can't be used ''on'' them either.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Angels in this AU originate from a realm called [[{{Heaven}} the Divine Realm, Realm]], separate from Earth and the Demon Realm, which are capable of interbreeding with humans to produce hybrids like Luz. Angel society is focused on being orderly (on a related note, [[CannotTellALie angels cannot knowingly speak a lie without it feeling like their throats are on fire]]), with angels divided into seven Crest Orders based on the Virtues, determining their roles, with angels from each Crest tending to resemble each other strongly (it specifically being compared to a StrongFamilyResemblance, with switching being rare but possible), each Crest headed by a Seraphim. Angels start as Cherubs with [[WingsDoNothing useless wings]] and limited powers, with pure-blooded angels usually growing full wings and coming into their powers around puberty. This is connected because Angel wings passively absorb energy from ambient sources to fuel their magical abilities, and their feathers have potent mystical properties, along with their tears, especially in regards to healing. Finally, ''something'' about them freaks out the spirits used in Oracle magic to the point that they're too scared to even acknowledge that they ''exist'', which means that while angels cannot use Oracle magic, it can't be used ''on'' them either.either.
* PerfectPacifistPeople: In spite of their tremendous magical power, physical excursions are forbidden in the Divine Realm [[MartialPacifist outside of self-defense or defending others]]. Instead, angels will "duel" through heated debate before a panel of judges.
* PerfectPacifistPeople: In spite of their tremendous magical power, physical excursions are forbidden in the Divine Realm [[MartialPacifist outside of self-defense or defending others]]. Instead, angels will "duel" through heated debate before a panel of judges.
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* BrokenPedestal: Amity loses all faith in Lilith and the Emperor's Coven once she learns what Belos does with Palismen, and that Lilith knew about it.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Angels in this AU originate from a realm called the Divine Realm, separate from Earth and the Demon Realm, which are capable of interbreeding with humans to produce hybrids like Luz. Angel society is focused on being orderly (on a related note, [[CannotTellALie angels cannot knowingly speak a lie without it feelinglike their throats are on fire), with angels divided into seven Crest Orders based on the Virtues, determining their roles, with angels from each Crest tending to resemble each other strongly (it specifically being compared to a StrongFamilyResemblance, with switching being rare but possible), each Crest headed by a Seraphim. Angels start as Cherubs with [[WingsDoNothing useless wings]] and limited powers, with pure-blooded angels usually growing full wings and coming into their powers around puberty. This is connected because Angel wings passively absorb energy from ambient sources to fuel their magical abilities, and their feathers have potent mystical properties, along with their tears, especially in regards to healing. Finally, ''something'' about them freaks out the spirits used in Oracle magic to the point that they're too scared to even acknowledge that they ''exist'', which means that while angels cannot use Oracle magic, it can't be used ''on'' them either.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Angels in this AU originate from a realm called the Divine Realm, separate from Earth and the Demon Realm, which are capable of interbreeding with humans to produce hybrids like Luz. Angel society is focused on being orderly (on a related note, [[CannotTellALie angels cannot knowingly speak a lie without it feelinglike feeling like their throats are on fire), fire]]), with angels divided into seven Crest Orders based on the Virtues, determining their roles, with angels from each Crest tending to resemble each other strongly (it specifically being compared to a StrongFamilyResemblance, with switching being rare but possible), each Crest headed by a Seraphim. Angels start as Cherubs with [[WingsDoNothing useless wings]] and limited powers, with pure-blooded angels usually growing full wings and coming into their powers around puberty. This is connected because Angel wings passively absorb energy from ambient sources to fuel their magical abilities, and their feathers have potent mystical properties, along with their tears, especially in regards to healing. Finally, ''something'' about them freaks out the spirits used in Oracle magic to the point that they're too scared to even acknowledge that they ''exist'', which means that while angels cannot use Oracle magic, it can't be used ''on'' them either.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Angels in this AU originate from a realm called the Divine Realm, separate from Earth and the Demon Realm, which are capable of interbreeding with humans to produce hybrids like Luz. Angel society is focused on being orderly (on a related note, [[CannotTellALie angels cannot knowingly speak a lie without it feelinglike their throats are on fire), with angels divided into seven Crest Orders based on the Virtues, determining their roles, with angels from each Crest tending to resemble each other strongly (it specifically being compared to a StrongFamilyResemblance, with switching being rare but possible), each Crest headed by a Seraphim. Angels start as Cherubs with [[WingsDoNothing useless wings]] and limited powers, with pure-blooded angels usually growing full wings and coming into their powers around puberty. This is connected because Angel wings passively absorb energy from ambient sources to fuel their magical abilities, and their feathers have potent mystical properties, along with their tears, especially in regards to healing. Finally, ''something'' about them freaks out the spirits used in Oracle magic to the point that they're too scared to even acknowledge that they ''exist'', which means that while angels cannot use Oracle magic, it can't be used ''on'' them either.
