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** Orochimaru didn't defect from Akatsuki. He did planned on consider leaving until Tobi told him of his plan to travel the Grand Line and the capture of a Devil Fruit user made him to reconsider it.

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** Orochimaru didn't defect from Akatsuki. He did planned on consider leaving until Tobi told him of his but reconsidered it after capturing a Devil Fruit user and hearing Tobi's plan to travel the Grand Line and the capture of a Devil Fruit user made him to reconsider it.his stay in the group worthwhile.
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** Akatsuki's stop at Thriller Bark led to [[spoiler:the death of Gecko Moria and Akainu, and the destruction of the entire mobile island, leading to Moria's captured shadows returning to their owners, include Brook. The Strawhats completely skip Thriller Bark while recruiting Brook into their crew. Also, Danzou claims [[CoolSword Shusui]].]]

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** Akatsuki's stop at Thriller Bark led to [[spoiler:the death of Gecko Moria and Akainu, and the destruction of the entire mobile island, leading to Moria's captured shadows returning to their owners, include including Brook. The Strawhats completely skip Thriller Bark while recruiting Brook into their crew. Also, Danzou claims [[CoolSword Shusui]].]]



* KilledOffForReal: Aside from Madara being killed in the very beginning of the story, many prominent characters dies and many of them are attributed to the actions of Akatsuki. From chronological order: [[spoiler:Bellamy, Enel, Sasori, Spandam, Deidara, '''Blackbeard''', Gecko Moria, Saint Charloss, and '''Akainu'''.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: Aside from Madara being killed in the very beginning of the story, many prominent characters dies and many of them whom are attributed to the actions of Akatsuki. From In chronological order: [[spoiler:Bellamy, Enel, Sasori, Spandam, Deidara, '''Blackbeard''', Gecko Moria, Saint Charloss, and '''Akainu'''.]]



* WeCanRuleTogether: Invoked. Tobi try to offer Gecko Moria to join Akatsuki. Moria find this insulting and reject it. However, Tobi straightly tells Moria that the whole "you are invited to join us" speech is fake and he actually plans on killing Moira [[spoiler:and framing him for attacking a Celestial Dragon]].

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* WeCanRuleTogether: Invoked. Tobi try to offer Gecko Moria to join Akatsuki. Moria find this insulting and reject it. However, Tobi straightly tells admits to Moria that the whole "you are invited to join us" speech is fake and he actually plans on killing Moira [[spoiler:and then framing him for attacking a Celestial Dragon]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms, Madara is killed and without him Uchiha Obito is rendered brain dead despite Tobi's efforts. So Tobi absorbed Obito's into his own. Roger also encountered a young Itachi and inspired him about the outside world, which in turn led him to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, and thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.

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* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms, Madara is killed and without him Uchiha Obito is rendered brain dead despite Tobi's efforts. So Tobi absorbed Obito's body into his own. Roger also encountered a young Itachi and inspired him about the outside world, which in turn led him to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, and thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.

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* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms, Madara is killed and succeeded by Tobi. Roger also encountered a young Itachi and inspired him about the outside world, which in turn led him to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, and thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.
** Orochimaru didn't defect from Akatsuki.
** Akatsuki's journey in the Grand Line are ahead of the Strawhats that they warrant the attention of the World Government. Due to Akatsuki's confrontation with Aokiji, the Strawhats are captured on Long Ring Island by the admiral after he incorrectly deem Robin to be colluding with Akatsuki.

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* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms, Madara is killed and succeeded by Tobi.without him Uchiha Obito is rendered brain dead despite Tobi's efforts. So Tobi absorbed Obito's into his own. Roger also encountered a young Itachi and inspired him about the outside world, which in turn led him to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, and thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.
** Orochimaru didn't defect from Akatsuki. \n He did planned on consider leaving until Tobi told him of his plan to travel the Grand Line and the capture of a Devil Fruit user made him to reconsider it.
** Akatsuki's journey in the Grand Line are ahead of the Strawhats that they warrant the attention of the World Government. Due to Akatsuki's confrontation with Aokiji, the Strawhats are captured on Long Ring Island by the admiral after he incorrectly deem Robin to be colluding with Akatsuki. Akatsuki and wasn't willing to take the chance of letting her go. This also expedite Cipher Pol 9 to capture Franky at the same time and preventing the initial hostility between the Strawhats and Franky Family.



