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** The Varga and his magic also don't work well with Parahuman powers, especially Thinkers; Tattletale's power just gets a random mess of information when analysing him, Panacea finds Taylor's biology completely alien (though it ''does'' give her some ideas despite Taylor being immune to being changed), and the [[{{Unobtanium}} EDM]] she can generate cannot interact with Brandish's power to turn herself into a ball of light.
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** The Varga and his magic also don't work well with Parahuman powers, especially Thinkers; Tattletale's power just gets a random mess of information when analysing him, Panacea finds Taylor's biology completely alien (though it ''does'' give her some ideas despite Taylor being immune to being changed), and the [[{{Unobtanium}} [[{{Unobtainium}} EDM]] she can generate cannot interact with Brandish's power to turn herself into a ball of light.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Raptaur comes running in to save Tattletale from Lung. With a massive [[DropTheHammer sledgehammer]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Raptaur comes running in to save Tattletale from Lung. With Lung with a massive [[DropTheHammer sledgehammer]].sledgehammer.
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''Taylor Varga'' is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and the anime ''Luna Varga'', written by mp3.1415player.
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''Taylor Varga'' is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and the anime ''Luna Varga'', ''Anime/LunaVarga'', written by mp3.1415player.
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* SymbioticPosession: This is the relationship between Taylor and the Varga. Taylor provides direction for their shared body, while the Varga provides power, advice, and companionship. Both sides enjoy the relationship immensely, and Taylor ends up bending the Bargain to allow the Varga far more freedom than normal.
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* SymbioticPosession: SymbioticPossession: This is the relationship between Taylor and the Varga. Taylor provides direction for their shared body, while the Varga provides power, advice, and companionship. Both sides enjoy the relationship immensely, and Taylor ends up bending the Bargain to allow the Varga far more freedom than normal.
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* SymbioticPosession: This is the relationship between Taylor and the Varga. Taylor provides direction for their shared body, while the Varga provides power, advice, and companionship. Both sides enjoy the relationship immensely, and Taylor ends up bending the Bargain to allow the Varga far more freedom than normal.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: The Family have the habit of inventing radically new applications for their powers whenever they judge that the local level of brain-melting weirdness is insufficient for their tastes.
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* MuggingTheMonster: An Ex Merchant tries carjacking Taylor and Amy after a botched robbery. Taylor doesn't even need her powers to pummel him unconscious.
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* MuggingTheMonster: An Ex Merchant tries carjacking Taylor and Amy after a botched robbery. Taylor doesn't even need her powers (other than to conjure a baton) to pummel him unconscious.
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** During a train session Taylor makes a dummy which she names Thag, she proceeds to use her tail that gained spikes not unlike that of a Stegosaurus to decimate it, thus making her tail a [[ComicStrip/TheFarSide Thagomizer]].
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** During a train training session Taylor makes a dummy which she names Thag, she proceeds to use her tail that gained spikes not unlike that of a Stegosaurus to decimate it, thus making her tail a [[ComicStrip/TheFarSide Thagomizer]].
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** He also made a donut maker that Missy is particularly appreciative of. To the point they put it in a [[DidntThinkThisThrough locked closet]] to keep her away from it.
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* LighterAndSofter: Significantly more optomistic and overall happier then the source material. This is mostly due to Varga being extremely nice and helpful for a demonic RealityWarper. His presence improves Taylor's life massively and gives her the power to improve the lives of many other characters in turn. There's even an in-universe reason: his very presence interferes with the Entity/shards/Endbringer communication network, which canonically increased the Entity-sourced desire of Capes to engage in conflict. Capes in the ever-increasing area of effect near the Varga seem (mostly) calmer, more thoughtful, and less likely to escalate a fight. And then there's [[spoiler: Eidolon]]...
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* LighterAndSofter: Significantly more optomistic optimistic and overall happier then the source material. This is mostly due to Varga being extremely nice and helpful for a demonic RealityWarper. His presence improves Taylor's life massively and gives her the power to improve the lives of many other characters in turn. There's even an in-universe reason: his very presence interferes with the Entity/shards/Endbringer communication network, which canonically increased the Entity-sourced desire of Capes to engage in conflict. Capes in the ever-increasing area of effect near the Varga seem (mostly) calmer, more thoughtful, and less likely to escalate a fight. And then there's [[spoiler: Eidolon]]...