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* HereditaryCurse: Lilith and the guards at the Conformatorium believe Luz has inherited Eda's curse, due to her white hair and feathers, as they can't believe an angel would be working with Eda.
* HeroicBsod: Luz experiences this after mistaking Eda's mishaps with the Tearful Tonic to be her fault, making her think she made a child, a teen, and ''King'' cry.
* InSpiteOfANail:
** Luz still makes an enemy by outshining someone at Hexside: [[spoiler:Boscha, instead of Amity.]]
** Despite being friends with Amity, Luz still ends up in a duel with her at the Covention.
** Amity still almost loses her job at the Library, even though she wasn't the one to help Luz get into the Forbidden Stacks.
** Even though Luz isn't banned from Hexside, she still ends up thrown in the Detention Pit.
* InternalReveal:
** Amity discovers Luz is an angel after seeing her [[spoiler:fight the Owl Beast out in the rain.]]
** Principal Bump reveals to Luz that she isn't the first angel to come to Hexside.
** Willow and Gus learn Luz's secret after [[spoiler:saving her from the rampaging Detention Pit.]]
* HeroicBsod: Luz experiences this after mistaking Eda's mishaps with the Tearful Tonic to be her fault, making her think she made a child, a teen, and ''King'' cry.
* InSpiteOfANail:
** Luz still makes an enemy by outshining someone at Hexside: [[spoiler:Boscha, instead of Amity.]]
** Despite being friends with Amity, Luz still ends up in a duel with her at the Covention.
** Amity still almost loses her job at the Library, even though she wasn't the one to help Luz get into the Forbidden Stacks.
** Even though Luz isn't banned from Hexside, she still ends up thrown in the Detention Pit.
* InternalReveal:
** Amity discovers Luz is an angel after seeing her [[spoiler:fight the Owl Beast out in the rain.]]
** Principal Bump reveals to Luz that she isn't the first angel to come to Hexside.
** Willow and Gus learn Luz's secret after [[spoiler:saving her from the rampaging Detention Pit.]]
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* AdaptationalExplanation: In canon, the phenomena of glowing eyes that seemed to boost a witch's magic was never explained, as plans to explain it were scrapped when the series was cut short. Here, it is explained as a Bile Overload, a result of strong emotions causing a witch's Bile Sac to produce too much bile, making them stronger, but also making it harder to control themselves.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: AdaptationalExplanation:
** In canon, the phenomena of glowing eyes that seemed to boost a witch's magic was never explained, as plans to explain it were scrapped when the series was cut short. Here, it is explained as a Bile Overload, a result of strong emotions causing a witch's Bile Sac to produce too much bile, making them stronger, but also making it harder to controlthemselves.themselves.
** Canon never explains why Eda needs to buy Elixirs from Morton and can't just brew them herself. Here it is explained that it requires a specific rare ingredient that Eda can't get her hands on, as the Plant Coven are the only ones to grow it and have boobytrapped their supply after Eda attempted a robbery in the past, so only licensed potioneers can acquire it. [[spoiler:Luz and King later learn to grow the plant with the Plant Glyph, so Eda can finally brew the Elixir herself.]]
** In canon, the phenomena of glowing eyes that seemed to boost a witch's magic was never explained, as plans to explain it were scrapped when the series was cut short. Here, it is explained as a Bile Overload, a result of strong emotions causing a witch's Bile Sac to produce too much bile, making them stronger, but also making it harder to control
** Canon never explains why Eda needs to buy Elixirs from Morton and can't just brew them herself. Here it is explained that it requires a specific rare ingredient that Eda can't get her hands on, as the Plant Coven are the only ones to grow it and have boobytrapped their supply after Eda attempted a robbery in the past, so only licensed potioneers can acquire it. [[spoiler:Luz and King later learn to grow the plant with the Plant Glyph, so Eda can finally brew the Elixir herself.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: How Luz initially sees working with Eda in order to get home. She later changes her mind after seeing what witches and demons are really like.