** Akatsuki's stop at Thriller Bark led to [[spoiler:the death of Gecko Moria and Akainu, and the destruction of the entire mobile island, leading to Moria's captured shadows returning to their owners, include Brook. The Strawhats completely skipping Thriller Bark while recruiting Brook into their crew. Also, Danzou claims [[CoolSword Shusui]].]]

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** Akatsuki's stop at Thriller Bark led to [[spoiler:the death of Gecko Moria and Akainu, and the destruction of the entire mobile island, leading to Moria's captured shadows returning to their owners, include Brook. The Strawhats completely skipping skip Thriller Bark while recruiting Brook into their crew. Also, Danzou claims [[CoolSword Shusui]].]]


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* IslandOfMystery: In this story, the Elemental Kingdoms are a couple of large islands that are almost unknown to the world due to the Sage of Six Paths sealing it off with a genjutsu.
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* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:Tobi incidentally meeting Naruto at a restaurant stand and tries to pass off as some eccentric wearing huge thick sunglasses who calls himself "Tobington" from "Foreignia". Naruto didn't have a clue of who he is talking to because he gotten use to the oddities of the Grand Line and even suggest shortening "Tobington's" name to Tobi.]]

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* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:Tobi incidentally meeting Naruto at a restaurant stand and tries to pass off as some eccentric wearing huge thick sunglasses who calls himself "Tobington" from "Foreignia". Naruto didn't have a clue of who he is talking to because he gotten use to dismiss him as one of the oddities of the Grand Line and even suggest shortening "Tobington's" name to Tobi.]]
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* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:Tobi incidentally meeting Naruto at a restaurant stand and tries to pass off as some eccentric wearing huge thick sunglasses who calls himself "Tobington" from "Foreignia". Naruto didn't have a clue of who he is talking to and even suggest shortening "Tobington's" name to Tobi.]]

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* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:Tobi incidentally meeting Naruto at a restaurant stand and tries to pass off as some eccentric wearing huge thick sunglasses who calls himself "Tobington" from "Foreignia". Naruto didn't have a clue of who he is talking to because he gotten use to the oddities of the Grand Line and even suggest shortening "Tobington's" name to Tobi.]]

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* BullyingADragon: The Foxy Pirates made the worst choice to challenge ''Akatsuki'' in the Davy Back Fight.

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* BullyingADragon: The BullyingADragon:
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Foxy Pirates made the worst choice to challenge ''Akatsuki'' in the Davy Back Fight. Fight.
**[[spoiler:Blackbeard tries to go against Tobi and it ends with his soul taken away by the latter.]]



* EvilVersusEvil: Akatsuki clashed with Enel and his Priests, [[spoiler:the Blackbeard Pirates]], [[spoiler:Gecko Moria]], and [[spoiler:Akainu]].



* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms and for killing Madara, this caused Itachi to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.
** Akatsuki's journey in the Grand Line are ahead of the Strawhats that they warrant the attention of the World Government. Due to Akatsuki's confrontation with Aokiji, the Strawhats are captured on Long Ring Island by the admiral after incorrectly deeming Robin to be colluding with Akatsuki.
** Buggy never get to be imprison in Impel Down thanks to Sakura and Hinata, who temporarily acted as his escort.

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* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms Kingdoms, Madara is killed and for killing Madara, this caused succeeded by Tobi. Roger also encountered a young Itachi and inspired him about the outside world, which in turn led him to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, and thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.
** Orochimaru didn't defect from Akatsuki.
** Akatsuki's journey in the Grand Line are ahead of the Strawhats that they warrant the attention of the World Government. Due to Akatsuki's confrontation with Aokiji, the Strawhats are captured on Long Ring Island by the admiral after he incorrectly deeming deem Robin to be colluding with Akatsuki.
** Buggy never get to be imprison in Impel Down thanks to Sakura and Hinata, who temporarily acted as his escort.escort to Water 7.
** Akatsuki's stop at Thriller Bark led to [[spoiler:the death of Gecko Moria and Akainu, and the destruction of the entire mobile island, leading to Moria's captured shadows returning to their owners, include Brook. The Strawhats completely skipping Thriller Bark while recruiting Brook into their crew. Also, Danzou claims [[CoolSword Shusui]].]]



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:Akainu gets killed by his own attack courtesy of Hidan's Jashin Ritual.]]



