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* LetsSplitUpGang: After Lothering, the party gets divided into four groups and goes separate ways: to Redcliffe, to Denerim, to Waking Sea Bannorn and to find the hermit that can heal Tamlen.
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** After Lothering, the party gets divided into four groups and goes separate ways: to Redcliffe, to Denerim, to Waking Sea Bannorn and to find the hermit that can healTamlen.Tamlen.
** They do the same thing after saving Connor, this time going to Haven, Orzammar, Brecilian Forest and Aeonar.
** After Lothering, the party gets divided into four groups and goes separate ways: to Redcliffe, to Denerim, to Waking Sea Bannorn and to find the hermit that can heal
** They do the same thing after saving Connor, this time going to Haven, Orzammar, Brecilian Forest and Aeonar.
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** Only Faren, Gorim, Elissa and Zevran know that Sereda is actually the dwarven king's daughter.
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* MrExposition: Adela serves as this to the rest of the Wardens. Because of her, they learn about the consequences of killing the archdemon at a much earlier point than in the original game.
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* DueToTheDead: When Sereda's group gets to Redcliffe, they take part in Tamlen's funeral and pay respect to Ser Jory after hearing about his HeroicSacrifice.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Despite having nine main characters, some chapters are presented in the eyes of other characters, such as chapter 47 (Alistair), chapter 54 (Leliana) and chapter 60 (Liam).
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Despite having nine main characters, some chapters are presented in the eyes of other characters, such as chapter 47 (Alistair), chapter 54 (Leliana) (Leliana), chapter 60 (Liam) and chapter 60 (Liam).73 (Wynne).
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** Greagoir forces the mage Wardens to take Cullen with them.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Mouse, due to being a spirit and not a demon.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Even after almost getting converted by Uldred, Daylen still doesn't accept Mouse's help. Later it is revealed that Mouse is actually [[GoodAllAlong the Spirit of Perseverance]] and his demon disguise is SecretTestOfCharacter.
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* SpotTheImposter: In the Fade, Alistair had to choose between the the real Neria, who came to save him, and the fake one, made by Rizakan. He was touched by the real Neria's answer about his bloodline and made the right choice.
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** Finn appears during the Broken Circle arc as one of the mages trapped in the Fade.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even though eight recruits out of twelve became Grey Wardens (as opposed to one out of three in the game) and Theron is present as a more experienced Warden, the battle of Ostagar still ends up a disaster. The only change is that Duncan was saved from hurlock alpha's axe and managed to live a little longer.
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** Even though eight recruits out of twelve became Grey Wardens (as opposed to one out of three in the game) and Theron is present as a more experienced Warden, the battle of Ostagar still ends up a disaster. The only change is that Duncan was saved from hurlock alpha's axe and managed to live a littlelonger.longer.
** Niall got caught by the sloth demon alongside five fellow mages in this story, but since he spent more time in the Fade than every other prisoner, he still died.
** Even though eight recruits out of twelve became Grey Wardens (as opposed to one out of three in the game) and Theron is present as a more experienced Warden, the battle of Ostagar still ends up a disaster. The only change is that Duncan was saved from hurlock alpha's axe and managed to live a little
** Niall got caught by the sloth demon alongside five fellow mages in this story, but since he spent more time in the Fade than every other prisoner, he still died.
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* AllForNothing: Theron and Adela have done a lot to heal Tamlen, hoping he would survive. Tamlen was healed, but the Joining ritual killed him.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Amethyne (Iona's daughter) is Aedan's illegitimate daughter from his one night stand with Iona.
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** Tamlen and Fenarel are brothers in this story.
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** Soris joins Sereda's group to find Kallian.
** Merrill and Fenarel stay in Ferelden and reunite with Theron, joining the fight against the darkspawn.
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* DemotedToExtra: Wynne in Broken Circle arc. As one of the only six people who can convince Greagoir that the Circle shouldn't be annuled (and the only one of them confirmed to be alive and not a blood mage at the start of the arc), she has to stay behind with Liam, Petra and the apprentices she saved
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** A very important one. Arl Eamon got killed by demon-possessed Connor before he could be healed.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In the game, Greagoir said he would accept that the Circle shouldn't be annuled only if he saw Irving alive. In the fanfic, he is expecting to see either Irving or any of the five senior enchanters. That still doesn't help Daylen a lot, as by the time he arrived at the Circle tower, Uldred is revealed to be the leader of the rebellion, Torrin's fate is unknown, Leorah and Sweeney are confirmed to be dead and Wynne as the only definitely surviving senior enchanter has to stay behind and protect herself instead of helping Daylen.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ser Nancine, the lady knight of Denerim, was mentioned to have been pickpocketed by Daveth in his first chapter. She appears in the story later, seeking to punish Daveth for stealing her sword.
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** When Daylen and Neria discuss their Harrowings at the start of the story, Daylen mentions a pride demon whose disguise was way too obvious. Mouse shows up again during Broken Circle arc, looking like an apprentice but still wearing the senior enchanter robe.
** Ser Nancine, the lady knight of Denerim, was mentioned to have been pickpocketed by Daveth in his first chapter. She appears in the story later, seeking to punish Daveth for stealing her
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* NamedInTheAdaptation: The dwarven scout from Dwarf Noble origin is given a name (Ogg Arras).
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** There's no information that Magi Origin Warden had any relationship with any of the other characters in the Circle. Daylen, however, has had a few flings with several female mages and apprentices, including Petra and Sylvia.
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* WelcomeBackTraitor: Sylvia, one of Uldred's blood mages, asked Daylen for mercy. He granted it but forced her to go with him, Alistair and Sten and try to save the Circle.
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''Ten Versus Blight'' is an ongoing FanFic for ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' written by Fulade. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14240299/1/Ten-Versus-Blight here]].
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''Ten Versus Blight'' is an ongoing FanFic for ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' written by Fulade. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14240299/1/Ten-Versus-Blight here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50470978 here]].
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* CategoryTraitor: Eadric accuses Neria due to studying "human magic", protecting the Circle and having dated a templar in the past.
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* CategoryTraitor: Eadric accuses Neria due to studying "human magic", protecting the Circle and having dated a templar in the past.