*FiveFingerDiscount: As in canon, Eda frequently steals and pickpockets. Here it is considered a side-effect of her curse, making her a bit of a kleptomaniac, and Luz takes the stolen things to return to their owners, with minimal protest from Eda.
*ForWantOfANail:
** Luz frees ALL the prisoners at the Conformatorium instead of just the three she talks to, sparking a full battle between the guards and escapees.
** Luz learns the Light Glyph after being blinded by a flash at the Conformatorium, and immediately bonds with it and unlocks her light magic to defeat Warden Wrath and save King and Eda.
** Luz being used to magic and being more empathetic results in her having an easier time selling potions in Bonesborough, making a lot of snails for Eda.
** Luz isn't tricked by Adegast, instead seeing through his illusions and trying to leave.
** Instead of disguising herself as an abomination to help Willow and sneak into Hexside, Luz helps Willow improve her abomination and gives her the seed from the Trash Slug to further improve it, then attends the school herself as a welcome guest.
** Willow's improved abomination earns a pass, but doesn't surpass Amity's, so Amity remains the top student and isn't hostile to Luz. Instead, Luz outshining Boscha in potions class makes Boscha hostile instead.
** Luz isn't banned from Hexside, and is instead welcomed to come back by Principal Bump, on the condition she helps clean up the mess she helped make.
** Luz's attempts to use her tears to help Eda make a cure for her curse results in Eda's Owl Beast becoming stronger and attacking Bonesborough.
** Luz does much better in her duel with Amity, and actually manages to win without cheating, albeit through Amity forfeiting.
** [[spoiler:Philip's diary is found far earlier, during the Wailing Star event, while Luz is looking for books on angels and glyphs.]]
** As Luz isn't banned from Hexside, Gus doesn't have to sneak her in on the second visit, and Luz gets to enjoy another trial day there, attending classes like normal.
*FiveFingerDiscount: As in canon, Eda frequently steals and pickpockets. Here it is considered a side-effect of her curse, making her a bit of a kleptomaniac, and Luz takes the stolen things to return to their owners, with minimal protest from Eda.
*ForWantOfANail:
** Luz frees ALL the prisoners at the Conformatorium instead of just the three she talks to, sparking a full battle between the guards and escapees.
** Luz learns the Light Glyph after being blinded by a flash at the Conformatorium, and immediately bonds with it and unlocks her light magic to defeat Warden Wrath and save King and Eda.
** Luz being used to magic and being more empathetic results in her having an easier time selling potions in Bonesborough, making a lot of snails for Eda.
** Luz isn't tricked by Adegast, instead seeing through his illusions and trying to leave.
** Instead of disguising herself as an abomination to help Willow and sneak into Hexside, Luz helps Willow improve her abomination and gives her the seed from the Trash Slug to further improve it, then attends the school herself as a welcome guest.
** Willow's improved abomination earns a pass, but doesn't surpass Amity's, so Amity remains the top student and isn't hostile to Luz. Instead, Luz outshining Boscha in potions class makes Boscha hostile instead.
** Luz isn't banned from Hexside, and is instead welcomed to come back by Principal Bump, on the condition she helps clean up the mess she helped make.
** Luz's attempts to use her tears to help Eda make a cure for her curse results in Eda's Owl Beast becoming stronger and attacking Bonesborough.
** Luz does much better in her duel with Amity, and actually manages to win without cheating, albeit through Amity forfeiting.
** [[spoiler:Philip's diary is found far earlier, during the Wailing Star event, while Luz is looking for books on angels and glyphs.]]
** As Luz isn't banned from Hexside, Gus doesn't have to sneak her in on the second visit, and Luz gets to enjoy another trial day there, attending classes like normal.
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* DamselInDistress: After Luz is thrown in the Detention Pit, it turns feral due to her angel magic and breaks free to attack the school, while Luz is trapped in a pod inside it.
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* AllForNothing:
** Eda attempts to make Luz cry by slipping her a potion, so she can use her angel tears in an attempt to cure her curse. This leads to numerous blunders that shakes Luz's confidence and causes her to have a minor breakdown. When Eda confesses her mistakes and explains her actions, Luz tells her that she would have given the tears willingly if Eda had just explained the situation from the beginning, making the whole incident unnecessary. [[spoiler:Not that the tears end up helping much.]]