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Akatsuki's adventures on Skypeia and Long Ring Island, where they fought Enel, the Foxy Pirates and Aokiji respectively. Hidan acted as a surrogate storyteller on making a crude tale on what Akatsuki did in Skypeia and we are treated a flashback of Akatsuki's final battle with Enel. The Strawhats discover the devastating aftermath of Foxy's Davy Back Fight and see a poster of what the Foxy Pirates went up against who. For example, Foxy vs. ''Kakuzu''.
* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:Tobi incidentally meeting Naruto at a restaurant stand and tries to pass off as some eccentric wearing huge thick sunglasses who calls himself "Tobington" from "Foreignia". Naruto didn't have a clue of who he is talking to and even suggest shortening "Tobington's" name to Tobi.]]



** Tobi has his moments such as helping Tonjit after defeating the Foxy Pirates.





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\n* WeCanRuleTogether: Invoked. Tobi try to offer Gecko Moria to join Akatsuki. Moria find this insulting and reject it. However, Tobi straightly tells Moria that the whole "you are invited to join us" speech is fake and he actually plans on killing Moira [[spoiler:and framing him for attacking a Celestial Dragon]].
* YourSoulIsMine: Tobi pulls his Absorption Soul Technique on [[spoiler:Blackbeard and Gecko Moria]].

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** Buggy never get to be imprison in Impel Down thanks to Sakura and Hinata, who temporarily acted as his escort.

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* BullyingADragon: The Foxy Pirates made the worst choice to challenge ''Akatsuki'' in the Davy Back Fight.
* CurbStompBattle: The Davy Back Fight between the Foxy Pirates and Akatsuki. Predictably, the Foxy Pirates lost and Foxy had to [[PlayingPossum play dead]] in order for Akatsuki to leave with their winnings before they bother to kill them all.



* ForWantOfANail: Due to Gol D. Roger's arrival in the Elemental Kingdoms and for killing Madara, this caused Itachi to die against Root after refusing to betray the Uchiha clan, thus only a handful of the clan survived. The Third Hokage punished Root for their actions and Danzou was forced to join Akatsuki.
**Akatsuki's journey in the Grand Line are ahead of the Strawhats that they warrant the attention of the World Government. Due to Akatsuki's confrontation with Aokiji, the Strawhats are captured on Long Ring Island by the admiral after incorrectly deeming Robin to be colluding with Akatsuki.



* KilledOffForReal: So far, many are attributed to the actions of Akatsuki. From chronological order: [[spoiler:Bellamy, Enel, Sasori, Spandam, Deidara, '''Blackbeard''', Gecko Moria, Saint Charloss, and Akainu.]]

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* InSpiteOfANail:
**The Strawhats never have the chance to travel to Skypiea due to their brief stay in the Elemental Kingdoms, but instead it is Akatsuki who filled in their adventures.
**Although Spandam was incapacitated and unable to summon the Buster Call, Enies Lobby is (inadvertently) destroyed by [[spoiler:Lucci after he was literally nailed into the island's bedrock by Luffy.]]
* KilledOffForReal: So far, Aside from Madara being killed in the very beginning of the story, many prominent characters dies and many of them are attributed to the actions of Akatsuki. From chronological order: [[spoiler:Bellamy, Enel, Sasori, Spandam, Deidara, '''Blackbeard''', Gecko Moria, Saint Charloss, and Akainu.'''Akainu'''.]]



* PetTheDog: [[spoiler:Kisame rescue Hatchan from the Flying-Fish Riders.]]

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* PetTheDog: [[spoiler:Kisame PetTheDog:
**[[spoiler:Kisame
rescue Hatchan from the Flying-Fish Riders.]]]]
* PostClimaxConfrontation: The Strawhats and Hidden Leaf ninjas beat Cipher Pol 9 and escaped Enies Lobby. Everyone is relieved until Deidara flies in as Akatsuki also wants Robin.
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* MysteriousPast: Kisame never gave any thought of ''what'' he is and where he came from until his first encounter with a Fishman made him to start to realize that he is a Merfolk.

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* MysteriousPast: Kisame never gave any thought of ''what'' he is and where he came from. All he remembers from his early life was being an infant washed up on the shores of the Land of the Mist. That is until his first encounter with a Fishman made him to start to realize that he is a Merfolk.Merfolk likely hail from Fishman Island.
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* MysteriousPast: Kisame never gave any thought of ''what'' he is until his first encounter with a Fishman made him to realize that he is a Merfolk.

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* MysteriousPast: Kisame never gave any thought of ''what'' he is and where he came from until his first encounter with a Fishman made him to start to realize that he is a Merfolk.
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* KilledOffForReal: So far, many are attributed to the actions of Akatsuki. From chronological order: [[spoiler:Bellamy, Enel, Sasori, Spandam, Deidara, '''Blackbeard''', Gecko Moria, Saint Charloss, and Akainu.]]
* MysteriousPast: Kisame never gave any thought of ''what'' he is until his first encounter with a Fishman made him to realize that he is a Merfolk.