** During the Wailing Star incident, Luz goes through a lot of trouble to find books on angels and glyphs, working with Edric and Emira to break into the library and accidentally getting Amity in trouble, only to have to give up the book she'd gone through all that trouble for to fix things and get Amity her job back. [[spoiler:Later revealed to be averted, as Edric switched the returned book with a different one disguised by an illusion, and gives the real book to Luz as an apology.]]
* AscendedExtra: Skara and Boscha have both had expanded roles during Luz's visits to Hexside. WordOfGod is that they'll be receiving chapters focused on them in the future. Other minor characters such as Capra (the goat-like member of the H.A.S) are also given a bit more prominence.
** Eda attempts to make Luz cry by slipping her a potion, so she can use her angel tears in an attempt to cure her curse. This leads to numerous blunders that shakes Luz's confidence and causes her to have a minor breakdown. When Eda confesses her mistakes and explains her actions, Luz tells her that she would have given the tears willingly if Eda had just explained the situation from the beginning, making the whole incident unnecessary. [[spoiler:Not that the tears end up helping much.]]
** During the Wailing Star incident, Luz goes through a lot of trouble to find books on angels and glyphs, working with Edric and Emira to break into the library and accidentally getting Amity in trouble, only to have to give up the book she'd gone through all that trouble for to fix things and get Amity her job back. [[spoiler:Later revealed to be averted, as Edric switched the returned book with a different one disguised by an illusion, and gives the real book to Luz as an apology.]]
* AscendedExtra: Skara and Boscha have both had expanded roles during Luz's visits to Hexside. WordOfGod is that they'll be receiving chapters focused on them in the future. Other minor characters such as Capra (the goat-like member of the H.A.S) are also given a bit more prominence.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Zig-zagged with Mattholomule, who instead of telling on Luz to the Hexside guards, actually tricks her and throws her into the Detention Pit himself to avoid being outed as a fraud. He later works to redeem himself by helping to save her, and accepting his punishment.
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** Zig-zagged with Mattholomule, who instead of telling on Luz to the Hexside guards, actually tricks her and throws her into the Detention Pit himself to avoid being outed as a fraud. He later works to redeem himself by helping to save her, and accepting hispunishment.punishment.
* AdaptationalKarma: In canon, Mattholomule gets away with lying to the H.A.S and getting Luz thrown in the Detention Pit, and even gets what he wants in the end by becoming the new President of the H.A.S. In Angel of the Owl House, he is instead punished for his actions by having to work to repair the damage his actions caused to the school, and he is forbidden from joining any clubs for the remainder of the school year.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Luz in canon is far from a bad person, but she is still prone to mischief and causing problems without meaning to. Here she is a literal angel and thus a lot more conscientious, notably not lying to Eda to have a Moonlight Conjuring or pretending to be an abomination to go to Hexside. She even hurts herself to cover for Amity's unintentional cheating during their duel at the Covention.
** Amity also starts out as a much nicer person, not having a lot of her meaner spirted moments from canon like trying to get Luz dissected or crushing King's cupcake.
** Similarly, Skara becomes a lot nicer after her first appearance, and is implied to only have been a bully due to her friendship with Boscha.
** Edric and Emira start off a bit more mean-spirited, stealing Amity's employee ID for the library and getting her in trouble, on top of trying to steal her diary to post it around the school. They do make up for this later though.
** Zig-zagged with Mattholomule, who instead of telling on Luz to the Hexside guards, actually tricks her and throws her into the Detention Pit himself to avoid being outed as a fraud. He later works to redeem himself by helping to save her, and accepting his
* AdaptationalKarma: In canon, Mattholomule gets away with lying to the H.A.S and getting Luz thrown in the Detention Pit, and even gets what he wants in the end by becoming the new President of the H.A.S. In Angel of the Owl House, he is instead punished for his actions by having to work to repair the damage his actions caused to the school, and he is forbidden from joining any clubs for the remainder of the school year.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Luz in canon is far from a bad person, but she is still prone to mischief and causing problems without meaning to. Here she is a literal angel and thus a lot more conscientious, notably not lying to Eda to have a Moonlight Conjuring or pretending to be an abomination to go to Hexside. She even hurts herself to cover for Amity's unintentional cheating during their duel at the Covention.
** Amity also starts out as a much nicer person, not having a lot of her meaner spirted moments from canon like trying to get Luz dissected or crushing King's cupcake.
** Similarly, Skara becomes a lot nicer after her first appearance, and is implied to only have been a bully due to her friendship with Boscha.
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** [[spoiler:Eda's powered up Owl Beast form, which she briefly entered during "Watching and Dreaming", instead appears during her first transformation, after a botched attempt at curing the curse instead powers her up.]]
* AbortedArc: The events of "Hooty's Moving Hassle" and "Once Upon a Swap" are set up and then averted in between chapers.
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Luz is shown to be a lot more effected by her lack of friends and her outcast status in the Human World. She struggles with her failed attempts to help people, and briefly breaks down when she believes the same things are happening in the Demon Realm. She is also shown to be more hurt by her mother sending her to camp.
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** Luz gains the ability to use light beam attacks after finding and bonding with the Light Glyph at the Conformatorium, and begins learning spells from Eda. She initially struggles with many of them, but is adept at potions, enough so that she briefly outshines ''Boscha''. [[spoiler:She also gains powerful healing magic after bonding with the Plant Glyph.]]
** Willow's skill with Plant Magic allows her to go toe to toe with Boscha and her gang, defeating all of them, after they attempt to bully her and Luz.
** Gus is able to create a terrifying illusion to intimidate Mattholomule [[spoiler:and mesmerise the Detention Pit]]
* AdaptationalExplanation: In canon, the phenomena of glowing eyes that seemed to boost a witch's magic was never explained, as plans to explain it were scrapped when the series was cut short. Here, it is explained as a Bile Overload, a result of strong emotions causing a witch's Bile Sac to produce too much bile, making them stronger, but also making it harder to control themselves.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Zig-zagged with Mattholomule, who instead of telling on Luz to the Hexside guards, actually tricks her and throws her into the Detention Pit himself to avoid being outed as a fraud. He later works to redeem himself by helping to save her, and accepting his punishment.
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Luz is shown to be a lot more effected by her lack of friends and her outcast status in the Human World. She struggles with her failed attempts to help people, and briefly breaks down when she believes the same things are happening in the Demon Realm. She is also shown to be more hurt by her mother sending her to camp.
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Luz gains the ability to use light beam attacks after finding and bonding with the Light Glyph at the Conformatorium, and begins learning spells from Eda. She initially struggles with many of them, but is adept at potions, enough so that she briefly outshines ''Boscha''. [[spoiler:She also gains powerful healing magic after bonding with the Plant Glyph.]]
** Willow's skill with Plant Magic allows her to go toe to toe with Boscha and her gang, defeating all of them, after they attempt to bully her and Luz.
** Gus is able to create a terrifying illusion to intimidate Mattholomule [[spoiler:and mesmerise the Detention Pit]]
* AdaptationalExplanation: In canon, the phenomena of glowing eyes that seemed to boost a witch's magic was never explained, as plans to explain it were scrapped when the series was cut short. Here, it is explained as a Bile Overload, a result of strong emotions causing a witch's Bile Sac to produce too much bile, making them stronger, but also making it harder to control themselves.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Zig-zagged with Mattholomule, who instead of telling on Luz to the Hexside guards, actually tricks her and throws her into the Detention Pit himself to avoid being outed as a fraud. He later works to redeem himself by helping to save her, and accepting his punishment.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Since Luz didn't cause Amity to lose her Top Student badge when she came to Hexside, the two start off on much better terms, with Amity developing her crush before the Covention.
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** The Light Glyph is discovered during the Conformatorium Heist in the first chapter, instead of during Eda's first curse transformation.
** The Plant Glyph is discovered during Luz's first trip to Hexside, instead of before Grom.
** [[spoiler:Philip's Diary is found during the Wailing Star events at the library, instead of during the Looking Glass Ruins episode. Malphas also appears in this chapter.]]
** The Light Glyph is discovered during the Conformatorium Heist in the first chapter, instead of during Eda's first curse transformation.
** The Plant Glyph is discovered during Luz's first trip to Hexside, instead of before Grom.
** [[spoiler:Philip's Diary is found during the Wailing Star events at the library, instead of during the Looking Glass Ruins episode. Malphas also appears in this chapter.]]