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* PetTheDog: [[spoiler:Kisame rescue Hatchan from the Flying-Fish Riders.]]


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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' - ''Manga/OnePiece'' crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall many stories in these universes.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' - ''Manga/OnePiece'' crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall many stories in these universes.
crossover.






Far from a Gary-Stu power fantasy, Naruto and Sasuke appear slightly weaker but more well-rounded than in canon. They work as a team to accomplish their goals, and seem to slot neatly into the power-scale in the crew of the Going Merry. They just have to convince certain crew-members that there's nothing wrong with inviting a couple of (essentially) bounty-hunters onto a ship filled with expensive bounties.



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Far from a Gary-Stu power fantasy, Naruto and Sasuke appear slightly weaker but more well-rounded than in canon. They work as a team to accomplish their goals, and seem to slot neatly into the power-scale in the crew of the Going Merry. They just have to convince certain crew-members that there's nothing wrong with inviting a couple of (essentially) bounty-hunters onto a ship filled with expensive bounties.



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* BashBrothers: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the real story starts. Notably absent is the canon Face-Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

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* BashBrothers: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the real story starts. Notably absent is the canon Face-Heel Turn FaceHeelTurn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

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* {{Affably Evil}}: Tobi is a really friendly and likable guy when he's not killing you.

* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the real story starts. Notably absent is the canon Face-Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

* {{Dark Lord On Life Support}}: Madara is an ancient, decrepit husk, only kept alive by the Gedo statue.

* {{Dropped A Bridge On Him}}: An elderly and decrepit Madara is killed by Gold Roger cutting his life support in the first chapter. Also, the story can't truly start until [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is killed by a sleeper agent.]]

* {{Food Slap}}: Naruto attempts to punish a mystery diner (Luffy) for stealing his ramen. Luffy retaliates by shooting him in the face with a high-pressure noodle beam. He doesn't avoid getting it in his mouth.

* {{Hannibal Lecture}}: Lampshaded by the chapter title. Sasuke has Danzou at his mercy, but lacking canon Sasuke's depth of hatred he just can't quite make the interrogation stick.

* {{I Fell For Hours}}: Tobi tosses Hidan off of Sky Island, which is 10 kilometers up in the air, with only vague directions about what to do when he hits the ground.

* {{No Sense of Direction}}: Zoro and Luffy still have warped and twisted senses of direction. When Sasuke is conducting surveillance on Zoro, his attempts to cut Zoro off at the pass fail repeatedly because the man can't path properly. At least, until Sasuke gives up, at which point Zoro runs into him and asks him for directions.

* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Danzou's response to Sasuke's failed torture and interrogation.

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* {{Affably Evil}}: AffablyEvil: Tobi is a really friendly and likable guy when he's not killing you.

* {{Bash Brothers}}: BashBrothers: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the real story starts. Notably absent is the canon Face-Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

* {{Dark Lord On Life Support}}: DarkLordOnLifeSupport: Madara is an ancient, decrepit husk, only kept alive by the Gedo statue.

* {{Dropped A Bridge On Him}}: DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: After the black-magic Akatsuki murderer, Hidan, falls from the sky, several of the Straw-Hats get him to sit peacefully and tell them a story while they help him sew his arm back on. Only later do they learn how dangerous he really is.

* DroppedABridgeOnHim:
An elderly and decrepit Madara is killed by Gold Roger cutting his life support in the first chapter. Also, the story can't truly start until [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is killed by a sleeper agent.]]

* {{Food Slap}}: FoodSlap: Naruto attempts to punish a mystery diner (Luffy) for stealing his ramen. Luffy retaliates by shooting him in the face with a high-pressure noodle beam. He doesn't avoid getting it in his mouth.

* {{Hannibal Lecture}}: HannibalLecture: Lampshaded by the chapter title. Sasuke has Danzou at his mercy, but lacking canon Sasuke's depth of hatred he just can't quite make the interrogation stick.

* {{I Fell For Hours}}: IFellForHours: Tobi tosses Hidan off of Sky Island, which is 10 kilometers up in the air, with only vague directions about what to do when he hits the ground.

* {{No Sense of Direction}}: NoSenseOfDirection: Zoro and Luffy still have warped and twisted senses of direction. When Sasuke is conducting surveillance on Zoro, his attempts to cut Zoro off at the pass fail repeatedly because the man can't path properly. At least, until Sasuke gives up, at which point Zoro runs into him and asks him for directions.

* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Danzou's response to Sasuke's failed torture and interrogation.



* {{Tempting Fate}}: There seem to be a lot of jinxes here.

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* {{Tempting Fate}}: TemptingFate: There seem to be a lot of jinxes here.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' - ''Manga/OnePiece'' crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall many stories in these universes.



[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a Naruto/One Piece crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid all of the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall most stories in these universes.


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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a Naruto/One Piece crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid all of the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall most stories in these universes.


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Madara dies in Chapter 1, Itachi dies fighting against Root in Chapter 2, Naruto and Sasuke become friends as young children in Chapter 3. Despite all of this, things don't go all that better in the long run. Part One of the story takes place on the Elemental Kingdoms, and Part Two takes place at sea in the much stranger Grand Line as Naruto and Sasuke pursue Akatsuki with the only ship available. The Elemental Kingdoms have been opened from a thousand years of isolation, and no one is quite sure what that means for the world at large.

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Madara dies in Chapter 1, Itachi dies fighting against Root in Chapter 2, Naruto and Sasuke become friends as young children in Chapter 3. Despite all of this, things don't go all that much better for Team 7 in the long run. Part One of the story takes place on the Elemental Kingdoms, and Part Two takes place at sea in the much stranger Grand Line as Naruto and Sasuke pursue Akatsuki with the only ship available.available, the Going Merry. The Elemental Kingdoms have been opened from a thousand years of isolation, and no one is quite sure what that means for the world at large.



* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the story proper starts. Notably absent is the canon Face Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

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* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the real story proper starts. Notably absent is the canon Face Heel Face-Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends and not just rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.



* {{Hannibal Lecture}}: Lampshaded by the chapter Title. Sasuke has Danzou at his mercy, but lacking canon Sasuke's depth of hatred he just can't quite make the interrogation stick.

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* {{Hannibal Lecture}}: Lampshaded by the chapter Title.title. Sasuke has Danzou at his mercy, but lacking canon Sasuke's depth of hatred he just can't quite make the interrogation stick.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a Naruto/One Piece crossover that is an attempt to avoid all of the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall most stories in these universes.


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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a Naruto/One Piece crossover that is according to the author an attempt to avoid all of the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall most stories in these universes.

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--> '''Danzou:''' -And then they produced you. You worthless reject. The runt of the litter. Only protected by your big brother, even now. I know your plan. You want to hurt me, break me, here inside this illusion, so you can kill me for real when it all ends, but I can tell you that you don't have what it takes, you little worm. This nightmare will eventually end, and then I will stand up and kill you. I will take that eye from your skull, and Itachi's gift will finally go to someone who deserves it."
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* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the story proper starts. Notably absent is the canon Face Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends, and not just friends by the twisted standards they had before. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

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* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the story proper starts. Notably absent is the canon Face Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends, friends and not just friends by the twisted standards they had before. rivals. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.this.
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* {{I Fell For Hours}}: Tobi tosses Hidan off of Sky Island, which is 10 kilometers up in the air.

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* {{I Fell For Hours}}: Tobi tosses Hidan off of Sky Island, which is 10 kilometers up in the air.
air, with only vague directions about what to do when he hits the ground.



--> '''Narration:''' Three seconds later, [[spoiler:the Knock-Up Stream erupted from the ocean’s depths. The solid column of torrential seawater was like the god of the sea himself delivering a furious uppercut to the unprepared ship. ]]

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--> '''Narration:''' Three seconds later, [[spoiler:the the Knock-Up Stream erupted from the ocean’s depths. The solid column of torrential seawater was like the god of the sea himself delivering a furious uppercut to the unprepared ship. ]]

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* {{Food Slap}}: Naruto attempts to punish a mystery diner (Luff) for stealing his ramen. Luffy retaliates by shooting him in the face with a high-pressure noodle beam. He doesn't avoid getting it in his mouth.

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* {{Food Slap}}: Naruto attempts to punish a mystery diner (Luff) (Luffy) for stealing his ramen. Luffy retaliates by shooting him in the face with a high-pressure noodle beam. He doesn't avoid getting it in his mouth.



* {{No Sense of Direction}}: Zoro and Luffy still have warped and twisted senses of direction. When Sasuke is conducting surveillance on Zoro, his attempts to cut Zoro off at the pass fail repeatedly because the man can't path properly.

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* {{I Fell For Hours}}: Tobi tosses Hidan off of Sky Island, which is 10 kilometers up in the air.

* {{No Sense of Direction}}: Zoro and Luffy still have warped and twisted senses of direction. When Sasuke is conducting surveillance on Zoro, his attempts to cut Zoro off at the pass fail repeatedly because the man can't path properly.
properly. At least, until Sasuke gives up, at which point Zoro runs into him and asks him for directions.
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* {{What Could Possibly Go Wrong}}: There seem to be a lot of jinxes here.

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* {{What Could Possibly Go Wrong}}: {{Tempting Fate}}: There seem to be a lot of jinxes here.





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\n** This might just be a problem with the Grand Line in general.
-->'''Nami:''' "That bell isn't going to just fall out of the sky!"
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*{{Dark Lord On Life Support}}: Madara is an ancient, decrepit husk, only kept alive by the Gedo statue.
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->The Stranger pulled back his hand, and the Old Man's heart came out with it. That heart was a withered thing, the Old Man noted, having shriveled from disuse. Its absence was no great loss; it had stopped beating many years ago.\\

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-->-- Opening Lines to [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]]

One Thousand Years ago, the world was in chaos. The True History of that period is still lost to time, the only records hidden in a series of indecipherable stones called the Poneglyphs. On one particular island chain the Sage of Six Paths, father of Ninshu, sealed away a threat to the entire world, locking the islands away behind a barrier and casting a planet-wide genjutsu that would make them lost to the outside forever.

Or so he thought.

Nearly nine hundred years after the end of the Void Century, Gold Roger discovers the Elemental Kingdoms. In his search for the True History he encounters a very ancient Uchiha Madara and a very young Uchiha Itachi, changing the fate of the Uchiha Clan forever. Now, Madara's only remaining servant, Tobi, must make the best of his imperfect understanding of his master's plan as he begins preparations to take the entire world by storm.

Years later, strange ships start arriving at the fishing ports east of Konoha, and Naruto and Sasuke are sent to investigate.


Madara dies in Chapter 1, Itachi dies fighting against Root in Chapter 2, Naruto and Sasuke become friends as young children in Chapter 3. Despite all of this, things don't go all that better in the long run. Part One of the story takes place on the Elemental Kingdoms, and Part Two takes place at sea in the much stranger Grand Line as Naruto and Sasuke pursue Akatsuki with the only ship available. The Elemental Kingdoms have been opened from a thousand years of isolation, and no one is quite sure what that means for the world at large.

Far from a Gary-Stu power fantasy, Naruto and Sasuke appear slightly weaker but more well-rounded than in canon. They work as a team to accomplish their goals, and seem to slot neatly into the power-scale in the crew of the Going Merry. They just have to convince certain crew-members that there's nothing wrong with inviting a couple of (essentially) bounty-hunters onto a ship filled with expensive bounties.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11698245/1/The-Unchained The Unchained]] is a Naruto/One Piece crossover that is an attempt to avoid all of the post-canon overpowered juvenile pitfalls that befall most stories in these universes.

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* {{No Sense of Direction}}: Zoro and Luffy still have warped and twisted senses of direction. When Sasuke is conducting surveillance on Zoro, his attempts to cut Zoro off at the pass fail repeatedly because the man can't path properly.

* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Danzou's response to Sasuke's failed torture and interrogation.

* {{What Could Possibly Go Wrong}}: There seem to be a lot of jinxes here.
--> '''Tobi:''' Guys, guys, guys! Relax! What could possibly go wrong?”
--> '''Narration:''' Three seconds later, [[spoiler:the Knock-Up Stream erupted from the ocean’s depths. The solid column of torrential seawater was like the god of the sea himself delivering a furious uppercut to the unprepared ship. ]]


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!! The Unchained contains examples of:


* {{Affably Evil}}: Tobi is a really friendly and likable guy when he's not killing you.

* {{Bash Brothers}}: Naruto and Sasuke have been friends for a long time before the story proper starts. Notably absent is the canon Face Heel Turn that Sasuke took, which means the two are actually friends, and not just friends by the twisted standards they had before. Their fighting styles have evolved to reflect this.

* {{Dropped A Bridge On Him}}: An elderly and decrepit Madara is killed by Gold Roger cutting his life support in the first chapter. Also, the story can't truly start until [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is killed by a sleeper agent.]]

* {{Hannibal Lecture}}: Lampshaded by the chapter Title. Sasuke has Danzou at his mercy, but lacking canon Sasuke's depth of hatred he just can't quite make the interrogation stick.

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