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* WingsDoNothing: As Luz is still a young angel whose powers have yet to fully awaken, at the start of the story her wings are small and effectively useless. [[spoiler:Later subverted after Luz bonds with the Plant Glyph, completing her maturation into a full angel and allowing her to fly.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47426656/chapters/119511943 The Angel of The Owl House]]'' is an AU of The Owl House, in which Luz is the daughter of the angel Camila and a human, making her a hybrid. After several well-meaning attempts at helping her classmates go awry, causing chaos instead of the order angels try to promote, Luz ends up in the Demon Realm instead of camp, only to find that the place isn’t quite the hellhole the angels believe it is. Now, apprenticing under Eda, Luz is trying to find her place and develop her powers, all while keeping the fact that she’s an Angel from leaking to the Isles as a whole (or more specifically, Belos), which would be a lot easier if she could lie without feeling like her throat is on fire…
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47426656/chapters/119511943 The Angel of The Owl House]]'' is an AU of The Owl House, ''WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse'', in which Luz is the daughter of the angel Camila and a human, making her a hybrid. After several well-meaning attempts at helping her classmates go awry, causing chaos instead of the order angels try to promote, Luz ends up in the Demon Realm instead of camp, only to find that the place isn’t quite the hellhole the angels believe it is. Now, apprenticing under Eda, Luz is trying to find her place and develop her powers, all while keeping the fact that she’s an Angel from leaking to the Isles as a whole (or more specifically, Belos), which would be a lot easier if she could lie without feeling like her throat is on fire…
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47426656/chapters/119511943 The Angel of The Owl House]]'' is an AU of The Owl House, in which Luz is the daughter of the angel Camila and a human, making her a hybrid. After several well-meaning attempts at helping her classmates go awry, causing chaos instead of the order angels try to promote, Luz ends up in the Demon Realm instead of camp, only to find that the place isn’t quite the hellhole the angels believe it is. Now, apprenticing under Eda, Luz is trying to find her place and develop her powers, all while keeping the fact that she’s an Angel from leaking to the Isles as a whole (or more specifically, Belos), which would be a lot easier if she could lie without feeling like her throat is on fire…
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Luz in this AU is a human and angel hybrid, rather than a full human, with Camila being her angelic parent.
* CannotTellALie: One of the quirks of being an angel is that they are unable to knowingly lie without it feeling like their throats are burning. The key word here is ''knowingly'', and they can use ExactWords. Also, since it only happens when they ''verbally'' lie, they can use illusions just fine, and Luz is able to send texts to Camila that make her think that she's still at camp.
* GoneHorriblyRight: A number of Luz's previous attempts to help people fall into this territory. For instance, using her powers to make realistic props to help the drama club after a budget cut, but going too far and causing ''very'' realistic blood and gore effects, resulting in an ambulance being called because the parents thought that a kid was ''actually'' stabbed.
* OrderVsChaos: Angels in general are big on promoting order, with part of the reason for Luz being sent to camp in this AU being that her attempts to help people, while well-meaning, tend to end up inadvertently causing chaos.
* SureLetsGoWithThat: When a guard first sees Luz and her wings, he assumes that she's Eda's kid who inherited her curse. Not wanting anyone to freak out that there's an angel on the Isles, Eda goes with it. She does the same later when Lilith makes the same assumption.
* WingsDoNothing: As Luz is still a young angel whose powers have yet to fully awaken, at the start of the story her wings are small and effectively useless.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Luz in this AU is a human and angel hybrid, rather than a full human, with Camila being her angelic parent.
* CannotTellALie: One of the quirks of being an angel is that they are unable to knowingly lie without it feeling like their throats are burning. The key word here is ''knowingly'', and they can use ExactWords. Also, since it only happens when they ''verbally'' lie, they can use illusions just fine, and Luz is able to send texts to Camila that make her think that she's still at camp.
* GoneHorriblyRight: A number of Luz's previous attempts to help people fall into this territory. For instance, using her powers to make realistic props to help the drama club after a budget cut, but going too far and causing ''very'' realistic blood and gore effects, resulting in an ambulance being called because the parents thought that a kid was ''actually'' stabbed.
* OrderVsChaos: Angels in general are big on promoting order, with part of the reason for Luz being sent to camp in this AU being that her attempts to help people, while well-meaning, tend to end up inadvertently causing chaos.
* SureLetsGoWithThat: When a guard first sees Luz and her wings, he assumes that she's Eda's kid who inherited her curse. Not wanting anyone to freak out that there's an angel on the Isles, Eda goes with it. She does the same later when Lilith makes the same assumption.
* WingsDoNothing: As Luz is still a young angel whose powers have yet to fully awaken, at the start of the story her wings are small and effectively useless.
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